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Okay, my third fic. The girl in this is named after Sharmilla Sandhya, one of my friends. (Well, they share first names. The surname goes to another friend of mine.) The fic also jumps between first and third person.

Chapter One: Sharmilla

I looked in the mirror, and speculated. I guess I'd better tell you what happened.
I never knew my parents. I used to live with my great-aunt,as I had no other relations I knew of. But then my great-aunt died.
She'd already planned out my future...
I sorted out my hair, looking at myself one more time. I was going to go to a new school in a different place. I didn't really have friends at my last school.
But I still didn't want to go to this one.
This school would even have a different format. They didn't bother to tell the school I would be there. Apparently I'd have to go straight to the head, who'd introduce me to the rest of the class.
Nice. Really...nice.
NOT.
I suddenly thought of something. The Social Services would soon be aware of me. The school didn't expect me. Should I run away...?
*
Some time later, I'm on my way to the school, in my old uniform. When I got there, I'd get a new one. I'd just got in the door when I suddenly had a stabbing pain in my back.
I pulled my denim jacket off and noticed there was something protruding from my blouse. That had ripped a hole in it. I looked over my shoulder and froze.
I had wings.
I quickly pulled my denim jacket back on and ran out of the building. I didn't know what had happened. But I still decided to try something. I carefully pulled my jacket off and flapped my newly acquired wings.
And sailed right up in the air.
"Oh wow!" I yelled, twirling around in the air. I just couldn't comprehend it. I'm just Sharmilla Lockheart, fourteen, and flying. Literally.
Unfortunately, I was flying for a little too long.
I didn't know I was falling until I looked down.
I screamed, desperately trying to flap my wings. Nothing. I hit the ground with an outstanding force.
Okay, the end of the first chapter. If no=-one replies by tomorrow I'll just type the second part anyway.

That was extremely random. o_0

So am I.

Did you finish your other fic?

No. In short.
Because a certain user <glares at spiraldoor> put me off.

I wonder how Spiraldoor manages to piss people off all the time.

I don't piss people off.

People get pissed off at me.

Yeah, and who's fault is that? I'm sorry, but you really...uh...
Have you ever written something, and got a reply on the same day, when it normally takes a couple of days for people to reply to your stuff? And you feel really happy 'bout that, for the aforesaid reason? And then you read the comment, and it's just useless criticism 'cos the person who posted it didn't even read whatever you wrote properly? Newsflash: That's what happened to me. And I felt extremely let down.

I know bad things happen for a reason, and this reason is: You didn't bother to read something before commenting. Makes you look really bad, don't it?

You might have to consider all the facts before you tell someone they're wrong, or people will see you as arrogant. And it looks like that's happened already.

That's just my advice. And you just might have to take it.

What?

I just made a joke pointing out that your fic had nothing to do with Rayman so far. You didn't have to cancel it because of it.

That's almost as much of an overreaction as the time God damned all people in the world to die because Eve ate an apple.

Fuck off, Spiraldoor.

Anyway, Mylifeisinsane (may I call you Jill?), don't be intimidated or offended by Spiraldoor. He's a troll. On the internet, and probably in real life too.

If he has criticism for you, ignore it, cause it's hardly ever constructive.

spiraldoor wrote:I don't piss people off.

People get pissed off at me.

Whatever you call it.

Mylifeisinsane wrote: I know bad things happen for a reason

Lol, Agent Smith.

Well, it's true!

Not always. Example: When an old lady gets knocked down by a monster truck.

Shawn wrote:
Anyway, Mylifeisinsane (may I call you Jill?

My name's not Jill. But you can if you want.
Or you can call me MLII or D. (D is the first letter of my real name)
I don't mind Jill.

El Dango wrote: Lol, Agent Smith.

Who the hell is Agent Smith?

Edit:
"I just made a joke that your fic had nothing to do with Rayman so far."

I'm sorry. You didn't make it clear it was a joke. If you had, this whole episode wouldn't have happened.

Mylifeisinsane wrote: Who the hell is Agent Smith?

The bad guy from 'The Matrix'.

El Dango wrote:Not always. Example: When an old lady gets knocked down by a monster truck.

Well maybe that old lady was in serious pain, and wanted to end it!

A movie I've never seen, I'm about 5 years to young.
(It is a 15, right? 'cos if it's a 12 then I've got to tell you I'm not seven.)

Yup, it's a 15.

Shawn wrote: Well maybe that old lady was in serious pain, and wanted to end it!

Funny how the discussion got this way.

El Dango wrote:Yup, it's a 15.

Shawn wrote: Well maybe that old lady was in serious pain, and wanted to end it!

Funny how the discussion got this way.

Yeah, how did this topic get from a girl named Sharmilla Lockheart discovering she's a fairy to old ladies getting hit by trucks?

GOT IT! That's how her great aunt dies! Thank you Shawn!

Should I be joking or is that idea actually good...

It's when Spiraldoor posts.