Fanfic: Rayman and the Ghost Camp

[Newray]

Then i take a look this evening...

[Xenon]

Fair enough.

[Xenon]

Chapter III

A shiver entered Rayman’s rounded back. He stepped towards the reeds and pushed each reed aside.
“Hello” said a sly voice. Two bright eyes shone out of the reeds.
“W-Who is it?” said Rayman shuttering.
“Who am I?” said the voice as it stepped into the light “Ssssam of course!”
“Oh, it’s you!” Rayman said relievingly.
“Would you like a ride over the swamp?” asked Sssam getting in position.
“Um – no” said Rayman trying to keep out of trouble. “I have my shoes to clean”
“I’ve heard that the Teensies are having a camp on the other side of the marshlands” Ssssam continued.
“A camp?” said Rayman.
“Yes” said Sssam “Anyone is invited!”
“How long does it last?” Rayman asked.
“3 days and a half” replied Sssam “Everyone will be there, except for me.”
A teardrop entered Sssams eyes.
“I’ll be seeing you later then, Rayman” Sssam said as he waved.
“WAIT!” Rayman yelled. “I shall go!”
“All right then!” Sssam got back in position and started skiing along the marshes.
Several Zombie Chickens were poisoning the marshlands. Rayman could see them whisking through trees and through the mucky walls of the marsh.
When Ssssam finally reached the end.
“Ahoy!” he said.
“Thank you!” Rayman said.
“No problemo Rayman! Have fun and….stay safe” he said as he swam back into the mucky swamp.
Rayman could see the camp on a hill. Nobody was around. Rayman could literally see no sign of life. It was quiet, too quiet

[Newray]

Still a cool fanfic after chapter II!

When are you going to continue?

[Xenon]

Cheers!

I will continue it.

[th3()ne]

Has this fanfic got a title, It's really cool I wanna put it on my forums.

edit: Silly me, topic title It really cool though!

[Xenon]

Thank you th3()ne!

[Xenon]

Chapter IIII

Rayman looked back at Ssssam, who was merging into the muck. He turned around and stared at the camp. He rested his hands on his hips.
“Phoar” he said confused.
Rayman started walking up the silent hill. On his way, he saw a pine tree, with a notice on it. It read:

Wanted:

Sir Hemington
Lord Caprear

Wanted for murder.
Reward: 5 green gems.

“That’s odd” muttered Rayman to himelf. “Where’s the picture?”
It looked as if the photograph of the two had been ripped out, as all what was left was a blank dark piece of paper, with two white patches on it. Perhaps they were the remains of the torn paper. Rayman ripped the paper off of the tree and stuffed it in his pocket. He walked on, and reached the camp.
“Hello…?” said Rayman. “Anyone here?”
He looked around. He thought he saw some figure behind the tree that he was at.
“Where is everybody?” Rayman muttered.
“Am I early or something?”
Rayman sat next to an apple orchard and plucked an apple from a nearby tree. He munched into it and reached for the paper that was in his pocket. He rumaged around in his pocket but it was no use, the wanted message was gone. Rayman could immediately tell something screwy was going on. But he didn’t know what.

[th3()ne]

I think you mean IV
Good though!

[Xenon]

Nope, I don't. ^_^ 4 comes after 3.

[Xenon]

Chapter V

Rayman looked up at the dusky sky. Everything was grey, not a single spec of blue was seen in the sky. Suddenly,
“Hi Rayman!”
Rayman jumped around. It was Globox.
“Don’t do that! You scared me!” said Rayman.
“Sorry!!” said Globox sarcastically.
“Don’t you give me that lip!” said Rayman harshly.
Globox squeezed his lips together.
“Don’t you use that cheek with me!” Rayman grunted.
Globox pointed one of his bulgy cheeks at Rayman.
Rayman rolled his eyes, and began slowly laughing.
“How did you say you got here again Globox?” asked Rayman.
“I didn’t say it.” replied Globox.
“Well, how did you get here?” asked Rayman again.
“Some kind little Teensies teleported Globox here!” answered Globox.
Suddenly 2 Teensies whirled out of a spiral door which was behind Globox. They were taking piggy-back rides as they usually were.
“Hooyaah!” one said as he striked the other with a piece of string.
The other one buckerood the one on the top right off, and it went flying.
“Hello there Rayman” he said.
“Where did the o-“ he stopped.
The other Teensie sprinted back in 3 seconds.
“I didn’t even finish the sentence!” whispered Rayman to Globox in shock.
“Excuse my second cousin’s stepbrother. He’s a little tired today” said one.
“I beg your pardon?” started the other “since when do you start the conversation?”
He elbowed the first one.
“Ouch!” said the other. “How dare you give such manor towards the king!”
The two Teensies started fighting.
Suddenly a loud thump sounded at the bottom of the hill. The Teensies fell quiet.

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Enjoy..

[Angel]

Ohhhhhh, carry on, carry on!

[th3()ne]

IV means 4, make a note of it

[Xenon]

Thanks everyone! Next chapter tomorrow.

PS: 4 can be either IIII or IV. I learnt that at school. And since IV and VI are 6 and 4, that may make it confusing. I'll stick with IIII.

[th3()ne]

When you get to chapter 10 what are you going to do? IIIIIIIIII.....Fair enough.

[Xenon]

Ten is X...

[The Pasumanator]

Nice chapters! Please continue them!

[Xenon]

Thanks TP.

[Xenon]

Chapter V

Rayman ran down the hill to where the thump sounded. He looked around. The only noises around were the whistling of the tall green trees, and the quiet noise of the Teensies fighting at the top of the hill. All of a sudden, a tree right next to Rayman. It was almost as if someone was trying to kill Rayman. There was a coughing noise of some sort of metal creature that Rayman spotted lurking under the fallen down tree. Since the tree was too heavy to lift up (even for Rayman), he could not examine the creature to more extent. But, he could notice 2 springs had popped out of the robot’s eye sockets. The thing stopped coughing and fell dead. Rayman looked puzzled. He was about to walk back up the hill to where the orchards were when he noticed a saw at the base of the tree stump. He picked it up. It was stubby with a metal handle. But that wasn’t all he saw. A pair of brown, warn gloves were nearby. He picked them up and ran back. He noticed one more thing, well not noticed, as when he was running up the hill, the metal creature seemed to have vanished. He kept running, while having a chill down his back. The Teensies were staring at Rayman puzzled.
“You’d never believe what I just-“ started Rayman completely out of breath “There was a metal creat-“ he panted “ure at the bottom of the hill that keeps disappearing.
The Teensies looked more confused that ever. Rayman showed them the gloves and the saw. The Teensies examined them.
All of a sudden, another boom belowed at the bottom of the hill and another tree fell down.
“Rayman,” said the Teensies “G-Go down and t-take a look at who is th-there” they trembled.
“No no! This time it’s your turn!” Rayman replied.
“There’s nothing to be afraid of!” chanted the Teensies.
“Then you do it!” Rayman said.
“Hahaha!” the Teensies chuckled. “We’re too rich, we can’t afford to die!”
“Hmmrph.” Sniffed Rayman.
“The only thing we can do, is set camp,” said the Teensies “we could have done this much later, if you weren’t a woos!”
The Teensies started to make camp.

[Angel]

I knew those Teensies are wussies,
Carry on the story, looking good!