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Hey I am in college now

Posted: Mon Sep 03, 2007 9:01 pm
by neo
Yep, wish me luck.

This is my first paper, although it is not collge level:

First, there are many things led to what I believe today. For example, September-11. Somehow, that is proof to me that this world is really messed

up, but that happened only because the suicide bombers beleived in what they were doing. I am sure that since their "World" has probaly been

pure hell to them, that they would do this for Bin Laden. I would not blame them for having a really poor country and then seeing a country like

america, where your dreams come true. My mother has taught me to be a polite and kind man, and one that has manners, which is the way I am

today. Also, smaller values come from friends and teachers I have had in my past. Values from friends

are like what things may be cool or the new thing, but I don't know if it would relate to political beliefes. Also in the sixth grade, our class was

going to have a vote on either Bush or Al Gore. We were to make posters of which candidate we chose, that we thought would win, not that I knew

why either would win. I didn't know much about politics,

but I chose Bush for no reason. I made a poster of him, and I was proud of my work, so I showed it to my father. He got a tad bit upset, and told me

that he didn't like him.

So although I didn't make a new poster, I changed my vote. In our vote, Al Gore won, so I was happy. Also, Bush got re-elected, and I thought he

was re-elected because people were dumb enought to vote for him again, but soon I learned that was done so that he would no longer be able to

run for office, or that was what I was told. That now seems like a good idea, since Bush is almost finished with his term.

Re: Hey I am in college now

Posted: Mon Sep 03, 2007 9:03 pm
by Jman
That is good, I never have thought about Bush being re-elected in that way.

Yeah good luck with college.

Re: Hey I am in college now

Posted: Mon Sep 03, 2007 9:10 pm
by neo
Yeah, more like "lets get him out of the way first so he can never be re-elected haha".

Yes, thank you very much. :D

Re: Hey I am in college now

Posted: Mon Sep 03, 2007 10:12 pm
by Jman
No problem, but what is with all of the line spaces?

Re: Hey I am in college now

Posted: Mon Sep 03, 2007 10:55 pm
by neo
That was to make it at least one page XD I tried to double space it.

Re: Hey I am in college now

Posted: Mon Sep 03, 2007 11:01 pm
by Jman
LOL, does it have to be one page?

Re: Hey I am in college now

Posted: Tue Sep 04, 2007 4:15 pm
by Xenon
Good luck with college :wink:

Re: Hey I am in college now

Posted: Wed Sep 05, 2007 3:53 pm
by Newray
Yeah good luck, that's all I can say! :wink:

Re: Hey I am in college now

Posted: Wed Sep 05, 2007 8:57 pm
by Hoodcom
Good luck in college Neo! I know you can do well. =)

Re: Hey I am in college now

Posted: Thu Sep 06, 2007 2:22 am
by neo
Yes, it was supposed to be one page and I don't care how crappy it was. Thanks guys, and now I will post another :

Journal for my Writing class:

Well, my skills are reading comprehension, active listening, writing, speaking, critical thinking, and instructing.
I liked to help my fellow students with work and my friends always teased me saying that I would be a great teacher,
so I also chose instructing. I chose reading because I really like to read, from reading Novels and Mysteries to
Comics and Manga. Well, for speaking, I chose that because I know I can speak well, in english that is. Critical
thinking I chose because thats what you do when there are problems, and I have had my fair share of problems.
Writing, I chose because I know to write, but I don't remember why now, because I never beleive I could write a
decent paper. That is it for my skills, the other skills on the list seemed to specefic or technical for me, I would
not have them unless I had training for that stuff.
Well, I see positions for Audiologists, Chemistry Teachers, Computer Science Teachers, Economics Teachers,
Economists, Educational Pyschologists, and more for 6 skills matching these positions matching. For 5 skills
matching positions, I have Accountants, Adult Literacy, Aerospace Engineers, Art Directors, Art, Auditors, Broadcst
News Analysts, Civil Engineers, Clinical Psychologists, and many more. And now for only 4 skills matching, I have
Film and Video Editors, Equal Opportunity Representatives, Forest Fire Fighting, Health Educators, Industrial
Engineering Technicians, Interpreters and Translators, and much more. That is it for most of the career positions
that my skills were related to.
Well, I see a whole list of occupations I could pick, but I have the problem of not knowing what exact position I
would like. I love computers, and I would love to work with them, but so many positions. I see an 'Audio and Video
Equiment Technicians' occupation, that seems nice, but not that it would intereste me, but I would be interested to
learn about it. It is one of those occupations that you would not mind taking or getting used to, I think. Any
position here would be better off than custodial at disney, which I am.

Re: Hey I am in college now

Posted: Thu Sep 06, 2007 2:33 am
by Jman
Woaw now, be careful some body could pass this off as their own good paper. :mrgreen:

Re: Hey I am in college now

Posted: Thu Sep 06, 2007 3:06 am
by neo
Do I have to copyright it? :shock: :? :|

Re: Hey I am in college now

Posted: Thu Sep 06, 2007 7:07 am
by Feanaro Surion
No, just don't post it to the internet. Not saying it's not good to show us, cause I'm impressed, but still, if somebody accesses it, there's really no way to stop some Joe from using it.

Re: Hey I am in college now

Posted: Thu Sep 06, 2007 4:13 pm
by neo
Haha, yeah. ^^

Re: Hey I am in college now

Posted: Thu Sep 06, 2007 4:21 pm
by Hunchman801
Enjoy college, neo ;)

Re: Hey I am in college now

Posted: Thu Sep 06, 2007 4:26 pm
by neo
Oh I will, thank you. It is so much better than work, I think I will be in college longer than I thought!!!! Fuck work!!!! It sucks, custodian at disney.... yeah right. :lol: *scoffs at disney ands spits on it*

Re: Hey I am in college now

Posted: Thu Sep 06, 2007 4:30 pm
by Hunchman801
It's been two years since I left high school, but I wasn't as happy as you, as I had to enter a preparatory class for engineering schools, where there was a lot of work ^^

Re: Hey I am in college now

Posted: Thu Sep 06, 2007 4:33 pm
by neo
Hmmm, well, its better than cleaning up after people and hearing that shit over and over again. Then again, this is only my second week, so I don't know if I'll get sick of it or not. :lol: I will let you know at the end of the semester if I do, as for now, I will leave for class.

Re: Hey I am in college now

Posted: Tue Sep 11, 2007 3:51 am
by neo
This is for no apparent reason:

Thesis Statement:

I am a good _______ (position) for this ________ (Company) because of my _____________ (Characteristic 1), ______________ (Characteristic 2), and _________________ (Characteristic 3).


Characteristic 1

Detail:


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Characteristic 2

Detail:


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Characteristic 3


Detail:


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Conclusion:


MINE, just an example, I will not use this.


Thesis Statement:

I am a good graphics designer(position) for Microsoft(Company) because of my typing (Characteristic 1), computer knowledge (Characteristic 2), and interest in graphics (Characteristic 3).


Typing

Detail:


Detail:


Computer Knowledge

Detail:


Detail:


Interest in Graphics


Detail:


Detail:


Conclusion:

My characteristics are good typing, interested in graphics, and good computer knowledge, and I am a good graphics designer for Microsoft.



Hey I don't care if it sucks ITS SOMETING.

Re: Hey I am in college now

Posted: Tue Sep 11, 2007 3:53 am
by Feanaro Surion
Is that a draft for a resume?