Rayman Pirate-Community

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Just one question.

At what point in the game do they, ahem, breed? I figured your concoction was vaguely family-friendly.

But enough with the 'Freud was right' side of things, that's a sad yet kick-ass ending. The flying off into the sunset without Rayman bit is especially good, methinks... As long as the dialogue doesn't descend into cheese, it'll reek of epic. I look forward to a revised 'standard' ending, too.

Jewish Candy wrote:...
Just one question.

At what point in the game do they, ahem, breed? I figured your concoction was vaguely family-friendly.

But enough with the 'Freud was right' side of things, that's a sad yet kick-ass ending. The flying off into the sunset without Rayman bit is especially good, methinks... As long as the dialogue doesn't descend into cheese, it'll reek of epic. I look forward to a revised 'standard' ending, too.

Easy. Raygirl finds his body after he dies and breeds.

Wait... no. I don't know. Lol.

But the dialog won't cheese, I'll make sure it gets what it needs. Although I don't want it to be too smart or the kids won't understand it, and it'll just sound like the writer is boasting about her vocabulary. I'm not "really good" at writing realistic sounding dialog, so I'll have someone else, I think the person on the last page before this said she was good with writing... I don't know how to spell her name, do that for me.

Ephriokko.
I'm sure she has a good reason. Yeah, the more contribution from the community, the more sauce, so that's a good idea.
As for the breeding, maybe they screw with their, uh, limbless energy invisible connector gas aura thing stuff. So no dirtiness involved!
Or do a Dragon Quest and have them stay at the equivalent of an inn.

Jewish Candy wrote:Ephriokko.
I'm sure she has a good reason. Yeah, the more contribution from the community, the more sauce, so that's a good idea.
As for the breeding, maybe they screw with their, uh, limbless energy invisible connector gas aura thing stuff. So no dirtiness involved!
Or do a Dragon Quest and have them stay at the equivalent of an inn.

Lol, like the Virgin Mary. (Jesus was planted inside her by God, because she was chosen to be the barer)

LOL "gas aura"

Actually that's an ingenious idea, Jewish Candy. Like from the "O"s they wear.

Jewish Candy wrote:Freud was right

Duerp, I don't understand.

Glad you like the concept! Though it makes sex too boring for me. Though perhaps they 'experience' it in a more spiritual sense, but where's the fun in that?! I can imagine the 'mating' scene quite well. Both their 'O's start to glow, and they're like "WTF?!", but then they start to enjoy it. Surreal.

If Raygirl was the Virgin, would that make Rayman 'God', since you imply him to be the father and therefore 'implanter' of Jesus/Rayman Jr.? Lolage. Eee, I'm Christian, so I hope you don't take offence at that analogy... What I meant by saying at an inn was that unfortunate incident in Dragon Quest 5, where after recuperating at various inns on your travels, you suddenly discover that your wife is preggers. As if you couldn't have noticed before.

Freud Was Right? Basically, SEX. SEX. SEX. SEX. Everything leads back to sex.

Jewish Candy wrote:Glad you like the concept! Though it makes sex too boring for me. Though perhaps they 'experience' it in a more spiritual sense, but where's the fun in that?! I can imagine the 'mating' scene quite well. Both their 'O's start to glow, and they're like "WTF?!", but then they start to enjoy it. Surreal.

If Raygirl was the Virgin, would that make Rayman 'God', since you imply him to be the father and therefore 'implanter' of Jesus/Rayman Jr.? Lolage. Eee, I'm Christian, so I hope you don't take offence at that analogy... What I meant by saying at an inn was that unfortunate incident in Dragon Quest 5, where after recuperating at various inns on your travels, you suddenly discover that your wife is preggers. As if you couldn't have noticed before.

Freud Was Right? Basically, SEX. SEX. SEX. SEX. Everything leads back to sex.

My ex girlfriend tryed to get me to do that, and I said no. Part of the reason why she dumped me. What a bad expierience, but seriously I'm 14. Little too young

^ Dude, no offense to her, but DAMN keep your ass to yerself until you're legal!! AT LEAST!!! A reputation is the last thing anyone needs, not to mention the moral implications. You're good to be rid of her, Rayfist.

Jewish Candy wrote:^ Dude, no offense to her, but DAMN keep your ass to yerself until you're legal!! AT LEAST!!! A reputation is the last thing anyone needs, not to mention the moral implications. You're good to be rid of her, Rayfist.

^This.

I almost whacked my kind of friend across the face when I found out he actually had quite a few relations like that. (We're also 14). And he's like "yeah, there are some things you can just let slide". That's what he said also when my other friend got abused. Either he didn't realize I was serious about that happening to her, or he's an idiot. Most of the time he's fun and nice, but once in a while, like I said, he's a complete idiot.

Rayfist090 wrote:My ex girlfriend tryed to get me to do that, and I said no. Part of the reason why she dumped me. What a bad expierience, but seriously I'm 14. Little too young

She tried to form a gas aura?
JK, but anyone who even thinks about trying to get you into it letalone tries, is a bad apple.


And Jewish Candy, do we really wanna know what Raysex looks like?

How old are you JC? Just a question.

16, but I look like I'm 11. Extremely convenient round my area, if you know what I mean. I know way too many people who are your age and fuck around, and the worst thing is the ONLY ONE who didn't want to get involved is pregnant now. It's not something to 'let slide', this is your own ass you're messing with!! Seriously - you guys, I'm proud of your steadfastness, so don't let it slip!
Rayfan-with-the-numbers, you seem a bit older than 14 from your posts.

YES WE DO WANNA KNOW WHAT RAYSEX LOOKS LIKE!!!!!!
BTW, how did this turn into a convo on underage sex? I blame gas auras.

Jewish Candy wrote:16, but I look like I'm 11. Extremely convenient round my area, if you know what I mean. I know way too many people who are your age and fuck around, and the worst thing is the ONLY ONE who didn't want to get involved is pregnant now. It's not something to 'let slide', this is your own ass you're messing with!! Seriously - you guys, I'm proud of your steadfastness, so don't let it slip!

Nah, you just sound like a really fun 15-16 year old. You're the kind of person I'd probably have a lot of fun hanging with in real life. Interesting story though. The world is a very screwy place. <-pun

Jewish Candy wrote:Rayfan-with-the-numbers, you seem a bit older than 14 from your posts.

What was your original guess?

Jewish Candy wrote:YES WE DO WANNA KNOW WHAT RAYSEX LOOKS LIKE!!!!!!
BTW, how did this turn into a convo on underage sex? I blame gas auras.

Then is it up to me to create this anomaly, since I'm making the game?

You sound like a laugh in real life too. Ah, well. I'm glad someone thinks I'm my age (though this is the internet, so everyone can guess right methinks), because here in the real world my midget-in-a-bikini-ness tends to precede me. Not an entirely bad thing - if I go all weaboo, people give me free stuff!

I figured you were either a normal 15 year old, or a rather sweet 17 year old.

Anyway, back on-topic. As long as you credit gas-auras to me and me alone, you can use 'em or not use 'em how you like.

Ah. Well on the topic I guess:

I'll probably have a scene where it shows Rayman and Raygirl walk up to each other after they just went through some hard level, and suddenly their Os start to glow, and then it does that thing you see when Rayman gets a mask in Rayman 2, where his O connects to the statue. Although rather here, their Os would connect to each other with energy. Basically picture it the exact way you see it in the Sanctuary of Water and Ice, but a mirror image of Rayman and Raygirl standing about fourish feet apart.

But of course, you'd get credit.

Jewish Candy wrote: Rayfan-with-the-numbers, you seem a bit older than 14 from your posts.

like 65 ?

Tenderz wrote:

Jewish Candy wrote: Rayfan-with-the-numbers, you seem a bit older than 14 from your posts.

like 65 ?

No, like 9876.

No, she said 15-17.

RayFan9876 wrote:

Tenderz wrote:

Jewish Candy wrote: Rayfan-with-the-numbers, you seem a bit older than 14 from your posts.

like 65 ?

No, like 9876.

No, she said 15-17.

14+ could be anything between 14 and 15489418944449infinite

Spoken like a true person.

RayFan9876 wrote: Easy. Raygirl finds his body after he dies and breeds.

This... vaguely disturbed me. LOL.

Rayfan9876 wrote:Wait... no. I don't know. Lol.

But the dialog won't cheese, I'll make sure it gets what it needs. Although I don't want it to be too smart or the kids won't understand it, and it'll just sound like the writer is boasting about her vocabulary. I'm not "really good" at writing realistic sounding dialog, so I'll have someone else, I think the person on the last page before this said she was good with writing... I don't know how to spell her name, do that for me.

Aw, you're considering it? Yay! And... by the way, don't take it personally. I'm really picking about writing, especially with grammar and spelling, and I find fluent dialogue to be important as well. I kinda get that way with anyone's writing; I usually keep it to myself to avoid sounding snobby or arrogant, but I guess I figured that since you're taking this project pretty seriously, you might want to ensure that the writing is on par with the rest of the game's quality. I'm no professional - I always consider myself to be learning more and more as time passes, and I have a dreadful habit of writing sentences that are far too long - but I'd like to think I'm somewhat decent at writing stuff. =) If you want I can write up an example of something based on a prompt you give me, or if you don't want to bother with that I've got some writing in my dA gallery too. I don't want to make myself out as an 'amazing writer' or whatever without having anything to back me up, so whether the quality of my writing is something you'd want is really up to you.

Hah... my screen name IS a bitch to spell sometimes, ain't it? I get a lot more people who don't know how to pronounce it though... and honestly, I don't blame them. It's a weird one that was conjured in my twelve-year-old mind and was resolute in using when I was 13 and old enough to join internet communities. XD At this point I just keep using the name to be consistent. If it makes it easier, you can just call me Feb instead. =P


In all honesty, the idea of Rayman and Raygirl having sex/a kid is something that my brain doesn't want to accept. XD The moment with the kid is really sweet, but there's nothing wrong with Raygirl being just a friend either. If a character that's the 'last of their kind' suddenly meets another 'of their kind' who happens to be the opposite gender, it's almost guaranteed in most fiction that they'll fall in love and have kids. Understandable(Freud, as was above mentioned), but all the same it's just been used so much and...

Bah. Whatever. It's your story. XD I guess it just kind of came outta nowhere and hit me in the face when I was just getting used to the idea of Raygirl being in it. I'm going to give a little reminder that I have a pretty big opinion on this being published and made Rayman canon, but instead of going off on that I'm just going to say this: Somehow, I'm not sure Rayman having a kid or having a fan-made love interest would sit well with the folks at Ubi.

And... er... uh. I honestly doubt that this will ever become an official game(nothing personal!), but I'm largely a skeptic at heart with these kinds of things, and hey... you never know, I might be surprised. Don't let me stop your ambition; whatever the case, this looks to be a fun project and whatever the outcome on publishing is I'm sure lots of people will enjoy playing it, especially since it wouldn't cost them money to try out... you know people and free things. (And copyright issues. But that's another story)

On another note... whoa, Rayfan-who's-making-the-story-here! You're only 14?! Geez, you know more about making a game than I do and I'm two years older than that! XD 3D programs confuse me... although it probably doesn't help that the only one I've attempted with in the past(besides one environment thingy I had when I was a kid called Bryce 5 or somethin') was Blender, and that was freakishly complicated and confusing. Haven't even tried the Mac version... not sure if it'd fare much better. I think I'm gonna stick with 2D drawing or messing around with clay, hehe. As cool as 3D modeling is(and it's like... REALLY cool, with all the things you can do with it; games, movies, hack models, etc), I think it's something that will forever remain out of my understanding. Not my thing, I guess. Too tedious and patience-requiring.

Raysex... oh god. Thats sick rayfan

Excuse the upcoming immaturity, but...

Raysex... oh god. Thats sick rayfan

Says the guy with THIS in his signature.

ParadoxJuice wrote:Excuse the upcoming immaturity, but...

Raysex... oh god. Thats sick rayfan

Says the guy with THIS in his signature.

Dude, it was a joke. And wow, to think of rayman waiting like that... you actually thought of a perverted way to put that. But I'm changing it either way.