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Haiku
Posted: Wed May 27, 2009 8:06 am
by Holy Crap
......Haikus are awesome
Except when they don't make sense
..........Refrigerator
Re: Haiku
Posted: Wed May 27, 2009 4:14 pm
by stan423321
This sounds
like a very good dame topic
...
pr0oO€eE$sS
confusion
...
The cow meat was saved today
Re: Haiku
Posted: Thu May 28, 2009 8:02 am
by Holy Crap
You have no idea what a Haiku is do you.
Re: Haiku
Posted: Thu May 28, 2009 12:34 pm
by Droolie
Stan failed to create a haiku.
Now let's hope this haiku is "autumn"...
Meh, I prefer to rhyme.
I can do that on a better time.
And the fun is much bigger, though not really immense...
... even if they don't make sense!
Re: Haiku
Posted: Thu May 28, 2009 2:23 pm
by Xenon
You are wrong, you swine
Haiku only have three lines
That often do rhyme
Five syllables, then
Seven syllables (not ten)
And five once again
I don't think I'll close
'Cause I know no threads, so
We'll see how it goes
Re: Haiku
Posted: Thu May 28, 2009 2:42 pm
by Tobbe
Holy Crap wrote:You have no idea what a Haiku is do you.
Why am I not surprised?
Re: Haiku
Posted: Thu May 28, 2009 3:05 pm
by Droolie
'Kay, Xenon, you win.
So I will now re-begin...
You forgive my "sin"?
Re: Haiku
Posted: Thu May 28, 2009 3:20 pm
by Xenon
Oh for pity sake
I do pardon your mistake
These are hard to make
^^
Re: Haiku
Posted: Thu May 28, 2009 4:05 pm
by stan423321
For reason of truth being true,
I have seen longer haikus, have you?
But I'd accept three-line long review.
Re: Haiku
Posted: Thu May 28, 2009 4:10 pm
by spiraldoor
I am win
There is no spoon
Re: Haiku
Posted: Thu May 28, 2009 4:28 pm
by stan423321
What the hell
happened to my rank?
I fell like someone stole money from my bank.
Re: Haiku
Posted: Thu May 28, 2009 9:51 pm
by Rsandee
Door locked
Door can only be opened by the power of gems
Now just pay me so i can finally go home!!!
I love those lines from moneybags!!
Re: Haiku
Posted: Fri May 29, 2009 3:15 am
by Holy Crap
I think Stan and R4321 Should read Xenon's post. As well as being Awesome, it explains how to make proper Haiku.
Haiku often has
Seasonal References
For no real reason
Re: Haiku
Posted: Fri May 29, 2009 2:53 pm
by stan423321
I have a haiku book. Yes, a BOOK! I have seen a three page long haikus there, but....
...your problem anyway.
Re: Haiku
Posted: Fri May 29, 2009 9:13 pm
by El Dango
My internet sucks
Really, really, really hard
It makes me angry
Re: Haiku
Posted: Wed Jun 03, 2009 5:25 pm
by Rsandee
Holy Crap wrote:I think Stan and R4321 Should read Xenon's post. As well as being Awesome, it explains how to make proper Haiku.
Haiku often has
Seasonal References
For no real reason
I know but i forgot most of Moneybags lines.... so it doesnt rhyme.... and for the stupid guys here Haiku is the language in Spooky Swamp in the game ''Spyro 3 year of the dragon''
Re: Haiku
Posted: Thu Jun 04, 2009 8:24 am
by Holy Crap
Haikus don't have to rhyme, but they do ahve to have 3 lines with 5 syllables, then seven syllables, the 5 syllables again.
This thread is failing.
PC Just doesn't Haiku.
It was worth a shot.
Re: Haiku
Posted: Thu Jun 04, 2009 3:11 pm
by Hunchman801
What's important is the number of moras, not the number of syllables
Re: Haiku
Posted: Thu Jun 04, 2009 4:24 pm
by stan423321
Poetry equivalent of line is "mora" in English, right?
Re: Haiku
Posted: Thu Jun 04, 2009 6:28 pm
by Xenon
Truth can I muster
Linked with consonant clusters
A mora's just a
Type of sound phoneme
That follows the sound regime
To one uttered theme
'Breeze', I may well say
Is one syllable astray
Yet is two morae
Matter does this;
The problem indeed exists
But let's just fuck this
And moving into
You, yes you Holy Crap you
Exceeded my view
This topic is good
But remember guys we should
Keep it withstood