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Re: Rayman: Human Flaws (Volume 1)
Posted: Sat Jul 26, 2008 9:22 pm
by Termonaptir
Beebop wrote:I will read it at some point, but it will take like a day or a week

It shouldn't take you THAT long.

Re: Rayman: Human Flaws (Volume 1)
Posted: Sat Jul 26, 2008 9:26 pm
by Luckster
Could take a while for some people.
Re: Rayman: Human Flaws (Volume 1)
Posted: Sat Jul 26, 2008 9:30 pm
by Termonaptir
It took me over a half-hour to read those two sections. I'll probably start on Chapter 3 tomorrow or so.
But like you said earlier - have you guys ever seen Zay's Path to Divinity or Rayfan's Piranha (Although she doesn't have it posted here. Obviously, since she isn't a member.)? Man, those are long. XD But all of them are an enjoyable read, including Human Flaws.
Re: Rayman: Human Flaws (Volume 1)
Posted: Sat Jul 26, 2008 9:54 pm
by Luckster
Lotta thought are put into the fanfics Zay-el, Rayfan, and I all make. That way, they're perfectly enjoyable.
Re: Rayman: Human Flaws (Volume 1)
Posted: Sun Jul 27, 2008 3:39 pm
by Xenon
It's a fantastic fanfic, and a joy to read. I've finished chapter one and will begin reading chapter 2 this evening

Re: Rayman: Human Flaws (Volume 1)
Posted: Sun Jul 27, 2008 5:36 pm
by El Dango
Luckster wrote:Lotta thought are put into the fanfics Zay-el, Rayfan, and I all make. That way, they're perfectly enjoyable.
But the chapters are too long. I almost have trouble reading HC's 'Items of Power'.

Re: Rayman: Human Flaws (Volume 1)
Posted: Sun Jul 27, 2008 9:09 pm
by Luckster
Too long?? I don't think so...
Re: Rayman: Human Flaws (Volume 1)
Posted: Sun Jul 27, 2008 9:16 pm
by El Dango
But i do, which is bad for you, since it means one fan less.
Re: Rayman: Human Flaws (Volume 1)
Posted: Sun Jul 27, 2008 9:17 pm
by Luckster
ouch, that's kinda mean. It's like telling a great novel writer you won't read their book because it doesn't have pictures in it.
Re: Rayman: Human Flaws (Volume 1)
Posted: Sun Jul 27, 2008 10:08 pm
by El Dango
Great novell writer? Sounds like there's someone here who likes herself a little too much.

Re: Rayman: Human Flaws (Volume 1)
Posted: Sun Jul 27, 2008 10:24 pm
by Luckster
I'm just making a comparison. And I am working on a novel.
Re: Rayman: Human Flaws (Volume 1)
Posted: Mon Jul 28, 2008 6:27 am
by Phoenixan
She's just saying that one shouldn't be quite so picky on reading a lot of text. Personally, I don't like reading from a computer monitor too often, so I sometimes print off pages for reading (from various things, including fanfiction).
Anyway, I think this is a lot better than the comic series in some ways.
Re: Rayman: Human Flaws (Volume 1)
Posted: Mon Jul 28, 2008 7:52 am
by Henchman1028
There should be a sequel, where the Robo-Pirates manage to get into the real world, and Rayman has to stop them before they destroy it.
Re: Rayman: Human Flaws (Volume 1)
Posted: Mon Jul 28, 2008 7:56 am
by Limely
El Dango wrote:Luckster wrote:Lotta thought are put into the fanfics Zay-el, Rayfan, and I all make. That way, they're perfectly enjoyable.
But the chapters are too long. I almost have trouble reading HC's 'Items of Power'.

In which case I feel bad for you, because those chapters are short. I think you're just being lazy.
Re: Rayman: Human Flaws (Volume 1)
Posted: Mon Jul 28, 2008 10:22 am
by Holy Crap
I know, i write those chapters in 10 minutes. I think it through before hand, of course.
Re: Rayman: Human Flaws (Volume 1)
Posted: Mon Jul 28, 2008 2:50 pm
by El Dango
Limely wrote:El Dango wrote:Luckster wrote:Lotta thought are put into the fanfics Zay-el, Rayfan, and I all make. That way, they're perfectly enjoyable.
But the chapters are too long. I almost have trouble reading HC's 'Items of Power'.

In which case I feel bad for you, because those chapters are short. I think you're just being lazy
That depends of what you mean with 'short'. Seriously, my eyes just can handle staring at a computer screen for so long, without even looking away. Seriously, how can anyone do that?
Re: Rayman: Human Flaws (Volume 1)
Posted: Mon Jul 28, 2008 4:11 pm
by Phoenixan
*points to my above post*

Re: Rayman: Human Flaws (Volume 1)
Posted: Mon Jul 28, 2008 4:14 pm
by El Dango
Why didn't i read that before?

Yeah, i was thinking about printing Lachimax's fanfic, but i don't have a printer at my room, and it's a lot of work. Maybe later some day.
Re: Rayman: Human Flaws (Volume 1)
Posted: Tue Jul 29, 2008 12:46 pm
by Joshua822
This fan fic is great, and i only read two chapters ! I enjoy reading these story's. I'll read the next chapters this evening or tomorrow, my eyes are bad and reading such long post's with little text just tires me.
And don't all be mad at El dango, some people like reading and some people don't

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Re: Rayman: Human Flaws (Volume 1)
Posted: Wed Jul 30, 2008 1:14 am
by Luckster
Henchman1028 wrote:There should be a sequel, where the Robo-Pirates manage to get into the real world, and Rayman has to stop them before they destroy it.
I'm already working on Volume Two. The Series of Human Flaws is already fully written, as well as 4 other series after it.
And I don't consider the human world the 'Real World' in my series, thanks much. 8P