My Fan Fic
Posted: Tue Mar 06, 2007 10:23 pm
My fanfic
The master plan
By piano man 2007
It had been quiet for a few years now. In Rayman's world people were starting to forget about the atrocities that had happened in the past. All seemed well, as if nothing bad could happen, But deep out in space, there was someone out there. Someone plotting revenge. Someone who was infuriatingly angry.
Captain razor beard was defeated by Rayman 6 years ago when he and his army of robot pirates tried to invade raymans world and enslave its people. Razorbeard was infuriated and he was building up this anger for a lot of time now, But there was also another dangerous adversary. In a black robe. Devious. Cunning. Deadly. Dangerous. It was none other than mister dark, and he is not a person to tangle with.
Mister dark was defeated by Rayman too. He and his foot soldiers kidnapped all of the Electoons and stole the great Protoon. Mister dark and Razorbeard had crossed paths while travelling through a part of Rayman world that was undiscovered, The caves of Skops. Only Rayman knows about the caves of Skops. Rayman knows more about his world than anyone else. The caves are where Skops the scorpion lives, seethes and plots. One day mister dark and Razorbeard decided to visit Skops and draw up a plan of how to kidnap Rayman, destroy his world and take the great Protoon.
This would be the perfect place to plan and plot. The caves of Skops are very well hidden and even people who know where the caves are, they would be too scared to venture in there anyway. Armed with nothing more than a candle and a glow worm, they both entered the cave and traversed the steep underground caverns and valleys until they came to a stone arch that looked like a door.
“Lets go in, he’ll be waiting” mister dark said.
“Lead on, then” said Razorbeard.
They could hear snoring. He was asleep, but they decided to wake him anyway.
“What, what was that!?”. He awakened violently. His huge claw swooped up and then he got up.
“So you turned up then?” Skops said.
“You remember the plan don’t you?. We steal the great Protoon and kidnap Rayman so he cant reclaim it. Then we destroy the world!” Razorbeard and mister dark shouted with excitement.
Skops had already knew of this and drew up a plan. And it said:
At night we will gather two small squads of foot soldiers and robo pirates and use my caves to travel along the world undetected. We will have to travel many miles to get to exactly underneath where Rayman lives!.
My cave is on the eastern side of the blue mountains. The pink plant woods where Rayman lives are 30 miles west of the blue mountains!. I will provide your soldiers with my claw compasses so that they go the right way. Mister dark and his foot soldiers will wait for you at the end where they will kidnap Rayman. Razorbeard will split his squad into two groups and one will get the great Protoon which is in the pink plant woods right next to the border where band land is. Once that squad has the Protoon they will come back to me and then I will board Razorbeard’s ship along with the remaining Protoon squad. Then the Rayman kidnapping squad will return with Rayman, Board the ship and we will get out of here. Once we are far enough from raymans world we will launch one of my super claw missiles which will be sure to destroy the whole world!. There is only one so don’t miss! Otherwise we will fail the entire plan!.
“Sounds like a good plan” said mister dark and razor beard. “We will start immediately” they said.
Razorbeard had already gathered his pirate soldiers and mister dark had gathered his foot soldiers at the Skops cave entrance. They began their journey through the caves under raymans world. If all went according to plan, they would arrive under the pink plant woods in the dead of night.
Meanwhile Rayman was having a nap in the pink plant woods. It was a nice sunny day like it was there all the time. The autumn mist would rise from the grass in the morning and make the leaves on the tries sparkle beautifully. Rayman woke up and went to the river for a drink and a swim.
“Nice day today!” He said cheerfully . “Later on I had better go and check on the great Protoon later, I can’t be too careful anymore” he said. He went back to his house and had some breakfast. The electoons were playing in the clearings and riversides. Rayman was very proud of himself for protecting these beings and being a good guardian of his world. He had tamed many of the once evil beings that inhabited his world. Space mama, Mr stone and Mr sax were all friends of Rayman now and they would visit him from time to time. They guarded their parts of the world, but being unaware of the two armies that were travelling under them. Rayman had a quiet day and not much was happening. By the time night came he was going to sleep again.
The Protoon squad were finally at their destination. They were directly below the great protons pedestal!. One of the robo pirates used his metal claws to dig out and get it. I was the perfect plan! All they had to do was put his hand out and grab it!. Then fill the hole in!. They had succeeded in stealing the great Protoon and were on their way back to the ship.
The Kidnapping squad were at there destination as well!. Right beneath where Rayman sleeps!. Mister dark magically created a hole underneath raymans hammock and Rayman fell down the hole and Into the big sack that was waiting for him. The sack was full of pillows so it didn’t wake him up!. The plan was ingenious! Absolutely no one knew of it and they were hastily making their way back to the ship.
“How far have we got left?” Said mister dark. “3 Miles left, sir” said one of the foot soldiers. The running woke Rayman up!. He could not see anything because he was in a sack. He didn’t have any energy to move or to shout. The great Protoon was removed and he has no power. He is virtually powerless. They arrive at the ship. “Get him on there!” Said the army. Mr skops had already boarded the ship and was preparing to take of. Everyone got on. They dumped Rayman in a cell where he was not guarded and that was a big mistake!.
Razorbeard came up to the bars of raymans cell. Rayman was lying there completely lifeless and had no energy. Razorbeard taunted him for hours and Rayman could not do anything. Eventually Razorbeard stopped and turned around to walk away. Then something amazing happened! The great Protoon fell out of his pocked and rolled to Rayman and Razorbeard didn’t even notice!.
Rayman seized this opportunity and grabbed it. H e had power now so he shot a hole in one of the vents and crawled to where the claw missile was. Even the missile wasn’t even being guarded!. Rayman jumped out of the vent and used his magic powers to put a timer on the bomb to blow up in 5 minutes. Rayman blew another vent open and slid out of the ship right under the noses of the two armies!. The ship was travelling very fast and was nearly in space. Rayman freefell for about 60,000 feet and then activated his helicopter as a parachute and gently fell to the ground. Right back in the pink plant woods in fact!. The ship was about 2000 miles away from raymans world now and Rayman said to himself: “They have tried again, and they have failed again!, and they will never do it again because they will be destroyed in 10...9...8...7...6...5...4...3...2...1”. A huge flash illuminated the sky and the ship and the army and skops and mister dark and razor beard were destroyed…forever. All the inhabitants of the world were surprised by this because they didn’t know what was going on until the morning and the flash happened. They all visited Rayman and asked what happened and he told them yet another one of his great and wonderful stories!…
THE END
The master plan
By piano man 2007
It had been quiet for a few years now. In Rayman's world people were starting to forget about the atrocities that had happened in the past. All seemed well, as if nothing bad could happen, But deep out in space, there was someone out there. Someone plotting revenge. Someone who was infuriatingly angry.
Captain razor beard was defeated by Rayman 6 years ago when he and his army of robot pirates tried to invade raymans world and enslave its people. Razorbeard was infuriated and he was building up this anger for a lot of time now, But there was also another dangerous adversary. In a black robe. Devious. Cunning. Deadly. Dangerous. It was none other than mister dark, and he is not a person to tangle with.
Mister dark was defeated by Rayman too. He and his foot soldiers kidnapped all of the Electoons and stole the great Protoon. Mister dark and Razorbeard had crossed paths while travelling through a part of Rayman world that was undiscovered, The caves of Skops. Only Rayman knows about the caves of Skops. Rayman knows more about his world than anyone else. The caves are where Skops the scorpion lives, seethes and plots. One day mister dark and Razorbeard decided to visit Skops and draw up a plan of how to kidnap Rayman, destroy his world and take the great Protoon.
This would be the perfect place to plan and plot. The caves of Skops are very well hidden and even people who know where the caves are, they would be too scared to venture in there anyway. Armed with nothing more than a candle and a glow worm, they both entered the cave and traversed the steep underground caverns and valleys until they came to a stone arch that looked like a door.
“Lets go in, he’ll be waiting” mister dark said.
“Lead on, then” said Razorbeard.
They could hear snoring. He was asleep, but they decided to wake him anyway.
“What, what was that!?”. He awakened violently. His huge claw swooped up and then he got up.
“So you turned up then?” Skops said.
“You remember the plan don’t you?. We steal the great Protoon and kidnap Rayman so he cant reclaim it. Then we destroy the world!” Razorbeard and mister dark shouted with excitement.
Skops had already knew of this and drew up a plan. And it said:
At night we will gather two small squads of foot soldiers and robo pirates and use my caves to travel along the world undetected. We will have to travel many miles to get to exactly underneath where Rayman lives!.
My cave is on the eastern side of the blue mountains. The pink plant woods where Rayman lives are 30 miles west of the blue mountains!. I will provide your soldiers with my claw compasses so that they go the right way. Mister dark and his foot soldiers will wait for you at the end where they will kidnap Rayman. Razorbeard will split his squad into two groups and one will get the great Protoon which is in the pink plant woods right next to the border where band land is. Once that squad has the Protoon they will come back to me and then I will board Razorbeard’s ship along with the remaining Protoon squad. Then the Rayman kidnapping squad will return with Rayman, Board the ship and we will get out of here. Once we are far enough from raymans world we will launch one of my super claw missiles which will be sure to destroy the whole world!. There is only one so don’t miss! Otherwise we will fail the entire plan!.
“Sounds like a good plan” said mister dark and razor beard. “We will start immediately” they said.
Razorbeard had already gathered his pirate soldiers and mister dark had gathered his foot soldiers at the Skops cave entrance. They began their journey through the caves under raymans world. If all went according to plan, they would arrive under the pink plant woods in the dead of night.
Meanwhile Rayman was having a nap in the pink plant woods. It was a nice sunny day like it was there all the time. The autumn mist would rise from the grass in the morning and make the leaves on the tries sparkle beautifully. Rayman woke up and went to the river for a drink and a swim.
“Nice day today!” He said cheerfully . “Later on I had better go and check on the great Protoon later, I can’t be too careful anymore” he said. He went back to his house and had some breakfast. The electoons were playing in the clearings and riversides. Rayman was very proud of himself for protecting these beings and being a good guardian of his world. He had tamed many of the once evil beings that inhabited his world. Space mama, Mr stone and Mr sax were all friends of Rayman now and they would visit him from time to time. They guarded their parts of the world, but being unaware of the two armies that were travelling under them. Rayman had a quiet day and not much was happening. By the time night came he was going to sleep again.
The Protoon squad were finally at their destination. They were directly below the great protons pedestal!. One of the robo pirates used his metal claws to dig out and get it. I was the perfect plan! All they had to do was put his hand out and grab it!. Then fill the hole in!. They had succeeded in stealing the great Protoon and were on their way back to the ship.
The Kidnapping squad were at there destination as well!. Right beneath where Rayman sleeps!. Mister dark magically created a hole underneath raymans hammock and Rayman fell down the hole and Into the big sack that was waiting for him. The sack was full of pillows so it didn’t wake him up!. The plan was ingenious! Absolutely no one knew of it and they were hastily making their way back to the ship.
“How far have we got left?” Said mister dark. “3 Miles left, sir” said one of the foot soldiers. The running woke Rayman up!. He could not see anything because he was in a sack. He didn’t have any energy to move or to shout. The great Protoon was removed and he has no power. He is virtually powerless. They arrive at the ship. “Get him on there!” Said the army. Mr skops had already boarded the ship and was preparing to take of. Everyone got on. They dumped Rayman in a cell where he was not guarded and that was a big mistake!.
Razorbeard came up to the bars of raymans cell. Rayman was lying there completely lifeless and had no energy. Razorbeard taunted him for hours and Rayman could not do anything. Eventually Razorbeard stopped and turned around to walk away. Then something amazing happened! The great Protoon fell out of his pocked and rolled to Rayman and Razorbeard didn’t even notice!.
Rayman seized this opportunity and grabbed it. H e had power now so he shot a hole in one of the vents and crawled to where the claw missile was. Even the missile wasn’t even being guarded!. Rayman jumped out of the vent and used his magic powers to put a timer on the bomb to blow up in 5 minutes. Rayman blew another vent open and slid out of the ship right under the noses of the two armies!. The ship was travelling very fast and was nearly in space. Rayman freefell for about 60,000 feet and then activated his helicopter as a parachute and gently fell to the ground. Right back in the pink plant woods in fact!. The ship was about 2000 miles away from raymans world now and Rayman said to himself: “They have tried again, and they have failed again!, and they will never do it again because they will be destroyed in 10...9...8...7...6...5...4...3...2...1”. A huge flash illuminated the sky and the ship and the army and skops and mister dark and razor beard were destroyed…forever. All the inhabitants of the world were surprised by this because they didn’t know what was going on until the morning and the flash happened. They all visited Rayman and asked what happened and he told them yet another one of his great and wonderful stories!…
THE END
