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Re: ECLIPSE [ Rewriting ]

Posted: Wed Apr 11, 2012 10:53 am
by Droolie
Definitely, you'll get all the time in the world to read it. :)
I'll be hard at work for my exams after this anyway.

Oh and PowerPatrick has been added to the list. He's really the last one though, if I'd keep accepting people I could just as well post the script publicly. :P
I still want it to remain a surprise for some people so I'm not going to do that.

So now it's:
  • ikke471
  • RayFan9876
  • Master4lyf1
  • Shrooblord
  • spiraldoor
  • Bloodgrey
  • Haruka
  • PowerPatrick
Thanks for signing up everyone, and expect the script in your PM inbox somewhere in the coming weeks! :)

Re: ECLIPSE [ Rewriting ]

Posted: Wed Apr 11, 2012 12:42 pm
by Haruka
Take your time Droolie!

I also understand your situation, I'm actually in a National Exams countdown: I must do them in the 2nd half of June. I'll be very busy in that month. :confus:

Re: ECLIPSE [ Rewriting ]

Posted: Sat Apr 28, 2012 12:15 am
by Droolie
Sorry to everyone on the list, I'm working hard on the story but for some reason I'm putting way too much detailed descriptions of everything in it so it's taking a really long time (I'm at 10 pages and it's only right at the end of the second level). I guess I'll have to delay it till somewhere in summer holidays as I'm quickly getting less and less time to write it with the upcoming exams.

Anyway, to go along with the Rayman Legends reveal and to release an update once in a while, I thought it would be nice to reveal the new name of Eclipse (which is an overused title - and it gets associated with Twilight too much).
Open this picture to see it. (It's kind of large)
http://i254.photobucket.com/albums/hh91 ... -pic-2.png
So yes, DREAMBOUND it is (I won't update the topic title yet so everyone knows what this is). And yes, that heart in the logo is important. It might or might not refer to the Heart of the World, which plays a crucial role in the new story.

I'll also introduce the characters on the picture, from left to right:
  • A mysterious animal keeping an eye the group...
  • Lily, a girl from the mythical land of Prhys. Ly also comes from there. But she sure is looking glum... what's on her mind?
  • Green, the garden Raygnome that can talk.
  • Blue, the strangely huge electoon who was found by four fishermen teensies at the shores of the Sea of Lums.
  • (The small teensie under Blue): Minimus, the Teensie with the ambition to become king.
  • Minor, the Teensie who always says things right.
  • Maior, the Teensie who corrects Minor when he says things wrong. Oh, and... Minor never says things right, by the way.
  • Maxhimush, the Teenshie who hash trouble pronounching the "sh".
  • Trémochiax (French people should get the pun), a witch who mysteriously has Bégoniax's underwear on her head. Oh, and I heard she likes hunting. And apparently, photobombing is one of her specialities too.
Floating in the sky is the mythical land of Prhys. You can see the beautiful Tearfall (no, it doesn't fall into Trémochiax's underwear o_O).
And at the top of the picture is the Castle of Prhys where the Queen of Prhys lives. She is said to be of unmatched beauty. So much that even Polokus has feelings for her. She's been having a lot of problems lately... but you'll have to play the game for that (or read the script). :)

*hype, hype*

Re: ECLIPSE [ Hyping in progress... ]

Posted: Sat Apr 28, 2012 12:54 am
by Adsolution
Ahaha, I love the drawing and concept! And of course the famous electoon himself is looking more stylish than ever. :)

I totally look forward to seeing more work, the quality is just escalating rapidly from what it was before.

Re: ECLIPSE [ Hyping in progress... ]

Posted: Sat Apr 28, 2012 1:45 am
by DesLife
All these new artworks look very good !

Re: ECLIPSE [ Hyping in progress... ]

Posted: Sat Apr 28, 2012 5:03 pm
by Haruka
I like the picture itself and what you wrote about it. :D I'll be looking forward for more!

Re: ECLIPSE [ Hyping in progress... ]

Posted: Sun Apr 29, 2012 6:11 pm
by Droolie
Thanks everyone! Glad you like it :D
I'll do my best to keep writing the story even during my exams so I can send it to everyone sooner (that doesn't mean I'll rush it though). :D

Re: ECLIPSE [ Hyping in progress... ]

Posted: Tue May 01, 2012 3:17 pm
by Rayrobi
That image is so amazing! And the game too!

Anyway i'm using game maker, too, but i can't figure out how to draw some variables at the right ( or whichever ) corner of the screen. Can you tell me how to do it? :)

Re: ECLIPSE [ Hyping in progress... ]

Posted: Tue May 01, 2012 7:11 pm
by ikke471
WOW I'm really looking forward to this!
your hyping is working xD

Re: ECLIPSE [ Hyping in progress... ]

Posted: Sun May 06, 2012 9:35 pm
by Droolie
Thanks again everyone. :D
Rayrobi wrote:Anyway i'm using game maker, too, but i can't figure out how to draw some variables at the right ( or whichever ) corner of the screen. Can you tell me how to do it? :)
Sorry for the late reply. I was a bit busy with a programming project I had to do.
I'm not sure what you're asking for but I suppose you want to use the GML code "draw_text(x,y,string);" and your x and y coordinates change depending on whether you're using views or not. For example, to draw text in the upper left corner of the screen normally, you'd use

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draw_text(15,15,"This is some text!");
If you want it to follow your view, you'd use...

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draw_text(view_xview[0]+15,view_yview[0]+15,"This is some text that follows the camera!");
Actually, I'm not so sure myself anymore. Because of university I'm not as good at Game Maker anymore. Java, Python and some Unix languages have taken over instead. I'm gonna try to learn more about other languages more used for game making this summer vacation. And 3D too. That'll open op choices for what to make my game in...

Re: ECLIPSE [ Hyping in progress... ]

Posted: Sun May 06, 2012 10:44 pm
by Shrooblord
No, you are correct about the GM, Drolpiraat.

To, for example, display the text "You are now at position: 254, 233" with the location being the variables x and y of your object, you would have to use the following code, granted that you are using views:

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draw_text(view_xview[0]+15, view_yview[0]+15, string("You are now at position: "+string(x)+string(", ")+string(y) );
The string() tags are so you can display a variable and can use the + command to indicate it's all part of one string within the draw_text function.
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Also, I love the artwork you gave us. It looks like a really nice style of drawing. Can't wait to see this game develop further!

Re: ECLIPSE [ Hyping in progress... ]

Posted: Mon May 07, 2012 7:46 am
by beebo44
I have no idea what you guys are talking about.
Image

But absolutely epic drawing!Can't wait to see more!

Re: ECLIPSE [ Hyping in progress... ]

Posted: Mon May 07, 2012 8:12 pm
by Rayrobi
Drolpiraat wrote:If you want it to follow your view, you'd use...

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draw_text(view_xview[0]+15,view_yview[0]+15,"This is some text that follows the camera!");
That's what i've been looking for. Thank you lately!

Anyway do i have to change only the "+15" part if i want to show it somewhere else than in the middle of the screen?
Shrooblord wrote:The string() tags are so you can display a variable and can use the + command to indicate it's all part of one string within the draw_text function.
I already knew that but thanks. :P

Re: ECLIPSE [ Hyping in progress... ]

Posted: Mon May 07, 2012 9:05 pm
by Droolie
Rayrobi wrote:
Drolpiraat wrote:If you want it to follow your view, you'd use...

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draw_text(view_xview[0]+15,view_yview[0]+15,"This is some text that follows the camera!");
That's what i've been looking for. Thank you lately!

Anyway do i have to change only the "+15" part if i want to show it somewhere else then in the middle of the screen?
Yep, that's right! And you're welcome. ;)

Re: DREAMBOUND - Rewriting (10%)

Posted: Thu May 17, 2012 10:39 am
by Adsolution
Hey, you were good at age eleven! http://www.freewebs.com/raymansrevenge/ ... eplay1.wmv

Really, I can't wait to see what you have in store for us now.

Re: DREAMBOUND - Rewriting (10%)

Posted: Thu May 17, 2012 10:56 pm
by Droolie
Drolpiraat wrote: You have no idea how much this just made me laugh. Electoons shooting Mr Dark in the balls. Genius. :lol:
I was thinking in the same thing. :lol:

Re: DREAMBOUND - Rewriting (10%)

Posted: Thu May 17, 2012 11:28 pm
by ramein
While I did quite like the original story. I myself am definitely looking forward to the complete rewrite of the story. I myself am one of the privileged, the chosen if you will, who gets to witness the story before completion. Personally I think it needs more space marines.

Write on Drolpiraat you magnificent writer.

P.S. If you stop, I'll cry.

Re: DREAMBOUND - Rewriting (10%)

Posted: Thu May 17, 2012 11:37 pm
by Droolie
Thanks a lot, I'm looking forward to reading more of your script too in return ;D
ramein wrote:Personally I think it needs more space marines.
Will space marine fish that aren't actually from space do?

Re: DREAMBOUND - Rewriting (10%)

Posted: Thu May 17, 2012 11:41 pm
by ramein
Drolpiraat wrote:Thanks a lot, I'm looking forward to reading more of your script too in return ;D
ramein wrote:Personally I think it needs more space marines.
Will space marine fish that aren't actually from space do?
Just as long as they aren't actually from space but still space fish. Space things that aren't actually from space are the best.

Re: DREAMBOUND - Rewriting (10%)

Posted: Thu May 17, 2012 11:48 pm
by Droolie
ramein wrote:
Drolpiraat wrote:Thanks a lot, I'm looking forward to reading more of your script too in return ;D
ramein wrote:Personally I think it needs more space marines.
Will space marine fish that aren't actually from space do?
Just as long as they aren't actually from space but still space fish. Space things that aren't actually from space are the best.
Alright then :D
Oh yeah, I almost forgot. Welcome to Rayman Pirate-Community, ramein. I'm looking forward to seeing you post more here ^^