The You Game!

[Tings ffs]

Well, that was my point actually, but I haven't really read the fanfic so I wouldn't know if it was meant like that or not.

[Shawn]

.....crap.

Yeah, I see what you're talking about. I better fix it.

[Tings ffs]

Or maybe you could move the Sun :D

[Shawn]

That's how I'm fixing it. :)

[Shawn]

Fixed. Better?

[Limely]

No. Place the sun higher up.

No seriously.

[Tings ffs]

Oh also, I don't like one thing about it, I'd cut the bottom away cos it kinda ruins it compositionally in my opinion... Maybe ask Limely for advice here though

[Limely]

Pff like I'm any better than you at that kinda stuff.

I agree. More sky and less ground'll make it look more epic. :0

[Tings ffs]

Pff like I'm any better than you at that kinda stuff.

I agree. More sky and less ground'll make it look more epic. :0

I'm really boon at art though, the only thing I can draw is a cube.
I remember practicing airbrushing in photoshop but I failed like this:

[Limely]

I might be able to draw but I'm absolutely not good at composing my pictures. It's something I hope I'll get help with at that school...

< is not respecting the game. D:

[Shawn]

Uh, sure.



This any better?

Also, I never got an opinion on this one:

[Tings ffs]

O_____O

[Shawn]

.......fix it again?

[Tings ffs]

I'd make the sun smaller and maybe cut off the right side of it so that the ground doesnt just "end". Because it's looking as if he's about to jump off a cliff because he can't stand the heat anymore tbh.

But yeah, getting there. :D

[Limely]

There is not enough naked people. Naked people would really spice up the composition.

(Basically I had nothing to say that hasn't been said already)

[Tings ffs]

There is not enough naked people. Naked people would really spice up the composition.

Chicks then. >:-P

[Shawn]

I'm just gonna leave it alone.

....now......how about the other picture?

(ps, here's where all the others are being posted: http://forums.ubi.com/eve/forums/a/tpc/ ... 089756/p/3 )

[Tings ffs]

RZ doesn't load :S

(what a surprise)

[Shawn]

Does it load......................................now?

[Tings ffs]

Very slowly... but yeah it does.

Well, I'll check them tomorrow, I'm quite tired now, I'll go to bed.