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Rayman - Neocreation Day Fan Comic

Posted: Sat Apr 20, 2013 11:16 am
by Earth Gwee
I thought I'd show here a comic I've been working on this past month and a half (two now). The story of this comic was originally written ten years ago by a wonderfully talented artist on Deviantart named andrewk. I started this not terribly long after I became a full Rayman fan and andrewk's drawings inspired me to learn to draw Rayman and his friends and even tackle my first long-term project.

The first chapter is done, and I will be tackling the next one in due time.

Hope you guys enjoy what I've got so far. :D

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Re: Rayman - Neocreation Day fan comic (so far)

Posted: Sat Apr 20, 2013 11:32 am
by Rayfist
This is truly flawless. Honestly really reminds me of a 90's cartoon with it's silly humor. It truly captured the personality of the characters from Rayman 2 (3 with Murphy), quite well. As I said before, I love the art style, it really POPS out at you. My favorite in particular being Ly, she looks great as a cartoon character and so 'alive' you could say. The plot in this was also very hilarious, I loved scene with Grunge in particular. The personality of the characters as said before are flawless, Globox being the silly glute, Rayman being the energetic hero always ready to fight, Clark being the silly, yet not the brightest person, etc. So far I'm really liking the comic, the art style, including the story is great. I look forward to more of the work in the future.

Re: Rayman - Neocreation Day fan comic (so far)

Posted: Sat Apr 20, 2013 11:56 am
by Tulio
The style reminded me of andrewk's art the moment i saw it - great depiction of all the characters, especially Ly. Why don't you link your deviantart account here?

Re: Rayman - Neocreation Day fan comic (so far)

Posted: Sat Apr 20, 2013 11:57 am
by Adsolution
Within the first two seconds of me entering this thread:


This artstyle, it's familiar.
Wait a second, I remember the title 'Neocration Day' from somewhere... but where?
This artstyle, these are what the Rayman: The Island of Loss illustrations looked like!
Wait a second, didn't SquirrelGuy/Andrewk write another story called 'Neocreation Day?'



Hahah, The Island of Loss was the very first piece of FanFiction I'd ever read, way back in 2003 when I first made an account on a website. Shortly after, I came across the FanFic's illustrations, and for years I idolised its artwork, almost always basing my own drawings off of them.

While for some reason only the first three pages are loading for me right now (so I can't read very much at the moment), I can say that Andrew has both massively inspired and influenced my artstyle to this date. I can't believe how precisely you've emulated his style. It's unbelievably accurate, and for a split second I thought that you actually were him. :mrgreen:

Re: Rayman - Neocreation Day fan comic (so far)

Posted: Sat Apr 20, 2013 1:00 pm
by Haruka
Earth Gwee, I love your comic! I definitely like the drawing style, which program did you use by the way? Photoshop? I think I saw one of the pages in deviantART but I didn't know it was you. I also never read andrewk's story, so I am unfamiliar with. I admit I very rarely read fanfiction.

I want to see more! :D

Re: Rayman - Neocreation Day fan comic (so far)

Posted: Sat Apr 20, 2013 9:13 pm
by Earth Gwee
Tulio wrote:The style reminded me of andrewk's art the moment i saw it - great depiction of all the characters, especially Ly. Why don't you link your deviantart account here?
Ironically, Ly is one of the harder characters to for me to keep consistent (in my eyes), mostly her face and her hair. While she's fairly easy to draw, it's not always easy keeping her consistent, which is something I'm still struggling with. My deviantart account is http://earthgwee.deviantart.com/
Adsolution wrote:Within the first two seconds of me entering this thread:



This artstyle, it's familiar.
Wait a second, I remember the title 'Neocration Day' from somewhere... but where?
This artstyle, these are what the Rayman: The Island of Loss illustrations looked like!
Wait a second, didn't SquirrelGuy/Andrewk write another story called 'Neocreation Day?'



Hahah, The Island of Loss was the very first piece of FanFiction I'd ever read, way back in 2003 when I first made an account on a website. Shortly after, I came across the FanFic's illustrations, and for years I idolised its artwork, almost always basing my own drawings off of them.

While for some reason only the first three pages are loading for me right now (so I can't read very much at the moment), I can say that Andrew has both massively inspired and influenced my artstyle to this date. I can't believe how precisely you've emulated his style. It's unbelievably accurate, and for a split second I thought that you actually were him. :mrgreen:
Yeah, the style influenced me greatly. And since this is his story, I felt I would see if I could resemble at least his formatting style. Over time, I've learned to draw the characters in a way that feels comfortable to me, thanks to andrewk's drawings serving as my inspiration. But I've always had a certain way of drawing characters, Rayman in particular. It just took the work of another artist to help me refine my way of drawing him and his friends.

Ah, dang. That's sucks it's not loading for you. Hopefully it will soon so you can see how my style evolves and improves through the course of what I've got so far.
Haruka wrote:Earth Gwee, I love your comic! I definitely like the drawing style, which program did you use by the way? Photoshop? I think I saw one of the pages in deviantART but I didn't know it was you. I also never read andrewk's story, so I am unfamiliar with. I admit I very rarely read fanfiction.

I want to see more! :D
Thanks. :)

As for the program I use, I use Paint Tool SAI. Then I switch to GIMP for typing out the dialogue.

I'm glad you guys like it.

Re: Rayman - Neocreation Day fan comic (so far)

Posted: Sat Apr 20, 2013 11:58 pm
by Robotic Teensie
Oh wow that's a very very nice comic! I've never heard of andrewk or Neocreation Day before but the comic is great! :up:

Re: Rayman - Neocreation Day fan comic (so far)

Posted: Wed Apr 24, 2013 11:07 pm
by Earth Gwee
Yeah, you should look for him on Deviantart. Even his older art is some of the best I've seen. I think it's feature film worthy, which makes sense, since he's an animator in the making.

Re: Rayman - Neocreation Day fan comic (so far)

Posted: Wed Apr 24, 2013 11:09 pm
by Master
Ah, I'm sorry not to have shown my own amazement at this work, it works well with the Rayman designs, and also with the comic format, nothing else I can say except to keep at it.

Re: Rayman - Neocreation Day Fan Comic - Chapter One

Posted: Wed May 01, 2013 3:53 am
by Earth Gwee
Want to let you guys know that I have completed the first chapter in the comic and should be taking on the next one in the near future. :D

Re: Rayman - Neocreation Day Fan Comic - Chapter One

Posted: Wed May 01, 2013 9:00 am
by Rulez
This is fantastic.

Re: Rayman - Neocreation Day Fan Comic - Chapter One

Posted: Thu May 02, 2013 11:46 am
by saerleiya
Awesome. The comic is pretty well done and all the characters seem so lively (esp. Grunge even if he's an old rusty robot.

That explains why you didn"t add another chapter to Glutitis : you were very busy working on this comic.

Continue this way :D

Re: Rayman - Neocreation Day Fan Comic - Chapter One

Posted: Thu May 02, 2013 12:35 pm
by Rulez
saerleiya wrote:Awesome. The comic is pretty well done and all the characters seem so lively (esp. Grunge even if he's an old rusty robot.

That explains why you didn"t add another chapter to Glutitis : you were very busy working on this comic.

Continue this way :D
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Re: Rayman - Neocreation Day Fan Comic - Chapter One

Posted: Thu May 02, 2013 6:57 pm
by ikke471
*speechless*

Re: Rayman - Neocreation Day Fan Comic - Chapter One

Posted: Sun May 05, 2013 9:45 am
by Robotic Teensie
Rulez wrote:
saerleiya wrote:Awesome. The comic is pretty well done and all the characters seem so lively (esp. Grunge even if he's an old rusty robot.

That explains why you didn"t add another chapter to Glutitis : you were very busy working on this comic.

Continue this way :D
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Re: Rayman - Neocreation Day Fan Comic - Chapter One

Posted: Sun May 05, 2013 11:10 am
by Rulez
Robotic Teensie wrote:
Rulez wrote:
saerleiya wrote:Awesome. The comic is pretty well done and all the characters seem so lively (esp. Grunge even if he's an old rusty robot.

That explains why you didn"t add another chapter to Glutitis : you were very busy working on this comic.

Continue this way :D
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You don't understand. I closed his parenthesis, because it would otherwise bother me for the rest of the day.

Re: Rayman - Neocreation Day Fan Comic - Chapter One

Posted: Sun May 05, 2013 12:03 pm
by Robotic Teensie
Oh, I see now! Sometimes stuff like that bothers me too (but in this case it didn't

Anyway, that's a great ending of Chapter 1 Earth Gwee! Do you have future chapters all planned out, or are you improvising?

Re: Rayman - Neocreation Day Fan Comic - Chapter Two

Posted: Mon May 06, 2013 7:00 am
by Earth Gwee
The story's already written out, so yes. I do plan on continuing the comic.

Re: Rayman - Neocreation Day Fan Comic - Chapter Two

Posted: Sun Jul 14, 2013 10:19 am
by Earth Gwee
I know I'm double posting here, but I wanted to give everyone an update on the comic. Here is the start of Chapter Two. And in hind sight, I probably should have thought the title of this thread through, since I'll be posting all three chapters on here instead of just the first one. This post will be edited with each new page, so stay tuned. :D

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Re: Rayman - Neocreation Day Fan Comic - Chapter One

Posted: Sun Jul 14, 2013 10:35 am
by Master
I'm more than willing to edit the title should you wish, just let me now what you want to edit it to.
I decided to reread Chapter 1, and I'm still impressed by your work, I genuinely look forward to seeing Chapter 2.