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Path To Divinity

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Hya! Though I'd share my story with you :)
Some of you may already know this story from ff.net, the rest who don't, enjoy :D

The idea for this fic came out of nowhere, right after I saw a wallpaper of Ly. I've already completed Rayman back then, and finished both Hoodlum Havoc and Revolution not long ago.

As per usual I am dedicating this to my friends at the BGE Revolution Forums, in addition to David Csúri who gave me a new writing book after the old one has been stolen, and Milan Barkóczi for reading it in advance :)

Disclaimer: I don't own anything concerning Rayman, except Shya, Ranika and Salian since they're mine. But I warn you Ubisoft, if you won't make a Beyond Good and Evil 2 very soon, I'm going to unleash horrors you can't even comprehend... :devil:


Path To Divinity

Chapter 1: The Newcomer

Stardust sparkled in the bright moonlight, gathering on the green leaves, giving them a dim, silvery shade. The age-old branches seemed so alive and fresh like they were in their youth again. Beyond their sheltering limbs however, lurked the real surprise. The forest was overflowing with life that night, even the normally grumpy trees silently joining in the celebration. The usually quiet woods were loud with singing and laughter. All creatures, big or small, celebrated the anniversary of their world's creation, a night of joy and happiness dedicated to their god who dreamt them into existence, the Eve of Polokus. As the Lums, Teensies, Glutes and all other inhabitants frolicked around the forest, so did Polokus' emissaries, the fairies too. Their laughter, like tiny bells ringing, reached into every corner of the forest, planting joy into the hearts of everyone who heard them. They played along with everyone, while singing their ancient and beautiful songs, encouraging the trees and flowers to grow.

One person in particular was captivated by this midnight symphony, a young fairy sitting on a treetop, holding her head in her arms. Shya was enchanted by the singing and Moon's compelling light. Although she was old enough to join in the song, she rather stayed up here, gazing at the brightly shining stars. The fairy shook her sapphire-blue hair, letting it fall over her violet eyes and pointy ears. She laid back on the branch, putting her right leg above the left, her long, light-blue tail encircling both. She closed her eyes, letting the sweet moonshine emit goosebumps all over her; she loved the feeling. Giggling, she turned to her side and yawned. Suddenly the tree shook, almost causing her to fall off.

She looked around angrily to find her assailant when a derisive voice hit her ears. “Got you!” said the fairy behind her. Shya threw a small branch at the unexpected visitor. “Rani, how many times have I asked you not to sneak up on me like that!” she shouted, more glee in her voice than anger. The aforementioned, a blonde fairy by the name Ranika, grinned at her: “I still got you.” she remarked winking at Shya, her blue eyes sparkling with humour. Although she was older than Shya by two eves, she was much more playful than any other fairy Polokus had created.

“That wasn't fair, you attacked without notice!” she replied, pouting. She crossed her arms, putting on a strict face.

“I swear, next time you'll know exactly when I'm near.” Rani said with a devilish grin. “Sorry, I lied!” she shouted, jumping on the other fairy and started to tickle her.

“No, stop!” she laughed between two waves. Despite her pleads, Ranika continued, which she tried to counter by wiggling around madly. As she was throwing herself around, suddenly the branch disappeared under her and she fell from above. “SHY!!” Rani screamed as she saw Shya fall.

Luckily, the forest, fresh and vigorous from the fairy magic, was on guard and just before she would hit ground, a huge flower grew there, catching her. Shya praised the forest for being so aware but also scolded herself for not using her magic. “Ouch...” she hissed as she got up, her back hurting lightly from the fall. Even though the flower had caught most of her velocity, she still had enough to bruise herself a bit. She glanced up, and saw Rani above with a concerned look.

“When I get up there, you're going to pay for this!” she shouted to her friend. Ranika laughed at her threat, relieved that she was okay. Shya rubbed the back of her waist, laughing along when an unusual sound hit her pointy ears. It sounded a bit like someone crying, but slightly different. What could it be? she thought. Acting purely on instinct, the fairy began to run towards the sound. She briefly heard Rani asking where she was going, but ignored it for the moment. Soon, she was flowing with the wind, her eyes and ears relying completely on its currents. This way, she quickly arrived at the source of the noise. When she reached the outskirts of the forest, she materialized again and started to look for the noisemaker. Soon, she noticed that the sound was coming from some bushes in front of her. As she got closer however, it began to die away and by the time she had gotten to it, the forest was in complete silence again. Shya brushed aside a few leaves and branches, and was surprised to find a small open basket inside, with something breathing in it, under a blanket. Carefully, she leaned closer and brushed the blanket aside a little. She fell back with a surprised look on her face, just as Rani arrived. “Shy, what happened?” she asked dumbfounded. The blue-haired fairy pointed at the bushes. The other fairy looked into it, reacting almost exactly the same way as she did.

“What is it?” she asked wonderingly.

Shya shrugged her shoulder as she got up. Despite the shock, curiosity got the better of her and she took the basket out of the bushes, holding it in her arms. She lifted the blanket to look at the being inside once more. All remnants of her fear disappeared however, as she looked into the small, green orbs. The child inside fell back into sleep again, shivering a bit. It was already close to midnight and even though it was warm season, the night was a bit chilly. To Rani's amazement, she took the infant out of the basket and held it in her arms, supporting him with her own body heat along with the blanket. As her friend sat down, she took the opportunity to examine the little one. “It looks a lot like...” she spoke up.

“He.” Shya cut in.

“Okay, HE looks a lot like us.” she corrected herself, grinning. “But he's definitely not a fairy.” she continued “Maybe someone lost their baby?”

“I don't think so.” she whispered, not wanting to wake the child. “I've never seen any creatures that resemble us this much.”

“You're right on that one...” Rani admitted. “Maybe his whole species is like this? Nah, I don't think so either.” she corrected after seeing the fairy's expression.

“Whatever kind he is of, I'm downright sure that he can't possibly take care of himself.” Shya added.

“You're probably right.” sighed the other fairy. ”What are you suggesting we should do with him then?” her voice seemed concerned. This question had been bothering Shya for a while now and even though the answer was already in her head, she wasn't exactly sure about it yet.

“We can't just leave him here; he couldn't even survive the night like this! But we can't give him to anyone since there's no one of his kind around...” she said nervously, finally saying what buzzed in her mind. “No one who resembles him...except us...”

Ranika couldn't believe her ears. “You can't be serious! Neither you nor I know ANYTHING about his specie-

“But he's just like us!” Shya cried.

“But not exactly us!” shouted the older fairy. “Shy, he's not a fairy and we have no idea how to raise an infant anyway.” she lowered her voice to a kind whisper, seeing how upset her friend got.

Shya looked at the boy in her crossed arms so alike, yet so different from them. She watched as he turned around suddenly, his tiny mouth opening for a second as he yawned. The child was searching for something solid to grab onto with his small hand, finally gripping one of her fingers. A teardrop sparkled down her face as she saw him falling sound asleep again. Deep inside, she could only feel a determination that she had to protect this young life, so that he could one day see the beauties of the world. “I'll raise him.” she spoke up suddenly. Rani, although she could barely believe what she had just said, didn't want to upset her any further, so she just crouched down beside her.

“Are you sure?” she asked putting one arm around her.

Shya took a moment to look at him once more and whispered, “As sure as I'll ever be.”

“Then it seems the Eve brought many things once more, especially for you.” she said, hugging her friend. She glanced down at the sleeping child. “A newborn is given a future by a fairy...How will you call him?”

She paused for a second, and then said, “Salian.”

“Newcomer?” asked back Rani, smiling. “Fitting name. Come on, we should go back to the other's now. Both you and Salian could use a good night's sleep.”

“Go ahead, I'll be with you in a second.” she answered,

Rani was uncertain whether she should leave her like this, but in the end nod and left, leaving her alone with the child. She pulled the blanket closer around Salian, since the air was becoming positively chilly. Despite her clothing being rather fitting, it was less than enough to keep her warm. She curled into a foetal ball, encircling both of them with her tail. Though she was determined about her decision, Shya couldn't help being scared since she really had no idea how she was going to take care of him. As she was thinking about the future, the little one wiggled in his sleep, his eyes slowly opening. She gazed into the tiny lambent-green eyes, when all of a sudden he started to cry. Shya looked around scared, not knowing what to do exactly. There was absolutely no one near, leaving her without help. What should I do? Having no other idea, she dug into her memory for something that could help her. Remembering an old lullaby she heard once, she sang it to Salian as best as she could. It was no use however, since he would not stop crying no matter how she tried. Shya felt tears gathering in her eyes too. I can't...Rani was right, w-what was I thinking?! I'm not even able to calm him! she burst out in tears, her face almost reaching his. Suddenly she felt a small hand fondling her face. Sobbing, she looked at the infant, who was stroking her face, red from crying. He had already stopped weeping and was now smiling at her, acknowledging Shya as his mother. She lapsed into a smile, staring into the beautiful face of Salian...her child.

Ranika was seriously nervous now. She had been walking around in circles for a while, the other fairies watching her curiously. Almost an hour had passed since she left Shya alone with the boy and she was getting really worried now. I never should have left her alone like that! she cursed herself. If anything was to happen to her, she could never forgive herself for it. Suddenly the bushes shook, the mentioned fairy appearing from them. “Shy!” shouted Rani in surprise running to her. She hugged her best friend as hard as she could without crushing Salian, who she was holding. “Where were you? I've be-What's wrong?” she asked noticing that her face was blood red and swollen. Shya shook her head. “Nothing, I'm just happy.” she said sobbing, but smiling. The other fairies gathered around them, eagerly watching the little infant and his new mother. Enthralled by the newcomer, they admired the two, wishing good luck and a bright future for the both of them, especially for Salian. Some of the fairies even started to sing, informing everyone through their sweet melody. Shya, overjoyed by their reaction, giggled and kissed her son's forehead: “Welcome home.”

"On this night the fairies kept singing,
Unaware of what else was happening.
For far beyond their knowing,
A threat was already growing.
But a hero too has risen this night,
To one day battle this lurking blight.
And from high above, a god gazed down,
Waiting for the day to give over his crown..."
(Ly: Salian's Birth)


Chapter 2: A Human In The Glade

The Fairy Glade was as peaceful as ever, the sounds of dozens of birds were the only sound that broke the silence once in a while. The thick leafage of the trees held a home for many small creatures while the larger inhabitants preferred to live on the ground.

A perfect harmony existed between the forest and the people living in them, neither causing intentional harm to the other. Salian found the Glade a beautiful place, especially since he had lived here for as long as he could remember.

Over the past seventeen years, he has grown from tiny child, into a playful young boy. He brushed his short, brown hair aside, revealing the pair of jade-green eyes. Her mother often said that he kept those enchanting eyes since he was a baby.

The inhabitants of the forest often gave sound to their astonishment as how Salian resembled the fairies, even though it was common knowledge that he wasn't one of them. He was unique, but never treated as an individual. He was one of the Glade's residents, no more, no less.

Her mother taught him of the forest when he was just a little one: the name of the trees, the creatures that lived there, the methods of finding his way around, while also teaching him of their mythology; how the one known as Polokus, dreamt their world into existence, forming them all through his emotions and thoughts.

When she could teach no more, she asked the Teensies to continue her work. He loved the little blue creatures. As ancient as they were, they were also one of the most entertaining and versatile people he had ever met, teaching him always of the first thing that came to their mind, from the history of the Glade, to the hundred different uses of a plum. Usually the King himself taught him, but Salian noticed after a while that the King seemed to have been a different Teensie nearly every time he saw him.

He had also made a few close friends during that time including Ly, the young fairy who studied together with him. She was a cheerful and intelligent girl, though she could be quite strict a few times. In contrast to her was Murfy, the loud-mouth, wisecracking greenbottle. Salian often debated on the fact whether he's a friend of Murfy or his personal joke-target.

He frequently pulled his leg, often making comments on how Sal seemed to like Ly. The result of this was usually Salian chasing the annoying greenbottle with something heavy, while Ly laughed at them, along with Globox and Rayman.

Ray and Globox...he couldn't forget about them. Globox had been indeed a good friend and sometimes unwittingly a laughing stock for them too, whenever he reacted to something he deemed scary. Rayman...now he was another thing.

They've first met right after he defeated Mr. Dark on top of Candy Château. The whole Fairy Glade celebrated him as a hero, and Sal could still remember the overall joy everyone shared, finally free from the threat that was Dark.

He was wandering around the forest when they met. Salian was surprised to find him deep in the forest, since everyone was celebrating his victory. Rayman however, explained to him that though it felt nice, he didn't want to have this much fuss about it. The two started chatting and became friends soon after.

Ever since then, they've spent nearly every single day together, and most of the time the others tagged along too. Salian couldn't help smiling as he thought of all those things they have done in the past few years...they even snatched the Teensie King's crown once! Ly didn't find it funny, but right when she started scolding the boys, the King appeared behind her.

He just laughed at them and explained that that was not the only crown they had. The stunted expression on their faces has been a frequent joking topic ever since. They had become a bit more mature since then, though they still liked to play jokes on each other.

Suddenly, he reached for his elbow as a painful sting emanated from it. He touched the scar through the fabric of his shirt, feeing it pulse with heat. The pirates...they have caused much more sorrow than Dark, during his reign. Salian and Shya were imprisoned quite early, and were firmly separated from each other.

To this day, he has never been as afraid as then. When the Heart was blown to Lums, the fairies became significantly weak, and Salian could feel his mother slowly dying. Razorbeard ordered his minions to bring Sal to him each day, which meant being dragged through the whole Buccaneer, with all the cruelty they could.

He still didn't know why the old pirate did this to him continuously, but if it weren't for his friends, both of them would be long dead by now. His mother recovered quickly after the Heart was restored with Rayman's help, but the victory was clouded with grief this time. Ranika, Shya's childhood-friend died while trying to protect the Teensies. He remembered how sad she was and the time it took until she could honestly laugh again.

Stop daydreaming already; you're going to be late! Salian shook his head and jumped from the branch he was standing on, onto another one. He quickly found the rhythm, and steadily made his way towards the Falls.
- - -
“Where in the name of Polokus could that boy be?” Shya peeked out the window. Of course, she knew exactly where her adopted son was, this was more like an instinctive question.

Salian...he practically became her whole life after that fateful night. Her choice was a respected one throughout the whole Glade, and nearly every single mother tried to help her in some way.

During the first year, she was continuously bombarded with tips, though she always thought over carefully which to apply. Uglette's idea of throwing Salian in the water so he could learn how to swim just like her children, for instance, didn't seem that appealing to her. Betilla the Elder fairy on the other hand though, gave her many useful tips and had been helping her ever since. In time she got into it and turned out to be a quite decent mother.

Everyone was delighted to see how he grew, becoming into the Sal he was now. She considered those years the most beautiful when they used to spend days wandering around in the forest as she taught him of all she knew. Though she had her doubts about their methods, she never regretted her decision of letting the Teensies teach him afterwards

She was utmost happy when Salian started making friends, since she was afraid they would not accept him. Her fear was luckily without reason as he made a few good friends since then, though she didn't like all of them, particularly Murfy. No matter how he tried, Shya never forgave him for that one time when he let Salian drink a little plum juice. Nothing serious happened since he only drank so much to be dizzy, but Shya couldn't believe the greenbottle could have been this careless.

For one or two years however, Shya noticed that Salian became less obedient, sometimes doing exactly the opposite of what she asked. At first she thought she did something wrong. Back then, Ranika reassured her that probably his whole species is like this at this age.

Oh, Rani... She really missed her friend. She had been invaluable to her, being her best friend since they were kids. The playful fairy the one who helped her all the time. Without her help, maybe she wouldn't have been able to raise Salian at all. She would probably scold me for being sad about her...

With this she sighed, leaned back and started making something to eat for Salian when he arrives home...whenever that might be.
- - -
“I'm here!” called Salian as he stepped out from the bushes. Strangely, no one seemed to have been around.

The river that provided the forest was more than a hundred meters wide here, and the chute itself almost as long. The clear water was sparkling in the bright sunlight, making it look like a diamond’s surface. Trees have grown over the water, forming a series of stable bridges for anyone wanting to pass through, their dewy leaves hanging over the water like a curtain.

Down below, a large ground and the coast itself was one enormous clearing, making it an ideal place to anyone wanting to rest or frolic around. Salian looked joyously over the landscape: this had been his favourite place in the entire Fairy Glade. No wonder he and his friends usually met here of all places...

Suddenly, a push sent him screaming into the river. As he fell, he could briefly hear Rayman laughing above him.

The next second, he splashed into the cold water. Angrily, he swam to the surface, realizing that he was only a few meters away from the waterfall. An elemental scream burst out of him as he fell over, diving into the air.

Out of instinct, he threw his hands into the air, when he felt someone grabbing them.

“I'm not that cruel.” Rayman grinned. Salian couldn't decide whether he should thank him or punch him in the face, but for his own sake he discarded the latter. They slowly descended in the air, next to the fall. Suddenly, he felt him jolting.

“What's wrong?” he whimpered nervously.

“Too much water, I guess.” his limbless friend swallowed. His helicopter-hair made a last desperate try to regain its altitude, but with no luck. A second later both of them dropped like a stone.

About ten minutes later, a very soggy and irritated Salian crawled out of the water, coughing. He was accompanied by a rather cheerful, but equally soaked Rayman. They sat down on a hollow log to dry off.

“Mother will kill me for this...” Salian looked over himself. His ruby-red shirt and light-brown pants were totally soggy. Even his shoes left a patch of water after his each step. The Teensies made them for him; they seemed to known how to all kind of clothes and taught it to Shya too.

“No sweat, they'll dry off in no time.” laughed Rayman, squeezing the water out of his fists. “And besides, I'm sure Shya will understand.”

Salian seriously debated on whether he should slap him when Globox and Murfy arrived.

“Sorry we're late.” the greenbottle greeted them. “I had to chase this faint-hearted of a Glute through the whole forest.”

“Well, maybe if you hadn't acted like a monster, I wouldn't have run off.” the mentioned crossed his arms.

“At least you're here now.” Salian grinned. “Where's Ly?”

Murfy flew forward to answer his question, a smirk on his face. “Last time I saw her, she was on a tree with a handsome guy-” The boy's face started to turn bright red.

“Whom you've just made up to bug Sal.” Rayman took over, shaking his head.

“Yeah, but he almost fell for i-HEY!” he shouted, a pebble narrowly missing him.

“She's actually in the Council with the Teensies.” Globox corrected. Salian didn't say anything, but the sign of him missing her was clearly written on his face. “What have you two been doing?” asked the glute finally to break the silence.

“Taking a dive from as far as I can guess.” the greenbottle snickered. “How was the water?”

“A few more wisecracks Murfy and you'll get to know first hand...” Salian glared at him.

A sudden chill roamed through the clearing, making them shiver, even Globox, which was strange, since his chubby state usually protected him from the cold. Combined with his soggy clothes however, Salian felt as though he would turn into ice that instant.

“I guess we should go home earlier today.” he shuddered.

“Guess you're right, I'd better go before my wings freeze.” Murfy flew towards the trees, stopping for a second. “I'll tell Ly and her boyfriend that you were looking for her.” he grinned and quickly left before Salian could react.

“I'll go with Globox; you're okay to go home?” Rayman asked his shivering friend.

“Sure, I'm okay, see you both tomorrow.” he put on a light smile and watched as they left.

Now alone, he too went back into the forest and took his way towards home. The chill he felt was just a little breeze now, but he wanted to hurry nonetheless since he was already late. He reached his home quickly, the way incised into his brain by now. It wasn't anything magnificent, just a small brown cottage beside a huge oak. The lights inside indicated that Shya was waiting for him.

As he was about to open the door, he felt as though somebody was watching him. He turned around but there was no one near. Confused, he shrugged his shoulder and opened the door, his mother already waiting for him.

“...What in Polokus' name have you done to yourself?!”
- - -
The shadowy night hid the curious eyes well. He was grateful for it, since it made it an easy job for him to observe the boy. He watched through his binoculars as the fairy scolded him than sent him away. That's enough for now...The figure slid the binoculars back into the wrinkles of the long blue cloak covering him.

Tonight brought mixed results, as he was reluctant to find that Rayman was still alive and well. The limbless troublemaker had already crossed him a few times, but always managed to escape his fate. Not much longer though... His plan was going well, he already had most of the cogs in place, he just had to activate the machine now and set things in motion.

He grinned under the coverage of his hat. The power he desired would soon be his, and with it...he will be unstoppable.
- - -
Ly stopped for a second to regain her breath. She supported herself by placing her hand on the wall while she respired. The red Lum in front of her glinted playfully, as though it was winking at her. She had been chasing the Lum for half an hour through the corridors of the Council, but no matter how she tried, it would always elude her grasp.

She arrived at the Falls to find that none of her friends were around. The fairy wasn't angry over them since it was her who was late. She returned to the Council, but quickly got bored and when a lone Lum appeared before her, an idea came to her mind.

It wasn't as though the Lum wanted to escape, quite the contrary. It too seemed to enjoy the game, as it sometimes flew right before her nose, but when she tried to catch it, it always outsmarted her. Ly raised her head, and the Lum noticed the playful sparkle in her green eyes once more...

As they passed Betilla's chamber, the sound of a stifled conversation hit her pointy ears. She abandoned the game and walked to the door. The Elder fairy had left the door slightly ajar. She didn't want to eavesdrop but curiosity got the better of her.

Peeking inside, she noticed that Betilla was talking to someone through a magical mirror...and it seemed to be Polokus himself! Ly's eyes widened and listened carefully.

“...close. I could have sworn I've felt him.” the fairy seemed to be very upset about something.

“If he's near, then that's grim news indeed...how is he?”

“He's a very intelligent and also loving person.” She seemed to know who Polokus was referring to. “He still doesn't know about it though...” she seemed to have toned the word "it".

The red Lum, curious as to why the game stopped, floated over to the fairy. She gestured to the Lum to hush and listened closely.

“He mustn't know...not yet, neither can she, you know that Betilla.” Polokus seemed to be serious about this.

“I know, but if he's really near, he's in grave danger. He knows all about him.” her voice seemed worried.

“He has a protector who would never let harm come to him. Have faith in him, but keep your eyes open! You have been doing a superb work so far.” his voice softened. “I'll return later, have some rest.”

“I will, thank you...” she muttered as the god's image faded away. She sighed and turned to the door. Ly tried to sneak away, but the fairy heard as she tried to leave.

“Who's there?” she called and opened the door. A red Lum floated in front of her, and upon noticing her, flew around her head. Betilla's let out a relieved sigh and closed the door fully this time.

Ly sneaked out from behind the statue she was using as a hiding place.

“Thanks.” she whispered over to the Lum, which started glinting as if it was smiling.

She tiptoed back into her room, as normally she wasn't allowed to roam along the Council corridors this late. Since the Black Lum André broke into the Council fairly easily, they kept a closer guard on the Heart.

They also insisted that Ly shouldn't wander around in the Council all alone during the depth of night. This was not entirely true however: only the fairies insisted that she'd go sleeping, while as though the Teensies welcomed her always, regardless of the time.

Unknown to her, many other fairies often commented on her apparent strength, between each other. During the Robo-Pirate's reign, she was able to create silver Lums which even much elder fairies couldn't, especially not after the Heart was blown to pieces. Betilla kept a close eye at her studies and how she developed. She was quick to befriend the human boy, for which the fairy was happy to see, although she had doubts about it.

The young fairy settled herself in her chamber. It wasn't a big room, but she liked living here, even though the Teensies have made a whole palace for her after the Pirates were defeated. Her bed was in one corner of the rectangle-shape room, while a large shelf with a few books and various objects on it, a small table and a mirror were in the other three corners. She sat down on her bed, letting her feet rest on the white and yellow circled, green carpet, which covered almost her entire room.

She thought of the conversation she had just heard between their creator and the Elder fairy. Who were they talking about? As far as she could make out, they were talking about two persons, with radically different feeling towards them. One of them was unpleasant for both to talk about, while the other seemed to be liked by both of them, although he might be in danger. She decided not to meddle deeper into it. If they wanted me to know, they would have told it already. It's hopefully nothing too serious anyway.

Pleased with the thought for now, she dropped on the bed, her tail resting on her side. Ly put her hands above her head and stretched her sleeping muscles. She rest her head on the pillow, briefly glancing over a piece of paper on the table in front of her. The fairy knew what was on the paper by heart: it was a small poem Salian once gave her a few years ago for her birthday. Soon, she closed her eyes and fell asleep, already dreaming about the next day with her friends...

A spy, hiding in the nightly Glade,
A secret, kept hidden in the shade,
A boy who's not from this plane,
All of these are part of the game.
The saviour plays around in the forest,
While Evil slowly begins its conquest.
And though he doesn't know it yet,
He had already seen the face of this threat...
(Ly: A Human in the Glade)



Let me know what you think about it, I've began to like writing and I would like to improve. :wink:
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Very nice fanfic here ;) Keep writing!
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Yeah, I completely agree.
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Finally done with Chapter 3, and with godspeed I'll post it right away ;)
Thanks to all who have read it so far, especially my beta-reader Luckster(elemente) from devART ^^

Chapter 3: Scars


“...He so cute, isn't he?”

“As cute as you are, darling.”

“I hope he'll keep these eyes when he grows up too. He reminds me of Mom...”


Salian blinked at the wooden ceiling in bright confusion. Sleep had already left him, only fragments of his dream still remaining. Almost the same as last time... He has had these dreams of a woman with blood-red hair and a strangely familiar face, smiling at him, for a fairly long time now.

Every few weeks the images of this woman returned, sometimes accompanied by a stern, but gentle-looking man with similar brown hair like his. They spoke in a language Salian couldn't place anywhere, though he seemed to understand those few words they spoke...

“Sal, are you up yet?” her mother's voice pierced through his thoughts. The boy shook his head, slightly annoyed. Growling a loud “No”, he sank face-first back into his bed. He heard Shya wandering around below him, probably opening the windows.

About two years ago, the fairy had made an own room for him in the attic after months of persistent begging. That turned out to be easier said than done, but with a little help from others, especially Clark, they finished quite fast. The giant was more than happy to help, he was bored anyway with no pirates to bash. He practically made that a primary hobby back then...

“Salian!” the fairy sounded a bit scolding this time.

“I'm awake!” came the muffled answer. Sort of...

“Alright, then I'll just tell your friend to come at some other time!
- - -
Quick thuds upstairs indicated that she finally reached her goal. That's more like it... She opened the door with a bucket in her hand and made her way towards the well. She noticed Salian's visitor was having a few problems finding the boy.

“Upstairs, remember?” she shouted over to the clueless mosquito. The insect saluted and took off into the air, aiming at the boy's window.
- - -
Salian grabbed the shirt his mother placed on the chair in a rush and got into it. He went to the window to see who was outside, but as he was about to look out, a pair of eyes were blinking back at him.

“What the-?” he recoiled from the window. “Bzzit, you know I hate it when you do that!” he looked angrily at him, but the grin on his face indicated he was far from that.

The mosquito leaned a bit back from the window, his nose still almost reaching inside. His wings glittered in the morning light, casting a rainbow light on the wall. He had a large plum in his hands, which he held almost effortlessly.

“What's the plum for?” the boy pointed at the large purple fruit.

“It's for the Teensies.” the mosquito spoke up in his high-pitched voice, slight toning the s's. “I think they're brewing juice again. I hope I'll get a little from it.”

“That'd be a sight!” laughed Salian, imagining a far-from-sober Bzzit gliding literally from tree to tree.

“I wasn't saying I'd drank a whole barrel...” the insect winked at him with his large eyes. “Anyway, Rayman asked me to tell you that they're waiting for you over at the Council. He said that you should hurry.”

“Thanks Bzzit...do you mind giving me a ride?” he asked, hoping for a yes.

The mentioned wrinkled his long nose, turned around and flew closer to the window. “Hop on!”

He didn't have to say it twice. The boy grinned, climbing out the window. He held onto the frame for a second, before lunging forward, right onto Bzzit's back. They took off a second later, soaring into the air...
- - -
Shya peeked up for a second, noticing them fly away above her, the wind and Salian's laughter blowing after them. She waved at the two and returned to the house, a bucket of fresh water in her hand. Placing the bucket on the table, she glanced around the room, looking for a pitcher.

Their house consisted of mainly four rooms, beside the bathroom, the pantry and the attic upstairs. One of these rooms was the kitchen, where she was right now. Basically it only held place for a large oakwood table with a few chairs around it, a marble bowl in the corner of the rectangular room and a few cupboards beside it, holding bowls and dishes.

The fairy picked a glass pitcher from one and poured some water in it. Normally, her pitchers were made from marble, but she got this one as a gift from the Teensies. She helped them a lot when they were brewing plum juice, though it seemed they were at it again. Later on she would go and help them, but for now she had a few things around the house, too.

Strolling over into the living room, she placed the pitcher on the window frame. The living room was only a little a tad larger than the kitchen and was basically the central hub of the house. Doors opened from here to Shya's room, the kitchen, the bathroom, not to mention the stairs down to the pantry, and the ladder to Sal's corner. Shya wanted a stair there, while Salian asked for something that he could climb. Finally they agreed on a trapdoor-ladder, and with a little mechanical help from the Teensies, it was made as so both of them could go up and down at will.

In the wall, opposite to the front door was a fireplace with a large oval carpet in front of it. Back when Salian was younger, during colder seasons they used to spend almost every night in front of the fireplace, cuddling to each other as she told countless stories, until both of them fell asleep. She sighed upon remembering those times and moved back to the pitcher. The fairy poured some water in the little bowl on the frame; this was for any birds that might come by here.

As Shya glanced over the mirror, she went up close to it. The past years had altered her pretty much both outside and inside. She still kept her teal hair long, but her eyes were different. They reflected a trace of her youthful vigor, but also the look of a much-tried mother. Also, she had swapped her old clothes, for robes, similar to Bettila's but made to accommodate her tail too.

Many things made her the person she was today. Since that fateful Eve, she had experienced a lot, both good and bad. Though she had always kept a cheerful attitude these days, sometimes the feeling of overall tiredness took hold of her, as well as the ever persistent fear for her son.

The fairy aimlessly stroked a now-whitened scar on her cheek. She got it when she disobeyed a pirate by not letting Salian out of her embrace. The robot invaders refused her pleads of keeping them together, even more, the seemed to have a perverse pleasure in seeing the fairy suffer...which she did a lot. She lived for her son...with all her heart. She loved him more than anything in the world, thus imprisonment was twice as painful for her.

The final blow back then, was when one day a few pirates passed over her cell, while carrying a limp body towards Razorbeard's chamber. The fear and despair she felt when she recognized they were carrying Salian...beaten...unconscious. She remembered how she screamed, pleaded for him, pounding the cell-bars with her fists, shedding tears only a mother can. The only reply she got back then, was when one of two pirates turned to her and started laughing in it's emotionless, metallic voice...

Shya realized she had been clenching her fist so hard, that her nails had pierced her skin, as well as quite a few teardrops running down her face from the painful memories. She sighed and got a rag out of her drawer. Pouring some water first on the wounds then the rag, she wiped her tears off, before tying it around her scarred palm. Just as she finished, there was a knock on the door.

As the fairy opened the door, she was met by an older-looking fairy, wearing green-yellow robes and a matching cap.

“Betilla? What brings you here?” Shya looked surprised at the Elder fairy. She seemed to have had very little sleep over the last few days, purple bags under her eyes, her curly red hair all scruffy.

“Is Salian here?” she seemed to be very desperate.

“No, he left a not long ago...Is something wrong?” she asked nervously, seeing the pained expression on the fairy's face.

“No...nothing wrong...” the fairy replied, her eyes gazing into the air.

Shya felt a twinge of fear climbing upwards in her abdomen. “Come on, let's get you a cup of tea, maybe that'll unwind you a bit.” she kept her voice lively, though she wasn't half as calm now.

“No, thank you...I-I've already been here for too long.” Betilla briefly dusted herself off and stormed out as abruptly as she came. “Goodbye Shya...stay safe.” she kept the last two words to herself as she ran into the forest...
- - -
Salian's excited cries echoed through the Glade as he rode on Bzzit's back. The wind blew his hair into every direction, while he grasped onto his corselet. The mosquito was no less happy to carry him and even threw in a few maneuvers. At a proper time, he pitched down, plummeting into the ground.

At first the boy found it funny, but soon let out a cry of fear as the ground came closer and closer. Just as they were about to crash, Bzzit pitched up, saving them from the impact. The air seemed to have been locked inside Salian, so much he could barely breathe for a few seconds, much to his carrier's amusement. As soon as he calmed down though, he laughed along with him.

The Fairy Council suddenly became visible as the entered the clearing. Around the Council the earth was so saturated with magic, that the water almost turned into solid ground, making it able to simply walk upon it. unlike anything else on this world. On star-filled nights, as one gazed at it, that person could see all the stars in the sky in it. The Council stood out tall, the sun warming the surface of the age-old walls. Dozens of red Lums were gliding around in the air, giving the clearing a faint red glint. The Teensies said they're attracted by the Heart's emanation and this was most likely true.

As Bzzit descended from the air, Salian noticed quite a few Teensies eagerly working near huge cauldrons, a purplish liquid bubbling in them. Most of them were scattered, either peeling plums or gathering ingredients, while some of them relentlessly stirred the thick juice with large sticks, standing off a stool. The majority was dressed in white, already stained clothes, although some wore purple from the start so that a stain wouldn't be noticeable...at least, that was their opinion. Salian could barely hold his laughter as he noticed one of the having a big “Kiss the brewer” sign on the shirt.

The mosquito landed next to them with a smooth thump. The boy jumped off his back and lightly chucked his head, which he seemed to enjoy.

“Thanks for the ride.” Salian grinned. “And the dive...”

The mosquito winked at him with his large eye and went to the Teensies, rolling the plum before him.

“Ah, a great one indeed!” one of Teensies remarked, jumping off the stool. “This will be one of our best vintages yet!”

Salian suddenly recognized her friends' silhouettes through the steam of the plum juice in the making. He cut through the dense fog, finding them next to the entrance to the Council. As usual Murfy and Globox were in a heated argument, while Rayman tried to calm both sides, Ly overlooking the group, sitting on the side of the cliff that held the door in the between.

She noticed him first and waved her hand from up there, a bright smile on her face. The verbal clash between the glute and the greenbottle ended prematurely as they too, noticed him.

“Well good morning to you!” grinned Rayman as he caught up with them. “We thought you'd never arrive!”

“I got a lift on the way.” the boy pointed back at Bzzit, who was already pleading for some plum juice.

“It's good to see you're finally here.” Ly got off her sitting spot to join them. Salian turned slightly red from her greeting.

“Now we know why he hurried.” Murfy snickered insinuatingly, earning a deathly glare from the boy. “Anyway, Nosemaster was just about to tell us his plans for today.”

“Murfy, are you really so desperately intent on becoming a new plum juice ingredient?” Rayman asked, thrumming in annoyance. “I was thinking, why not go to Clearleaf? We hadn't been there for a long time and it'd make a great trip.”

“Just promise we won't go to the doctor.” Globox pleaded shaking. He had a fear for doctors, and after all the “special treatment” he received when he swallowed André, just intensified it.

“Why Globox, have you swallowed something again?” the greenbottle queried, grinning.

“An annoying little talking fly, maybe.” the glute opened his large mouth and pointed from Murfy to his throat.

The greenbottle recoiled in fear, flying out of reach. The other laughed at the bizarre scene as they entered the Council.

The halls echoed as the little group passed along it. Seeing them together did prove an awkward sight, since compared to Globox, Salian and even Ly, Rayman was rather small. It didn't seem as though any of them cared about it, since despite being only double a Teensie in size, Rayman accomplished feats that even the largest of creatures couldn't.

The Council has always been a place of unison, since both fairies and Teensies called it a home, one of duty to the Heart, the other of ownership and keeping company to the other. The blue walls often had many different kind of glass murals embedded into them, making the passage through the halls similar to reading a story, if one paid attention. Their steps tapped on the marble pavement as they closed to the main chamber.

As they entered through the last door, they were greeted by the sight of several Teensies, most of them wearing a crown and the same coat. Salian couldn't identify which was the one they stole, though it didn't really matter since they apparently had a whole lot more. Nor was he able to identify the true Grand Minimus, but that tend to vary per hour.

“Ah, Rayman! What brings you here?” the one closest to the portal spoke up, setting his crown straight.

“I'd like to ask a favor. Could you open the portal to Clearleaf Forest for us?” the mentioned pointed at the stone well not far from the throne.

“Sure, it's nothing of a problem.” the assumed Grand Minimus turned to the well, put his hands on his hips and danced around his axis. Everyone except Rayman looked utterly confused by his show, even Ly. Though she had been living in the Council for a fairly long time, she had never actually seen them open a portal.

Suddenly, the well flashed, white light shooting out of it. A second later it disappeared, leaving only green streaks of light emanating from the portal. These lights started moving around in a spiral, various small lights appearing between them. Salian couldn't help feeling a bit uncomfortable about the trip ahead of them.

“Are you sure this is a good idea?” Ly asked suddenly behind him.

“Come one, it's only Clearleaf...there's nothing to worry about.” Rayman replied. “You don't have to come if you don't want to.” he said reassuringly, seeing the doubt on her face.

“Okay, I'll come along.” she sighed.

“Would you make up your mind already?” the Teensie cut in suddenly, his arms crossed, tapping with his foot. “I have to go water my strawberries!”

“Sure, sorry. In we go!” commanded the limbless boy, pushing Globox forwards while ignoring his excited babbling about strawberries. Murfy went first, followed by Ly, Globox, Salian and finally, Rayman himself. He briefly heard the King asking him to say hello to Otto, the next second he was engulfed in the swirling vortex...
- - -
He couldn't believe his luck. All the days he spent pondering on how to bring his plans into motion, and suddenly fate gave him a head start. There was no need now for delicate plans, no hidden scheming. He's playing right into my hands...

He had not hoped for such a great start in his plans, but now that the opportunity was here, he would not let it escape his grasp. Knowing his goals were now almost in his reach and so easily...he couldn't hold back his amusement. A chuckle emerged from him, forming into an unstoppable, throaty laughter.

“Master?” he heard from behind.

“I'm alright. Our prey had just offered himself to us.” a grin crept on his face. He heard his most faithful minion stroking his fists in excitement. “Just a few more things to set and he's ours...”
- - -
Lights. Strange forms and objects, made out of pure light. And music. Ear-catching music, bringing a rhythm into every single movement...

Salian wobbled on his wakeboard as a bright light flashed into his eyes. Nothing he had ever seen could have been compared to the Teensie Highway; it was undoubtedly the most unusual thing he had ever seen.

“Ready?” he heard Rayman asking by his side.

“I-I think so...” he gazed at the forms above them. He took a second seeing that Murfy and Ly had already flown forward, while Globox was being carried by one of the road-watcher Teensies. Figures... Rayman winked at him and shoved himself forward, gliding along a light-road. The boy sighed and moved forward.

It was simply unbelievable. As he glided forward, the forms below, beside, above and in front of them changed from second to second, swirling into new, unexpected forms, the music continuously bending along with it.

The boy had a few problems with his balance though. When the light-rail in front of him suddenly elevated, he was barely able to keep himself from falling into this endless current.

“Does it always do this?” he glanced worriedly at Rayman.

“Most of the times, but that only makes it even better.” he sped up even more, his blonde hair blown hard by the velocity. “Come on!” he laughed back.

“Don't rush me, I'm coming!” Salian looked after him rather angrily. Two can play at that game... He leaned forward while throwing his hands back, forcing the board to slide at a much greater speed.

Rayman grinned as he noticed a faint change in the color pattern. Course change coming up! Suddenly, he saw Salian swooping right past him.

“What the...?” he blinked dumbfounded. Gritting his teeth, he was just about to speed up to catch him, when he remembered something...something the boy didn't know about! “Sal, watch out!” he shouted over to him.

Salian was so caught up in the race however, that he didn't hear Rayman's warning. At the blink of an eye, the road twitched wildly. The boy shouted out in fear as he lost his balance, the wakeboard sliding out from under him. A second was all it took, and he was falling into the colorful chaos swirling below.

Suddenly, he felt a pair of strong hands grab hold of him. Glancing up, he saw Rayman closing his eyes, struggling to pull him up, his wakeboard facing him to slow down. The boy grasped onto his fists as he pulled him up to his wakeboard.

They both collapsed on the board, panting. The board slowly continued on the way, the exit now visible “Th-Thanks...” whispered Salian, still a bit revved up by the incident.

“Don't mention it.” Rayman winked at him, as the light of the end of the Highway engulfed them...

“What happened back there?” Ly asked worriedly once the two of them emerged from the portal.

“Just a little...commotion, nothing serious.” Rayman replied first, earning a thankful glance from Salian.

“Okay, so we're here then. Now what?” Murfy seemed to have missed bugging at least one of them.

“I thought we'd start slow...Hide and seek!” Rayman looked around the others. They seemed to have liked the idea. “Sal's the seeker.” he grinned.

The mentioned crossed his arms, but obliged. It's really the least I could do, anyway... He turned to face a tree while Globox, Rayman, Murfy and Ly scattered around Clearleaf. Slowly, he counted to a hundred, and once reaching it, he started looking for them.

Clearleaf seemed really similar to the Fairy Glade, though it had different kinds of plant and wildlife, than home. Sadly, the bit “exotic” beauty compared to the Glade, suffered a lot during the Hoodlum ravage. As pathetic in appearance as they were, they had both the cruelty and the firepower to make the forest an unwelcoming place. Salian knew well that Clearleaf was always a bit dangerous compared to the Glade, a fact that only added to the excitement of their trip.

As he brushed through a pack of bushes, he noticed huge planks in the air, crudely nailed together to form a makeshift passage above the surface. Just out of curiosity, he followed one of them, until he reached a large clearing. He stopped as he saw the dreadful sight before him.

Above a small pond, there was a huge, equally badly made Hoodlum factory. Rayman told them about the factory he destroyed, though this was obviously a different one. It seemed to have collapsed, probably due to the poor way they built it. Twisted, rusty pieces of metal were scattered in and around the pond, oil flowing on top of the water. The trees close around the clearing were in no better shape, many of the reduced to ashes either from target practice, or just plain desire of destruction.

It was sheer luck that the dam they've built hadn't collapsed, otherwise the whole forest could have been polluted. Not that it made much of a difference, since Salian wasn't sure if this could ever heal on its own.

Suddenly, a sobbing sound hit his ears. He glanced around and saw Ly kneeling at the edge of the pond.

“Ly?” he called her name but she didn't respond. Salian walked down to the fairy and knelt down beside her. “Ly, are you alright?”

She didn't answer, trying to hide her face behind her deep-blue hair. The fairy seemed very upset, her shoulders quivering, almost clawing into herself with her hands. She sobbed again and turned to Salian. Her face was red with anger and crying, the sadness emanating from her eyes. He had never seen her like this before, not even on Ranika's funeral.

The fairy's shoulders started shaking again and he could see the silver tears sparkling down her face once more. She turned away, eyeing the infernal factory once more.

Fairies were not simply guardians of the Heart. They too, were a living part of this world, an equal to Polokus' every creation, if not more. But they were also more attuned to life itself than any other creature, it's destruction hurting them much deeper than any physical pain could. Seeing the life of this place so diminished, filled Ly with fury against those who committed it, and grief for the beauty that had been tarnished here.

“Why...” she whispered suddenly. Her voice missed the liveliness she always had. “Why did he let this happen?...”

“Who...Rayman?” the boy asked confused. The fairy shook her head, her tears dropping on the grass.

“Polokus...” she turned to him again. “Why did he let this happen? Why didn't he do anything to prevent it?” her voice was dripping with accusation and grief.

“I don't think-”

“He created us all, why wasn't he able to stop this from happening? He should be protecting us, he should be the one who keeps this from happening!” she was almost screaming now. “Why...” she broke into tears once more, falling forwards.

Salian was no less sad, both because he too, liked the forests very much, but also seeing her like this. He suddenly embraced her as she continued sobbing.

“Even Polokus can't prevent everything...” he said finally, thinking about Ranika...the fairy he used to call Aunt. “No one can...”

The sight she had just seen still burned within Ly, but the warmth of his embrace slowly calmed her down. In a little while, she stopped sobbing, putting her head to rest on his shoulder. He continued to hold her for what seemed like hours, though it might have just been a few minutes. As she gazed up into his eyes, jade meeting jade, she tried to say a few words of thank you. For finding her...for soaking up her anger and despair...for being here...

Suddenly, a high-pitched scream tore through the air. Ly wriggled out of his embrace and got on her feet.

“Tily!” the fairy screamed in horror as she recognized the scream. How did she come here? She never imagined the little fairy would venture as far as Clearleaf. The Teensies would never let her out here alone... Salian rose from the ground, trying to determine where it came from.

“Come on!” he caught her hand, pointing towards a pack of bushes.

They started running alongside each other, rushing towards where the sound might have come from. Soon, they've ended up in a small clearing with a little figure standing in the middle. The figure was about the same height as Tily, but its skin was more of a blackish-gray, than the fairy's usual amber. It had the same kind of wings as her, but they too, had a rather gray color.

Something wasn't right about the figure before them...chills ran down on both of them, the feeling of a foul presence almost touchable in the air...

“Tily?” Ly called her name, the two of them slowly walking to the little creature.

“Do you want to play with me?” the figure suddenly turned around shrieking. Ly let out a scream, stumbling back, Salian reacting almost the same way.

The cold, blood-red eyes that met them were like evil itself. The shadowy creature started laughing in a blood-freezing way, dissipating into the air, a new person appearing there a second later.

The newcomer wore a long blue coat, with a matching blue hat. The only thing they could see behind his clothes, were the pair of yellow eyes, gazing at them. Salian shivered, feeling as though this creature could easily read even his deepest thoughts.

“Mr. Dark...” he heard Ly whisper behind him.

So he's Mr. Dark? He never actually saw him, though he always listened when Rayman talked about his adventure to stop him.

“Welcome. I've been expecting you.” his voice was more of a cold whisper, reaching right to the bones.

“Run!” screamed Ly dragging the momentarily frozen Salian along with her.

The cloaked evil raised his hand, the four stones he had placed on the edges of the clearing lit up. Just as the two would have escaped, a huge flames appeared in front of them, forming a wall around the clearing.

“My apologies, but I cannot allow you to leave right now.” he seemed to have been highly amused by the situation.

The two turned to him, still thinking of a way to escape, rather than to fight. Mr. Dark was able to defeat Betilla twice, thus the two of them stood nearly no chance.

“Well, well, well...a youngster and a fairy. I didn't expect such rare findings...” the coat rattled as though he was chuckling.

“What do you want from us?” Ly snapped at him. Her previous fear was still there, but she tried her best to hide it, for the sake of both of them.

“Hush, fairy! You will know soon enough.” the glare Mr. Dark sent towards her, made the fairy lose the meager resolve she had mustered. Though the Pirates, and even the Hoodlums caused a lot more havoc than Dark had ever, his sheer presence was more threatening than the two of them together.

Slowly, he walked to them, becoming larger with each step. By the time he reached them, he towered over them like a huge shadow, darkening the sky itself. His hands glinted in red, the flame walls getting so close it almost touched them.

Are you afraid of me, young Salian?

The boy's eyes widened as he realized he was speaking right into his head...

Suddenly, a strange sound hit their ears, like a madman blabbing around. Ly looked up and saw a cloud forming around the flames. “Look!”

A small lightning swept across the clouds and the next second, it started raining. As it made contact with the fire, steam precipitated from it, the blazes becoming smaller and smaller. Behind the waning flames, the chubby figure of Globox became visible, along with Rayman and Murfy.

“What are you doing here?” Rayman seemed to have been a bit surprised by seeing his old enemy again.

“Ah, Rayman! I've been waiting for you.” he still sounded amused.

“Leave them alone, Dark!” the limbless boy clenched his fists, determined to attack him if he attempted to threaten his friends.

The mentioned simply started laughing. “And how do you intend on making me retreat?” he raised his hands into the air. A sharp pain tore through Rayman, his fist forcibly detaching from his body. Dark continued to chuckle as the fists rose into the air, much higher than any of them could reach it. “What now, savior?” came the obvious mock.

A second later he recoiled surprised, as Rayman almost managed to kick him. “I've learned some new tricks.” he grinned.

“And he's not alone this time.” a sarky voice added from above.

Murfy caught his friend's still floating fists and threw them down to him. In a flash of light, his hands reattached to his body, ready to be used. Dark's eyes narrowed from the momentary anger, but quickly forced himself to calmness. He realized that everyone was standing inside the zone of the stones he had placed. It's going perfectly after all...

“If that's the case...I'll allow you to spend a little more with each other.” he lifted his hat a bit, as though he was waving goodbye. Suddenly, he jumped up into the air, his hands flashing in white.

Salian felt the earth rumbling below his feet. Fissures formed around them and the next second, a portal appeared under their feet. They tried to jump away, but they were already too late. All it took was the blink of an eye and they disappeared into the endless vortex.

Murfy watched helplessly as his friends vanished. He looked at Dark, who was almost right next to him in the air. They eyed each other for a few seconds, before he spoke.

“Run...”

And Murfy flew away, as fast as he could...
- - -
Betilla arrived a minute after the greenbottle fled. Panting, she grabbed onto a tree for support, before she noticed the portal.

“No...” she whispered, closing to it.

Suddenly, the portal closed in front of her eyes. A sinister laughter made her look up and she saw him...the one who she had already lost to twice, the second time costing her freedom. And now, he was floating before her, looking at her with his emotionless yellow eyes.

“Too late Betilla...too late...”
- - -
Scars of the painful past,
Heal inside hearts last.
Fresh ones hurt both body and soul.
Seeing the cruelty of all that is foul.
But, oh, no time to let these ones heal,
For the evil that has come now is real.
Face to face, the hero proves harmless,
Allowing him to banish them to darkness...
(Ly: Scars)
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Re: Path To Divinity

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I've been reading this on ff.net, and I have to say that you're doing great so far. You're a talented writer, and I look forward to reading more from you. :]
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Fantastic :) It's always good to read a fanfic that makes perfect sence after reading a nub one.
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First part of the fourth chapter, and already working on the second. Thanks for everyone who checked this story out, and Luckster_Gal, for beta-reading ^^

Chapter 4

Part one


He was standing before evil itself. A cold, foul creature with only hatred inside; the vast desire to see the world suffer. The unholy spirit gazed at him, its eyes piercing through his skin, burning through his flesh, seeing only his true, unhindered self. He tried to cover himself, to turn away from his sight, but his limbs wouldn't obey him.

Are you afraid of me?...


“...wake up...”

He shivered under its gaze. It towered over him, like a impenetrable wall of shadows. He felt the air turning ice-cold as it closed to him. Its eyes flashed in otherworldly yellow, casting a dim light upon him. As he looked into its eyes, the remaining air inside him was torn from his lungs, the promise of unbelievable pain and suffering beaming from those dreadful orbs.

Are you afraid of me?...

“...please...”

“...wake up...”

He was panting heavily, the shadows slowly coiling around him, crushing him, tearing the life out of him. He became smaller and smaller, trembling beneath the crush of his gaze. He screamed...screamed with all his might, for release...for help. The figure raised its hand, reaching for his throat.

Are you afraid of me?...


“...help...”

“...wake up!...”

It was only inches away from his neck, its horrifying whisper echoing throughout his mind, haunting every corner of his consciousness, over and over again...

Are you afraid of me?...


“...someone!...”

“Sal, wake up!”

The boy awoke screaming into the darkness that greeted him. For a second, only the stillness of the moment reached his senses, dim patches began to appear before his eyes short after. The patches took forms a few seconds later, until he could make out Rayman's worried face before him.

He had to restrain Salian or else he might have hurt himself as he lunged forward upon awakening. His was still panting from the dream he saw, his heart racing around. A blunt pain appeared in the back of his head, making him wince. He leaned back, finding a flat rock behind him.

“Hey, he's awake!” Rayman shouted back. Salian noticed Globox and Ly appearing behind the his friend, both looking relieved. The fairy was holding a small, glinting sphere, their only source of illumination as it seemed.

“How are you feeling?” he turned back to the boy.

“Not too good...” he lightly touched his nape, finding a rather large lump. “What happened?”

“We landed here after Mr. Dark sent us through that portal. You hit your head on a rock as we landed.” he glanced at him rather worriedly. “We feared you might have had a concussion...are you sure you're alright?”

“I think so...just please, talk a little lower, okay? All six of you, that is.” a shallow grin was the most he could produce right now. Rayman chuckled, relieved to see he was beginning to come around.

Salian finally took a little time to examine his surroundings. They were in some kind of cave, but as to where, he had no idea. They've been to caves a few times, but none of them looked like this. The place was rather large, though not by height...Clark would have had quite a few problems here. The sphere he had seen earlier, was glinting in the far end of the cove now, casting only a small amount of light on them.

“They're searching for a way out.” Rayman stated before Salian could ask. “Until now, we haven't been able to find a way out. Do you think you can walk?”

“I'll try...” he leaned forward, his friend cautiously watching his attempt.

He sat up fairly easily, but when he tried to stand up, he lost his balance and ended up being caught by Rayman. Salian sighed and tried again, a pained expression clearly visible on his face. He finally managed stand up, his legs still unstable a bit.

“Welcome back.” the limbless boy offered his hand. He grinned, but accepted his help.

Just then, the fairy and the glute came back jubilantly. “Globox found a tunnel out of here!” the fairy sounded excited. “Are you alright?” she glanced at the boy.

“Yes...I think so.” he replied. He took a few experimental steps forward, still a bit unsteady. For a split second his legs gave up, luckily Ly and Globox caught him before he would fall over. His face was red with embarrassment, as they set him back on his feet. “I'm just still a bit-”

Afraid?...

Salian glanced around in horror, his heart jumping into his throat. The cavern walls seemed still, no one was there...no one had said a single word. I could have sworn I heard something... He looked around one last time, spawning no result. The boy sighed and shook his head nervously. “I...thought I heard something...” he spoke up, noticing the worried look of his friends.

He didn't seem to have convinced them, but they decided to leave the subject for the time being. Together, they passed into the tunnel the glute had found accidentally. The tunnel was smaller in width, so they had to go in line. Ly led the group, illuminating the path before them. She was followed by Globox and Salian, with Rayman going up last.

What's going on?... The boy was both confused and scared. That dream...no, he was pretty sure now that it wasn't just a simple dream. The image was still etched into his mind, still sending shivers down his spine.

He was broken down, whimpering in pain, while the living darkness floated above him, torturing him limitlessly. The shadowy figure said something...but he couldn't remember the words...

He suddenly felt a hand tap his shoulder. The boy didn't need to glance behind, he felt Rayman walking to his side. The tunnel was wide enough here for the both of them.

“Sal...what's wrong?” he asked, true concern in his voice.

“N-Nothing...” he tried to sound confident, but failed to do so. “I don't know exactly...I had a...dream-

“Something bad, right?” Rayman cut in, Salian glancing confusedly at him. “I heard you talk, while I watched over you...you were whimpering for help.” he heard the boy taking a deep breath.

“I...I was in an empty space, without anyone or anything around. And above me was...him.” Salian did his best to describe him what he saw.

“Who? Who did you see?”

“I don't know exactly. I think it was Mr. Dark, but he was different...he was much more...frightening.” he chose not to tell what he had heard. He was surprised to see that Rayman was deep in his thoughts. “Is something wrong?”

“You know...I once had something like this.” he spoke up, wrinkling his brows. “I wasn't far from Candy Château where he was hiding back at that time. While I was hurrying to find him, he suddenly appeared, towering over me. I don't know why, but I couldn't even lift my hands...and then he started talking, but in my head, like Ly did a while after. He said that I didn't know what I was doing and to leave while I could. All I could do was shake my head, and then he pointed at me.”

“I felt as though my head was going to explode, but in a few seconds, it disappeared...and so did he.” he unconsciously scratched his head from the memory. “I think he was trying to scare me...but I don't understand. Why didn't he appear to me too, then? After all, he never saw you before...”

Salian shrugged his shoulder, not knowing the answer either. They suddenly noticed from the lack of light, realized that Globox and Ly have already gone way ahead of them, thus the two ran to catch up with them.

“I thought you beat Mr. Dark long ago.” Globox queried after a while to relieve the gloomy atmosphere a bit.

“It depends on what you mean by 'beat'. Remember, I never actually got to fight him up close." Rayman shook his head lightly "He just sent his minions on me, and when I defeated them, he simply fled.”

“I wonder what he wanted with us, though.” Ly mused worriedly. “He would have killed us, had you not arrived...”

“He probably wanted revenge, and thought he would start with you.” Rayman's hands clenched into fists. “I'd expect no less from him...after all, he already kidnapped Betilla once.”

“But why did he send us here, of all places?”

“I don't know...but I'm beginning to think that I've already been here once...”
- - -
Primal hunger burned in his veins, not giving a second of relief. Hunger for vengeance...a grudge held against every living being. Hunger for the hunt...to stalk the innocent until it could no longer run. Hunger for blood...the flesh and blood of his prize. Hunger to kill...

He clawed steadily on top of the tunnel, knowing that none would dare oppose him. This was his territory, only a selected few were allowed to live by him. The other unwary who venture here, would soon find themselves in a race to death. He would chase them even to the farthest reaches of his underground domain if he had to, until the prey couldn't even walk anymore, and then...

A faint sound hit his ears. A distant noise, like movement...and talking. His instincts flared of from the thrill of discovering his new victims. He sped up greatly, moving towards the sound, the hunger inside him burning his flesh. Soon, the hunt will begin once again...

- - -
Ly stuck her hand out of the tunnel, casting some light on the cave ahead. Even from what she could see from here, it looked rather large, unlike the rest they have been to.

“All clear!” she shouted back, not seeing any movement.

The sound of the others coming echoed already, still, the fairy rubbed her shoulders restively, chills rippling through her. She couldn't get rid of the feeling that Mr. Dark had precise plans with sending them here. Something was here...something that deeply resented them...

A sparkle of relief flowed through her as she noticed them coming out of the shadows. Globox held himself heroically, though one could clearly see how frightened he was. Rayman had a determined look she had grown to understand, an expression that always reassured them that he would be there to protect them, no matter what. Salian on the other hand, looked more confused but equally scared as she was. He noticed she had been staring at him and glanced at her. The fairy quickly turned away, feeling heat rising into her cheeks.

Now reunited, they stepped into the cave, Ly holding the sphere high. She was wrong; the cave was simply enormous, so much they almost disappeared in the far right corner of it. Crystal were embedded into the rocky walls, greatly varying in size, shape and color. In the middle of the cove, stood a crystal, almost big enough to etch the top of the chamber.

Rayman noticed one of the crystals reflecting the light the sphere made, and idea formed in his head.

“Ly! Throw it in the middle!” he pointed at the central formation.

The fairy obliged and tossed the sphere right into the middle of it. The crystal-formation glinted, as it absorbed the magical light. The next second, the crystal flared up with such unbelievable intensity, that they had to cover their eyes from the brightness it emitted.

The light traveled from one to another, splitting it into a million pieces. A few minutes later, they opened their eyes and were awed to see that the once translucent formation in the middle was now glinting in every color of the rainbow.

The cove was now looking as though it was daylight inside. They only saw now, just how huge this chamber really was. Hundreds of tunnels led out of here, making it similar to a beehive. The top of the place was still hidden in shrouds, no crystal there to split the light even further.

Salian gazed around the cave, unable to believe his eyes. “Look!” he pointed at various crystals.

It was only then when they noticed that some crystals were nowhere near natural shape. Someone had carved figures into the crystals, and though they were crude at best, they were fairly recognizable. Ly was surprised to see that some of them had notable forms: including one that looked like a gigantic Matuvu, another looked like some kind of flying saucer, while a third one like an ancient tomb.

“Who could have made these?” Globox asked, awing at a crystalline-cloud.

“No idea...” Rayman was the one to answer, examining the carving marks. “But whoever it was...he was huge.”

Meanwhile, Salian walked to a crystal that closely resembled a mirror by the way it was carved to evenness. He gazed at his own reflection...his jade eyes resting tiredly in their sockets, his young face strained by both their situation and his 'dream'. Letting out only a tired sigh, he looked at himself a little longer, a faint smile creeping on his face.

His reflection suddenly twisted, first shattering into a thousand pieces, before reforming into shape, a dark mass seeping from the cracks. The reflection he was looking at was no longer his, but instead, some kind of vile creature that resembled him but was ultimately different. He was unable to take his eyes off it, his visage latched onto the horrifying creature that he turned into. The image started grinning, the sight of it sending chills down his spine.

The image shifted once more, a cloaked figure gazing into his eye now, those unholy yellow orbs shredding him from the inside. The reflection reached towards him, its hand going through the mirror without hindrance. Screaming, he tore himself away from its gaze, lunging back, falling on the ground.

“Sal!” Rayman ran to the boy. He raised him into sitting position, the others gathering around them too. The boy was still shaking, a horrified look on his face. “Sal, what happened?”

The boy glanced at the crystal...and saw only himself, surrounded by his friends. He shook his head in disbelief, but the image didn't change. “I...N-Nothing...” he mumbled in a low voice.

His lie was completely obvious and they couldn't go past it any longer. Rayman placed his hand on his shoulder supportively “If you're not feeling well-”

“I'm...I'm alright, don't worry...” Salian edgily shrugged his hand off his shoulder. He stood up with shaking legs, afraid to land even a simple glance at the mirror. What's going on?! Why am I seeing these?

He had no time to finish his thoughts, as a strange sound hit his ears. Something scratching the rock...moving fast. The sounds amplified in volume and variety indicating that there were more than one sources.

“What the-” Rayman asked out loud. Strange shadows appeared from the nearest tunnels, a buzzing sound now audible along with the scratching...and some kind of squelching sound accompanying them. His eyes widened as he realized one of the shadows had an antenna. “RUN!” he shouted.

Suddenly a huge crack sounded from the top of the cove, a large blue, spiked ball falling from above. For one horrifying second they were frozen still from the sight. Ly and Rayman snapped out of it first, each of them jumping aside with someone. Salian felt the limbless boy push him away, the ball crashing into the earth where they stood just a second ago. The two of them lied still, the dust from the impact making them cough.

Rayman was the first to recover, covering his face with one hand. His eyes widened as he couldn't see Globox, nor Ly. I hope they're okay on the other side...

Another crack indicated that the ball was only the overture of their predicaments. The ground shook wildly under them, rifts appearing around the ball. It was only a split second, before the ground started to collapse under Rayman's feet. The second he tried to jump away, it was already too late. The ground gave up and he fell into the darkened chasm, the last thing he saw was Salian clinging to the edge.

“No!” shouted the boy upon seeing his friend disappear, the ball dropping after him.

He desperately tried to hold on with both hands, his head ready to explode. He pulled himself a little up, before falling back, his only handhold beginning to quiver. Mustering all the strength he had left, he tried to bring himself up one more time, his muscles screaming against the immense straining.

You can't escape...

The malevolent thought pierced his mind like a lancet. His eyes widened, the pain inside his head turning white-hot, a light blinding him for a second. He cried out, losing his already unsteady grip on the ledge, hurtling down into the shadowy abyss below...
- - -
Clearleaf Forest was bathing in an orange-color, the night slowly descending upon it. The sound of its inhabitants turned lower as they too, were beginning to rest. Only the Lums continued to glide around endlessly in the dusk, being as eternal as they were. But tonight, they were not the only ones who wouldn't rest.

Murfy panted heavily, standing on a small branch. He had been going ever since the encounter with Mr. Dark, hurrying back to the Fairy Council to give word of his return, and the kidnapping of his friends. His wings barely flapped now, unaccustomed to this kind of exertion.

The greenbottle was tired beyond words, the worry for his friends and the huge distance he had made eroding his endurance. His head was a bit cloudy from the lack of air, causing him to grab the bark of the tree for support.

“Can't stop...gotta hurry...” he whispered to himself. His limbs felt like jelly, his body betraying his commands to continue.

The image of his friends vanishing into the portal appeared in his mind's eye. Murfy scowled, jumping off the branch. Though his wings were already overused, he flew as fast as he could towards where he suspected the Fairy Glade was. They're depending on me...
- - -
The wind hissed in his ears, his whole body feeling feather-light. He felt...empty, not having a care in the world, limply diving into the darkness below. It felt like nothing in this world would bring him out from his catatonic state, even though his mind screamed that he was in mortal danger.

All of a sudden, he felt someone grab his hand, his body jerking as it was stopped in mid-fall. The abrupt stop was enough to shatter the stillness, and as he glanced up, he noticed Rayman holding his hand, while grasping onto a ledge. The limbless boy's face was in a painful twist from the strain of holding him.

“Quick...” he whimpered behind set teeth, his eyes closed from the tremendous effort. Salian tried to reach for something to grab, but couldn't get close to the wall of the chasm. “Hurry!” Rayman shouted, sweat running down his forehead, his grip slowly slipping.

“I'm trying!” the boy screamed back, panicked. Each passing second increased the chance that limbless boy's hand would detach from his body, causing him to fall to his death.

He started squirming in the air, putting even more pressure on his friend. By sheer luck, Salian managed to move himself so much as he began to swing about in the air. He tried to hold onto a stable ledge, both of their tenacities being tested to the limits.

As he swung forward, he tried to grasp onto the wall, but was too far away to do so. Rocking forwards again, he reached for it once more, his finger sliding just off the top of it, before he could tighten his grasp.

Suddenly, he felt Rayman slip at least an inch.

“I can't hold on...much longer!” he cried, gathering every last batch of strength he had left to keep them up.

Salian desperately tried to grab the ledge, but was still too far from it. At the next swing, he whispered a small prayer to Polokus, and reached for the wall, his arm protesting against the treatment. He could feel the dusty surface of it, and leaned on even more, letting go of Rayman's hand.

For one horrifying second it seemed as though he would slip off immediately, but managed to hold on. He let out a short cry of relief, getting a rock-hard grip on a pendent ledge. Rayman grabbed onto a rive with his now free hand and started to pull himself upwards, Salian slowly following him.

They went on for a few minutes, before he saw him disappear into a tunnel above. He glanced upwards and climbed towards the entrance. Sweat ran down his body, his muscles strained more than ever before. The boy grabbed the edge of the tunnel and tried to pull himself up. The crack he placed his foot into suddenly crumbled to pieces, causing him to lose his balance...not to mention his grip on the edge. He would have fallen into the darkness, if it hadn't been for two strong hands grabbing his arm.

Rayman helped him up into the tunnel, the two of them taking a few steps inside before collapsing on the ground. Both of them were panting, their bodies sore from the strain. The limbless boy turned his head to him, smiling weakly. Salian smiled back, and the two of them started chuckling. They've just survived a huge fall, and both were overjoyed to be still alive at this point.

They continued chuckling on the ground until even their stomachs hurt. Both of them too tired to stand up, they continued lying there, taking a rest after the events. As he closed his eyes, Salian suddenly remembered something that sent his heart into his throat.

“No!” he screamed, jumping on his feet. Rayman did so too, pulling him back before he would slip off the edge. “Let me go!” he spat back at him, trying to break free. “Ly!” he cried the fairy's name into the blacked chasm.

“Sal, stop! I saw her grab Globox as we fell, they're okay!” he shouted, hoping the words would get to him. “They're probably below us by some, but alive and well!” the boy stopped struggling, his words relieving him a bit. “Come on. If we go, we can hopefully catch up with them later on.” he let go of him.

Salian nod his head slowly, turning his back to the chasm. “Let's go...” he said in a low voice and began to walk into the shadowy insides of the tunnel.
- - -
Globox slowly glanced around the cove, listening for any suspicious noises. Not hearing any, he continued the tunnel, carrying the swooned Ly in his hands. The fairy had fainted right after they flew into a tunnel, his weight causing her to overuse her powers. He advanced a bit more, until the light was jut enough for him to see.

Carefully, he placed the her face-up on the ground, and held his hands high. He let his thoughts clear, concentrating only on what he was feeling. His species could feel where the air was more saturated on their skin, being somewhat connected to water. Sensing a slight humidity, a smile appeared on the glute's face. Calling the old steps to his mind, he began to dance in a odd rhythm while reciting the ancient words he had learned long ago.

To outsiders, this seemed like incoherent rambling, tied together with a mindless body-tossing, but the glute knew well what he was doing. It wasn't long before the humidity gathered into one point, a small cloud visible. He guided it above Ly's face and intensified the dance, putting more pressure on the little cloud. The glute clapped once, a little thunder going off inside his creation. As he clapped again, a lightning went through the cloud and the next second, rain began to fall.

She narrowed her closed eyelids unconsciously, feeling the drops fall on her face. The cool droplets slowly made her come around. Whimpering, she opened her eyes, noticing Globox above her. He made a sweeping move, causing the cloud to disperse into the air.

“Are you alright, Ly?” the glute dropped down and helped her sit up.

“I think so...” she rubbed her temples lightly. “I just didn't expect you were so heavy.” she smiled at him, brushing one of her deep blue locks from her eyes, damp from the rain, her tail curling up beside her. “Thank you, Globox.” she hugged the glute. Globox smiled back, putting a hand on her back.

His smile weakened as her hug unwittingly made him think about the little ones he had left at home. The hundreds of children he and his darling Uglette, all of them waiting for him to come back. Ly noticed his mood change and glanced into his eyes with compassion. “We'll find a way out of here...I promise.” she hugged him again.

“I know...” the smile reappeared on his face slowly. “I wonder where the others could be...”

“I think they're above us...” she glanced up. “We should get going if we are to find them. Don't worry Globox, I'm alright!” she giggled as the worried glute immediately tried to help her up. Being a father, he had always been the most considerate among them.

Upon standing up, she closed her eyes for a second, gesturing to the glute to stay silent. She started humming lightly, placing her hands close to each other, concentrating. She felt the energy in herself surfacing, though she was reluctant to find that it had waned quite a lot. Someone or something in here is having a bad effect on my powers...

Nevertheless, she channeled what she could to her palms, a small light appearing between them. Globox watched the fairy use her powers in silent awe. The sight wasn't new to him, since he had already seen her conjure things, but the proficiency she used her magic with, despite being so young, had always amazed him. Focusing a bit more, she started to give form to the light, twisting and turning it, until it took the shape of a sphere.

Ly examined the glinting little sphere she had just conjured. It was less bright than the one she made earlier, but still sufficient enough to prove them some means of illumination.

“Coming, Globox?” she winked at the momentarily frozen glute.

The asked nod eagerly, following Ly close behind. As they went, she continuously held the sphere like a lantern, the light just enough to see to a few meters before them. The tunnel continued to go forward, seemingly without rising or descending. In the silence of the trek, the fairy soon found herself thinking of their current predicament.

I can barely conjure some light, and who knows what's still in for us? What if I can't defend myself, or Globox? I promised I'd get him home...I wish Rayman and Salian were here... She sighed, not exactly sure of what she should do right now. Globox glanced at her worriedly and as she looked back at him, she saw the immense trust behind the concern, that elicited a smile from her. But they're not...I'll have to take care of the two of us on my own. And so I will. The thought filled her with a newfound determination, a feeling she really needed right now.

“Hurry up!” she giggled to the slowly sauntering glute, picking a faster pace. Globox grinned, catching up with her, his tummy rippling at every step, as he tried to outrun the fairy. Ly gazed into the depths of the tunnel with resolve. Whatever is in store for us, I'm ready...
- - -
He slowly inched down on the walls, ears wide open to the noises of the prey. The sounds were coming from two different places, indicating that he succeeded in dividing the group. Their scents reached his nostrils...a fairy and a glute...and two more, which he had never sensed before.

His eyes sharpened as he concentrated on the the two unknown creatures...they would make his first victims. His blood became fueled again by the excitement, as though he was reliving his very first hunt! He felt so exhilarated...so strong.

They would soon face his wrath. First those two...then the fairy and the glute. He would to hunt them down, tiring them out to the last drop. He would make the scream and beg for their lives...and then, he would kill them...
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WEWT! I can't wait to read part two of chapter 4!! 8D
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I've been reading this on FF.Net. I left a comment. :) It's really well-written.
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Thanks, it always feels good when I know someone is actually reading what I write. ^^

I remember the comment you gave back at Chapter 1, if you've sent another one, I haven't gotten it yet. :wink:
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Awfully sorry for the double post, but I want to share this with you. :oops2: The next part is ready, and there will be even more parts of this chapter later on. Thanks to everyone who keeps track of it, and of course, Luckster_Gal, for beta-reading.

Part 2

Polokus slowly opened his eyes, gazing into the night from his viewpoint, on top of his pillar. Something is amiss... The realization struck him as he sensed a portal had been opened not long ago...but not by the Teensies. His visage darkened, suspecting what must've happened. Other than the Teensies, whom he created to keep track of every road and passage, only one creature was able to open portals...

Picturing Clearleaf Forest before him, he let his spirit travel there, sweeping it through from bird's eye view, trying to find the source of the disturbance. Like he expected deep inside, the one he was searching for had already disappeared by the time he could find him...being a creature of shadows, he was the only one who could flee from his watchful eyes. Polokus closed his eyes, concentrating on a face. When he realized he couldn't locate him, his fears were confirmed. Something very bad must have happened. He brought up a familiar face before his mind's eye...a fairly young female, her green-yellow robes rippling, her scarlet hair falling in her eyes as she giggled...

Betilla... He called out to the fairy, his mind roaming through the whole world for her. Betilla, Dark has-

He couldn't find her. Concerned, he tried to call her once more, but no avail. Either she was unconscious or-...no, she couldn't have been dead. During his thinking, a stone with strange markings near a clearing caught his attention. He could weakly feel her presence there...but whether she was still there, he could not tell...at least not with his own eyes.

- - -

The matuvu shook slightly, feeling a light push in its mind, suggesting it should look out from its hiding place. It peeked out, quickly glancing around with its large eyes, the darkness of the night not bothering it one bit. Its kind was already accustomed to nearly any kind of environmental handicap. Polokus felt the fear inside the little creature...it saw something terrible, and was still frightened from the sight. A little searching in the lizard's memory left no doubt of it...Mr. Dark has returned to active duty.

Climb down... The little one raised its head at the call. Strangely, the fact that a voice was talking in its head didn't startle the matuvu, instead, it felt...natural. It obeyed silently, scurrying down the tree, while peeking around, Polokus looking through its eyes. The forest seemed peaceful, only a few ashen trees indicated something bad happened here not long ago.

He dug deeper into the creature's memory, finally finding something important. The little one saw two persons entering the clearing. A little push made the sight clearer, so much he could identify Salian and Ly. They were approaching what seemed like Tily, though Polokus could already see it was only a mirage of Dark. When the flames went off, the vision went blurry, the matuvu retreating into the sanctuary of the tree's crown.

A little more searching paid off as he saw Rayman and Globox entering the scenery too. His spirit sank as Dark opened the portal under them, the group of four disappearing in it, while Murfy, one of the greenbottle's kin, flew out of sight. Just then, the sound of feet tapping hit the creature's ear and it turned, noticing a fairy coming into sight. She was panting as though she had run all the way here, her robe wrinkled, her blood-red hair flowing freely. Betilla...

She gasped upon noticing Dark, who in turn, sealed the portal, saying something the matuvu couldn't understand. Betilla lunged forward with a cry of desperation, a stream of light emanating from her palm. She formed the light into a bolt, and sent it at the cloaked figure. Mr. Dark simply raised a hand and the shadows around him engulfed the light, dismantling it.

The creature became horrified at this point and fled to the farthest corner of the tree, leaving Polokus to only rely on what the little lizard heard. He felt a slight thorn of anger surfacing, but didn't blame the little one...Dark was a truly horrifying sight himself alone.

A few explosions were audible...then someone spoke, again words the matuvu couldn't comprehend...and suddenly a scream tearing through the night. Back on top of the pillar of the four masks, Polokus' eyes widened. Search around... His voice inside the little one's head wasn't commanding, but immensely worried. It nod into the air, and began to crawl around the clearing. Though his kind could walk on any surface, strangely, they were very clumsy on the ground.

It scurried along the edge of the clearing, looking for anything out of the ordinary. In its hurry, the lizard almost crashed into a large rock. Look up... The matuvu did as told and glanced up at the rock, allowing Polokus to share its sight. Ancient carvings were etched into the stone, marks that made no sense to the little one...but all the more to him. Go... His voice was still a gentle whisper, but with grave anxiety.

The matuvu did as he asked, until it bumped into something soft. The creature cuddled to the cushy material enjoying the feeling of it. Polokus however, was even more worried...the object didn't mean anything to the lizard, but he recognized it immediately...the green-yellow hat, divided in the middle, decorated with silvery stars that sparkled when light fell on them...the cap Betilla always wore...

Finally, it backed up and noticed a body lying sideways on the ground. Hurry! The little one crawled over to it, Polokus an unpleasant twinge inside. Betilla was motionless, her hair falling into her face. The creature lightly touched the fairy's face with its adherent pawn. She flinched slightly from its touch, but didn't wake up.

Polokus sighed in relief. At least she's alive...Thank you. He commended the little one for its help. It rose on its rear feet, clapping into the night. His joy was short lived however, as he remembered what happened to Rayman and the others. We must find them fast...

- - -

The deeper parts of the tunnels hadn't been ventured to for countless times. No one knew what unnamed, unimaginable monstrosities might have been lurking there by now. The ones, who were unwary or foolish enough to descend, have never been seen or heard of, ever again. That place was a death-trap, a surefire way to get one killed, fast and efficiently. No one in their right minds would have come here...but they didn't have a choice.

Salian was panting heavily, climbing downwards on the rocky wall. The only way he and Rayman could continue after the tunnel ended in yet another chasm, was to go into the lower parts, where they had the most chance of finding their missing friends, Ly and Globox. Both of them were worried whether they were okay, which inevitably created a strained atmosphere around the two.

The boy hissed suddenly, a sharper rock cutting his palm, but continued to hold on.

“Come on, just a little more...” he heard Rayman encouraging him from the edge of the tunnel. He had already reached it, and was now glancing worriedly at him. Though Salian wasn't all that weak, climbing tired him out much more than him, probably because he was more accustomed to these physical tasks across the years.

His heart leaped into his throat, as the boy slipped. He hung there for a second, panting for air, only his hands keeping him up. Rayman was about to climb after him, when he finally found a crack that supported his feet. He looked quite stirred, but continued downwards. I hope he'll be okay... There were still a few meters for him to go, and though he offered he would climb alongside him, the boy said he'd be alright.

Beads of sweat trickled down Salian's forehead, using all the strength he had left to keep his grip. This was an immensely hard task, especially since he had to stop after almost every single move. Ever since he saw...whatever that was in the crystal-mirror, his head has been aching constantly. It started out blunt, but had by now developed a tendency of flaring up every couple of minutes. If it caught him climbing, there was no other way than to just set his teeth, keep himself latched on the rocks, and wait until it eased.

Letting out a tired sigh, he continued his descent. After a few more meters, he was close enough to the edge of the tunnel. He glanced down, seeing his friend signaling him to let go. With a twinge of fear, he released his grip and closed his eyes. For a second, he was just drifting in the air, -oh, how joyous it was...just falling without a care...- , until Rayman caught him. Groaning a bit, the limbless boy set him on his feet.

“Thanks.” Salian let out a faint smile, Rayman winking back at him. They both gazed into the tunnel...where they might find the others...or something else would find them. He suddenly felt his friend grab his hand.

“We'll find them.” he seemed determined. “Don't worry. Ly can take care of herself, and Globox had never been hurt, regardless how bad things looked. I promise we'll find them, even if we have to search from top to bottom!” he squeezed his hand reassuringly; making him bite his lower lip. “Let's go.” his friend seemed to ponder for a few seconds, before nodding in agreement.

“Alright, lead-AH!” Salian grabbed his head, a shrewd pain tearing through it. A black fog descended on his sight, clouding his senses, leaving him deaf and blind to the world. It's happening again!

He shook his head hard to regain his sight, but no avail. He couldn't see or hear anything...he had been robbed of his senses, alone in an unknown place of cold and shadows...

“You'll never find them...”

The voice cracked as though icy stones were being smashed together, sending shivers down his spine, regardless he had already heard him speak before. Glancing up, he saw shrouds above, descending slowly upon him.

“Leave me alone!” he cried into the emptiness that surrounded him. He couldn't see or hear anything except the horrifying whisper and the shadowy figure towering over him.

“...You can't do anything. They will die slowly...one by one...” the cold, emotionless whisper, sharp as blades, pierced his ears. His voice indicated he wasn't just saying this into the air...he stated it as fact.

“No!” Salian fell on his knees, covering his ears, the shades flowing around him. He sank into their deadly embrace, squirming, pleading for help.

The shadows held him tightly, crushing his already weak body slowly, while raising him into the air, up to the cloaked person. He threw his head around, trying to evade his sight. A shade gripped his head, forcing him to look up so he would face...him.

“...You can't evade your fate...” the figure raised his hand, a black orb appearing in it. He gazed at it for a few seconds, glaring back at him with flaming eyes. Salian's eyes widened in horror, just before the orb hit him in the chest with full force.


Salian dropped on the ground screaming in pain. Rayman grabbed his hands so that he wouldn't hurt himself, consciousness absent from his eyes. Having no choice, he gripped his wrists tighter, making him whimper, but awakening slowly. One last cry left his throat, and he fell silent, his head hanging.

“No!” Rayman lifted him up, supporting his back. He could feel that he was still alive, his heart beating...though it seemed to have weakened slightly. “Sal, please, wake up!” he whispered, raising him a bit more.

The boy groaned as he came around, sitting up with his friend's help. He opened his eyes, the pain and the vision eliciting teardrops from his eyes. Rayman lightly touched his chest, eliciting a sharp cry from him. It didn't seem as he was hurt badly, but the agony was real indeed.

A blunt noise echoed throughout the tunnel, but they didn't even hear it. Rayman put a hand over him, not knowing what to say. He growled in anger, glancing into the depths of the tunnel. Take your revenge on me if you want to...but keep my friends out of this!

- - -

He jumped over the chasm, fixating his grip on the other side. He smelled fear...and blood. The delicious cocktail of the two scents mixing sent flames through his veins, exciting...intoxicating him. His stomach grumbled in hunger, a red fog descending on his sight. He could feel just how close he was to the two now...

“Back!” the sound struck him like a sharp stone. His eyes widened as he saw the dark figure that was floating before him, its yellow eyes piercing even through his normally impenetrable body. He blinked once but quickly came to his senses and bowed before the newcomer...his master.

The figure raised his head, his hat covering his face. “You know what your duty is...” he whispered, his voice cold and imperative. He nod, though his instincts dictated otherwise. “Bring him to me, alive...and kill the rest of them.” the command sent a satisfaction through him...a new kind of thrill to spice his hunt...

“I've forgiven your failure once...I've even restored you to my favors...but-” his master raised his index finger, his eyes burning. He crawled downwards on the rocky wall, horrified by his voice. “-if you fail me again...there will be no mercy.” he didn't shout, he just stated the expected. A second later, he twisted himself into a living shadow and disappeared from mortal eyes.

He shook in fear, the threat of his master etching into his mind. He turned towards the tunnel's entrance, the sounds of the two creatures still audible. His body shook from the anticipation of the hunt, the desire to prove himself, and the hunger. A faint squelching sound indicated his plan was already in motion. The survivors of the first wave will have to put up against him...if their lucky, they'll be dead before that would happen...

- - -

“Wouldn't it be better if we'd just take care of them on our own?” his minion spoke up, the annoyance and impatience clear in his voice...he still had a lot to learn. Though Dark could have punished him for daring to so much as question his ways, he just chuckled.

“Patience...he'll do just fine.” Dark glared at his minion...his only servant left, after Rayman made him flee. “He would not dare fail me again...”

“I should be the one...he doesn't deserve this honor.” he continued to grumble.

Dark turned to his faithful servant, his robes flowing around him, the shadows twisting near him.

“Do not question my plans!” he whispered, a few rocks cracking from his voice. “I won't let anything stand between me and my prize...and you too, will get your reward, soon enough.” his minion quieted down and he once again turned back to his thoughts. He had been waiting patiently behind the scenes, for his plans to be set into motion...he could wait a little more now...

- - -

Ly silently stroked the rocky wall, pondering as a little patch crumbled from her touch, the sphere she conjured earlier, in her other hand. I wonder where they are now... Her cheerfulness was short-lived, now giving place to worry over her friends. They still haven't seen any sight of Rayman or Salian, and though she kept a determined attitude in front of Globox, she was much more flustered inside.

The sound of steps coming closer hit her ear. She smiled as the large form of Globox became visible, emerged from the shadow. He walked over to her, watching curiously.

“Are you alright Ly?” he asked.

“Of course...I was just...thinking.” she lied, her eyes falling slightly. The fairy suddenly noticed Globox was downright shivering. It was slightly cold, but not enough to make her shiver like he was. He must be horrified... Ly hung her head slightly, her cheeks red. Seeing him so afraid made her own worries look selfish.

“Globox, i-” she couldn't finish as something crashed into the tunnel through the patch she was prodding a minute ago.

Both of them let out a small shriek as the creature looked at them. It looked like a distant relative of Bzzit, but instead of a mosquito, it looked more like a purple spider, barely exceeding her knee's height. A pair of wings stuck out from its corselet, its antennas pointing at them rather curiously, and instead of feet, it had four suckers, that made a squelch every time it moved.

Ly felt chills running down her spine as she gazed at the little creature's fangs. Even though she was a fairy, she had never seen a creature like this one. Nevertheless, her instincts warned her she should flee, instead of just watching. The mischievous look that suddenly appeared on its face confirmed her fears.

“Globox, run!” she cried, throwing the light-sphere at the bug. It jumped up with blinding speed, evading the ball, while clinging onto the ceiling with its suckers. Ly froze for a second, giving the creature just enough time for a counter-attack. A snap could be heard, and before she could react, it shot a large needle out of its abdomen.

Pain exploded in her upper arm as the projectile cut into her just below the shoulder. Her eyes watered for a second, but she quickly took hold of herself and focused on an energy sphere. A familiar tingle went through her while she summoned her magic, a sparkling ball appearing in her palm. A twinge of fear grabbed her as she realized just how weak she was by now. She backed up and threw it at the bug, the same time it shot another needle. Its shot easily breached through Ly's weak sphere, landing in the ground, right before her feet.

She jumped back a bit, noticing a faint sparkle. Glancing aside, she noticed a pair of fangs appearing in the hole. Her eyes widening from the fear, she turned around and started running. The bug let out a shrieking-snickering noise, and Ly could already hear at least a dozen of squelches closing.

The fairy heard the snapping noise again, and quickly rolled aside, a sharp pain alerting her, that her wounded arm didn't exactly approve that move. Her heart leaped into her throat, as the needle stopped in the air and turned towards her. The next second it shot forwards, aiming for her throat. Ly felt paralyzed for a second, but quickly shook it off and ducked. The needle bedded itself into the rock, narrowly missing her. She panted, her heart still beating wildly. Swiftly, she started running again, trying to lose the predator she had encountered.

The fairy reached a crossroad, two smaller tunnels leading away. She glanced at each, trying to determine where Globox could be, when the noise of those creatures coming closer hit her ears. Just as the first would appear, she felt a pair of hands straddling her, one covering her mouth and dragging her into one of the tunnels. She almost began to scream, when she realized it was only the glute. He put his index finger before his mouth, instructing her to keep quiet. The crouched down behind a rock, hoping the spiders would pass them by.

The little bugs suddenly swarmed the crossroad, the squelches echoing loudly. One of them let out another of their strange call, and they scattered around, trying to find the fairy and the glute. Globox was trembling beside Ly, letting out small whimpers of fear, while she tried to keep calm. Suddenly, both flinched as they heard one of them coming closer. She desperately tried to think of something, as he covered his eyes in horror.

It went over to the rock, suspecting it might be their hiding spot. It was the only place where they could have been. Drool ran down its fangs as the thought of fresh meat nearly made it go insane. The creature peeked over suddenly, only to realize that the rock was just larger than it expected. Letting out a shriek, it backed up, joining the swarm as they entered the other tunnel.

Ly dropped her hands, panting hard. The illusion she created dissipated instantly, her magic no longer fueling it. She would've dropped on the ground if Globox hadn't caught her, but still, she couldn't find the power to open her eyes. Creating illusions were difficult and complex tasks, which required both a clear mind and a fresh body. Though she saved them with her quick move, she already felt the price of it, as strength left her limbs. She could see the glute's face for another moment, the next second, darkness embraced her...

- - -

“Run!” Rayman cried to Salian who was beginning to tail off. Behind them a large number of spider-creatures were moving swiftly towards them.

“I'm trying!” the boy panted heavily, his, along with the rest of his body legs, becoming heavy as lead. His head was about to explode, every step only making the throbbing more intense.

Rayman stopped and waited for him to catch up with him. Salian quickly got to him and knelt down, his lungs ready to give up. The limbless boy examined the tunnel's ceiling as the bugs came closer. One let out a shriek, the rest considering it as a charge and doubled their speed. He gazed at them, his fists slowly starting to glint. He threw his hands back, and the boy could see a light appearing between his palms, growing more intense by the second.

The limbless boy's face turned to a strained grimace, not having used this power for a long time. The light in his hands shaped into a ball form, and Salian could see small sparkles going off inside, around the now bluish core.

“Bye-bye.” Rayman grinned letting the sphere loose. Pulling a blinding line while flying, the ball exploded into the top of the tunnel, just as the first bugs would pass under it. They looked up and that was their doom, large rocks dropping as it collapsed on them, burying some of them under the debris, but leaving even more trapped behind.

“What in Polokus...were those?” Salian asked, still panting.

Rayman sighed and turned to him. “I don't know if they have a name...but I'm already familiar with them.” he leaned down and helped the boy up. “How's your head?” he sounded more and more worried each time he asked that question...about every five minutes. He knew well that if it weren't for the Pirate treatments his friend received, he wouldn't be able to as much as stand by now.

“Not good...” he whimpered, rubbing his forehead. “Sometimes it eases for a few seconds...then comes back, worse than ever before...”

“He's playing with you...” Rayman clenched his fists in futile anger. “Whatever he says, don't believe him.” he hit a more concerned tone. “Dark likes to make people see and hear things that aren't real...don't let him control you.” he placed a hand on his shoulder.

Salian hung his head, unable to answer anything. In the end, he just smiled faintly, placing his hand on Rayman's. “I'll try.” his voice was low, but with all the determination he could muster at the moment.

Suddenly, a scratching voice hit their ears. They both glanced at the pile and were horrified to see, a bug's antenna sticking out from amongst the rock. The creature wiggled around the hole, trying to make it bigger, letting out a snicker-shriek to force the rest to dig harder.

“I don't think we should wait until they get through...” Rayman stated and the two began to run farther into the tunnel, trying to lose their relentless pursuers.

- - -

“Beautiful, isn't it?”

Ly gazed down at the waterfall from the log she was sitting on. Its natural beauty was enough to make most fairies want to versify the wonders of it, but in the faint light of the dusk, it was all that and even more. The light made the water sparkle, also giving them a faint golden glint.

It was like a river of pure gold, while the gliding Lums under it further increased the already wide variety of colors that were visible. The branches that were long enough to dip into the waterfall thrived along, the sparkling water enough for her to see that some of the creatures of the forest were sitting on them, letting a water shower over them, enjoying the chilly freshness of the fall. She found the sight enchanting and calming at the same time.

“Yes...it's truly magnificent.” her voice was more of a whisper; she was so amazed by it. The fairy glanced at Salian, who was still gazing at the sight. She noticed his jade eyes glimmering as the fading sun shone on him. “Sal?”

“Hmm?” he picked up his head, glancing at her. He chuckled lightly, a faint blush appearing on his face. “Sorry...I've been here nearly every single day since mother showed me this place, and I still get distracted by it so easily...”

Ly giggled at his embarrassment, drawing near to him. He turned ever redder from her laughter, his shoulders sinking a bit.

“I said that you're right...it's really lovely here.” she repeated, smiling. She noticed Salian was mumbling something, but couldn't understand the words. “What was that?” she pouted playfully. The boy shook his head, red to the ears. “Come on, I want to hear it!” the fairy grabbed his shoulder shaking him lightly.

Salian finally raised his head and glanced at her. He gulped, his mouth moving, as though he was saying something. “I can't hear you.” she giggled, making a funnel before her pointy ear with her hand. He mustered a bit of courage and gazed into her eyes, jade meeting jade.

“Only because you're here too...” he whispered, his face bathing in bright crimson. Ly felt as though a fire was heating her cheeks from the inside, a fierce blush appearing on her face too.

They stared into each other's eyes, until they quickly glanced aside, flustered. Salian seemed worried, probably fearing she might leave after what he said. She smiled and placed her hand on his, interlacing her fingers with the boy's. He glanced at her rather nervously, but her smile made him ease. The two watched silently as the sun ducked beneath the waterfall, their hands resting on each other's...


Ly almost coughed as a cold liquid flowed down her throat, slowly reawakening her senses. The fairy opened her eyes a bit, noticing Globox before her, some water glimmering in his hands. She felt her back against the rocky wall, her head dizzy and foggy. She tried to say something, but her throat was dry, which only resulted in a raspy cough.

“Drink.” Globox put his hands closer, slanting them to make it easier for her. She opened her mouth, letting the water just simply slide down her throat. She took one small sip after another, until she drank it all up. “Easy, Ly...” the glute restrained her as she futilely tried to stand up.

She felt awfully weak, barely able to move her limbs. Deep inside, she presumed the magic she used would tire her out, but she didn't expect she would faint again...or that she would dream of Salian, of all people. A faint blush crept on her face as she remembered it. It was actually the memory of what happened only a few years ago. Globox noticed her cheeks reddening, which he took as a sign of her getting better.

She smiled at him, feeling indebted to the glute for the second time today. The drink of water Globox had given her, helped greatly as she felt strength slowly returning to her legs. Clinging into the glute, she stood up, her legs shaking a bit, but a fresh vigor running through her veins. The fairy suddenly noticed that Globox was trembling, obviously terrified by all that happened. “Globox, are you-”

“I'm alright.” the glute answered, his quivering voice giving away the lie. “I'm...scared.” he whispered, hanging his head. Ly gazed at him concerned, searching for the words he needed right now. Globox was an easily scared creature by nature, though he tried to keep up a brave mask.

The glute turned around and sat down, embarrassed before the fairy. Ly pondered for a few seconds, then placed a hand on his shoulder. “Globox-” he turned to her, a sorry expression on his face. “-do you think I'm afraid?”

He didn't answer, curiously looking back at her. “I'm afraid too.” she stated, sitting down beside him, a sympathetic smile on her face. “You can't even imagine how scared I am...I'm afraid we won't find the others...I'm afraid we won't get out of here...I'm afraid I wouldn't be able to help, when I'm needed.” each confession eased Globox's own fears a bit. “I said mine, what are you afraid of?” she asked, smiling. He pondered for a second, before glancing back at her.

“I'm afraid I won't see my friends anymore...” his voice was a bit low, but getting stronger by the second. “I'm afraid I won’t return to my family...I'm afraid of this whole place!” he almost shouted now.

“See?” Ly nod at him. “I admit what I'm scared of, thus, I can work on trying to prove them wrong, instead of worrying about the constantly.” she saw a faint smile creep on Globox's face too. “Everyone's afraid sometimes, even Rayman. But if we don't let those fears govern us, we can always find a way to eventually get through them.” she grinned at the glute. He seemed to take the advice to heart, nodding back at her. Ly jumped to her feet, giving her hand to Globox. “Come on, let's go find the others.” she smiled reassuringly.

Globox stood up, chuckling loudly, his large belly shaking. The two continued along the tunnel, both hoping their friends were close by now. I can't wait to see them again...

- - -

“Stop it, please!” Salian cried, tears running down his face, his whole body bathing in pain.

“...Your friends will suffer the fate that they must face...” he whispered, his voice hurting his ears. “...No one can help them...or you...” his voice sent chills down his spine, the horrible feeling that he was right, grasping his heart. He raised his hands and the shadows around rose, sharp as a needle, ready to stab him to death...


“NO!” he screamed on top of his lungs, throwing himself around. Rayman tried to restrain him, but had a hard job doing so. His seizures turned worse since they've encountered the splinter-spiders, hitting him more and more frequently. Rayman became increasingly worried of him, the visions straining Salian's mind and body to the limits.

He cried out one last time, trembling in his arms. The limbless boy gently placed him on the ground, waiting for him to come around. He writhed for a few seconds, then calmed down. Rayman noticed he promptly fell asleep. Sleep well Sal...

Feeling restless, he jumped on his feet and started to walk around, making circles around his sleeping friend.

“Mr. Dark...” he savored his name...his first, and to this day, most powerful enemy. His mind unwittingly traveled back to their last encounter, years ago.

He was still in a semi-euphoric state from defeating the mutants Dark had created from the enemies he had defeated earlier. His enemy had retreated to the top of a candy hill that overlooked the entire château. Rayman ran up a spiral route, eager and ready to face Dark himself.

Even to this day, he found it rather strange that his lair was hidden in a place like Candy Château...

At the last few steps, he was already shaking with excitement. He was going to go against the wizard who was powerful enough to defeat Betilla, twice!...Betilla! He almost slapped himself...he had completely forgotten about the Elder fairy.

Rayman shook his head lightly at how forgetful he used to be back then...

And finally, Dark was before him...the master of darkness, the threat to everyone in the whole world. The cloaked wizard glared at him, his eyes looking rather tired...but strangely amused.

“It's time, Dark!” he shouted, heated by his young blood. “Release Betilla at once!” he raised his fist, trying to threaten him. Dark chuckled under the robe, and glanced at him. The cold yellow eyes made the air stuck in his throat for a second. He was evil...not just bad or repulsive, but pure, frightful evil.


The words Dark spoke had been in his mind ever since...always bothering him subconsciously.

“So it has come to pass...defeated by the other.” he whispered, his voice raspy and somewhat frightening. Rayman readied his fists, but Dark showed no sign of hostility. Instead, he glared at the limbless boy with his otherworldly yellow eyes. “You have no idea what you're doing...thwarting my plans, only to make place for an even more grandiose one to unearth...”

He stepped closer, and though Rayman wanted to attack, he couldn't move. “You and I have more in common than you could ever imagine...” he towered over him like a shadowy cloud. “When the time comes, remember, your loyalties lie within you, not with anyone else...” with this, he jumped up, forming into a simple shade before Rayman's eyes.

“Oh, and here's your little fairy...I have no need for her.” his voice was dripping with mockery. He pulled out a small orb from his robe and dropped it. Rayman quickly snapped out of it and threw his fist, narrowly catching the ball. As it returned to him, he saw Betilla sleeping inside. The limbless boy took off his scarf and carefully placed the magical orb in it, tucking it up. He walked to the edge of the cliff and looked down. He had a long way home...

Rayman flinched suddenly, Salian groaning in his sleep. He watched silently as his friend turned sideways, a faint smile appearing on his face. He's probably having a pleasant dream...he earned it... The limbless boy sat down beside Sal, gazing at him.

“Why is he torturing you?...” he whispered confused.

Out of nowhere, he heard a faint squelch echoing in the tunnel. He glanced at his friend, then back at the tunnel. Judging by the noise, the spider had to be pretty far away. A decision formed in his head as he leaned down and carefully picked up the boy. Salian mumbled something, but didn't wake up.

Rayman started walking with his friend in his arms, slow at first, then speeding up a bit. Behind him, the spider inched towards them, still far away, but coming closer by the second. The chase was on again…
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Re: Path To Divinity

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Looks like I'm tripling by now...ah well, here's the next part for all who care. Thanks to all who reads it, and Luckster_Gal for the beta-read. ^^

Chapter 5: Descent

Part 1


The chilly breeze of the night swept across the Fairy Glade unexpectedly, like a tidal wave, forcing even those who liked sleeping out in the air, to take shelter somewhere. With the colder season approaching, the evenings became more and more icy; though that sparkled a bright interest in the youth. They were excited that maybe they'd finally get to see snow around the forest; already dreaming about the many games they could play. The elders knew that wouldn't happen, but had no heart to ruin the hope of the little ones.

With midnight passed already, nearly everyone was asleep, or was about to. The trees filtered the light of the twin moons, leaving only enough to see in the dark, reserving the rest of the sweet moonlight for themselves. In the silvery luster, a shadow appeared suddenly. It slowly inched forwards in the night, stumbling at every few step, like a lost soul, desperately searching for something.

Shya rubbed her already iced, shivering as the cold easily found its way through the flimsy material of her sapphire nightgown. The fairy whimpered from the chill, but continued her search around trees that enveloped her house, looking everywhere, high and low. For the past hour, she’d been searching calling her son nearly every minute, but no use.

Salian was still nowhere to be found, making her increasingly worried. He had never been this late before…and though she was angry at him for that, her worry for him was stronger. It was already past midnight, and she hadn't seen him or his friends since morning. She knew something was wrong...she couldn't explain the gloomy feeling she had since yesterday, but she could feel he was in danger; that his life was at stake.

“Sal!” she called desperately, a hint of tears in her eyes. I’d forgive him already; just Polokus please bring him home! The old fears she continuously held for him were coming to surface once more. She rubbed her legs with her tail, since they were threatening to freeze by now. Her body demanded her to return to the sweet warmth of the fireplace, but she continued. Her son was priority…she didn’t matter right now.

The wind blew through the leaves, making her fall into another shivering fit. She knelt down, curling up as much as she could, her tail protecting her back from the cold. Where are you Sal? Why aren’t you home with me? The fairy wanted to go, but her frozen body wouldn’t move. She breathed fast, trying to keep herself awake, the air coming out in light puffs. Shya clanged to the image of her son; a memory of the two of them, so she wouldn’t fall asleep.

“That's enough Sal! You know well it's bedtime!” she scowled as her son continued to run away from her, giggling from the way his mother tried to catch him

“No, I’m not going!” the boy cried, though he was already in his nightly clothes. His mother tried to grab hold of him again, but he evaded her, stopping in the other end.

“Come back here already!” she called, Salian laughing at her from the other side of the room. She unconsciously grinned, seeing the only way for him to run was through her. She slowly inched towards him, careful not to give space for the boy to get through.

“I don’t want to sleep yet!” he shouted, his body tense, ready to run. He grinned and moved forward.

Shya foresaw the movement and as he tried to run past her, she grabbed the young boy, raising him into the air with a spin. Sal whined and squirmed in her hands, lunging towards her. He managed to surprise her and the two fell back on the carpet, screaming. Upon landing, both lied still for a second, before bursting out in laughter.

She hugged him tightly, not letting him escape again. He led a futile effort to break free, giggling, but her embrace was impenetrable. To further ruin his chances, Shya lightly poked a few spots on his body she knew were ticklish. He tried to escape one final time, before succumbing to her torture. After a few minutes of laughing, he calmed down and snuggled closer to her.

“I love you.” he gazed into her eyes with a heavenly smile, his face bright red from the running around. The fairy planted a kiss on his forehead, making him laugh again. In turn, he leaned up and kissed her cheek, earning a soft smile from his mother.

“I love you too, you little troublemaker.” she kissed him again, while tickling him a bit more.

Nestled before the fireplace, Sal gazed at the dancing flames while Shya ran her hand through his scruffy, almond-brown hair, purring lightly into his ear. He was still locked in her embrace, her tail covering him so he wouldn’t get cold. He leaned back in her arms, yawning slightly.

“Mommy!” her child spoke up suddenly. The fairy smiled and kissed his cheek as a sign she was listening. “Will you tell me a bedtime-story?” he pleaded.

“Of course Sal.” she purred, exciting him a bit. “Which one do you want to hear?” she stroked his back lightly. Feeling his breathing getting a bit slower, she knew he was very close to falling asleep.

“The one with fairies and...and Teensies!” he counted on his little fingers. “And magic! And monsters and adventures and...and...” he seemed to be out of ideas suddenly, gazing at his hand with a slight confusion.

Shya giggled at her son, while digging her memory through for a suitable story. Remembering an old one she heard, the fairy cleared her throat a bit. „Once upon a time...” she started, Salian gazing into her eyes with anticipation. She found herself astounded again for a second, how he had kept those marvelous jade-eyes since she found him. “-back when the world was just an infant, Polokus summoned a young fairy before him-”


The memory trailed off, the cold wind blowing the warmth of it away, but the images stood firmly before her, especially her son. “Salian...” she whimpered, clutching into the name like a prayer. She stood up slowly, her body shivering from the cold, but her heart on fire. She didn't want to return back home...not until she found him. With that, she continued looking, calling out for him every few minutes. Where are you Sal?...
- - -
Rayman ran as hard as he could, the squelching sound behind him getting louder. Glancing back, he saw the spider was still hot on his trail, not wanting to let the prey loose. Curse your persistent kind! The limbless boy suddenly took a sharp turn, disappearing in a curve.

The insect followed him close by, turning the same we he did. Upon looking around though, it couldn't see anything...no limbless, just the usual rocks. It looked around confused, before letting out one of its shriek-snickers and raced off further along the tunnel, searching for a new creature to hunt down.

Rayman slowly put his head out, peeking around the tunnel for any potential enemy. Seeing the spider had already lost track of him, he let out a relieved sigh, strafing back into the shelter he had found, sitting down beside the motionless Salian, panting from the chase.

He found this little hole in the tunnel wall while looking for a hiding place. It was perfect; the crack that served as the entrance could be used easily by him and the boy, but was too narrow for those spiders. Inside, the hole was bigger than it first seemed, perfectly enough for two or even three people to sit down and regain their breaths.

Putting a hand on his chest, he checked his heart once more, ready to wake him up if another nightmare would fall upon Sal. The boy was still asleep since his last seizure, but reasonably calm. I'm not surprised he's tired... He lightly patted his friend's hand, making him smile in his sleep. Dark is putting an insane pressure on him...he's lucky to be still alive and breathing.

“...mother...” the boy muttered asleep, making him flinch. He must be missing Shya already...poor Sal... Watching as his chest rhythmically rose and fell, the faint image of a memory got into his mind, burdened already with trouble and worry...a promise he made a few years ago; a promise he had yet to fulfill to the end.

“...promise me you'll watch over him...”

He shook his head, getting rid of the thought. This isn't the time to sit back and act nostalgic...I've got to find the others and get us out of here.

He peeked out, listening carefully whether the coast was clear. Through the past half an hour while Sal slept, he scouted the nearby tunnels, trying to determine where they led. He had already found one which pitched downwards, where Ly and Globox were most likely to be found.

His observations also revealed the sound of water gurgling close by. Sadly, he managed to run into that lone spider just before he could have found its source thoroughly. He could have killed it fairly easily with a well-aimed energy sphere, but was worried the sound of the explosion might just attract even more, thus he decided to let it pursuit him until he could shake it off.

Glancing back at the sleeping Salian for a second, he made his decision and leaped out of the cove. Quickly looking around, he raced to the point where he met the spider, as quietly as possible, his light feet nearly gliding on the ground. He noticed the air was much more confined here than back where he came from. I must be getting deeper... He could hear water very close to him and began to carefully examine the tunnel, not just with his eyes, but with his hands too.

Rayman lightly patted the wall at every few inches, his eyes looking for cracks or openings he might have missed at first glance. He soon found his goal; a patch that crumbled from his slight touch, revealing a small hole. The limbless boy peeked through the hole and saw a small spring on the other side, the crystal water sparkling inside.

“Yes!” he punched into the air, excited by his discovery. I should bring Sal here... He quickly went back to the hiding spot, nearly phased through the crack and crouched down beside the boy. He called his name, gently nudging the snoozing Salian. His friend groaned and slowly opened his eyes. “Come with me...” he whispered to him.

The limbless boy helped him through the entrance and seeing he was barely conscious, he carried him over to the hollow wall, instead of making him have to walk. He gently put him beside the wall, where he fell back asleep immediately. I hope he's just tired... Worry washed over him, fear, that maybe there was something worse going on. He quickly brushed the thoughts aside, turning his attention back to the matter ahead.

Curiously, he began to expand the hole with one finger, noting how easily it crumbled. He smiled lightly from the discovery; with this, his work was much smooth-going than anticipated. Regardless, he tapped around a bit more. It seemed the lower parts were also like that, becoming harder as he went upwards. Done with the examination, he put his hands to a better use and started clawing at the bottom of the wall.

A few minutes of persistent digging did the trick, having a big enough hole for him and Sal to crawl through, at disposal. A satisfied grin crept on his face as he wiped his hands in his torso.

“Let's get you through here.” he muttered to his friend, even though he knew well he was asleep. Placing him on his back, he deliberately pushed him through the hole, following him once he was inside.

A lavish sight caught his eyes upon entering. A small stream was coming through a hole in the wall, the watercourse leading it out of the cove and into the rest of the cave-system. The walls were less filled with cracks here; even the ground was more flimsy from the humidity.

The cavern was about twice as large as the hiding spot they've just left, making it suitable even for Globox and Ly, if they'll find them. IF?! The thought made Rayman scowl. Since when did he consider finding them just a probability? No...no ifs...we WILL find them...and very soon. He glanced back at the crystal-clear stream to calm himself down. Seeing and hearing the water gurgling woke him to the fact his mouth was paper-dry.

Rayman moved over to the stream and lightly dipped his hands into it. He shuddered, the cold feeling of the fresh water making him shiver in delight. Keeping some water in his palms, he raised it and took an experimental sip. It had a slightly different taste to it than the streams in the Fairy Glade, but it was drinkable. He smiled and drank the whole handful of water, nearly squealing in joy as the liquid refreshed his tired body, filling him with an almost insane amount of power.

He couldn't hold back a soft chuckle, as a few droplets ran down his chin. He lowered his head, drinking from the water in the same manner as most animals did, not caring much for manners at the moment. The limbless boy felt better with every lap; each gulp returning strength into the drawn parts of his form. He ducked under the water for a second then pulled out, resisting the urge to burst out in laughter.

He shook his head, the drops covering a small area around. Swaying his blonde hair from his eyes, he glanced back at Salian. He was mortified to find him writhing in pain, low whines escaping him. The boy rolled in his sleep, curling up into a ball, clutching his head.

“You can't run anymore...I'll find you...wherever you might go...you'll always be before my eyes.”

“Please, someone!” he cried, the shadows around him coming dangerously close. The cold emanating from them nearly froze him, his skin paling from it. He wanted to run, but they had already caught his legs, crawling up his body.

The darkness coiled around him, easily tearing through his skin, expelling blood from him and filling his veins with their cold foulness. Sheer evil coursed in his veins, tainting every bit of flesh inside him until they reached his heart. As they touched it, an excruciating pain tore through his weary body; a shrewd, burning agony searing inside, putting every earlier torture to shame. He tried to cry out; to scream from the unbearable agony, but was gagged by the shadows that have taken a residence inside him.

The cloaked creature silently moved closer, towering over the suffering Salian. The boy opened his eyes, tears running down his face, and was met with his cold, yellow gaze before the shadows robbed him of his sight as well.

“It's over...” the figure raised his hands, a shroud of dark covering them. He leaned closer, reaching for the boy.


He awoke screaming from a cool touch on his forehead that was sent shivers down his spine. He wanted to jump up that instance, but a pair of strong hands restrained him, keeping him pinned on the ground until he calmed down and stopped panting. His blurry vision cleared slowly until he could recognize Rayman above him. A flush of crimson went through him as his friend helped him into a sitting position, ensuring his back would rest against the wall.

“Are you alright?” his limbless friend put one hand on his shoulder, looking highly worried.

“I...I think so...” he seemed only half-conscious. His voice was weak and tired, making it hard for his friend not to notice the lie. “Where are we?” he diverted the topic, glancing around in amazement.

“You could say it's a little sanctuary for us.” Rayman gently helped him over to the stream. “Come on, you could use some energy...”

The limbless boy gathered water in his palms again, lifting it to Salian, paper-dry mouth. His friend hungrily drank up the water, shivering lightly as the cool liquid slid down his throat. Rayman smiled at his response and dipped his hands, offering him another handful of water. The boy finished this one in mere seconds as well, enjoying the chill running through him. He blinked a few until he could think straight once again, the icy water doing its job perfectly.

“Thanks...” he muttered, grave thoughts surfacing in his mind.

Salian planted his head in his hands, rubbing his burning forehead. He couldn't remember the dream he had minutes ago, but something deep inside told him it was much better that way. Whatever it was, had caused him a great deal of pain and horror, nearly killing him. The boy let out a low sigh; he wasn't sure he would hold out against these visions much longer...

A short scream burst out of him as a handful of cold water splashed into his face. He jumped back, his heart racing around madly in. Rayman chuckled at him, his hands dripping. Salian felt heat rise into his cheeks and wasn't surprised to find himself laughing along with him. The water felt pretty good actually and managed to clear his mind from the worrisome thoughts that crept around.

A playful spark glinting in his eyes, he grinned at Rayman. His friend returned the gesture and raised his fists. The invitation and acceptance of a duel was obvious. He moved first, lunging to push the limbless one into the water, but Rayman managed to step aside and slammed down on his back as he flew past him, careful not to hurt Salian badly. The boy sank headfirst into the sand-like ground, a very slight pain following it.

“Had enough?” he grinned, eying the human boy.

“Not until you beg for mercy!” he growled back, trying again.

This time he caught Rayman and the two began to struggle, trying to pin the other to the ground. The boy stood on his knees while holding down his friend's fists. This way they were equal in height, but with Rayman having a definite upper-hand. The limbless one grinned at him and with a hard move, knocked him off his knees, throwing him down on his back again. He pushed his shoulders down, immobilizing his upper body.

“Those limbs are just in your way.” he grinned victoriously.

“They have their advantages though!” Salian returned the gesture and pushed his knee forward.

His attack surprised his friend who quickly jumped off him to evade the blow, freeing him. He quickly rose to his feet and gazed down at Rayman, who took up his usual fighting pose; one fist forward, the other pulled back to cover himself. Salian tried to copy it, but didn't even have time to ready himself when he lunged at him.

Though he was much smaller than him, he had more than sufficient strength accompanying with that shortness. He easily pushed the boy off his feet and the two ended up rolling around in the flimsy ground again, both of them trying to overpower the other.
- - -
Ly felt a chill running down her spine for the umpteenth time. Since choosing the tunnel they were in currently, she had the definite feeling of danger. It was like a faint tingle through her skin, reminding her at every step, every breath, and every heartbeat. She knew...she was absolutely sure that something was lurking around them...something probably worse than the spider creatures they've encountered so far.

Globox quietly sauntered along, his hands swaying back and forth. He was still very afraid, but the talk with the fairy managed to ease him at least a tiny bit...and right now, that tiny little portion of bravery was enough to keep him moving.

The glute was becoming more and more concerned of Ly; both because he knew she wasn't able to summon up as much energy and that probably had a bad effect on her, even though she tried her best to hide it. He had already learned to tell his friends moods from the slightest gestures. She was afraid and somehow ashamed of herself, for some reason. The wound on her arm wasn't bad, but Globox knew that didn't cheer her up.

They stopped after a few minutes to drink again. Globox performed his rain dance with great routine; and the two extended their hands to catch as much water as they could. Once finished, they stepped right under the little cloud, allowing the rain to fall on them, the cool droplets invigorating them. Ly ran her hands through her deep-blue hair, enjoying the wetness. She smiled at Globox, who scenically bowed his head. The fairy giggled and the two continued along the way.

“Why do you think Mr. Dark brought us here?” the glute asked as they walked. It was a question that had been bothering him for a while now.

“I...I honestly have no idea.” the fairy replied confused. “I've never been here...though Rayman said he remembers this place from somewhere.” she mused. “Maybe that's why he teleported us here...”

“I hope we'll find a way out soon.” Globox hung his head, his voice sounding sad. “We should be back home by now...”

The fairy slowed her pace, watching her friend gazing at the ground. He must be missing his family... Out of the five of them, he was the only one who already had a family; not to mention quite a large one! Not many could boast with one as huge as his; a sweet, loving wife and hundreds of kids.

She has been to their house many times and the sheer number of their kids amazed her to no end. The little ones even treated her with something that was between a sister and an aunt, wanting to play with her at every single occasion. Uglette had always been welcoming with her too, always there with a meal if she was hungry, and a few kind words, often letting her spend the nights over at them, when it was too late for her to start going back to the Council.

Strangely, though Globox was a friend to her like everyone else...he also felt a bit more to her sometimes. In spite of being easily scared, his loving and somewhat naive personality, not to mention the way he loved his wife, his children and his friends, often made Ly treat him...like a father actually. The fairies inside the Council raised her together, and though they were very sweet, they were more like sisters to her, than mothers. The only exception to this was Betilla, who really acted like a mother with her…with all the benefits and drawbacks. Being with the glute however, gave her a faint feeling of having a father looking over her as well.

She walked over to him and fondled her arms around him. “I'm sure they miss you too, Globox.”

The glute was caught a bit surprised, but smiled down warmly at her. He wrapped his arms around her, stroking her back softly. She put her head on him, listening to his heart beating. Ly suddenly felt tears gathering in her eyes, failing to hold them back. Maybe it was because without her powers she felt so useless, or the tension of their situation was finally getting to her...she couldn't decide. Nevertheless, puffy teardrops started running down her cheeks, flowing onto him. Unable to hold back any longer, she broke into sobs.

Globox felt her trembling in his arms and held her even tighter, pressing her into his stomach. Ly giggled slightly through her sobbing, but continued to hug him, enjoying the soft feeling of his tummy. She quivered again, crying in his embrace. Her friend fondled her back with one hand, while stroking her short, blue hair with the other.

“It's okay...shh...nothing is going to happen...” he whispered softly, slowly calming the fairy.

She continued to cry for long minutes, until she had no more tears to shed. He let go of her a while after she stopped sobbing and shaking. The fairy backed up with a fierce blush on her face. “I...I'm sorry...” she muttered and looked away, wiping what remained of her tears.

The glute smiled at her again, patting her shoulder lightly. “It's alright, I understand.” he winked at her.

Ly smiled back embarrassed, twirling one of her locks bewilderedly, the blush still present on her face. She turned away and continued to walk along the tunnel, feeling ashamed of herself for breaking down like that. Globox looked after her, and with a paternal smile on his face, caught up with her. They walked silently for some time, neither of them mentioning what happened a few minutes ago.

“Do you think we're getting closer?” he asked suddenly after a few minutes.

“I honestly don't know...” she sighed, shaking her head. “We should be going upwards, but I'm not sure we really are.” the fairy nervously stroked her shoulder. “I'm more accustomed to find my way in forests...” she added.

Another sound tore through the air suddenly. An all-too-remembered shriek-snicker echoed in the tunnel, getting louder at every inch. Ly closed her eyes and muffled her pointy ears to silence the sharp cry. She opened them a minute later and saw that Globox was shivering wildly, his big eyes wide open.

“Globox?” she called, worried.

The glute raised his shaking arm and pointed at the far end of the tunnel behind them. Ly felt a chill run down her spine, but glanced back. She had to bite back a scream as she saw them. Dozens of spiders were moving towards them, their little fangs glinting with the promise of death. It seemed like the whole tunnel was alive; the little, but in term, deadly creatures were crawling on the ground, the sides and even on the top, focusing on them, and only them.

Ly moved fast and grabbed Globox's hand. “Hurry!” she cried, running as fast as she could, while pulling the glute behind her. The fairy's thoughts swirled wildly in her head, full of questions. Where did all these come from? She looked back for a second, but it didn't seem like they were gaining any lead. Biting her lower lip, she tried to run even faster but the glute held her back. She was starting to panic, desperately trying to find an escape. Polokus...help us...
- - -
“Why didn't you show this earlier?” Rayman scowled, prodding his leg, making the boy wince.

“It's wasn't a big deal and we had far worse problems when I got this...” he replied, gritting his teeth a bit as his friend poured some water on his wound. Rayman treated the gash under his knee with surprising expertise.

“And what if you get an infection?” he spat back a bit angrily. “It would be pretty nasty if we'd get out of here only for you to drop into a fever from it...” he dipped his hands into the water again, pouring a little more over the wound. “I'll have to bandage it...your hand, please.”

Salian went a bit closer to him and pushed his shoulder forward, knowing what he needed. Rayman grabbed the sleeve firmly and tugged on it with his hands. The material gave up after a few seconds and split open. The limbless boy tore the sleeve off and dipped the blood-red piece of cloth into the icy water.

The boy winced slightly as he tied it firmly around the wound, sure not to leave any little part of the gash uncovered. The now-cold cloth burned it for a second but that pain eased quickly.

“That should do it for now...if there's any more, let me know right now.” his voice was demanding, though this was only because he cared a lot for him.

“Nope, there's no more.” Salian replied with an annoyed expression on his face.

A second later they both started chuckling. Their bodies were still a bit sore from the brawl they had a few minutes ago. It ended in a truce when Rayman noticed him wince as the fresh scab tore open. While running from the spiders, a sharp stone scratched his leg pretty nastily but he ignored it until now. His friend didn't notice it either before their fight, since it was covered by his trousers.

“So, what now?” the boy asked the question that bugged them both.

Rayman pondered at this for a few minutes, scratching the back of his head. Long ago, when all five of them were walking through the forest, Ly asked him why he did that all the time. The limbless boy just grinned and said that many use almost freakishly snob poses when they were thinking and he was just keeping it this simple, like everything else in life.

“I think we shouldn't keep here for much longer...” he spoke up finally. “Globox and Ly have probably found a way upwards by now...and judging by our luck, they've also met our little insect friends too.” he scowled, his fist clenching. Salian felt his heart crawl into his throat from the image of the two against those creatures.

“We'll have to go fast if we are to find them before anything would happen.” Rayman glanced at the wall with a determination on his face; with he could almost see through solid objects. Another thought entering his mind, he eyed is friend rather worriedly. “Though...” his voice trailed off.

“What? What's wrong?” Sal asked, confused at his behavior.

Rayman sighed and looked directly into his jade eyes. “I'm afraid you might hurt yourself even more.” he confessed. He saw his scowl and continued quickly. “I know pretty well how much Dark can torment someone...I don't want anything to happen to you.”

Salian glanced aside for a second, before answering. “I'm willing to take that chance...they're my friends too.” he saw the limbless boy could still argue but didn't say anything. “We vowed to take care of each other, remember? I won't go back on a promise like that.” he nod, the gesture further backing up his words.

The limbless boy nodded back and stood up. Extending his hand, he helped his friend up, the two clutching each other's hand hard for a few seconds. They crawled out through the hole Rayman clawed into the wall, first him then the human boy. Once out, they picked up a reasonably fast pace along the tunnel, which began to pitch more and more on the way.

After a few minutes the walls began to broaden and soon, they've ended up at a part which sent frightful shivers down the both of them. The tunnel was pitching downwards in a very dangerous degree, making it a hazardous course just to go down, the rocky ground further endangering their route.

In addition, this part of the tunnel was filled with stalactites and stalagmites of all size and shape, their razor-sharp tips spearing up menacingly. Salian even noticed a few bones around a larger one, indicating someone may have already met its end here. The calcareous droplets have truly created a masterpiece...a shame it was also a deathtrap to mortals.

“So...” Rayman spoke up finally. He gulped and sent a nervous grin towards Salian. “...what now?”
- - -
A cold laughter erupted from him as he felt the fear and despair of the fairy. He had always craved for the taste of their kin's delicate flesh and now, finally it would be his. The glute would only serve as an appetizer, while the female promised with a superb meal. He already inhaled the scent of her horror, the salty tears along with her natural odor. He could barely hold himself back from going right after her...

Regardless, he stayed obedient and followed his master's wishes. He released the swarm upon them, while slowly shepherding them to the desired destination. He grinned upon feeling the other two scents...the one so infuriatingly familiar and the other, which was unknown, even to him. His orders were clear, he had his task. Moving steadily in the huge tunnel, he made his way towards the one he had to find...find and capture. Then, he'd kill and devour the other one, and turn his attention back to the delicious fairy...


“He's doing as planned, master.” the slightly raspy voice of his servant sounded beside him. “What is that?” he asked, eyes wide at what he was doing.

Mr. Dark leaned back from the black mirror, which dispersed into the air. “One of the most useful magics the shadows could teach...” he mused, his yellow eyes flaming in the dark. Even the air around him felt foul and strangely heavy, but his minion had already gotten used to that. “I can see through every little shade; every little shroud or shadow...only the pure aura of the Heart can render me blind...”

His servant curiously came closer, but he didn't summon it again. “I have thought about your...disrespect, towards your equal...” his minion scowled, his red eyes teeming with hatred. “To keep you from doing something harsh...I've decided to entrust a task upon you...”

The most horrible of grins appeared on his scarred face from the thought of serving him. “I am always at your disposal, master.” he bowed before the cloaked figure. “What shall I do?”

“I'll send you to a place where you will find a certain someone...when you find her, do as you wish...just make sure no one sees you...” he knew his servant would find the assignment to his liking.

“I will make you proud, master...” he bowed again, slowly backing up, the grin still on his face. I'm going to enjoy this...
- - -
The twin moons shone dimly through the forest, leaving the only wandering soul outside, rely more and more on only her senses. Shya pulled her nightgown closer around herself, the chills nearly freezing her by now. She was shivering all over; cold, tired and worried, but still searching and hoping.

“Sal!” she cried for the umpteenth time now, her voice too weak to be heard. The cold was beginning to affect her mind too; she was getting worried she might get lost. She knelt down on the ground again, brushing herself with her tail in a desperate attempt to warm herself a bit. I'm going to freeze if I don't get home soon...

The fairy felt a batch of tears swelling up in the corner in her eyes again. She was terribly worried for her son, and also fearing for her own life now a bit. She shook her head to get rid of the tears...she knew, if she started to cry, she would pass out from the exhaustion and die in the cold night.

Shya closed her eyes, the air coming out of her in smaller puffs. She tried to stay awake, but the task was getting harder and harder...it would have been so much easier to just lie back and give up. Suddenly, a crack hit her pointy ears, making her jump to her feet. Her heart began to pound in her chest, an old fear rising in her. Another crack tore through the air, this time from above her.

She glanced up, but there was nothing there. She was still shivering, but now not just because of the cold. Nervous chills running down her spine; she inched backwards trying to find some kind of cover.

“W-Who's there?” she called, doubtful whether she really spoke the words, or just in her mind.

Two more cracks sounded from close by, making her back up to a tree. Though the Pirates were long since gone, the old terror was still present in her...when people would just disappear into the night, taken by those cold, vicious robots; dragged away to their prison ships, where unimaginably torture and suffering awaited them.

The fairy whimpered in fear, nearly clawing into the tree. She found herself panting already, her heartbeats in the night sounding like a drum, echoing. And for every few beats...there was a crack, sounding closer every time. Above, beside, before, everywhere...it didn't matter where she looked, there was no one there.

Then suddenly, the tree behind her shook slightly, making her to lunge away from it. She fell flat on her stomach, immediately rolling to her back, the cold ground tearing into her flesh through the nightgown. She opened her eyes and saw it...a person, hiding in the shadows, only two flaming red orbs visible from it. Two eyes...more horrifying than any she had seen before. The figure laughed, the sound making her curl up involuntarily to hide from its gaze and its horrible sound...the voice evil beyond measure.

Her eyes widened as the figure began to descend, steadily crawling down the tree, towards her. She still couldn't see any part of him, only those dreadful eyes. Using all the strength she had left, she jumped to her feet and started running. She didn't care where, only to get as far away as possible...away from whatever creature that was. She ran fast, even for a fairy, her exhausted legs carrying her as quickly as they could.

She could hear him coming closer and closer to her, regardless how she tried to increase her speed. The fairy brushed the branches away from her way, but one managed to slap her as she ran through it, leaving a painful red mark on her cheek. It reached out, and the next second, she could feel a forceful tug at her nightgown. Screaming on top of her lungs, she tore herself away from its grasp, only to end up tumbling on the ground again.

She felt the numerous twigs on the ground scar her arms and legs, a warm little stream of blood running down on them. A chill coursed through her as well, making her realize her sudden move left a near palm-sized piece of her nightgown in its hands. Shya quickly tried to roll on her stomach, but her assailant was already on her, pinning her to the ground. Tears ran down her face bathing in crimson, frightened whimpers coming from her throat.

She tried to squirm away from it, but the unknown one easily caught her wrists in one large hand, clenching them hard enough for her to bite her lower lips from the pain. Darkness surrounded her attacker, the moonlight unable to penetrate the tree-crowns, making it impossible for her to determine who or what it was. She tried to scream, but was muffled by strong fingers clutching her throat.

Whoever was her assailant...it was getting tired of playing with her. She pleaded for it to stop, but had no voice, no air. Its grasp was hard as steel, not letting her breath one bit. She had already stopped struggling; now only a mere doll in its hands as it choked the life out of her. Tears pouring from her eyes, the fairy silently said goodbye to her son...

“Enough!”

Just as her vision started to go black, it released her and disappeared, as abruptly as it came. The fairy fell face-first onto the ground, barely breathing. Shya alternated between coughing and sobbing, unable to so much as move her body. As she panted, even the chilly wind felt good to her lungs. She lied there for what seemed like hours, trying to comprehend what had just happened. Someone had almost killed her, then left just as she was good as dead.

The fairy rose into a kneeling position, her heart still beating in her throat. She tried to settle her thoughts, but couldn't keep her mind away from the attack. She put a hand at her heart, feeling its beat slowing. Strangely, just feeling it there, beating under her fingertips, filled her with relief. Suddenly a whimper reached her. Glancing aside, she noticed a little body writhing near a tree, a little creature just like...

Shya felt her heartbeat skip a few beats, a ball of ice forming in her abdomen. Blood rushed out of her face, her eyes widening. She quickly stood up, but her legs gave up immediately from the sudden strain. She was on the ground once again, sobs involuntarily quivering through her again. Having no other choice, she crawled over to the little figure, praying to Polokus it wouldn't be who she thought it was. The creature's clothes however, confirmed her worst fears. No...
- - -
“Easy there!” hissed Rayman as Salian grabbed a stalagmite at the near top. “You find a weaker one and the next thing you know it, you'll look like a Pirate's target practice!”

The boy groaned and grabbed it lower, sweat running down his forehead. They had to go down one way or the other, thus they began to slowly inch downwards the steep way, using the stalagmites as ledges. Rayman pondered whether he should use his helicopter, though in the end he decided that wasn't a good idea. He might have been able to glide down, but carrying Salian with him was a game of chance and he didn't want to endanger both of them. So far, they've managed to cover a reasonably large ground, though they were still only halfway down.

Rayman clung to stalagmite with one hand, while reaching for the next one already. He was doing well, though one could see it clearly on his face, just how much hard it was. Sal on the other hand had quite a few problems. Four out of five times, he gripped them at a wrong point, and already managed to scrape his hands. At a badly executed move, Rayman had to grab him before he would be impaled by a larger stalagmite.

“See that over there?” Rayman's voice was kept low, as they've agreed. Neither of them could tell how firmly the stalactites were on the top, so they decided to stay as quiet as possible, not wanting to risk their excursion even more. He pointed at a larger ground which was almost leveled. “We'll be able catch our breaths over there, okay?”

Salian couldn't do better than nod, panting madly. He used the stalagmite he was holding onto as a ledge and slid down the ground a bit lower, catching another one...again near the top. He hissed as a sharper part of it cut into his palm yet again and grabbed it a bit lower. Growling a bit from the strain, he sat down at the base of the stalagmite, careful not to let go of it even for a split second.

He saw Rayman drop and grab one under him. They were close enough for the limbless boy to lean up and pat his friend's leg. “Just a little more...” he said reassuringly.

“Easy...for you to...say.” Salian panted, letting his head rest on the ground.

A faint noise reached them suddenly. It started out low, then it seemed to be more and more of it, echoing through the tunnel. They seemed to be coming from more than one sources...moving...getting closer. Their eyes widened as they recognized the sound, especially when a loud shriek tore through the air.

“Polokus...” whimpered Salian.

The two moved quickly and climbed downwards as fast as they could. One stalagmite after another in a steady rhythm. Glancing upwards, Salian's heart leaped into his throat. A whole swarm of spiders were inching towards them, shrieking hungrily. Chill ran down his spine from the sight and hurried even more with the climbing.

At another leap, he grabbed a stalagmite too much at the top. It gave up with a large crack, sending him tumbling down a few feet before he could catch another one. He could feel the rocks have punctured his skin, his shirt torn as well, but he didn't stop. Rayman glanced up and saw quite a few spiders stopping on the ceiling, turning around. His eyes widened in horror, and without waiting any further, he jumped down to Salian.

“Rayman, what-” the boy wanted to ask something, but the limbless boy grabbed him and before he could say another word, jumped off.
- - -
Ly hurried down the mediocre slope, still clutching Globox's hand. Her heart beat in her throat the squelches still audible behind them. No matter how they tried to lose them with lightning fast curves and side-tunnels, but this time the spiders weren't about to lose them.

And here they were now, once again in the open, the spiders appearing on top of the slope, speeding towards them. The fairy might have been able to outrun them by herself, but she had no intention of leaving the glute in their clutches. She cared for her friends much more than that.

She glanced back for a split second, regretting the move at once. Dozens of those infernal beasts were following them, the promise of death sparkling on their fangs. Ly held back a frightened scream; this wasn't the time for it. She had to think of something, for both of their sake.

Looking before her, she saw the slope continued for a long time, so much as she couldn't see where it was leading them. I hope we can find some kind of cove...or curve where we could disappear...or anything, just as long as it could help us! She felt Globox slowing down a bit and the realization struck her that the glute was probably not accustomed to such long and straining runs.

“Come on Globox, you can do it!” she sacrificed a little of their precious time to slow down just a little bit. The glute panted heavily, his tummy rippling from the fast pace he was dictating. He was already too tired to answer and just nod back, though Ly could see he couldn't hold on much longer.

Their situation seemed more and more hopeless, the little spiders slowly, but surely devouring their little advantage they had. Ly closed her eyes for a second, sensing her surroundings so she wouldn't trip. If we continue this chase...sooner or later they'll catch us... She set her teeth as the decision formed in her.

To Globox's utmost surprise, she suddenly let go of his hands and spun around. The fairy set her feet not to slide down further while she looked their pursuers in the eyes. She saw a few cracks near on the top, right where the spiders would crawl under. She closed her eyes, summoning any remainder of her powers.

She nearly cried out as she had to dig to the deepest parts of her body to draw what magic was left, a shrewd pain following the operation. She set her teeth and brought her hands together. Globox whimpered as the spiders came closer with every second, while she didn't seem to accomplish anything.

The fairy herself was starting to doubt the success of her try, but didn't let these gloomy thoughts claim her. Her jade eyes flamed in the dim light as she collected anything that could be of use to her. Suddenly, Globox noticed a tiny blue spark in the middle of her joined hands. Yes! Just...a little more!

Ly pushed herself even more, holding back the urge to scream from the pain. Her powers were nearly depleted in this hostile place, and the way she was searching inside herself for a little power, her body couldn't hold on much longer against the strain. The spark in her hands set off into various directions, but remaining within the border of her palms.

The fairy put a little more force into it, which caused the spark to suddenly flash in white. As Globox uncovered his eyes after the sudden flash, he could see how she was quivering, her body wildly protesting against the cruel abuse. The spark was now barely visible in the yellow light of the sphere that had formed in her hands.

Using whatever force she had left, the fairy kept her eyes fixed at the ground, just below the cracks. That point was their savior...but if she fails, their grave. The spiders were nearly there, but she could barely stand now. Her nerves were on the edge; she nearly dropped on her knees. Polokus...help me...

As the first spider laid its sucker before the point, Ly threw the energy sphere. The ball of raw power flew fast and straight, blowing into the cracked ceiling of the cave. It gave up in a split second and collapsed, the rubble burying a bunch of the little creatures under. The ground shook a bit from the cave-in, and in only a matter of seconds, the way was completely blocked.

The recoil threw the barely conscious fairy back, sending him tumbling down the slope, if Globox hadn't caught her. The glute hugged her, careful not to hurt her strained body even more. The fairy smiled weakly, a bit surprised she was still awake. Though nearly every part of her body was sore, accompanied by a quite decent headache, she could stand and think straight.

“You were amazing!” Globox smiled as he let go of her. Ly took a few steps back, twirling a lock of her hair, a blush creeping on her face. She felt strangely proud of herself from the way the glute commended her. Though the fairy knew they were still far from the end, this move probably bought them enough time to find Rayman and Salian.

Suddenly, a loud snap made her flinch. Her eyes widened in a split second, and she lunged at the glute. Her full bodyweight crashed into Globox...but it was only enough to push him a little bit aside. She cried out from the burning agony as a splinter sunk into the lower part of her thigh.

Globox gasped as the fairy fell into his arms after the failed push, noticing the projectile sticking out of her leg. Tears ran down her face after a second, badly muffled screams of pain following them. She doubted anything had ever hurt this much before; it was fast eroding what was left of her consciousness.

The glute gazed at the rubble and saw that a few spiders have crawled through a little hole, and were already moving towards them. They let out one of their shriek-snickers, probably informing the rest of the swarm of the wounded fairy. Globox glanced at the wincing and crying Ly in his arms, and a barely familiar feeling began to burn in him.

It was a feeling he hadn't experienced for a long time, a feeling that only appeared once before...when his kids were in danger. Now, with the badly hurt Ly in his arms, a large stream of blood running down her leg...he suddenly felt it again. He could feel that emotion burning inside, tensing his entire body...he felt anger.

Glaring at the spiders in a way he rarely did, he supported the fairy with one hand, while doing some very peculiar motions with his free hand. He danced slightly to it as well, mumbling incomprehensible words. The result was a large cloud appearing just above the spiders, and the rain falling. The creatures gazed at the cloud and the water, stopping under the cloud.

In a minute, the cloud dispersed, breaking the enchantment on the insects. If they could, they would have probably grinned at the futile effort of the glute. One raised his sucker to continue...and couldn't. The water made the rather flimsy ground under them turn muddy, making it near impossible to move.

They let out another cry, but Globox could notice the anger in this one. The glute held the fairy in his arms and inched down. He gazed back for a second, and was horrified to see, that with a a little movement, the spiders turned around, their splinters sparkling. He clutched Ly tightly, prepared to protect her with his own body, if needed.
- - -
For a second, Salian thought Rayman had lost his mind. Flying freely in the air, his heart beat in his throat, clinging tightly to the limbless boy, who seemed no less unsettled than he was. A faint buzz emitted, and Sal could feel them slowing down a bit as Rayman had used his helicopter power.

The limbless boy listened well, flinching to the slightest noise, hoping he wouldn't hear the one he feared. Their flight was slow, but the velocity of their jump had been reduced to near zero. He glided very close to the ground, ready whenever the worst would happen.

He suddenly heard it. It was a faint snap, but he knew immediately what it was. He let his hair stop gliding and the next second, they both fell on the ground. Since neither of them could find a stand, they've tumbled down a few meters until they've ended up at relatively flat parcel. They lied still for a few seconds, unable to move from the pain coursing through both of them.

Sal could feel his shirt had been torn at a few more places, a little blood flowing down mainly his shoulders. He tried to at least sit, but his body was nowhere near wanting to cooperate. Rayman wasn't in a much better shape, though he managed to pull himself up after a minute. The limbless boy glanced back and saw exactly what he expected; splinters in the ground, right at the point her let go.

“Get up quickly, we have no time to lose!” he couldn't help his voice being a bit louder than he wanted.

The limbless boy leaned down, trying to help Sal on his feet. The boy could barely comply, but he managed to pull him up. The boy nearly collapse as he set him on his feet, but Rayman caught her, his own body alerting him he was taking a bit too much on his non-existent shoulders.

“What now?” Salian coughed up a little bit of blood, the trip obviously not to his advantage.

Rayman glanced around, trying to quickly determine their situation and chances. Most of the spiders were crawling down towards them from above, while a few were coming on the ceiling, but from downwards. The limbless boy couldn't help bit growl a bit at the circumstances.

He ran through their possible moves. The slope continued for another few meters, but another move like the last was out of the question, since the bugs would shoot them down, even before he could activate his helicopter. Staying here was a bad idea as well; they'd only be sitting ducks for the rest of the swarm.

He took a few seconds to examine Sal. While he was still able to fight, the boy was in no condition to do that, especially not against numbers like these. His hands started sparkling a bit, the cogs in his brain working overtime to find a solution. I don't think we have much of a choice...m-

“...promise me...”

Rayman's eyes widened for a second as the two words echoed throughout his mind. His visage darkened from the thought, a decision forming in him. It's the best I can do...

“Ray, what's wrong?” Sal looked both confused and a bit afraid; the spiders now very close. The limbless boy stepped before him, a grim look on his face. “Rayman...”

“Forgive me...” sadness emanated from his eyes.

Before Salian could say anything, Rayman gave him a hard push. The boy lost his balance and fell back, screaming. As he tumbled down the remainder of the slope, Rayman turned his back to him. He couldn't bare to see what would happen now.

He summoned his powers and a yellow light started burning in his joined hands. The spiders didn't even care about Salian; the light enticed them...something so bright in such a deep place. The moved towards Rayman, all at once, wanting to bathe in the bright light. Your desire...your undoing...

Rayman squeezed even more power into the sphere, making it as big as his head now, tiny blue lightnings emanating from its core. The first wave was nearly before him now, while the ones on the ceiling dropped near him. The limbless boy looked back for a second and saw Sal, motionless in the end of the slope. I'll buy you some time...good luck.

Just before the first spider would lunge at him, he let go of the sphere, shooting it at the ceiling. The power of his attack shattered the top; huge rocks falling towards them. Rayman quickly evaded the first few, but the spiders weren't so lucky. Much of them got buried under, while the rest let out scared shrieks.

Suddenly, the ground itself shook hard. The limbless boy realized only before it happened, that it was hollow under them. The rocks set off huge crack, and the next second, the flat parcel collapsed, dragging both the spiders and Rayman into darkness.

End of Part 1
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Re: Path To Divinity

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Another chapter to the awesomest fanfic I've read in a long time ^_^
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Re: Path To Divinity

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Thanks for all who keep track and Luckster_Gal for beta-reading. Sorry for cutting the author note short, but I wanna move onto the story already! X3

Seems like a exceeded the character limit with this part, so I'll post in two parts. XD

Part 2

They were with her. Standing by her sides, the two she had been so anxious to see...to sense...to feel beside her again. She couldn't believe her eyes, but they were there...they were real. They embraced her together, the feeling she always yearned for the past years. They've made peace with each other and returned to her finally. The two whom she loved most...

Finally...after all the fighting and the pain...quarrels and accusations...harsh words and headstrong actions...anger and hatred...death and punishments...finally, both of them were with her again. And she was sobbing...smiling and crying; shedding tears of pure joy, because this had been her heart's desire for so many years...to let the painful separation end...so that they may return to her finally...so they may be together once again...

She felt unimaginably happy...and strangely whole. She had missed them every second...every single moment without them feeling unbearable. Their absence was like a foul ache in her, the pain of feeling empty, alone...and guilty. But now, in their loving reunification, she was finally joyous...finally free of all worry. They were together with her once more...the ones whom she cherished most...her dear, loving family...


“...Betilla!”

The strong, sobering voice made the fairy's eyes pop open, shattering the sweet dream into a thousand tiny fragments. The images before her disappeared like a curtain being torn to shreds, showing her the darkness that really lurked outside. For a second, she felt like she would like nothing more than to scream; to accuse him of taking even this little, nigh lost hope from her, the very last thing she could grasp onto. But her conscious self already knew this wasn't his fault...at least, not entirely.

She groaned, and tried to sit up, her blood-red hair falling into her eyes at her attempt to do so. However, she was far too weak to do anything, which the painful stings coursing through her worn-out body only backed up. Thus she continued to lie, concentrating whatever leftover energy inside her to heal and recover her body, trembling lightly as the healing force made her skin tingle.

“Betilla...” she felt his ethereal voice in her head, a mental touch tenderly stroking her bruised shoulder. “Why did you do this to yourself?”

A silent chuckle went through the fairy, even though there was nothing funny in what she was thinking. He surely saw it as well, and still he doesn't understand...he never could... She whimpered as she managed to finally sit up, resting her back against one of the stones Mr. Dark had placed a while ago.

“You should know best...” she spat, her voice venomous in contrast to her usual soothing. No one beside him had ever heard this tone from her. “I tried to stop him, but I was too late...”

It took some time before Polokus answered, thinking over what he saw through the eyes of the matuvu. “You knew you couldn't defeat Dark...why did you attempt at all? You could have died...”

“We shouldn't have let him get so close at all...” she turned her head away, feeling like a child getting scold by her parents for doing something she thought was right. The fairy didn't want to answer that question, but she couldn't hold it back. “...and I didn't want her to experience the same thing I went through...” she whispered, her eyes falling a little weight dropping from her heart. “But you know that w-”

“-that doesn't matter right now.” Polokus' answer came fast, his voice surprisingly stern. “We must find them, before he might do something irreversible.”

“Of course it doesn't matter...” she muttered bitterly. It never did to you, did it? Betilla's hands clenched slightly, a rasp irritating her throat.

However, Betilla reluctantly had to agree with him to leave the topic alone for now, even though she knew they had to discuss that sooner or later...after all, it was an becoming a more and more important subject; something they've purposely left unspoken for such a long time. It was uncomfortable for both of them...even more since they were both guilty in it.

If Polokus heard her thoughts, he gave no evidence of it. “I can't see them...” his voice sounded strangely distant, as though he wasn't even concentrating on her. “Dark has shadowed them from my sight...” a sound emitted in Betilla's head, almost like a tired sigh. “He thought of everything...”

The fairy felt fear grasping her heart. They've succeeded for so long...and they'll lose everything now? She ran everything she knew through her mind, trying to find some base...something they could grasp onto. Dark is a shadow mage...he uses shadows...fire...a powerful wizard...but- Her eyes widened as a thought formed in her.

“Dark can't open portals all by himself...” she mused, purposely saying it out loud so Polokus could hear it clearly as well. She sensed the god was slightly anxious about what she had in mind. Betilla looked around the clearing, devoting time especially to the stones in the corners and behind her.

She traced her fingertips along the carvings of the pitch-black stone. It was certainly not from around here, its substance not common in the Glade. Polokus mentally confirmed her suspicions. Those marks... She ran her fingers through the strange, red lines on the relatively small stone.

Betilla was definite she had already seen these once, but she couldn't quite remember when. The fairy felt a mental nudge, urging her to clear her mind and listen. “If I look into your memories, I could awaken your knowledge of it.”

He didn't surprise her with not knowing what it was. After all, how could he know, always absent from his own world...? What caught her by surprise, was how bitter the thought was again. She felt his nudge again, much more gently this time, probably sensing her emotions have shifted. The fairy sighed, emptying her mind, giving him full access, though she couldn't help but feel a bit uncomfortable, opening up like this once more after such a long time.

“Please...be careful...” she asked nervously, feeling a bit... Why am I afraid of him? She sighed once more, clearing her mind of every doubt and emotion.

Polokus didn't waste a second, diving into her memories, stirring up both new and old. She gasped upon reliving the sometimes years old thoughts she had. Searching for information, all the way back...first the near past...the last Eve...André's uprising...the Pirate invasion...Mr. Dark's reign...and even more back. She set her teeth, a prickling feeling beginning to ache in her head; some of the memories being quite unpleasant as he revisited them.

More and more images resurfaced before her mind's eye, from simple thoughts to grave decisions. A younger Ly sitting beside her, listening to her stories with excitement...Shya, presenting her adopted son before her, a pleading look in her eyes as she asked her for help...the first day she had spent all alone... As he dug further she felt her knees weakening, her consciousness fading slowly...until the image of a small, smiling face came before her, two perfectly clear, azure orbs beaming at her with glee.

“STOP!” she cried; a smoldering whip crackling at her mind. She stumbled back, gripping her head from the sudden pain. The fairy trembled and fell on her knees, now holding her face in her hands, salty tears streaming from her eyes...tears no one had seen from her for countless years.

“Satisfied?” she cried into the night; a feeling of betrayal, anger and deceit bursting from inside her.

“...Betilla...” his voice was calm, almost sorry; the regretful tone only upsetting her further. “You never-”

“Never what?” she spat loudly, cutting between the god; sobs scratching the back of her throat. “Never screamed from the pain? Never felt terrible because of it? Never showed how horrible it was? Never cried for forgiveness? Never blamed myself?” Betilla's voice broke from the sharp feeling of despair tearing through her.

They both fell silent, only a few throaty sobs coming from the fairy as she slowly forced calmness on herself. Polokus knew she was very upset, and in no small part because of his sweep through her mind. She soon couldn't take the silence and his gaze - she knew he was still watching – any more.

“The markings are similar to the ones the Teensies use for some of their portals.” her voice was raspy and seemingly emotionless, almost like a simple lecturing. “Usually the ones that lead into long distances. Those can be activated by their magic numerous times, but as much as I can guess, Mr. Dark could only use the magic that was stored in them from the beginning.

“I don't know where he might have take them, but judging by its material, the color of the lines, and the lack of magic stored in the stones, it must have lead to a reasonably unvisited place...” she sighed, Polokus already expecting the obvious. “...and most probably hostile as well.”

The dreaming god didn't answer, awaiting her final conclusion. She sighed, knowing he had the same thought in his head as well. “But wherever they are...” she whispered, gazing at the twin moons in the nightly sky for a moment. “...their lives are at great risk.”
- - -
His fall was silent and graceful, like a feather falling from the sky, flowing from one side to another in a slow, but satisfying rhythm. He was blind and deaf to the world, only the whistles of the air stroking him, tickling his senses. His hands and feet were flailing in the air, untouched by anything; casually drifting to his death.

'So this is what it's like to die...' His mind was cloudy, but he felt strangely good. He felt as though he was free of thoughts finally, free of the burden of responsibility he had carried for so long now. He was without a care in the world...

And how impossibly blissful it was! No bitter worries, no gloomy feelings, no concern over anyone, only the purity of the nothingness that surrounded him; the absolute absence of anything material. He felt unbelievably happy and alive, so much he could have burst out in laughter, like a carefree child.

But still, there was something else there...something; a feeling that unsettled this perfect little dreamworld, slowly blowing the beautiful clouds away. Stifling hands of concern grasped his lungs, throbbing with a slight pain, urging him to come to his senses. He felt very heavy all of a sudden; no longer falling in emptiness.

Something was forcing him to wake up, to leave behind this joyous silence. Another wave of concern flowed through him, nearly screaming for him to realize where he was. Images flashed before him; memories of the near past. People who he cherished and loved...Globox...Ly....Salian...and finally, flowing like a cold and foul wind, two flaming, yellow eyes, burning holes into the soft parts of his mind. His friends in danger...and the darkness...the darkness hunting for them!


Rayman's eyes popped open, his mouth still slightly open from the gasp upon awakening from the dream-like daze. He couldn't comprehend where he was or what was happening, all of a sudden. His mind was cloudy, but as the air rushed past him, it lifted the paralyzing hold on his consciousness, letting him observe his surroundings.

He quickly realized he was falling in the air, a thin stream of blood streaming into his eyes from his forehead. The limbless boy couldn't remember how he got that wound, but didn't even care about it for the moment. He glanced around and saw rocks in the air around him; large and small ones, as well the carcasses of several squished spiders, while the alive ones desperately tried to cling to a stable surface to escape the falling demise, only to either continue falling, or getting crunched by the dropping rocks.

The end of their dive was still shrouded in darkness, but the limbless boy wasn't about to experience it all the way. He moved his parts a bit, his energy returning into him in a quick pace. Ready to move and reasonably clear-headed, he took a moment to inhale, before setting his teeth and getting ready for what was probably one of the most wildest ideas he had ever tried to accomplish.

Doing a quick back flip in the air, he felt the uneven surface of a large rock behind him. Muttering a quick prayer to Polokus, he launched himself upwards from the rock, using it as a starting ground. The stones above seemed to accelerate towards him, most of the luckily going past him. Rayman felt much like years ago, dodging one blow after another, until he could grab onto a larger rock.

Settling for only a split second, he shot upwards again, raising his hands to brush the smaller pebbles aside, fearing to get hindered because of them. It was like a meteor storm threatening to tear him to pieces, but he wouldn't let that happen. He grasped onto another stone, quickly climbing up to its surface and jumping upwards.

In the air once again, he heard a foul hiss echoing close to him. He wouldn't take off his eyes from the next stone, but every nerve inside in him was ready for the ambush...and he didn't have to wait long. A squelch...a jump...soaring in the air...its fangs ready to puncture his head...and only the shrewd pain as a fist collided with its head, the earth-shattering blow sending it plummeting downwards, towards his already dead kin.

Just before it would drop, Rayman smacked his feet hard at the creature, regaining the speed he needed for the jump, as well as accelerating the spider's drop. Stopping on another rock, he glanced up, only to realize his goal wasn't much farther now, only a few stops left. He launched into the air again, strong-willed and determined. The smaller rocks evaded him once again...except a sudden one.

He couldn't stop it in the air, and only had a moment to turn away a bit so it wouldn't crunch his face and held up his hands. He managed to slow it a little bit, but it their opposite velocities were too much, and the rocks hit his head dead-on. Flailing in the air for a second, his sight turned blurry, strength leaving his parts, his mind clouding from the impact.

With a large thud he crashed into the rock he jumped off a second ago. He closed his eyes from the searing pain in his head that blinded him, panting madly. The limbless boy felt as though the air was heavy as lead, the thought that he was close to the bottom now, lingering in his mind, only making the ache worse.

So close... But no, he couldn't bare to move...he was tired, strained and had already tried everything he could. How much time had passed since he started this maneuver? Only about minute and he already failed. And still he couldn't lie still and give into his fate. He would never accept impossible...he always fought against seemingly unbeatable odds and turned victorious in the end. Here and now though; he was alone...all of his friends either probably either dead or dying. He had left them to their fates...he couldn't protect them...

A fury began to burn in him, a blazing inferno of anger, desperation, but also resolve and determination. No...he wouldn't be defeated...not now...not so close...not when they were at stake! With inhuman effort, he stood up, the veil of darkness rising from his mind. Not wasting the precious seconds left, he jumped up, shattering the stones that got close to him without mercy.

Close to the last rock, he tried to grasp onto it, but for a second, it seemed like his onslaught on the showering projectiles managed to dangerously decrease his speed. An immense relief filled him as he climbed on top of the last one. Now, on top of the world, he would only have to make a last jump, activate his helicopter and find a way out of here; without the danger of being crushed by the falling remains of the tunnel ceiling. Rayman smiled slightly, ready to make the last jump to safety.

“AHH!!” he cried out suddenly, clutching his head with his hands. He felt as though someone had thrusted a spear into his brain, forcing its way deep inside his mind. Through the waves of pain, he could almost hear the sound of a scream...a scream of someone in huge agony...a female scream...

His eyes widened as he let go of head, his mouth unconsciously forming the name of the fairy. It was her voice, he was sure of it. Rayman felt the stab of fear inside; a fear that she might be very close to death. He knew...he could almost feel she was close under, her mental cry involuntarily finding the person whom she used to communicate with like this.

He glanced down and could see the end of their fall now; the bottom of the hole, which he guessed, was also hollow like the platform that had collapsed under him. Clenching his fists, he already made his decision and was now only waiting for the last few seconds left to go. Almost... He counted back, his whole body tense and ready.

He heard the first stone crash into the bottom as well as the ear-tearing crack as it gave up against the immense shower. The limbless boy was now only awaiting the last few moments left before the move he had to make. Only a moment... Just as the rock under him fell through the newly made hole, he jumped off to evade getting squished, using his helicopter power for a second, before letting go.

A moment later he landed on the rocky slope with a faint thud, his eyes flaming with fury, raw power emanating from him...
- - -
A swift wind, leaves rustling, sprays trembling, a slender shadow sweeping past them. Bare feet tapping on the ground silently, almost like gliding in the air, but with inhuman speed. A pant, a whimper, a faint thump following the escapee, a sapphire curtain fluttering after the elusive being.

The moons denied their light from the much-suffered runner, making her work even harder. She knew her tired and frozen legs couldn't hold up this strain for much longer, already threatening with causing her to collapse the instant she would stop. She had to force herself to continue every moment...fighting through every tiny second to keep up.

Every single step brought only more and more pain, her feet sore and bleeding, cut by various twigs and sharper rocks on the ground. She was bare-footed against the night, a tiny and near-dying body in her hands. Her resolve was enviable, but her determination only managed to dramatically decrease her chances of surviving this night. She was tired...hungry...worried...beaten and hurt...

The fairy grasped the writhing body tightly in her arms. She felt the greenbottle's consciousness slipping, as though he was slowly giving up the fight to stay awake...and alive. Please...please hold on! She wasn't sure the way she was going would lead to the Council, but she had no other choice right now...

“Nghh...” a low groan suddenly came the one in her arms, making her stop.

“Murfy!” she whimpered, her words coming through as ragged pants. “Don't move, I'm taking you to the Council right now...you'll be alright, I promise.”

The greenbottle opened his eyes, gazing at Shya with a cloudy look at best. His body looked beaten, his otherwise tidily kept clothing torn at a few points. His wings nestled against his back, overused by the long flight. She felt him trembling as he tried to move a bit, but was way too worn out to do so.

“I..The...” he muttered weakly, his voice trailing off. “I'm...sorry about..the Plum Juice...” he didn't seem to realize what happened to him.

“I forgive you!” the fairy replied quickly, feeling him tremble in her arms once more. “Listen to me, I forgive you a hundred times, just please...please don't let go!”

The very shadow of a smile appeared on his face; her remission something he had secretly missed for a long time. Sure, he had always managed to anger everyone, even his friends, but very few kept being angry at him for such a long time as she had. Hearing her forgive him...he felt much as though a large weight had been lifted from his heart.

His eyes closed for a few seconds, only to open up once more, a hint of fear beaming at her from the two orbs. “The...” he tried to continue but his voice died off suddenly, his consciousness nearly lost.

“Murfy, I beg of you...stay silent for once in your life!” the fairy's voice was surprisingly no more than a whimper now, making her realize she was on the edge of her endurance as well. Her legs had been shaking since she stopped, nearly unable by now to keep her on her feet.

“It's...important...” Murfy's speech turned lower, now barely audible. Shya had to listen closely to understand what he was trying to say. “Sal...and the others...” his eyes fell, his breathing slowing down. Hearing her son's name made a ball of ice crawl around in Shya's abdomen.

“What?” she nearly pleaded for an answer. “What happened? Where are they?” her voice teemed with horror, fearing the worst.

“Mr. Dark...he took them...a portal...” the greenbottle's words turned incomprehensible as his eyes closed fully, silencing the normally ever-talkative fly as he fell asleep.

The name was like a blow on the head to Shya. She had to grab onto a nearby tree, almost dropping on the ground, the world spinning around her. Her breathing stopped for a few seconds, the horrible name echoing through her mind. Mr. Dark...Sal...what does he want with my son? Now she really had to hurry to the Council...

With Murfy in her hands, Shya tried to her best not to fall back and stop, knowing she would inevitably break down if that happened. Her body just couldn't take it much longer. So much pressure in so little time was taking its toll dearly. She wished she could use her powers, but after such a long time spent without the need to, she couldn't even summon some light for them.

She purposely didn't even think about anything else, other than the running; though her conscious self knew now that her unknown assailant could easily be linked to Mr. Dark's sudden recurrence. She knew the wizard always thought way ahead of everyone else, his plans hidden from both mortal and immortal eyes. And he's got Sal and the others...

Shya couldn't bear herself to think about what might have happened, but the worst was already running before her mind's eye...something she couldn't bear to see in reality. Her head began to ache as though a smoldering piece of metal was being driven through it. But even with that, she wouldn't stop, the greenbottle's life depending on her. She set her teeth and continued, until her whole sight changed...

The air was heavy and suffocating, burning her throat, making it painful even to breathe. Flames danced around the clearing, eating up the age-old trees, the branches and leaves not even fighting against the oppression of the blazing inferno by now, simply giving in...as though all hope was lost already. She couldn't believe what lied before her...too horrible to be the truth, but so real...so terrifyingly real...

She had to half-close her eyes, the ashes blown by the wind stinging her tired orbs. The sky itself seemed red, the twin moons disappearing in the smoke. She suddenly noticed figures lying on the ground...recognizable figures she didn't want to see...not here...not like this...

“No, no, NO!” she cried, running up to the first form, which turned out to be Globox.

The glute seemed didn't show any sign of being hurt, only his neck being twisted in a way no living could endure. But he couldn't be dead...he had a family, he couldn't have just died! She brought herself to look into his open eyes, horrifying emptiness looking gazing at her...the look of the deceased. She screamed and lunged away from the sight, tumbling backwards, landing on the ground, her hand splatting into some kind of thick liquid.

She reluctantly raised her arm; her eyes widened, a pressure beginning to squeeze her throat. Blood...her hands were bloody...with someone else's blood! It was flowing into a puddle, the ground hungrily drinking it up until the grass was colored into a sickening shade of crimson as well. Practically forcing her neck-muscles to obey her, she slowly turned her head, shaking in every single inch of her body, still unable to believe the horrific truth...that she was the only one alive in this clearing...

The fairy couldn't bite back the lung-tearing scream as a dreadful silence emanated from those pair of eyes which always had a sweet, perky glint to them before...the once beautiful dark-blue locks now painted into a nauseating shade of purple with her blood...the twisted, tormented, decayed and thoroughly broken remains of one of her youngest fairy brethren...Ly...

Her blood flowed freely from the horrible gash on her chest and the numerous smaller cuts around her body, her fitting, yellow clothing nearly torn to shreds, stained by the crimson fluid, her arms scattered, the same empty look in her orbs...but also a terrified expression frozen stiff on her face. Whatever they said about peace in death...Shya was sure this wasn't far from that. The fairy must've tried her best not to fall...to keep fighting and help her dear friends...but couldn't hold on in the end, falling to whatever unnamed force that had slaughtered her.

Shya couldn't take it anymore and tore her sight off her. She felt nausea striking her, nearly making her vomit right there...she couldn't comprehend what had happened, her mind and body sickened by what she had seen. She coughed from the ash and the pressure on her, trying her best not to collapse and join the demised.

She tried to stand up, her legs shaking wildly from what she had seen already...and what might be still in store for her. As the fairy turned away from the murdered Globox and the downright massacred Ly, she immediately bumped into an open palm, making her fall back with a loud scream.

She couldn't hold back that cry from the sight that served almost as a brutal kick into her lungs. For before her...lost of all his grace and dignity...beaten and defeated...suspended in the air by several web-thin strings as some twisted joke of a puppet...was Rayman. Their hero...their celebrated savior...their biggest pride...no longer resident amongst the living.

Blood steadily tricked down his scarred face, spouting from the huge blow on his head, bathing his face in red. His head, body, hands and feet hung loose on the silvery strings, the energy that kept them attached to him already dissipated, no longer fueled by his life force. In contrast to the others, his eyes were closed shut, implying he was even denied seeing everyone one last time. Not that there was any point in that...and maybe it was better if he couldn't see his friends..he wouldn't bear seeing them like this with a sane mind...

As she glanced just a little bit aside, something caught her eye...something that left her petrified, the air stuck in her lungs.

“Please...don't let it be-” she trailed off as she stepped closer, even though her mind screamed at her not to see what lied there.

She had to...even though she was sure of what she would see...she had no choice...she had to see for herself. As she went closer, the figure's outlines became clearer through the smoke that surrounded it. Shya cut through the dense black fog, ending up right before the one lying face-up on the ground. She gasped i horror, an iron hand squishing her insides, her heart being ripped to shreds.

“No...NO!!” she screamed, dropping on her knees before the young one. She didn't even look at his wound, fondling her arms around his broken body, grasping the boy tightly. The fairy burst out in tears, so bitter they stung her face. She nearly clawed into his back, desperately calling him; screaming his name to return to her...to speak...to move...anything, just don't let him stay solid like this...

She felt her throat was becoming sore from the strain, but she couldn't hold back the cries and screams of despair as she held his cold body in her hands...Salian...the boy she had nurtured for the past seventeen years...the one she adored most in this world...the one she lived for and narrowly died for during the invasion...her loving son...dead in her arms.


The fairy cried out as she tripped over a large log; a loud, strident crack echoing as her elbow hit the ground, the greenbottle falling out of her hands and tumbling a bit farther. She could see stars before her for a moment before her head landed, the agony threatening to literally tear her worn form apart that instant, her vision blurring from the impact as her face crashed into the cold soil; a blunt pain emanating from her shin as well.

Shya couldn't raise herself at all, not even so much as her head. She felt dizzy, a silent sobbing making her tremble. It wasn't real...he's alive...he's alive! She clung to every little fragment of hope she could muster, now standing on the very border of breaking down. The fairy turned her head a little bit, a light pain coming from her neck from the move.

The top of the Council was visible from this point now, but the fairy already knew she had lost. She just couldn't take it anymore. Her body was tired and hurt beyond the point where she could simply get through it. This was too much for her to bear with a clean mind; the tattered remains of her consciousness slipping faster than she could hold on. Sal...dear Sal...I'm sorry...

She could hear a faint sound close to her; like a piece of paper being torn apart, a faint buzz, sounds of excited muttering, and a wave of cool air touching her through her torn nightgown...but it no longer mattered. She couldn't hear, talk, see, or feel anymore, everything fading into spots before her eyes. Silently whispering goodbye to her son, Shya the fairy drifted far from space and time...
- - -
Globox watched helplessly as the near a dozen spiders inched closer to them. He still held the barely conscious Ly in his arms, not intending to leave her as prey for those wretched insects. He backed up as much as he could, his back now against the cavern wall where they purposely cornered him to.

The fairy in his arms could only whimper and cry, the splinter that had struck her still inside the wound, her leg bathing in her blood. Flowing down her writhing body, it dripped into a crimson puddle under Globox's feet, further enticing the vicious little predators. She felt the glute grab her harder and through the waves of pain, she realized he wouldn't leave her behind, unless he would fall as well. He wasn't a brave person...but a friend to the very end.

The glute ran every available option through his head, trying to find some form of escape...anything that could help them from this seemingly hopeless situation...but nothing. The spiders formed a half-circle around them as he leaned against the cavern wall, cautiously leaving no opening for the glute to break through; wanting to end the chase here and now.

The faint idea of tackling them came to Globox's mind, but he knew couldn't do that without seriously endangering both his and Ly's life...and she was already on the edge of life and death. Maybe...maybe if he could muster some courage...something from the deepest bowels of his soul, he might be able to beat them, but quickly realized he'd have to leave the fairy on her own to try and beat them on his own.

So there's no hope... Globox closed his eyes, thinking of Uglette and their children...the whole swarm of them. If he'd fall, they'd have to grow up without a father...a life he never wanted them to experience. He silently said goodbye to them and wishing a long and peaceful, if he should fall here.

“Hold on Ly...” he whispered, now only a faint light of hope left in him...a light he never let die.

The fairy tried to answer, but the only noise that came from her throat was a semi-loud cry of agony. She didn't know if she could stand even another minute of this pain...her whole left leg smoldering as the splinter was still bedded into her, her precious blood continuing to pool out of the gash. She felt herself weakening, barely able to keep her eyes open, the pain pulsing through her intensifying to magnitudes unimagined.

She had known pain from before...oh yes, she for one, really had concepts about the feeling, but this was more than she ever had to endure at once...not to mention that at that time, she could stand the pain fairly better, getting fast used to it...here and now, she was simply a weak little fairy, struggling against a tidal wave of torment.

The glute pulled her even closer, nearly pushing her into his stomach in a desperate instinct to protect the young female. He glared at the spiders that closed around them, slowly coming closer, their saliva dripping onto the ground, the ground sizzling from their corrosive body-fluid. This is the end...

His body tensed, ready to try one final breakthrough...not for his sake but for Ly's. He didn't care what would happen to himself, he just wanted to make sure the fairy would be safe. Five... He counted back silently, preparing to make the final move. Four...

Three...

The spiders inched even closer, the dim light shining on their fangs.

Two...

He lightly let his foot rest against the cave-wall, ready to use it for a starting push.

One...

A dozen squelching spiders now nearly right next to him; he murmured a short prayer, already asking for forgiveness if his try would result in Ly's death. As he opened his eyes...he was ultimately prepared to do it.

GO!

Just as he was about to lunge forward, the ceiling near the creatures shattered with a large crash, showering the ground near them with rocks. The spiders turned around and leaped away from Globox, gazing at the growing pile of rubble with both anger and a slight fear. The glute didn't dare to move, fearing something even worse was to arrive from the newly appeared opening.

The deadly silence lasted a few seconds, neither the insects, nor Globox taking a step. The spiders were still waiting to see what would happen, while the glute knew that if he'd try to slip away, these little creatures wouldn't waste their time with them anymore and would tear them apart that instant. Thus, both groups watched the hole on the top silently, all of them on the edge of their nerves.

Then suddenly, a strange noise broke the silence...a noise that was supposed to be uncommon here...at least, not heard for quite a few years. The predator-bugs couldn't identify the voice and started shrieking and growling, hoping the 'enemy' would show itself soon. To Globox though...the voice was undoubtedly familiar.

He couldn't believe it. He just couldn't believe that what he was hearing was true. A faint buzzing noise that came from the opening, slowly coming closer and closer, making him have to relate it to the only person he knew, who had an ability like this...his best friend...

“Rayman...” he whispered, gazing at the hole. Ly opened her eyes for a second from the word, trying to see what would happen with her rapidly decaying sight.

And their ears weren't deceived...for mere seconds later, a small figure dropped from the hole, landing on the ground, not far from them. Two yellow shoes...a purple body with the familiar circle in it...two white fists sparkling with energy beyond measurement...and the face that always brought hope to the oppressed; relief to the wounded; salvation to the suffering...Rayman, the limbless guardian of this world, had finally arrived.

His eyes were flaming with raw fury, an expression of pure anger on his face, painted slightly red from the cut on his forehead. A sort of primal power emanated from him, making it look like he was towering over all of them. His glare made the spiders inch backwards, the strength that seemed to surround him like an aura, terrifying them like nothing in these caverns. Rayman made on step closer, the silence making it sound as though something the size of the colossus has stepped.

He threw a short glance at Globox, his face twitching as he saw the horrible gash on Ly's leg. Growling in an animal-like manner, the limbless boy raised his hands into the air. In the middle of his palms, a large orb appeared, a huge light accompanying it as its core exploded slightly to form a sphere in his hands, hissing from the energy inside of it. The glute could almost feel the heat of the ball as it glinted in his hands.

The limbless boy nod aside with his head, instructing the glute to come behind him, while keeping the sphere in the air. Globox did so, slowly walking behind his friend. As strange as it was, the strange feeling as though he was hiding behind an impenetrable wall, took hold of him. The spiders however, seemed angered by the prey eluding them after such a long chase, the hunger coming over their sense of fear.

With a roar that made Globox feel as though the earth itself was rumbling, Rayman tossed the sphere at the first spider that leaped towards them. There was a huge flash of light and the sound of flesh charring, the death-cry of the beast tearing through the air. Even the limbless boy had to cover his eyes for a split second. As they looked again, the insect was completely vaporised, only a black mark on the ground indicating it ever existed.

Rayman wasn't done however...not yet. And so weren't the spiders; one of their kind falling only fueling their primitive anger. The limbless boy lunged forward, catching one of them by its sucker. The beast growled at him, which didn't even make the boy flinch; he spun around and threw the insect at the cavern-wall, a horrible crack following the impact.

Before the rest of the creatures could even react, he sped forwards, energy still abundant inside him. He roared as he smacked a spider with all of his force, his hand still glinting. The sizzling of burning flesh tore into the sounds of the battle; the spider flying through the cove. Rayman jumped into the air, throwing a sphere at the unfortunate insect that crawled under him, stomping the by then barely alive creature into the ground as he landed.

There were still a few left, those still alive seeming to enter a state of bloodlust, no longer caring about food, only to tear the limbless to pieces. Two inched closer to him, Rayman glancing from one to another in a lightning-fast rhythm. The one farther suddenly spat at him, its corrosive saliva capable of melting his body. The boy was far quicker though and grabbed the spider that lunged at him, using it as a living shield.

An ear-piercing shriek shook the place as the spit hit the insect on its head. A nauseating frizzle followed the intensifying death-cries of it and as Rayman dropped the creature, its head was already no more than just a smoking, black puddle. Its killer didn't have time for a second course as the limbless boy jumped to it, a fist slamming down at its corselet, shattering the bug's weak body.

Just then, a spider suddenly got lucky, jumping on his back and sinking its fangs into Rayman's back. The limbless boy cried out from the burning agony, a little smoke coming from his bitten wounds. He thought quickly and jumped up, the bug still on his back. With the move he practiced so much before, he concentrated for a few a split second, channeling the supportive energy that kept him together to his liking. Feeling it pulse around him, his eyes sprung open, and with a swift move, grabbed his body and threw it at the ground.

His torso plummeted into the ground with a loud crash, the creature getting squashed like a ripe Plum, as it absorbed the velocity of the impact. Rayman activated his helicopter-hair for a second to slow down his fall, then let go, his center joining his energy circulation a moment after he landed. He nearly collapsed as a wave of pain tore through him, emanating from the bite-marks, panting heavily. The remaining few bugs took this as a sure sign of weakness and moved in on the limbless boy.

“You won't...get me this easily...” he growled, noticing the worried look Globox was giving him.

Ly was trembling in his hold, blood still flowing from the wound...if she wasn't tended to very soon, Rayman seriously doubted she'd live another day. Seeing the fairy involuntarily made him think about Salian, whom he had left to his fate. NO! I gave him time...it was either that, or the spiders eating us both... Blood-freezing doubt grasped his heart whether he made the right decision, dropping his guard for a second.

The still living creatures saw the opportunity to attack; two lunging forward to strike him down finally. Rayman glared at them and cried out in pain and anger, grabbing the headless carcass of a fallen spider. Just as the two would touch him, he spun around with the dead body in his hands. His hit on the two was clean and powerful, sending them flying back to the rest of their kin.

Rayman glanced up and noticed a way to end the fight right now. Without second thought, he threw both of his fists, curving them right above the momentarily dazed beasts. The lone stalactite above them shattered with a loud noise, the rubble burying the rest of those infernal bugs under. The limbless boy grimaced in disgust from the noise as the surviving spiders were squished.

Globox watched Rayman silently, a mixture of relief and a little twinge of fear in him. The limbless boy lost his balance from fatigue, dropping on his hands, panting madly. Two little streams of blood flowed down his back from the places where the spider bit him; he was barely able to hold back a pained cry, the only thing holding him back was the fear of attracting even more.

He gritted his teeth for a few seconds, the largest noises he let out were suppressed hisses. Subduing the trembling from the pain, he walked over to the glute, covering one of the bites with a hand. Globox watched him with a slight gasp as he went right up to him.

“Rayman, those-”

“No time.” the limbless one snubbed the glute, closing his eyes for a second as another wave coursed through him. “What...happened?” he asked, gasping when as the pain retreated finally.

“They chased us for a long way, before Ly made the top collapse on them.” his voice died off for a second. “But some got through and she got shot when she saved me.”

Rayman glanced at her wound again, his eyes widening from the horror as he saw the splinter was still in her. He extended his hand, lightly touching her near the wound. Ly let out a close-eyed cry of pain, biting her lips, tears running down her face.

“Ly...” he whispered, his heart sinking from seeing her like this. The limbless boy didn't know, but his strong voice had reached her, even through the barriers of agony. He turned back to Globox, his face not showing the both physical and emotional pain he was experiencing. “Quickly, do your rain-dance and make a cloud, but don't let it rain yet!”

Rayman didn't waste the time with asking politely, but the glute wasn't about to object. He knew his friend was worried about Ly...just like he was. Gently balancing Ly in one arm, he made the needed preparations, while still keeping the movements to a minimum. The fruit of his work was visible after a minute; a moderately big, indignant-black cloud.

The limbless boy nodded at Globox and leaned closer to the fairy in his arms.

“Ly...I know you're badly hurt, but please...listen to me.” he tried to talk to her in the gentlest voice he could right now, while suggesting how serious the situation was. The fairy's closed eyes twitched slightly, indicating she could vaguely hear him. “Listen to my voice Ly...the splinter is still in the wound. I'll have to take it out, otherwise you won't survive another hour.”

“I won't lie...it'll hurt...terribly, but I want you to bear it.” he took her hand into his, squeezing just so she could feel he was truly beside her. “I know you're already in a bad shape, but you have to stand it! Please...please take it just a little more...you're strong enough, just don't let go!” he could feel the fairy's hand grasping his a little.

Rayman let out a pressured sigh, glancing at Globox. “As soon as I take it out, let it rain.” he instructed. The glute nod back, concentrating so the cloud would stay together until then. The limbless boy raised his hands, shaking from what he was about to do. The splinter was at least an inch inside of her, the wound not looking fatal, but still very serious. Forgive me Ly...

He grabbed the end of it, making her wince, but she suppressed the cry that wanted to escape her. “One...two...-” his hands clenched around it, while Ly set her teeth, Globox holding her so that his hand was above her face. “THREE!” Rayman shouted, pulling hard on the splinter. The fairy burst out in an elemental cry of agony, the burning feeling as the projectile slid out the gash destroying her completely. The glute muffled her by stuffing the side of his palm into her mouth.

Ly bit hard into Globox's hand, the glute letting out a pained yelp, but holding on. Rayman tugged a little harder at the splinter before it finally came out.

“NOW!” he shouted, recoiling a bit as it left her body fully.

The glute snapped his fingers and a large rainfall came upon them, the cloud stuffed with humidity by now. The fairy bit into his palm again, as the cold water dropped onto her wound, making it feel like she was being burned alive. Tears literally flooded from her eyes, sobs making her tremble again. Rayman stepped closer and grabbed her arm lightly, tugging at the sleeve of her fitting clothing.

He managed to split the top a bit and carefully tore it down all the way to her shoulder, also revealing the little scrape she got from her first encounter with these insects. He tore a little patch off, watered it with the rain, and began to methodically clean out the gash on her thigh and the blood around it, while the rain washed his own blood off his face.

A question was aching in Globox, but he knew that he shouldn't ask it right now, since it would only upset Ly. Rayman's here...but where's Salian? The limbless boy in the main time, tied the rest of the fairy's torn sleeve around her wound, not letting it bleed so fast now. He carefully removed her other sleeve as well, further bandaging her thigh. Miraculously, the splinter's removal caused a much smaller flow of blood, than expected. The rain was nearly over now, all three of them completely showered by now.

“You did great Ly, you hear me, you're through it! It's over, don't worry, it's over now...” he fondled her face gently, the fairy's closed eyelids still twitching from the pulsing pain. “Rest...me and Globox will get you out of here quickly...” he promised, wiping the sweat off her flaming forehead with the little remaining clean piece of cloth he tore off.

“I've bandaged it as much as I could...” Rayman whispered to Globox as he felt her getting distant again. “But she won't survive the night without proper medication...” the glute nod back understandingly, examining his palm.

The imprint of her teeth were still visible, but it didn't hurt that much by now. The fairy however didn't hear or see these anymore, time no longer existing for her. She only felt the agony, but instead of only her legs, it was all over her body, slowly tormenting her to death...just like before. No...I don't want to feel that again... She could only bear it for a few more seconds before she got lost in it, her will eroded by the searing pain...

Globox felt her lightening in his arms as she lost consciousness. He gazed at Rayman with grave concern in his eyes. “She needs to be taken away from here immediately...” he whispered, the cold truth in his voice echoing around the cavern...
- - -
A tremble went through his body, his senses slowly reawakening after the blow. His mind was cloudy and dull, unable to comprehend what was happening around him. He felt a light pain coursing through him, setting his nerve-endings on a slow fire. He raised his head a bit, blinking to get rid of the spots before his sight.

“Ughh...” he groaned, commanding his muscles to try and sit up. That didn't quite work at first attempt, his whole body feeling numb, his mind unable to recollect what happened. “Ray?” he whimpered, surprised to see his friend wasn't near him.

He hissed slightly upon sitting up finally, his head ready to explode. The boy looked over himself with a hint of worry; his red shirt and brown pants torn at quite a few points, bruises all over him. He didn't want to tamper with them and instead rubbed his aching head.

I wonder what happened... He only had slight fragments of the previous minute -or hours?-, but that was hardly enough to fill the gaps. Just where exactly am I...and where's- Suddenly, he gasped as his mind replaced the missing puzzles of his memory.

“Rayman!” he cried, trying to climb back up the slope before him, with close to no success. He could remember it now...their descent...the spiders...Rayman's look just before he pushed him down. “RAYMAN!!” he desperately called out for him.

Noticing the huge hole on the top, Salian unconsciously formed his friend's name with his mouth and slumped back on the ground. He gazed at the opening for another second, before he couldn't take it anymore. Thoughts raced around his head, grave and worried ones. He must've blown the top to bury the spiders...and himself...

This was the logical explanation, but right now, he was in no mood for logic. He angrily slammed down on the ground with his fist. What am I going to do now? I have no idea of this place...Ray...what happened to you? Are you still alive at all? He purposely had to fight back a few tears of despair, the probability of it both frightening him and setting off a burning anger inside.

Rayman had practically been a brother to him, ever since they've met in the Dream Forest all those years ago. He always knew what Salian was thinking, a perfect harmony between the two friends. He couldn't count the times the limbless boy stayed over at them for the night, his mother never turning down their pleading.

Of course those nights never consisted of sleeping...more like laughing, playing and even fighting sometimes...and even though Rayman was much stronger and agile than the boy, the limbless always purposely went easy, both teaching him and in the main time, having fun. Even more, it did happen on a couple of occasions, when Shya was already asleep, that they escaped the house with a little help from his friend's helicopter-power.

Those nights were the most memorable to him...when they were out exploring and playing in the darkness, or just lying in the dewy grass, talking until the first light of dawn shone on them, when they would quickly go back, sneak through the house and to his room, hoping Shya wouldn't notice them. Regardless how quick or careful they were however, the fairy was always up by the time they arrived, already having prepared a little hot-chocolate for the midnight explorers.

His mother never scolded them or anything, just smiled and glanced at them in a loving way, that made them feel bad out of instinct for sneaking out. They would always silently sip their drinks, gazing at each other, expecting punishment soon, but nothing ever happened. She even carried them into bed when they fell asleep at the table, only a few minutes after arriving.

Then, when chaos and havoc returned to the world...he was the one who freed him from the small Pirate cell he was stacked into, ending the circle of his daily forced excursions to Razorbeard...he was who united him with Shya again, dangerously weak and horribly beaten, but alive and overjoyed to see him again. Sal remembered how he cried in his mother's arms when the Buccaneer exploded, leaving them in the thought that he had perished in the final encounter.

He always stood beside him, regardless how bad or good the situation was, never letting the boy down. He supported him at every move, always there when he needed someone, or just felt alone all of a sudden...but now, he was alone before whatever this infernal place could hold against him.

Slowly rising from the ground, his legs aching from the roll he took down, he glanced around, fixing his gaze at the tunnel before him. Wherever Rayman was now...he would probably be scowling at him for staying here and moping like that. No...as long as he didn't know otherwise, he hoped seeing his friend again...but if he ever planned on doing that, he had to start going as well.

It didn't take more than a few steps though when a shrewd pain tore through his mind. He had to grab his ears, falling back on his knees, the sudden agony in his head making even his ear ring so much they ached. Not again! The cold touch he felt on his nape though confirmed Salian's worst fears.

“Still struggling with your existence, I see?” his foul voice merely amplified the pain he already had in his ears.

He had to close his eyes by now, his mind threatening to shatter from the unimaginable magnitude the throbbing was achieving. He felt his heavy gaze at him, the shadows coursing around forming a circle around him.

“Please...I beg you...just leave me alone...” he whimpered, dropping sideways, curling up from the pain.

He cried out suddenly as a shade snaked around his waist, and pulled him into the air. More of those joined it, securing him in the air, just below him...the darkness that had tormented his consciousness ever since they've entered these caves...the cruel yellow eyes of Mr. Dark.

“Your friends...” he spoke up, his raspy voice crawling directly into his head, making it feel like they were pouring fire through his ears. “...one by one, all of them will fall. Their demise cannot be avoided...this place will kill them, the same way it killed hundreds before...”

“No!” he had to muster all of his will to spat back at him, his voice weak, compared to his earth-shattering thunder. “You're lying, I know you are!”

“Am I?” the dark figure grinned under his cloak, his eyes sparkling with amusement for a second. He flowed in the air to Salian, his cold breath nearly freezing him. “The limbless one won't be able to hold on much longer...the glute will be an amusement to vanquish...and as for the fairy...she's good as dead already...”

“Shut up!!” Salian cried, tears running down his face by now.

The shadows that had rendered him motionless were now slowly crushing the life out of him, as Dark continued to rout his will. He hoped with every fiber of his being that the robed figure was lying...but inside, he knew he had spoken the truth. Sobs tore through him, shedding tears for all of his friends...Rayman...Ly...Globox...let him die at the hands of Mr. Dark, but the Heart preserve his friends!

The shadowed one's hand shot forward upon seeing him cry, grasping his chin in a lock-hard grip, the flame in his eyes nearly piercing through him. For a second, the boy thought he would shatter his jaw to pieces. “You're pathetic...so weak, you've never deserved anything you had...” his captor hissed coldly, slapping him hard. The boy felt a little blood trickle from his mouth, his face burning from the hit.

“You will feel it too...see everything that they have concealed from you for so long...and suffer...suffer for every move you have ever made...every word you have ever spoken...every act you had ever committed.” he let go of him, the boy's head dropping. “And your friends will be the first to pay this price...”

The shadows raised him higher above, the air turning so icy it practically froze him, the cold almost stopping even his heart.

“You will fall into the deepest abyss and see the horrors you can only experience in its bowels...” a small but sharp black talon sprouted on one of his fingers.

He pushed forward, burying the tip of it into the side of his neck. The boy cried out as he drew blood from him, cutting a small line into the soft flesh. Sealing his final promise, the shadows that bound him dispersed, letting him silently drop into the nothing below...


Salian could literally feel himself crash into the ground, though not nearly from as high up as he was in that nightmarish vision. He was still crying; a mixture of shock and pain in this. I can't take it... His neck stung so much it felt like his skin was burning, but as the boy reached to touch it, he froze completely. For as he pulled back his hand, he saw his fingers were red...red with his blood...

He couldn't even find the air in his lungs to scream now, overthrown by the realization. He can hurt me even through visions now?... The probability horrified him to no end; the dire feeling of being even more vulnerable than he could have ever imagined. I'm lost... He hit the ground with his fist like before, his tears of fear dropping on the ground. Ray...anyone...help me...don't leave me alone in the dark...
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“-poisonous?!” Globox's eyes widened from the statement, shaking slightly.

Rayman nod back as they walked. “After the splinter leave the spider's body, it becomes fragile...I think that might be a worst-case scenario for them.” he mused, scratching the back of his head; a move he had ingrained since he was a child.

“In case the victim survives the impact, the splinter would break and the poison inside it would infect the body in mere seconds...after that, there's only a short time left for an antidote, or else the person is in for a slow, numbing death.”

The glute closed his eyes for a second, banishing the grim thoughts from his mind. When he opened them, he involuntarily gazed down at the still unconscious Ly in his hands, a ball of ice in his abdomen. “And is she-”

“No.” Rayman stated fast, proving that he was scared about the probability as well. “I've checked the splinter for any dents and cracks...the poison didn't get in her bloodstream, I'm definite.”

“I hope so too. She has enough as it is...” the glute sighed, glancing at Rayman's back for a second. “What about those?”

“Oh, these?” his friend absentmindedly touched the bite-marks of the spiders, plus the little cut on his forehead. “It's not that much of a big deal...of course it's not pleasant, but I've got used to being bitten, stabbed, punched and things like that. I can take it.” he sighed as well. “Besides...these are nothing compared to that...” he glanced at Ly's now-bandaged thigh.

Out of sheer concern, the limbless one placed a hand on the fairy's forehead, a worried expression on his face. It was nearly flaming, proving her condition wasn't turning better at all.

“I should have listened to you about going to Clearleaf...” he whispered.

“It's not your fault she got hurt.” Globox would have patted his friend's back if his hands weren't preoccupied at the moment. “None of us expected any of these happening.” he tried to reassure him.

“Sure...of course not...” the limbless boy let out a pained sigh, indicating he wasn't as sure about this as the glute.

Suddenly, a light moan made them stop in their tracks. They both gazed at Ly, who was slightly squirming in Globox's hold. She turned her head slightly, though her eyes didn't open.

“Betilla...” she muttered weakly. “...mother...where are you?...”

Globox blinked at her words, slightly confused. “Why is she saying 'mother'? I thought fairies raise each other together...”

“Ly loves Betilla much more than the rest of her fairy brethren.” Rayman explained to the glute, knowing exactly how she felt about the Elder fairy. “She's closer to her than any of her sisters, thus she refers to her as her true mother.” the limbless boy hung his head for a second, a wave of guilt washing over him.

First Sal...now Ly...and I'm sure Globox misses his family too. I have separated them from their family...I, who doesn't even have one... The bitter feelings that pooled inside him were hard to swallow, for it had more truth to it than simple accusations. If I won't be able to get them out alive...they'll be lost for their families...and THAT, will be my fault only...

As these grave thoughts swirled inside him, he suddenly felt lightly fondle his face. Opening his eyes, the first thing he saw was a pair of jade orbs beaming at him...not with anger, hatred or accusation, but with gratitude, compassion...and a little hint of sadness as well. Rayman's mouth opened for a gasp, realizing she must have heard his thoughts by incident.

She didn't say anything out loud, obviously too weak for that, but her eyes, her expression and the sweet smile on her face spoke for themselves. I trust you... Globox watched the scene silently, sensing the weight on the limbless boy's heart lightening. The fairy soon got too tired to keep up and pulled back her hand, wincing from the now dimmer, but continuously pulsing pain in her thigh.

“It's good to see your awake...” the limbless boy purposely didn't mention what happened. For a second, he was tempted to lie, but knew she would never want him to do that. She deserved the truth, especially when it concerned a friend of her. “Once we find Sal...I think I'll be able to get us out of here...”

“Are you...sure?” she spoke up, her voice barely a whisper, but no sign of her wanting to give up on life. The fairy noticed the concerned glances the glute was giving her and stroked his tummy a bit. “Don't worry Globox...I'm alive.”

“I'm pretty sure about it...since I finally remember this place.” the limbless boy sighed, feeling their curious looks. He thought over everything they have seen: the tunnels, the crystals, the spiders...and coming to the same conclusion again “Does the name 'Skops' ring a bell?”

End of Part 2
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This is pretty good.....and those posts were long. :shock:

Can you please make a comment on my fanfic "My version of Rayman 1!"? :cry:
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flyingrabids wrote:This is pretty good.....and those posts were long. :shock:

Can you please make a comment on my fanfic "My version of Rayman 1!"? :cry:
Kinda rude to comment on someone else's work only to leave a comment asking them to look at yours. If Zay wants to look at it from the Rayman Fanworks list, then he will.
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@flyingrabids: I'll read it eventually, but don't push. I like reading, but I hate to be pushed to read.

The next part is ready for takeoff! Like I promised, I split this into two parts...one is about 5 pages...the other is 14. I'll adjust it better next time ^^; This chapter will most likely be in four parts altogether. Well, enjoy, and thanks to my beta-reader Luckster_Gal 83


Chapter 6: Dawn

Part 1:


Most live their lives without experiencing true, unhindered darkness. Not a simple dim twilight, nor some shallow shadow...but pure blackness, one that courses to every inch of the world, not leaving so much as a little candle-light of hope. The one that devours all existence, leaving only a broken minds and souls, tortured and restless spirits, torn and shredded hearts behind, reducing them to mere parodies, twisted abominations of their once proud lives.

To reach such darkness is near impossible on one's own decision. Finding it requires to be plummeted into the deepest of the abyss, experiencing things that cannot be spoken of...cannot be remembered...cannot be endured by feeble mortal souls. When one loses hope and gives into the often cruel hands of fate, then and only then will the pitch-black foulness come to claim the person, taking even the peaceful passing on from them.

She had only seen that once...one horrible time, which would always remain in her mind, forever smoldered into the vault of her memories. Once, it nearly claimed her, its claws dragging her soul from her tortured, writhing, but still living body, away from everyone she had ever loved and cared for. But even then, when all hope seemed to die, she could withstand its touch, narrowly keeping herself on the side of life, as she was stumbling on the border.

Where she was flowing now, wasn't the same darkness that she knew and still feared to this day. Compared to that, this was of a much weaker magnitude, highly inferior to the one she had met all those years ago. She could still feel her body; the slight tingles making goosebumps on her skin, a low pain pulsing and throbbing inside her, faint whispers coursing through her mind.

“Am I dead?” she could hear her voice echo around, even though it didn't seem like anything could reflect it in the shadowy place she was currently residing in.

Despite this nearly catatonic state, she could still faintly sense the world quivering around her, reawakening her nerves. No...this wasn't death. She could remember this place now; she had flown along here several times already, but could never feel the cold touch of decay trying to reap her soul...she was simply unconscious.

The thought didn't calm her perfectly down, but it did serve as some shallow form of relief. She concentrated hard on everything she could feel: the noises, the pain, the touch of air...so much until these slowly cleared from amongst the disturbance, distilling into their clear selves...


As she opened her burning eyes, she immediately had to close them again, emitting a low hiss as well; the sudden, bright light nearly blinding her. They were still too accustomed to the close to no amount of luminosity of the night, where she could date her last conscious memory. She let out a tired sigh; a feeling like a huge weight being pushed off her chest following it.

Narrowing her eyes, she opened the again, gazing before herself. The blur spots were starting to take forms once again. She could finally make out the deep-bluish stones and the white-marble ceiling; a superb specimen of the kind of magnificent and ancient architecture that unendingly amazed her.

She only knew one place that looked like this...the sanctuary she had once called her home, back when she was still in her youngest, most innocent years...and the haven she had left nearly seventeen years ago. The undying monument of unity and peace...resting place of the very Heart of the World...the Fairy Council.

The side effects of her awakening began to emerge as well, first in the form of a shrewd pain emanating from her elbow. She let out a sharp hiss from the prickling feeling. She was almost definite she must have broken it as she tripped, back in the forest.

“I see you have woken up...” she heard a relatively high-pitched voice stating the obvious, its sudden appearance startling her.

She glanced at her side and was met by a pair of black, button-eyes gazing at her. The two orbs were nestled into the top of a huge, light-blue nose, hiding the tiny creature's mouth. He wore a fancy, green coat; the traditional attire of the Teensies that resided inside the Council. The only unusual was that his bold head was uncovered; most of his kin liked to wear different kind of headpieces.

The fairy heaved a sigh, seeing the Teensie beside her proving once and for all that she was still alive. Though she was already sure of that fact, it still served as a pleasant evidence. She couldn't explain it, but being near these little ones, had a certain amusing atmosphere, making it very entertaining, refreshing and even exhilarating to talk to them.

The little blue didn't wait for her answer, reaching out and wrapping the covers tightly around the fairy. She felt a bit confused, only noticing the blanket on her now. Seems like I was out for quite some time... She attempted to sit up, only to be met by the Teensie's little hand halting her, gently pushing her back onto the bed.

“You shouldn't go anywhere.” he stated sternly, scowling at her. She blushed slightly, suddenly feeling all young again, getting scolded for neglecting meditation, or stealing a Plum, because she was hungry after. “Concerning your condition, you'd better lie here, for now.”

Mentioning her health, Shya realized only then that while the stings continuously emanated from her elbow, she could also feel that it was encased. She blushed deeper, having gotten unused to such committed treatment. As a mother, she had to take care of both the household, herself and Salian at the same time.

She took care of the cleaning, the food and the washing; things she didn't really mind to do, in earnest. As Salian grew older, he tried to help her a few times, but that usually ended up in both of them playing around, instead of properly doing what was needed. She had almost forgotten how it was to be tended to like this. The Teensie seemed to have noticed her discomfort and smiled under his large nose.

“We found you lying on the ground.” he explained slowly, knowing she wasn't in mint condition at the moment, both physically and mentally. “You were nearly frozen to death, and your arm was broken too.”

The fairy nod at the blue one, expecting to hear this information. She couldn't remember exactly how she fell unconscious, only the pain of her wounds, and the cold that sept through her torn nightgown. Her eyes widened as she realized she was no longer in her tattered sapphire attire, instead some kind of flimsy, yet warm robe. Even though it was a bit strange to know this, a different thought became priority inside her at the moment. She gasped slightly, a worrisome expression creeping on her face.

“...Sal.” she muttered, trying to sit up again, only to be halted by the little one's arm again.

“Rest.” the Teensies commanded, looking quite serious in this matter. “We'll find him.” he reassured immediately, knowing how worried she must have been.

“But he's been taken by-” she tried to tell what happened, but when she was before the dreaded name, she just couldn't say it out loud, afraid he would appear next to her, with her son's lacerated body.

Shya shut her eyes tight as they watered, a rasp irritating her throat. She still remembered what she saw in her mind's eye while she was running...the horrible things she saw then, still etched into her mind, tormenting her thoughts. She suddenly felt a small hand wiping the fresh tears off her face. She opened her eyes, and saw the Teensie gazing at her, compassionately.

“We already know.” he murmured, his expression showing how ancient he probably was. Shya knew Teensies could live on forever, their kind immortal to aging, but only now did she see just how much that forever truly meant. “You nearly died...you need to get some rest. I promise we'll find him.” he gently wiped the remains of her tears off.

The fairy nod at the little blue, letting her head rest on the pillow once again. The Teensie jumped off the stool he was standing on and slowly walked out of the room, leaving her alone to sleep. She gazed at the ceiling for the longest time, worry eating her heart. She didn't want to lie here, she wanted to look for Salian, even if that meant searching through the entire world. All she wished for, was to have him back in her arms as fast as possible.

After a few minutes, her eyelids became heavy; her mind and body still terribly tired. The light in the room served as a little reassurance for her; some luminosity after the long hours she had spent stumbling in the dark. She blinked a few times, before her eyes finally fall, drifting into a dreamless sleep.

The Teensie gazed at her sleeping form for a few moments, watching as her breathing became slower, her movements stopping. He turned around, walking towards where the rest of his kin was, a tired expression still on his face. He had lived for years longer than anyone could remember...and yet situations like this still struck him to the heart.

Nevertheless, he didn't stop to linger on these gloomy thoughts, and instead, entered the Heart Chamber, where his kin was already having a heated argument about how to find the ones Mr. Dark had kidnapped. He sighed, joining into the cacophony with his own thoughts. He gave a promise, and was going to make sure to go all the way with it.
- - -
Every step was like getting deeper into the bowels of some unknown underworld; inching towards the inevitable death and decay that awaited the unwary. Each tiny movement only summoned more of the thick darkness that sat around like a fog, clouding everything from mortal eyes. Shadows lurked in every corner, eying, waiting, preying, watching...ready to tear their helpless victim apart.

He was promptly hugging the wall, taking each step slowly, one after another, his heart beating wildly. He couldn't remember any time when he had been so afraid of the dark, even looking back at his earliest years. Sure, as a child, he preferred sleeping with his mother, or for her to conjure some light as he went to sleep, but this was different. He felt like it was sitting on his shoulders, pushing him down, crawling closer and suffocating him with its unbearable weight.

The boy was shaking all over, wincing to every sudden sound, every little crack or pop, even if it came from him. It had been seventeen Eves already since he was born, and by all means he shouldn't have been so frightened, but he couldn't help it. In every corner he felt like he could see a yellow glint, beaming coldly at him from the veil that surrounded him.

Salian had to sit down for a moment again, waiting for the shaking in his legs to calm down. Since his most recent vision, even though he knew he couldn't stay in one place for long, he had to take breaks not once. He truly hated this place; shivering from both the slight cold, and the fear buzzing inside him.

He stroked his nape again, enjoying the feeling the softness of the fabric covering it. The boy winced for a moment as the sharp, unmistakable feeling of pain washed over him. The stab on his neck was luckily not even near severe, but it still stung badly, making him hiss from the unpleasant feeling.

For some reason, he was almost sure that Mr. Dark knew exactly where to puncture him so it wouldn't be too serious, but would still hurt a lot. Though he wasn't nearly as efficient as Rayman was, he managed to tear off his other sleeve, tying it securely around his neck, to avoid bleeding too much.

He couldn't stay calm since then, not even for a single moment. The dark mage proved that he was much more powerful than Sal had ever anticipated, and could harm him even without being physically before him. The boy pulled up his knees a bit, trying to look as small as possible. He hadn't been this afraid in his whole life, not even when prisoner amongst the Pirates.

At least back then, he knew what to expect. The beatings...the excursions to Razorbeard...he always knew, or at least suspected what would happen. He feared for his life, of course, but even more for his mother's. Here and now though, he was completely alone, against an enemy that could strike whenever he would least expect it, in ways he couldn't even comprehend.

Separated from his friends; alone in the perpetual darkness, at the mercy of a faceless menace. Salian crossed his arms and started rocking back and forth to calm down a bit, though his face was twisted in fear and worry. He wished the others would be here too; their presence would had been more than enough to ease the horror in him.

He longed to see his limbless friend; his just-brother, the only person he knew who could plant hope and strength into weakened souls, even during the darkest nights. He wanted to be next to Globox; the easily-horrified, but much-endured glute, who wasn't one for battles, but his pure presence could ease a heavy heart. He wished to gaze into Ly's beautiful jade eyes again; to see her face and her perky smile that always brought heat into his cheeks.

He inhaled deeply, closing his eyes. Even the dark that greeted him now, was much more comfortable than the real one. That had some kind of unnatural cold to it, an inexplicable foulness that seemed to emanate from it, poisoning the air around him. He longed to be back in the Fairy Glade, where all life bloomed; back in his own room, where no one could harm him; back in the arms of his mother, where no force in the universe could tear him out from.

Feeling the need to continue, he let his thoughts dissipate for now, but remain in the back of his mind as a silent motivation. He slowly stood up; the shaking in his legs now reduced to a slight quiver. His heart was still beating fast, but no longer paralyzing his entire body. The boy swallowed and went off, hugging the wall again.

The atmosphere of the tunnel didn't ease as he went along, continuing to scare the wits out of him. He felt like the shadows were reaching out for his neck, their stifling gloom strangling the life out of him. His breathing quickened after a few minutes again, faint whimpers involuntarily leaving him. He could feel his gaze in his bones; the way those dreadful eyes were burning him alive.

Salian shivered as he felt a faint wind blowing at him. He couldn't imagine how even a breeze could form so deep, thus it only added to his discomfort and fear. He took a few more steps, nearly clawing into the wall now, his teeth almost chattering. Unable to take it the silent threat behind him anymore, he glanced behind...and wished he never did that.

From the distant end of the tunnel, he thought he could see a huge black mass flowing towards him, the icy wind blowing from exactly that direction. He couldn't even comprehend the shape of the darkness; it seemed like some kind of bloodthirsty monster he had never ever seen in books before, let alone encountered one.

It was clawing into the ground at every lunge with the talons on it's four legs, all four bulkier than the boy's own two. Talons seemed to be spurting from every part of the shadow, most of them cutting huge lines into the tunnel, their screeching sound adding even more to Salian's horror.

The dark creature's sounds echoed throughout, both the loud thumps as it lunged, and the furious yaps it let out while coming closer. The boy's eyes widened, completely frozen by the beast. He gazed right into its face; razor-sharp fangs sticking out from it's jaw. He even thought he could see a crimson fluid dripping from it. But the worst came as he glanced a little more up, and saw its eyes...two sinister, primal and cruel yellow lines as it scowled at its soon-to-be victim, not even a tiny hint of mercy in them.

The monster let out a loud roar, the tunnel itself shaking from its magnitude. The boy fell back, an instinctive scream emitting from his throat, though it couldn't possible rival with the creature's. He quickly got up and started running deeper into the tunnel, not thinking about where, only to get away from it as fast and far away as possible. The beast lunged after him, taking up the chase.

He could her its thumps behind him, coming closer and closer. He tried to be as quick as possible, but the wound he got earlier on his leg, and his overall weakness proved to be too much to be ignored. Right after a few minutes, he could already feel his strength diminishing, while the monster just closed in, its fangs ready to be sunk into his young flesh.

His cries for help only came out as ragged whimpers, even though he already knew that no one would come to his aid. He was alone to be torn to pieces by this creature, left to die in this horrible underworld, so far away from the forests he grew up in, his friends and his mother. He heard the shadow behind him, almost feeling its hot, blood-smelling breath on his nape, setting his hair high up.

The boy was way to horrified now to run with conscious thought, and was trying to push much more speed out of himself as his wounded, jaded body could possibly produce. He crashed into the wall not one time as the tunnel became tighter, while the beast could still easily come through, as if it could shape itself. He let out a roar as he badly grazed his palm while avoiding a crash again. He felt himself going numb, unable to keep up with such a hard strain.

At last, his body betrayed him as his legs seemed to run out from under him. With a loud cry, he fell on the ground, tumbling a few feet, before stopping. Tears of pain and fear ran down his dirty face as he pushed himself onto his back, the creature only a few steps away now. It tensed and jumped, lunging directly at him, the blood spurting from its throat, its huge fangs nearly at his neck.

The boy let out a final scream and closed his eyes shut, curling up completely, giving himself over to the soaring death.
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(( Part Two...sorta.. ))

“...Mommy?” a tiny, nearly crying child-voice squeaked from the small room, sounding afraid. “Mommy!” the cry turned louder, the voice shaking.

“Yes, Sal?” the slightly ajar door opened fully, Shya appearing in the door frame, looking slightly worried. She came right up to the little boy, sitting down on the side of the bed. The features of a five year-old child looked at her with mild fear still abundant in the pair of lambent eyes. “Another nightmare?”

An eager nod was the answer to her question. She leaned closer with a smile, wiping a few small tears off his face. “There, there...” she purred to calm the boy down. “I'm here now.”

Despite the little ball of light she always left next to his bed, he still had quite frequent nightmares. She was becoming worried about him, fearing this might continue later on. Both she and Ranika tried to find out what he was dreaming, but he always forgot most of the dream when he awoke. The two fairies hoped he would shed it off eventually.

The crestfallen boy nearly lunged out from under the covers, enveloping his mother in a tight hug. He grabbed her dark-blue nightgown tightly, for no other reason than to feel she was there, and he was no longer dreaming.

“I couldn't see...nothing...I was alone...you weren't there...it was so dark!” he whimpered, his voice breaking into hiccups from the crying. The child grasped her nightgown tighter, as much as he could with his little hands, sobbing softly on her chest. He put his thumb in his mouth, suckling on it, like he did when he was even smaller.

The fairy embraced him tightly, letting the heat of her body calm him down. “Shh...” she purred into his ear, running her hands through his scruffy, light-brown hair. “I'm here. Nothing will happen to you, as long as you're in my arms.”

Salian continued to whimper and sob, but Shya noticed he was already calming down. “I'm scared to sleep, Mommy...” he muttered, burying his face into her nightgown, nuzzling into her.

She lowered her head to his, her sapphire hair covering both of them like a curtain. The boy stopped whimpering, only sobbing a little bit now. He was enchanted by her hair; he always wanted to play with it when he was smaller, enjoying the soft, silky touch of it.

“Do you want to me to sleep with you?” she purred sweetly. The fairy felt his cheek touch her own, as his sobs slowed down.

“ Pretty please...” he raised his head, gazing into her eyes, his nose and face red from crying, his cheeks all puffed up.

“Alright.” she whispered. The boy let out a light squeak, leaning back in the bed. Shya slid under the covers, lying down beside Salian, tugging both of them in. “Better?” she smiled warmly, reaching back and stroking his back lightly.

The child nod at her again, before planting a kiss on her cheek, a smile appearing on his face. He clung to her tightly, while she set his head on the pillow again. His sadness had already disappeared, giving place to happiness over being with her.

She gazed at him lovingly, playing with the growing locks of his hair. His breathing slowed down, his eyes shutting; even though he seemed quite vivid, Shya knew he was dead tired, especially after a nightmare like that.

“I love you, Mommy...” the boy muttered, his voice trailing off near the end.

“I love you too, you little rascal...” she whispered to her already sleeping son, kissing his cheek. “...my little Salian.”

“...HELP ME!!”


The fairy's eyes fluttered open to see a dark shadow standing above her. Her slowly awakening senses couldn't yet identify it...but from what she could already see, made her gasp. The intruder seemed to be clouded by a veil of darkness, only a pair of red eyes visible. Her eyes widened as she realized just what her assailant was.

Before it could react, she let out a sharp scream, which echoed around the room, and as much as Shya hoped, out into the Council corridors as well. The red eyes seemed to scowl at her, a low growl coming from the creature. She was quickly brought to a teary agony as it stomped down on her arms, a crack sounding at her elbow, the prickling returning with much higher intensity.

Just awakened, weak and pinned to the bed; she was unable defend herself in any form. A sharp blackness materialized in what seemed to be its hand; a look of horror freezing on her face from it. The flaming-red eyes of her attacker left without even the faintest promise of life.

A pack of Teensies suddenly sounded to crowd at the door, trying to open it. Shya's assailant threw a quick glance at the door, probably judging what to do. Deciding in a split second, it released her and exited through the window. The door broke in a moment later, a dozen scared, but determined Teensies flooding in.

They gathered around the trembling fairy, one jumping quickly onto a stool. “Are you hurt?” he asked, looking for any sign of injuries. She blinked for a moment, before realizing he was the one she had met earlier.

Shya shook her head in a quick motion, panting heavily. The Teensie realized that other than being completely horrified, she wasn't hurt in any way, except that her cast seemed to have been broken as her attacker stepped on it. The little blue turned around and gave out a few orders, clapping loudly to hurry them up.

Though there weren't many species who had a stricter hierarchy than them, the other Teensies noticed this wasn't the time to argue over who had a crown and who didn't. When a fairy's life was involved, they forgot everything else, their welfare becoming their top priority.

Having lived in harmony with Polokus' emissaries for countless years, both species developed a mutual respect and concern for the other. It was said that in the earliest days, they were constantly annoyed by the other; the fairies of the Teensies' strange habits, and they because of the formers' love for nature. In the end though, when they had to find a place for the Heart of the World, the two kinds were forced to worked together, and became a great asset to each other.

“Don't worry, you're safe now.” the ancient creature turned back to her, stroking her forehead for a few moments, reminding her of her youth once again. She was still trembling, immensely upset by the attempted murder. “We will pull up a barrier around the room, that'll keep any dark presence away. I swear this won't happen again.”

“Who...or what was...that?” she whimpered, her first coherent words since her awakening.

The Teensie looked away for a moment, sighing. “I have no idea.” he muttered, though obviously thinking hard on an explanation.

That didn't help her upset mood much, though her pants became calmer after a while, her heart rate returning to about normal as well. “It...already attacked me before...” her voice was still slightly shaky. “Just before I...found Murfy.” that made another alerting thought spring in her mind. “Where is he?” she asked, a bad feeling pooling in her.

Though he would had wanted to know more about her first encounter, the Teensie decided to answer her question first. After all, she was the one lying, and interrogating her wouldn't have done much good to her health.

“The greenbottle's being tended to in another chamber. He's pretty well, just very tired. A good night's rest and he'll be back to his old self again.” he patted her shoulder as a slight reassurance.

“What about the others?” the question blurted from her. “Rayman, Ly, Globox...and Sal.” she could barely say her son's name out loud, without the stifling hands of worry grasping her throat again.

The way the Teensie looked away for a moment didn't mean anything good. “We haven't found them yet.” the little one admitted, sighing once again

He could see as her hands suddenly grasped into the sheet, so hard her knuckles turned white. She shut her eyes tight, and the age-old creature could see the line of tears glinting on her eyelashes, threatening to spill any moment. It took her much to suppress the crying, while the Teensie stroked her forehead sympathetically.

“I promised we would find them. I still hold that up.” he stated, even though he knew his words couldn't possibly hope to soothe her maternal worry. “Just give us a little more time...”

She didn't answer him, a tear spilling from her eyes as she turned her head, planting half of her face into the pillow, quivers running all over her. Her chest shook hard from the suppressed sobbing, though a few whimpers did escape from her throat. The fairy was broken apart by the news, having to face the fact that the hope to see her son was decreasing rapidly.

The Teensie sighed, being aware that he should leave her alone for now. He jumped off the stool and walked out the broken door, flicking his little hand as he left. There was a brief flash of light and the door was settled in the frame again, looking like nothing had happened.

A small pack of his kin were standing outside, each having something in their hands, wishing to help or comfort Shya. They looked both surprised and worried to see his careworn expression. He shook his head, instructing them to keep clear of the chamber for now. They nod and left towards the Heart Chamber, leaving the fairy alone to cry.
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Silently stalking through the small tunnel he moved, always staying in the shades, not letting anything spot him, even for a split second. Without a single noise he nearly glided in the air with a speed not many could rival with. From corner to corner he lunged, completely hidden from plain mortal eyes. His eyes glinted in the faint light as he peeked out from his momentary safe-spot to observe his surroundings.

A group of five spiders squelched down the tunnel, following each other. Two of them seemed to be munching something; probably some little critter they've managed to grab hold of. Their antennas dangled down, indicating they weren't paying much attention at the moment. He continued to watch as they went past him without a single commotion.

One of them suddenly glanced back, its antenna jerking, as if it spotted something. Growling in a low voice, it separated from the group, going back to where he was. Acting out of instinct, the beast came right into the shadows, but no matter how it looked, couldn't find anything even remotely close to living. Letting out a short shriek-snicker, it turned around and rejoined the group.

Once they were out of sight, a small figure dropped from the top of the tunnel, onto the ground with a low thump. He stood still for a moment, before he lunged away again, his feet carrying him faster than any likely predatory eyes could follow, the veil of darkness that shadowed the barely lit tunnels covering him perfectly. He stopped before a large rock, eying around for a few moments, listening carefully.

He could feel faint whimpers from behind it, accompanied by desperate pleads to silence the first. The shadowy figure quirked a brow and secured a tight hold of the rock. With a low growl, he pulled hard at it. At first, it didn't move at all, but he wasn't about to give up so soon. It gave up eventually and moved as he pulled it to have access to whatever lied beyond it.

“Ly, please...” Globox muttered, wiping the fairy's torrid forehead with a piece of leftover cloth from her sleeves, still humid from the rain dance he commenced not long ago, to refresh both of them a bit. “They'll hear us...”

Her condition was becoming highly alerting and it broke the glute's heart that the most he could do was trying calm her down somehow. He knew that if she'd remain upset, that'd only make the wound worse. Being the father of hundreds of kids, he already knew a thing or two about injuries...though never as severe as this.

The glute felt even worse from the fact that she was shot while saving his life; he felt guilty of her state, even though he knew he couldn't have done anything. Neither of them expected the sudden attack, especially after she successfully blew the top of the cave on top of the unsuspecting spiders. He still felt a bit scared...but also angered; an emotion that rarely coursed in him. To this day, only once did he feel like this before...when his family was in peril.

He continued to gaze at the writhing form of the young fairy, stroking her silky, dark-blue hair as she winced every few moments, her bushy tail twitching sometimes. Beads of sweat ran formed on her, indicating she might have been having a fever by now. Immense concern beamed from the glute's eyes, nearly shattering inside from having to see her like this.

She was always so full of life, her laughter sounding like tiny bells, as she played with his kids. She loved to entertain the little ones, either by using her species' natural agility, or her rapidly growing powers. He had known her ever since she was just a tiny child, who happened to run right into the large glute, while playing tag.

At the very first moment, she was startled by Globox, who was still freshly wedded back then, nurturing their first dozen kids with his mate, Uglette. Despite being surprised by the twice-as-large glute, she was giggling only a moment later and jumped up to hug him, enjoying the softness of his tummy.

She began to visit them occasionally, playing with his little babies. At first, she always came alone, until one day she also brought a little boy along with her. The child seemed to be scared a tiny bit as she pulled him towards their house, but quickly found his voice, once he got used to the glute family.

Now visiting them together every day, the two became to know them well, the kids always squeaking in excitement when it was time for them to arrive. As they grew, they only came less, but Globox knew that Salian was studying under the Teensies with Ly, and the fairy also had to imbibe the use of the magic that coursed in her veins.

A few years passed and another outside addition came to his family: the limbless wonder, known as Rayman to everyone. He quickly became one of Globox's most trusted friends, his base 'hero-mask', hiding not a stuck-up, exalted loudmouth, but a lively and caring person. He had first met the boy years ago, who was still more of a child back then, even though he had already made the faceless terror, Mr. Dark flee, on a perfectly uneventful day.

He was taking a morning swim near Clearleaf Falls, when he noticed the limbless walking on a narrow branch, high above the water. He seemed to know what he was doing, but the glute noticed that some of his steps were in fact, uneasy. Suddenly, he juddered in the air, looking far too frightened all of a sudden to be just acting.

Globox didn't wait and swam towards the limbless, faster than most fishes. His kind was home both in the water and on land. Rayman waved his hands in circles, trying to regain his rapidly failing balance. His feet lost the branch from under them, and the boy fell screaming into the river.

The glute realized early that the limbless couldn't swim, his fear and quick kicking further proving this hunch. Rayman screamed and tried to keep himself up for a few moments, before sinking. Globox doubled his pace and swam to the spot where he sank, diving after him. For a moment, he couldn't find him, but noticed his floating form soon enough.

In less than a minute they were already out on the bank of the river. A rather forceful slap on the back assured that the limbless would cough up any remaining water in him. Rayman stopped coughing after a few moments, and gazed at Globox with immense gratitude in his eyes.

From that moment, the limbless had been one of his most trustworthy friends, always there whenever the glute needed him, if not more than just to talk. The limbless visited him every single day, and there was even a few extra blankets, just for him. Knowing Rayman's free nature, his darling Uglette always left a little food outside, if the limbless happened to stroll by during the night.

As strange as it was, all three of them felt like they we not only his friends...but also his kids too. He watched Rayman grow from a small, but determined boy, into a man of not much higher stature, but a spirit to rival with giants. He observed how the scared little boy aged into a compassionate young man, who was near identical to the fairies in heart and appearance. He had also seen the playful little girl who bumped into him, blossoming into a beautiful, perky fairy, a pride to her whole kind.

He flinched as he suddenly heard the large stone that covered them being shoved aside, he pitched up his visage from Ly, gazing at the entrance to the small cove. A shadowy figure jumped down, his form still mostly hidden in the dark. Globox began to shiver from the instinctive fear, backing up to the wall, holding Ly tightly in his hands.

“Stop...” he whimpered. “If you come any closer, I'll...” he couldn't finish the threat, not knowing how. The only thing he did know, was that if the sudden intruder had tried to hurt the fairy, he wouldn't watch it idly.

He stepped out of the shadows and let the very faintest light shine on his face. The two tufts of blondish hair; the large nose; the pair of vivid and determined blue eyes and the lack of any limbs, clearly gave the newcomer's identity away.

“Rayman!” Globox called, a smile briefly appearing on his face.

The limbless boy was sporting a bright look of appreciation. He had to admit, the glute's sudden spurt of courage surprised him, but in a good way. He was glad to see his friend could muster up even this little courage. During his short reconnaissance, he had been worried non-stop about the two, fearing that the little cove he found and the rock he used to block the entrance with, wouldn't be enough to shield them from attacks.

As the glute sat back in the middle of the cove, Rayman patted his shoulder lightly with a smile, only throwing a glance at Ly after that. His expression suddenly turned serious and he immediately lowered himself, also touching her forehead. The result only upset him even more, the fairy's condition not exactly the brightest.

The fairy was still writhing in Globox's arms, beads of sweat quickly forming on her forehead over and over again. She didn't seem to be conscious, but even in her sleep she was tormented, her closed, but twitching eyes indicating that even more. Her face winced every few moments, making it hard in earnest to determine whether this was from the pain or whatever she was dreaming.

“How long has she been like this?” he spoke up, keeping his voice low.

“About the last ten minutes.” the glute was definitely at least as worried about her as the limbless. “You don't think-”

“No. If it was the splinter-venom, she'd be dead already, fairy or not.” the boy guessed his fear. “It's just the wound...I think she's having a hard time coping with it.” he took a short moment to peek under the bandage; luckily, even though it still looked bad, there was still no sign of infection.

Though he knew she needed rest badly, he couldn't let her be tortured any more. He gently nudged her limp arm, lightly patting her heated cheeks, which were giving a pretty nasty contrast to her vivid green lips. The fairy stirred in her tainted sleep, and her eyes began to open slowly.

Her normally gleeful green orbs looked somewhat blank, indicating she couldn't exactly recognize her surroundings just yet. Even Rayman's face was more of a blur to her, only clearing out after a few painful moments of realization. She was immediately assaulted by a huge wave of agony from her thigh, making her bite into her lower lip so hard she managed to draw blood from it.

The taste of blood made her stomach twist, a heavy feeling of nausea striking her. like a lightning bolt. She tried to spit the body fluid out immediately, knowing for sure that if she swallowed it, she wouldn't be able to hold back her already massively revolting insides. Regardless the valiant effort, she couldn't even find the strength to actually open her mouth to do so. Having no other choice and taking advantage of the face that her head was sideways, she let her blood simply leak out through her lips, to run down her face.

Ly suddenly felt Rayman's hand gently fondle her face, her precious crimson fluid running bathing his fingers in red. His touch, together with Globox holding made her feel safe, protected, cared for, even in this hellhole...giving her that little bit of power she needed so much. She spat out the remaining blood in her mouth, and let the limbless turn her head so she gazed at the top of the cove.

A weak sob came from her, the feeling of being so pathetic that she couldn't even move her head without help. For all, she should have been able to take much more, having already endured a lot of pain during her young life. Rayman continued to fondle her face, until she promptly nuzzled his palm, salty tears flowing down her face.

“Shh...” he murmured ever-so-gently. “It's alright, Ly...” he knew exactly how upset she was. After being friends for so many years, he could guess her thoughts and feelings, sometimes even before she could identify them.

She tried to suppress her sobs, resulting in soft, teary hiccups. Rayman let her nuzzle his hand for the longest time, purring soft words to her so she would calm down. Globox watched silently, knowing if anyone, the limbless could achieve miracles. She continued to cry for a short while, until even the quivering in her shoulders stopped. She slowly managed to move her head, rising from his palm, her face all flustered.

“How are you feeling?” he asked, beaming at her with those two battle-worn, determined, but forever compassionate orbs.

“...better...” she muttered, though this was only half-true. The pain from her wound was still powerful, tormenting her every conscious moment. Her forehead cooled a bit, but it was still warmer than it should had been. She didn't know exactly why, but the lie made her want to look away from him. She felt as if he could spot through her every lie, seeing her very soul. “...any sign of Salian?” she steered from her condition, to another worrisome topic.

“Nothing.” the limbless sighed. He knew he was lying...she had always been a bad liar, mostly due to her kin's honest nature, but decided not to give word to it. Globox looked rather worried, while Ly's heart sank yet again. “I covered a pretty large ground, but couldn't see him anywhere. He's probably still in the upper tunnels.”

“...either that or he's-” the fairy tried to finish what she wanted to say, but couldn't say that word out loud. She wished for nothing more than to see the boy again, escape from this dreaded place and return home, to the forests she loved so much...and be back home with Betilla and the other fairies.

“Don't worry, I promise we'll find him.” Rayman's expression looked dead serious, all the way to the last word.

Though she wasn't as sure of this as the limbless, she did trust his promise. He never went back on one before, especially when it considered a life, and she knew the two were like brothers. But still, the doubt was there, biting into her insides with its venomous fangs, trying to poison her every hope.

“Ly, what's wrong?” he asked, being able to look over her general worry, only to see something of a much deeper concern inside.

She grew flustered yet again, slightly resenting the feeling of being so completely open to him. She knew he was worried as well, but it still felt a bit upsetting to be such an open book. But that was Rayman...someone who could see through the lies and barriers of his friends, seeing only the true thoughts and feelings under.

“It's...I...in my dream...I thought I could see him for a moment.” she muttered, struggling with the words a bit as she attempted to be more descriptive. “I don't remember much...mainly just several emotions. He was scared at first...then sad as well...and suddenly horrified. I could hear huge steps...and sounds like something scratching...and a scream.” she winced as her head throbbed from the strain.

Rayman heaved a tired sigh, looking even more concerned than before. “Are you sure there was nothing else? Someone, or something you could identify?” a negative reply followed his question. The limbless reached back and rubbed the back of his head; this was one of his usual traits when faced with trouble he couldn't solve at once.

He had known the fairy for a long enough time to learn that he should never leave her words without notice, regardless the circumstances. He still remembered the way she communicated mentally with him during the Pirate invasion, thus he knew she was able of forming various mental bonds, most of the times even without intention.

They realized...or more likely, formed their connection just a few weeks before the cold-hearted monsters assaulted the planet. Neither of them suspected anything about it was discovered out of pure coincidence, though on an already quite eventful day.

The fairy was busy meditating in the middle of a clearing, emptying her mind. She could only try to do so very slowly, grumbling loudly inside, making it even harder. She knew that for fairies it was essential to learn the art of meditation, but currently, she was nowhere near wanting. She was still in a playful mood from earlier that day, especially after having quite a few contests she and her friends made up to avoid boredom from stalking them.

It consisted of a lot of randomly made up events, from swimming, through running, all the way to tree-climbing. Since Globox wasn't much for an athlete, even in his younger days, and the knew well Murfy would had cheated all the time, only she, Rayman and Salian competed, while the glute acted mainly as a referee, and the greenbottle...well...like a true critic.

She jauntily beat the two in running, even though Salian proved to be a chase at some points. Still, her fairy-agility made her the true victor there. It didn't matter how fast the two boys chased her, she was just too much accustomed to the forest to lose. With perfect grace, she evaded every single obstacle, ending up at the finishing line long before the other two.

The shooting contest ended with Rayman's doubtless victory, who dispatched every single target with perfect ease in mere moments, so much that both she and Salian were completely astounded. There was something in the limbless' moves that seemed to suggest he was of raw power, carefully shaped into a gentle young boy.

He didn't even use his newfound power to form powerful spheres of pure energy, and still pummeled them into the ground...though the match was uneven, since one of them didn't have any ability at all. Still, the boy found his way as well, throwing pebbles instead of fists, or balls of energy. And even though he had no chance at all, he still laughed along with them throughout the entire contest.

In ways of tree-climbing, she once again ruled the field; her agility, combined with her speed proving to be way too much to beat for the other two. She was waving at them from the top in less than a minute, while Murfy nagged the boys all the way up. Rayman only scored second place there, using his fists to shoot and grab onto any branches that were too far for him to reach. Salian came up last, earning a handful of light scoffs from Ray, but a reassuring kiss on the cheek from her, making him pose in a crimson blush, much to her amusement.

Swimming was surprising to the fairy though. She was marveled to see that Sal could not only stand up to her in this event, but proved to be quite a challenge. They were cheek by jowl all the way towards the designated finish, so much that in the end, even Globox couldn't decide which one of them won. The majority of his kids were frolicking around them now, cheering Sal and Ly, the tie-winners of the event.

Poor Rayman on the other hand, needed to be helped out of the water, having only made about a few meters, before nearly drowning. He got a nasty scold from the Globox, and had to promise again to take swimming lessons from his kids, after all the times he skipped this before. His smug grin after the glute finished arguing with him though, made it probable that he would skip delay this promise once again.

By using a few sticks, they even held a brief sword-fighting contest as well. In contrast to her earlier victories, the fairy failed miserably here, not really getting the hang of the quick attacks, parries and ripostes which were needed to be used here, until the very end. She was a bit frustrated to see quite magnificent duels between Rayman and Salian though; she was definite they've must have already did this a lot of times before. After an hour, and quite a lot of stings and bruises later which none of them seemed to mind though, the limbless was declared victor, followed by the boy, and finally the fairy.

Still, at the end of the long line of contests, with Ly being the one who won the most, she was announced as the champion of the competition. She stood up on a stump and bowed at her friends and the glute family, giggling while Globox put a wicker girdle his daughters had made for the victor, around her neck, to mark that she won.

The next moment, she let out a short yelp as she was picked up by the glute and placed onto the crowd of the little glutes. She couldn't even squeak, before the kids started taking her, Rayman and Salian on their shoulders, carrying them all the way to the Council, while announcing the winner and the competitors to everyone they've passed.

The memories made her giggle yet again, breaking her concentration. She sighed, trying to ease herself back again. 'Why do I have to do this? I'd rather play with the others, instead of sitting here, doing nothing!' she grumbled inside. Had Betilla been there, the Elder fairy would have probably let her skip the practice, but for her misfortune, she wasn't around the Council at that time, thus forcing her to obey her sisters.

Just as she finally slipped into meditation once again, the fairy was suddenly knocked over and fell flat on the ground with a sharp cry. She raised her head and noticed Rayman on top of her, looking a bit dazed as well. She scowled at the limbless and glared at him, showering him with scolds inside.

The limbless suddenly sobered, recoiling as if he was shot. He fell back, gazing at her with wide eyes. Salian had arrived as well; the two were probably playing tag, and Rayman wasn't looking.

“How did you do that?” Rayman's jaw dropped slightly.

“Do what?” the fairy looked back at him quite confused. She couldn't understand his sudden astonishment.

“Shout without talking!” the limbless jumped to his feet and helped her up, seeming very excited, while Sal was trying to figure out what was going on at all. “I could hear you, but your lips weren't moving!”

The fairy just gazed at him dumbfounded, not really getting it. “I didn't do anything.” she shrugged, only making Salian's expression even more confused, while a huge grin appeared on Rayman's face.

“Just like that!” he was getting more and more excited. “You're talking right into my head!”

At this point, Ly turned slightly pale, upset by the sudden event. She sat down, blushing from the revelation. “I'm sorry...I don't know...I'll fix it...” she muttered quickly, only realizing now that she really was talking without any visible sign.

“Hey...” Ray sat down next to her, resting a hand on the confused and ashamed fairy's shoulder. “I don't mind. At least, whenever there's trouble, or you just wish to talk to someone, you can contact me.” he gave her that reassuring smile he was well known for.

The girl calmed down slowly, returning the smile, while Salian sat down next to them, utterly befuddled by their behavior. “Is everything alright?” he asked gently.

The limbless and the fairy gazed at each other, before both burst out in laughter, and began to explain what just happened to the boy, Ly once again speaking audibly.


“Ray?” he felt someone nudge his hand, urging him to return to this world.

The limbless shook his head, the memory going back into the depths of his mind, but the feelings he had from it still vivid. “I'm okay...” he muttered, sporting the very shadow of a smile. “Just...a passing thought.”

Both Globox and Ly seemed to be confused by his sudden change of expression, but didn't speak of it. The fairy seemed better than a few minutes ago; making the iron-hand of worry ease its hold on his insides. He shook his head, getting rid of the memories for now, quickly recalling what she had said last...which managed to break his semi-happy mood pretty much, the acidic touch of worry eating him from the inside.

“A scream...” he muttered, his mind returning to the point where he left the boy, following the wild idea he had. Was it really the right thing to do? I lured the spiders away, saved Ly and Globox...but what if this will cost his life? What if I just exchanged two friends for one? How would I stand up to Shya and tell her that I'd left her son to die alone?

He clutched his head for the longest time, the thoughts exploding like bombs inside. If he dies, that'll be my fault, and my fault alone. What in Polokus' name could have happened to him? Why did Dark reappear now, of all the times...and why does he torture Sal at all? Why the scream? Fury nearly bursting from him, he punched into the ground with great force, accompanied by a low growl, leaving a large dent in the ground.

Ly suspected what he might had been thinking, but didn't look into his mind. She could feel the wind of his raging emotions even without the connection they shared. Though she guessed she could use their mental link to learn what ran through his mind, it would have been a rude intrusion into his privacy, and she trusted and respected him much more than to do so.

She knew it had to be something highly worrisome about Salian...she had rarely seen Rayman get so upset, and it never meant good. It usually indicated that even he didn't know what his next step should be, so none of his friends would get hurt. That was the curse of being a hero...the haunting thought that he might not be able to help those who stand closest to him.

Neither she or Globox spoke a word as the limbless continued to gaze at the ground for the longest time, decisions and ideas chasing around in his mind. Both knew it was up to him to decide what to do, being the only one who knew something about the caves. Finally he looked up, his eyes looking kind of tired, but more determined than ever.

“We need to get going.” he stated, his voice a bit more stern than he wanted. “We have to find Sal before something might happen to him.” he left out the fact how Dark tormented his dreams, not wanting to further upset his friends, especially Ly. “After he's back with us, I'll guide as out. We should go fast...I have a feeling we haven't seen everything this place could throw at us, yet.” he sighed.

Globox started slightly shivering again; he had heard stories about the vicious creature that ruled these underground caverns, and he would had given everything to pass that meeting. As for Ly, she didn't know much about the age-old scorpion lurking here either, let alone seen him. Rayman on the other hand felt like all those years ago, when he first faced Mr. Dark and had to travel through the cave-system of the blood-thirsty monster. He had bested him back then, but it was a very narrow combat.

Skops was perfectly invincible to him, his fists springing down his hard body, not even near powerful enough to cause any harm to his thick shell. He didn't know if he'd be strong enough now, even with his energy spheres...and with one friend out of sight, one unable to fight, and the third one badly wounded, he didn't want to take any chances. It was best if they avoided any contact with the ancient monster.

The limbless sighed once more, and exited the cove that served as their short-lived sanctuary. He leaned down and took Ly in his hands for a moment to allow Globox to climb out as well. The fairy seemed to be reasonably well for her condition, her consciousness no longer slipping. Rayman held her carefully, not even touching near the wound, letting the glute take her into his arms again, once he got out.

“Follow me...” Rayman muttered, moving forward in a pace that was suitable for Globox too. Whether they were going to save their fourth friend, or meet their untimely demise, he couldn't predict...he just knew that if that was to happen, his friends would be harmed only after he was already frozen in his blood.
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He didn't know what had just happened. He expected to feel an earth-shattering agony, a searing pain as the fangs effortlessly bit through even his bones. He thought he would be thrown around like a weightless rag doll, his blood splatting around, his flesh being torn to shreds. Despite how he was supposed to be on the verge of decay, left to some unholy predator of the shadows, he couldn't feel anything.

He was sure he would see the great light that was supposed to greet the dead, the feeling of passing on into a world that was beyond any power. A world he had yet to see, since it required something he thought wouldn't come for a long time. A phase he guessed not even Polokus himself could stir, with all of his might.

And yet, it didn't feel any different...it felt like he was simply lying on the ground. He slowly opened his eyes, blinking a few. A milky-white mist seemed to cover everything around him, leaving him alone in a huge field of complete emptiness. At first, he couldn't even understand what happened, his last memory being as the shadow creature lunged at him.

Without a noise, he uncurled and rose into a semi-lying position, his upper-body resting on his elbows. He shook his head, banishing his slightly dazed state...but the scenery still didn't turn back. He was starting to panic, the silent threat this place emanated worse than the darkness of the tunnels.

“Hello!” he cried into the mist, though he didn't much hope for an answer. “What is this place?” he queried, his heartbeat increasing, chills running down his spine from the fear.

He listened for long minutes, but there was no answer. Suddenly, a loud whir reached his ears, although he couldn't identify the source. The boy glanced around quickly, trying to locate the sound. He attempted to rise onto his feet, to go after it, if needed.

He never got to that part though. Just as he was about to rise, the source of the swirl revealed itself...and proved to be something he least expected. A pitch-black shadow appeared from nowhere, flowing towards him. Salian only had time for a short gasp as the living darkness crashed into him.

It's velocity was more than enough to send the boy flying into the air. He couldn't judge how high he was, but it definitely more than his height. He let out a scream as he soared into the mist, ending up splatting on the ground as his short-live aerial excursion ended, tumbling nearly as much as he flew. The impact left him with a thoroughly sore body, and rendered him unable to raise himself.

With a pained whimper, he rolled on his stomach, panting heavily. He lied there for a few minutes, gathering whatever strength he still had left. Taking a long, deep breath, he attempted ease himself into a sitting position. He didn't even make it to near that however. The whir roared up again, and a shade slammed into him once more.

This one had either less power than the one before, or he was in a better position, but he only flew a little, before plummeting into the ground once more. It took him even longer this time to come to, silent quivers running through him from both the shock and the pain. His body hurt terribly by now, and he couldn't even do so much as roll on his back.

He lied there for an even longer time than before, unable to move himself. The pain wasn't sharp like most normal injuries, but instead, blunt and pulsing continuously, tormenting him without halt. He trembled yet again, feeling he would lose the fight for his consciousness soon enough.

“Ray...” he whimpered, the name also invoking the silent ache that coursed around inside his soul. “Ly...Globox...anyone....please...don't leave me alone here...” he promptly pleaded out into the nothing that surrounded him.

“Your friends won't help you.” a cold voice echoed around, seemingly tearing through the mist altogether.

A tidal wave of panic washed over the boy as he recognized the voice as the same that had been torturing his every moment since they were banished into these infernal caves. Using every last batch of power he had left, he tried to rise, to run away, to flee. Deep inside, he already knew he couldn't escape, but the primal instinct dominated over his thoughts right now.

He managed to raise himself first into sitting, then as quickly as possible into standing as well. He only managed to stumble a few steps though, before falling back on the ground again. He was just far too worn to run, to try and hide from the monstrosity he knew would appear shortly. The boy only had time for a few quick pants, as a shade gripped him, and pulled him up into the air, setting him into a near vertical form.

The boy struggled for a few moments before realizing it was a futile effort. He hung his head, and closed his eyes, the last thing he wanted was to face the creature that haunted him since the overture of his and his friends' predicament. He suddenly whipped his head up, screaming, a burning pain stinging in his side.

Through watery eyes, he could see as the foul entity pulled back his hand, a small blade in his hands, made out of pure darkness. He could see his own young, crimson blood slowly flowing down the darkness. The next moment, it vanished from sight and he was once again staring into those two dreadful yellow orbs he feared to see, not even the faintest promise of salvation in them.

“You can't escape from me...” he hissed, his voice charring his ear like molten lava, nearly burning his mind out. “I'm able to see you anywhere you go...anywhere you hide...I'm there as well.” he glided to his side, his presence so close making the boy's hair rise, his teeth chattering. “In every corner...every tiny shadow...I'm watching you.” he whispered right into his ear.

His heart was beating wildly in his chest, his mind screaming at him to run, hide, escape, plead...to do anything, just so this dark creature would be as far away from him as possible. Any attempt for him to speak though, only came out as weak whimpers, nearly inaudible even for the cloaked mage beside him.

“ Pathetic.” he hissed, leaning back. Before Salian could react in any way, the shadow that held him suspended in the air squeezed hard, nearly shattering his rib cage that instant. The boy bit his lower lip, getting crushed slowly. “Weak...inferior...worthless...” the shadowed one continued, the coil squeezing at every word.

Tears were beginning to spill from his eyes, the pain he was experiencing much too great for his young, still fragile body. He was definite that the shade had already broken his chest completely, though the pain wasn't sharp enough. No...Dark knew exactly what he was doing ,purposely leaving him alive for the most possible time, killing him only slowly.

“ Please...” he whimpered, on the border of sobbing now. “Why...me? Why are you...doing this to me?” he nearly cried now, only holding back because of the fear that he'd only punish him even more.

“...why?” his voice was like dripping acid, burning the skin off him. He flowed right up to him again, glaring at the boy. Salian had no choice but to gaze into the two inhumanly yellow flames beaming at him, his head nearly splitting apart. “You truly wish to know?” he hissed, his breath cold enough to freeze the tears running down his face.

The boy suddenly felt the shadow shifting around him, grasping his legs and jerking his back. He could take it for a few moments before it pulled enough for it to nearly snap. As he was about to let loose a cry of pain, he felt something sharp poking near his spine, though not piercing into him yet. He suppressed the urge to squirm, overwhelming panic taking over him as he gazed at the mage with all the horror his eyes could reflect.

“You have no true idea what an abomination you are.” he began, leaving him in that pose for now. “So many things you don't know about yourself...you were raised like a fairy, but in reality, you're something much worse than them.” the boy couldn't do much but listen, his words making him increasingly confused.

“You're something this world has never seen before...something that should have never been found, instead, destroyed upon discovered.” the shadowed one continued. “You will be the death of everyone...and the beginning that has yet to come, even less awaited.” the boy was completely dumbfounded by now, but getting more and more upset by his words. He had no idea what the mage was talking about.

“I'm here to show you just what you are.” he was slightly amused to see how the boy tried to squirm away, pure, primal fear in his eyes, as a black mass flowed around his hands, “I can't fight against what must come to pass...your future is already set, what must happen is inevitable. Thus, I will have to suffice...with your past.”

With that, Dark lunged forward, digging his hand deep into the boy's chest, at the same time as the spike tore into his back. Salian screamed in pure agony, sure he would die in a matter of seconds...no one could take such pain, and he was still more of a child than a fully-grown man. Tears streamed from his eyes from the double attack, as this whole misty world faded before his eyes.


He landed on the ground with a loud crash, his body aching all over. He was panting wildly, trembling all. He couldn't think straight, his nerves still igniting reactions to the pain he felt a moment ago. He grasped his chest, but there was no wound there at all...even though as he checked further, he found a slight gash on his side; the spot where Dark tore into him.

Salian turned on his back, his vision fading slightly. Fear was still abundant in him...he truly thought the dark mage would kill him there. He let out a short hiss, the scar on his elbow burning for a moment. Planting his hands on his face, he let out the sobs that wished to be freed from inside him. He couldn't take it anymore...he knew he couldn't bear another like this.

Regardless what happened, he calmed down a bit fairly soon, thinking about what Mr. Dark had said. What did he mean by my past? Worry charred his insides, fearing for everything and everyone he knew. Why is he doing this to me at all? I've never even seen him before! What's this all got to do with me?

So many questions he didn't know the answer for...so many threats he had to face...and still, one thing bugged him more than anything. 'Raised like a fairy?' But...why wouldn't I be raised as one? I'm a fairy's son! He shook his head again, trying to get rid of the thought. ...or am I? Why haven't I've ever seen fairies like me?

The thoughts unsettled him at least as much as the vision, since this was tugging at the very foundation of his existence. He always believed he was the son of Shya, even though he'd never seen any fairies that resembled him. He had never seen male fairies, like himself. Getting frustrated over the fact that he couldn't understand it, he slammed down with his fist.

He suddenly felt something sharp poke his knuckled as he hit the ground...or whatever was on the ground. The boy glanced at his side, and went pale that second. Scattered around him, were the skeletons of several fallen creatures, only their yellow bones left of them. Salian jumped to his feet and backed up to the wall, shaking in every part of his body, yet again.

What...what happened here?
He glanced around, noticing that the skeletons came in many different forms...some even faintly reminding him of Teensies, for instance. Nausea crawled around the boy, and he had to kneel down, trying not suppress the retch. He felt sick beyond word, having never seen such a sight before.

He stumbled onto his feet again slowly, his insides still unstable. He didn't know what to do, only that he wanted to get as far away as possible. He was about to scurry out the cave, when a large bluster made him stop in his tracks. In the faint light, he could see the shadow of something near the cave...something huge!

He took a few steps back, but ended up tripping in a skeleton, falling on his back. The shadow flinched and seemed to come closer, getting bigger and bigger. The boy screamed and jumped up, running to the other exit, only to realize whatever monster this was, fooled him perfectly. The last thing Salian could see was a huge tail hurling at him, before the world went black before his eyes.
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Re: Path To Divinity

Post by Limely »

I've read up to the first part of this chapter, and I must say it is really quite dark and beautiful. It keeps me excited, and it's a bit frightening too. Really intense. Keep up the excellent work.
I'll read next part of this chapter tomorrow. ;3
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