It was dawn. Veedon gathered the jewls together and plotted a new map. The hike would take at least 3 days to achieve....he mopped his brow. he gestured to the clan that it was time to move...and fast. as they left, a familliar figure watched from the shadows....
this is just a teaser of my new story! pictures, characters and help will be nneeded, so if you guys wanna get to help finish the story, just ask!
Nice work! Keep it up! (sorry, I can't help right now, I have to finish my school work, then go to work on the weekend, but if I come up with something, I'll let you know)
Don't worry, you don't have to do that. I mean, H is ok in front, but Hoodcom is taking it a bit too far lol. Hunch, Hunchman, Hunchman801, and Hunchy are ok by him.
It all happened several days ago. time, space, everything can connect. it's like someone you think is long gone returns, a lost present ends up in the wrong timeline continum, and idea is forgotten, a breath stops, or things change as we know it. THIS story has something like that........something...but not anything.....
"Hurry up with the preperations! the ambassador must not feel left out!" the little teensies collected everything they could and hurried around, painting and mopping and putting up statues. yes, there was no end to the frenzies of the teensies. The ambassadoor of the fairy glade, the grand minimus, was arriving at dewtown, and everything had to be perfect. the knarrens had even been ordered by gumsi to put up decorations. One popped a teensie in his mouth, then saw everyone staring and slowly placed him back on the floor. everything was going to be perfect for the next few days. minimus was coming, people were smiling....suddenly, everyone began to get a bit more....relaxed. images of beaches and cool refreshing forests appeared before them. People decided that they were working too hard, and glided towards the great spas and rest stops. as they did, a hidden figure scuttled around, taking measurements of all of the decorations. He took his image inducer with him, and not a soul saw him. The moment he was gone, reality snank in. No change had happened, and the rest had been fun. they continued on thier decorations.
Rayman took a step onto the fresh land. His feet happy to be back on his own planet once more. After being taken to his home planet, rayman and a new friend had ventured home. Globox was idily toying with some grass in a small clearing. Rayman hopped around a bit, swinging on tree branches and feeling the wind on his face. He headed over to a large , and sat down for a snooze along with reflux, who had taken the day off from guarding the castle. Globox saw the two and joined them in thier lazy snooze. yes, nothing could have been better for theese three heroes.Nothing in the world.....
Things were pretty lazy. Dawn was lazing around, getting ready for the biggest snooze up of his life. Coming to the teensies planet to meet the grand minimus seemed pretty dull, so he'd painted eyes on his eyelids to make him look remotely interested. He kicked open a can of tuna and munched down lazily. Suddenly, a dark figure was looming in the doorway. Without the king even looking up, he slipped a letter into the kings hand and slunk away. An hour later, dawn took a look at the letter.
to whom it may concern,
royal rousing slumber party
including all of the teensie kings and several others,
minumus's palace,
yours sincerely
the grand minimus
How could dawn say no?
Rayman woke up. The noise was deafening. It was like globox on a bad day after having eaten 78 hard boiled cheese cakes. He took a look round the , and saw a couple of converted razorbeard pirates helping up a fairy who had a huge sore on her hand....as the pirates took her into the van, with a crowd watching, rayman could make out what she was saying.
"please...help....pa...." but she'd been taken off the stretcher and put onto the bed in the van , and the medics had driven away......
Over the next few days, rayman couldn't get the image of the fairy out of his head. He kept seeing this apparition, with the wound wide open, beckoning to him and whispering words that he couldn't quite make out. The country fell into depression as more and more people recieved the same sores. Of course, everyone who was healthy was too busy preparing for the fiesta that minimus was attending.Rayman decided there was only one way to sort this out.
Raxon was sitting by his desk. He eyed rayman carefully, and then paced about for a while. "What you've told me...well, it's not very different from an infection my home-planet...sorry, your home planet, had suffered. But the symptoms are very different.' Rayman watched him pace up and down some more."but, you said you were a detective, can't you...y'know...search into this a little more?" Raxon shrugged. "The lab won't pay me-minimus had all the banks closed down until his fiesta was over." Again with minimus's rules,thought rayman. They seemed stranger than ever this year. he pondered wether he'd been away too long...raxon stretched himself up to his full height. slipping on his helmet, he took rayman by his limbless hand. "c'mon...we got work to do!"
Dawn walked across the hall. People were cheering-it was the first time in years that the king had stopped being lazy and walked a milistep! People were holding banners as the event of the king walking was too great for them. The king stared…why were people making such a fuss-he was only going to the posting room to send a reply to minimus. Dawn took out his pen and jotted furiously in his notebook. “next time I should remember to have the royal carriers carry me.”
“That rules space mamma out” Raxon stood over his plans of all the villains they’d questioned. Space mama was suspected because rayman thought that the sores were caused by knocks on the head…but he’d been wrong-they were too severe to be caused by a rolling pin. The rabbids were , and so was andre…and they’d even suspected their own pal, reflux. But no-one, it seemed, could help them. Rayman kept trying to think back…he knew he’d seen those sores before. He began to think of past adventures. Fighting the grolgorth, defeating mr dark and andre, trying to stop ly and refluxes wedding, defeating veedon and pabl…he started with a jolt. Raxon stared at him. “what’s the matter?” rayman lowered his voice. “Last year, I journeyed out with my friends to…well, that’s another story. But I met this villain called Pablo who took us to a fake paradise. He merged the 3 guardians[axel, umber and foutch[for those of you who read my fanfic!}}and tried to kill me! Recently, I found out that he had betrayed a thief called veedon to marry the leader of the thieves, mariak, but he was destroyed. Now, let’s say that Pablo might have unlimited power:what if he didn’t die? What if it’s just a hoax?” raxon nodded in agreement-this situation was obviously getting a whole lot deeper….
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