Fanfic: A new dawn

[Xenon]

Happy B-Day!

[Hunchman801]

I hope you will be more active now you are older ^^

[K.NARREN]

i can only use a school computor....

it's great being back on the forums....i remember when i first came. it was raymanzone, and i'd written a really bad story about razorbeard. but when i wrote the fanfic about rayman meets crash and spyro, everyone thought it was a noob story....until i revealed that they were clever disguises that stopped rayman from stopping the marriage between reflux and ly. everyone who read it said that it was a strange revelation...even more so when i revealed reflux was a good guy, and that the marriage went ahed.....
and now, many years onwards, here we are. ly is happily married, rayman has faced against the likes of veedon, moko, and pablo. i hope that i keep writing those stories.

speaking of pablo, remember how he was a major villain player in my second and fourth story. remember how i never finished rayman:revelations? put the two together and guess the outcome...
i can't tell you my age {parent thing...but a smart parent thing] but i hope you guys enjoy reading my stories as much as i do writing them!




okay, next chapter.


rayman realised that things were serious. krazzoff had made off with all of scouts team and scout. frost magician was winning...holgrump tapped him on the back, and rayman jumped back. rayman was about to say something, when holgrump put his finger on his mouth.
"no talking, even asking how i got here. scout may have an elite team, but so do you. forget the loss...and get your friends back." the two ran down the hill, both watching as water froze over, and summer became winter. Rayman saw the clearing where the hut was...but they were both too late.
belongings had been thrown around. photos smashed, and raymans spirit had died. he just sat moping the loss of his friends. holgrump walked over, and handed him a photo of him,globox and...rayman gripped it tight. he slowly stood up, not uttering a word. he looked out at the barren tundra. only four words crossed his mind-
"this time, it's personal..." he stared at holgrump. holgrump grabbed him.
"lets vent your anger on frost magicain. look...ever since he came into power, we've had a resistance, right? let me take you to the leader.. muballck"
frost magician peered at his new prisoners. each one was being tortured in his own spcial way. he watched as reflux tried to lift up a pencil to fight the ants. reflux was always the big one...and now he'd see life as a small one. he couldn't be bothered to shrink the others...giving them fire to eat was good enough. to his left, his new elite team of robotic toons stood guard. prisoners could be useful..especially when you replaced thier bones with cold hard steel. above him, rayman and holgrump stood guard. muballck had given them a secret plan over the transmitter-but he hadn't let them see him. he obviously liked to keep to the shadows. rayman and holgrump had already defeated the guards...all that was left was to carry out the plan. they leaned over the edge, 10 cm away from the edge, just as muballck had told them..and a trapdoor opened below them.

[Xenon]

Hmm, good work! Nice cliff-hanger!

[K.NARREN]

Thanks! here's the next chapter....

Rayman sat in the prison, his hands hung from the ceiling, locked up by frost magician, and rayman dangled from them. he had no arms, but the pain was awful. he began trying to struggle free. Holgrump sat in a corner, blaming himself for the mess up. he still had the walkie talkie, as he had hidden it, and was wondering wether to call muballck or not to tell him how the plan went. He began blaming himself.
"how could the plan have gone wrong? everything was perfect, and we fall right into frosts hands." rayman noticed the name of muballck on the walkie talkie. He smiled. it was a funny name, and there were other names to be made out of it. cumballck, balluckm, bl.....rayman stood, frozen in horror. another name appeared in his mind...and yet another name on the walkie talkie... dr mark. He worked out the puzzle, and began pulling himself until he was separated from his arms, just like globox had once done. He used his feet to get the key, and within a minute, had the both of them running free.
frost magician sat coldly, and, quite frankly, bored. he hated having to prolong his attacks, and watched as his victims yelled with pain. suddenly, one of his soldiers came running through the corridoor, gasping for air. he gathered himself together, and gabbled away. "my liege, the prisoners have escaped! they've released everyone and are almost..." with that, frost magician fell off his throne as a million prisoners came through the door way. rayman stood at the head of them, and pointed an accussing finger at frost magician. "i know who you really are!" frost magician laughed a cold, hollow laugh. "my dear rayman, i am fros..." rayman wouldn't let him finish. " it first occured to me that someone bigger was behind this. my first clue was skops, a villain who knew i was coming, even though i had been sent on a random mission that, as it turned out, was pointless. someone put him up to it." rayman glanced around. "my second clue was that frost magician wears a hood, covering his face. but my biggest clue was when a false resistance member gave us a flase plan to capture you. isn't that right, magician, or should i say....."

[neo]

Sorry about going off-topic, but I'm glad your back! Oh, and happy birth day, Knarren! I think I've seen you somewhere besides the Pirate-Community, but I don't remember where.

Great Fanfic! See! Great members like you are what we need! People say PC doesn't care about Rayman, but we do! And don't worry if you feel shunned when you go to RZ, I'd felt the same way over there. Oh well, I tried posting, but I'm not really payed attention much, they just ignore me by quoting somebody, lol, it happens all the time. Some people are nice, though, like Ryan-Phoenixan, Rbrnikke, and Abhinav. (and maybe some others, I think Raymiles).

[Hunchman801]

Yes, Raymiles is also nice, at least now ^^

[K.NARREN]

wow, thanks neo! I think there are so many nice members out there, who actually do want to take part and do well, and others who abuse the forums purely because it's there. i love getting to chat to other people who are very like minded, because loads of stuff can be done online to make it even better.

next chapter

".....ANDRE!" andre smiled from within frost magicians robes. "clever, but how did you find me?" Rayman gave a sly smile. "easy, muballck is an anagram...rearange the letters and you get black lum!..." but rayman hadn't finished.."...but that was an intentional clue wasn't it? and you gave me another one...dr mark-mr dark!" andre s ed. "it was the only way to get you to here...don't you remember fighting mr dark here? that's why i wrote it down..to jog your memory! it was the only way to get you to realise who killed your father...and mr darks true identity..me!" rayman jumped as andre threw a harpoon. cripes, thought rayman, he'd forgotten that while he was frost magician he still had ice powers. the two battled in the court room, each getting more and more fustrated in thier losses. it came down to a stalemate, leaving both exausted. ly was wathcing, curiously..frost magician was creeping up on rayman, poised with his harpoon. she turned to globox. "raindance...now!" globox stopped prospecting up his nose just in time to create rain over andre...who melted. rayman scared andre, turning back into his usual lummy self.
Dawn looked at the crowd of faces and sleepily took the stand.
"attention..attention! thanks to rayman, scout and thier friends, the land is safe once more.but let us not relax too much...if the time of frost should come again..we'll be ready!" the crowd cheered. rayman took one last look around the area. holgrump would take them home, and they'd never be seen again. suddenly, the silent, calculating individual whom rayman had seen behind the robot returned, and this time, he was facing rayman. he walked up to him. "rayman, you are a good detective..but inexperience. i wish to join you as your detective..as i feel a little left out here" Rayman took a moment. he pondered all the great adventures he'd had. then, he held out his hand. "welcome aboard...what did you say you were called?" the individual smiled.

"just call me.....raxon."