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Re: Fanfic: The Dark Team
Posted: Tue Dec 30, 2003 8:55 pm
by Gigaman
But Ly is missed at Chapter 2
Re: Fanfic: The Dark Team
Posted: Tue Dec 30, 2003 9:00 pm
by The Knocker
Gigaman wrote:But Ly is missed at Chapter 2
Yes, that is cool! Will she come back later?
Re: Fanfic: The Dark Team
Posted: Tue Dec 30, 2003 9:02 pm
by Gigaman
That cannot i say

Re: Fanfic: The Dark Team
Posted: Tue Dec 30, 2003 9:06 pm
by The Knocker
You do mystirious too

Re: Fanfic: The Dark Team
Posted: Tue Dec 30, 2003 9:07 pm
by Gigaman
He is missed and maybe all come back maybe come back maybe died maybe not died
Re: Fanfic: The Dark Team
Posted: Tue Dec 30, 2003 9:08 pm
by The Knocker
Gigaman wrote:He is missed and maybe all come back maybe come back maybe died maybe not died
You mean she

They die too?

Re: Fanfic: The Dark Team
Posted: Tue Dec 30, 2003 9:08 pm
by Gigaman
Can but it is not cruel fanfic
Re: Fanfic: The Dark Team
Posted: Tue Dec 30, 2003 9:09 pm
by The Knocker
Gigaman wrote:Can but it is not cruel fanfic
Like your other, in your own forum?

Re: Fanfic: The Dark Team
Posted: Tue Dec 30, 2003 9:11 pm
by Gigaman
It is Short

Re: Fanfic: The Dark Team
Posted: Tue Dec 30, 2003 9:13 pm
by The Knocker
But is it a topic worth?
Re: Fanfic: The Dark Team
Posted: Tue Dec 30, 2003 9:17 pm
by Gigaman
I write short chapter's

Re: Fanfic: The Dark Team
Posted: Tue Dec 30, 2003 9:33 pm
by PhoenixG
Mesa move this to other forum

Re: Fanfic: The Dark Team
Posted: Tue Dec 30, 2003 11:11 pm
by Gigaman
Good forum to place it i don't think i could post it here
Re: Fanfic: The Dark Team
Posted: Tue Dec 30, 2003 11:13 pm
by Renny Spanky
Hmm. Well, it's a tad better. Still horrendous, but better. I get the idea behind it but could you please refrain from using emoticons and saying "fuck you" and "shit" and other cuss words without even knowing what they mean?
Re: Fanfic: The Dark Team
Posted: Tue Dec 30, 2003 11:14 pm
by Gigaman
That with F*** you made TK
Re: Fanfic: The Dark Team
Posted: Tue Dec 30, 2003 11:19 pm
by Renny Spanky
Well, anyway *ignores Gigaman's jibberish*, cuss words are just going to make it worst. Using words like "shit" and "fuck" every once in a while is ok, but you're just pushing it.
Re: Fanfic: The Dark Team
Posted: Tue Dec 30, 2003 11:21 pm
by Gigaman
Renny Spanky wrote:Well, anyway *ignores Gigaman's jibberish*, cuss words are just going to make it worst. Using words like "shit" and "fuck" every once in a while is ok, but you're just pushing it.
We don't talking about that we talking about what do you think about the fanfic
Re: Fanfic: The Dark Team
Posted: Tue Dec 30, 2003 11:21 pm
by Renny Spanky
It's still utter crap.
Re: Fanfic: The Dark Team
Posted: Tue Dec 30, 2003 11:32 pm
by Gigaman
Re: Fanfic: The Dark Team
Posted: Tue Dec 30, 2003 11:33 pm
by Renny Spanky
But it IS CRAP! IT'S CRAP! Not even Einstein could ever read that, it's incomprehendible jibberish! It so is! Crap, I tell ya, crap.
...but, what are you going to do to me? OH I AM SO SCARED!!!!
