Story about Phoenix The Guardian.

[PhoenixG]

Prologue


A boy named Phean has a normal life, a normal family… everything was normal. Till that day come, when everything changed is life. That day was also a special day too, for Phean. It was the day when he graduates from high school. From this point this story will begin.


Well does it sound good>?... If so I continue

[Ray2master]

Um... that's a little veig. What's this about graduation? I thought Phoenix was a bird. Like the one on your sig.

[PhoenixG]

Phoenix the Guardian is a person ...

Did is just a prologue... the story has to began... yet

[GekSliver]

are you going to do the same story as in Raymanzone? good

[skateboarder]

let it begin...

[Ray2master]

What's with the bird, then?

[PhoenixG]

It will be explained in time
And any question... just ask





Episode 1
The first walk of Phoenix the Guardian

Chapter 1
What… who am I?

It’s just a last day of school. “Great, no more school for a few months” yelled Phean, “The final exam it’s just over, and I just… just what to take it easy for awhile”. So he did what he just said. Few days later when the exam result has been made. Most people were happy, because they past the exam and able to go to the college and some not. Phean was one of the students who past it. Well off course he was happy of it.

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Some where else in the galaxy on an unknown planet, there where a guardian meeting take place. In that meeting are normally 8 persons, but now there are only three person left. Each one for each elemental. Only the guardians of holy, water and earth was left, because the rest are dead from an ancient war. Those three guardians were discussing about how this must go one. If another attack of the darth force they won’t survive it… But they know that after every Guardian dies, he will choose his successor and automatically his spirit will transfer to that person. They decide to that the guardian of water and holy go to search for the “reborn” guardian, while the guardian of earth remains in the realm, because he was the strongest of the three guardians.

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Mean while somewhere close of the guardian’s realm. The darth forces are discussing about there next attack…
The leader of darth force ( later in the story more detail ): “Well, this is a great success. Soon the realm will be mine, and all the powers in that realm are mine to. Mwhahahaahhah… * cough ** cough *”
One of the observers: ”My lord, something happened to the realm”.
The leader: “yes…. I feel it. I must know what they are up to. Send the strongest trekkers to follow them”.

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Back on earth, While Phean is celebrating in school with all his friends about their passing the exam. At near the midnight. Phean start to get a strange feeling… “I feel... a bit strange… it’s like… I feel darkness…” Suddenly a beautiful girl enters in the school. She looked around those people ( most of them are quite drunken O.o ). Then she walks right at Phean.
She said to Phean: “You are the chosen one to be a guardian”
Phean: “Whatte…. O.O”

To be continued.

[skateboarder]

nice
continue

[PhoenixG]

Chapter 2
The guardian of fire arises


Phean: “You must be kidding me, who are you any way… do I know you?”
The Girl: “I’m also a guardian… I’m the guardian of water… They call me Leva and I’m not kidding you. You are one of them, I can feel it.”
Phean: “How can you feel it ...oo... great guardian of water?”
Leva: “Well first you can that too, second it’s one of the powers and third I think you have felt something... dark. Am I right?”
Phean: “I guess so…”
They argue for some time about this. While the guardian of Holy ( while she ( yes… it’s a girl too ) also felt that dark power ) try to find out what that strange power is…

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Back at the darth forces. They are preparing for the next attack. Because the leader knows that the defence is weak and attacking now would be the best what they can do. The leader is also a bit impatient ( as always ) to wait for his trekkers to return to report. So he set everything prepared to attack it. While the guardian of earth set everything what he can to defence this realm as long as possible.

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Still the trekkers are following what the other two guardians are up to. Then he saw the guardian of Holy, so he quickly hides, and tries to hear what she said. Well this is what he all can hear…
The guardian of Holy: “….what’s... feeling… darkness… water… found… guardian….”
He figured it out that the other guardian found a new guardian…
The trekkers: “So… that is what they up to. Searching for new guardians. Hmmmm… I’ve two choices. One is head back to the HQ or I can kill him/her and get the credits”
After a few second he decides to kill him, after all getting credits is one of the best things you can get. So he quickly ties to search for the guardian of water.

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At the school of Phean, Leva and Phean are still arguing about Phean destiny. Suddenly both of them feel a great dark power. Then… the trekkers punch a big hole in the school roof. Every one except Leva and Phean ( strangely Phean isn’t afraid ) runs panicky the school out.
The Trekkers: “Well… well… what do we got here. A guardian and a human that you think that’s a guardian. Well I go to kill you both… Mwhahahaha…”
Leva: ”Well you need to pass me first”
And she changes in her combat fatigue. Draws her sword and start fighting the trekkers.
Phean: “I have a feeling I saw this before, or done it before…”
Leva fought a good fight, but the trekkers was just stronger than her. When she was about the point losing it, Phean start to have a feeling that he knows Leva very well… like a dejá vu. Some how Phean changed… A bright light start to surrounding Phean… The trekkers and Leva saw this happening.
The trekkers: “What kind of magic is THIS? It must been stopped”
He tries to attack him. Leva couldn’t stop him, because she was too tired to move. The bright light is forming a light pillar with Phean in it and it blocks the trekkers attack. Suddenly the light pillar went to Phean, and it creates his armour and weapons ( his combat fatigue ). When this was over Leva gasp…
Leva: “but… that… is… Phoenix… guardian of the fire… THE guardian…”
The trekkers: “No way, is THIS human THE guardian?”
Phoenix ( Phean ): “Yes… the phoenix has been reborn”

To be continued.

[strummingmidnight]

WHOA!!!!

[skateboarder]

awesome
go on

[The Knocker]

Cool, go on! You should submit this on DeviantArt!

[PhoenixG]

I just submit it on fictionpress

[The Knocker]

I just submit it on fictionpress

I know, you told me this morning

[PhoenixG]

Yah... I did... First I make a error by upload a .doc file...

the result was a plain text with no layout ... so I need to translate to html

[The Knocker]

Yah... I did... First I make a error by upload a .doc file...

the result was a plain text with no layout ... so I need to translate to html

I can do that if you want...

[PhoenixG]

I've already done it

[The Knocker]

I've already done it

Okay

[PhoenixG]

Chapter 3
Goodbye the Earth

The trekkers is still surprised that the guardian of fire is back. He knows and the others to that Phoenix the strongest guardian is, and with the most experience in combat and in judgment. Still there is one secret that nobody knows, only Phoenix himself. In the confusion Phoenix attack the trekkers, however the trekkers was able to avoid it.
Phoenix: “Hmmm…. I’m slower than I use to be. It must be the time out that I have”.
The Trekkers: “Hahahah… I see you have been weakened. So it must be an ease to kill you”.
Phoenix: “Don’t be so sure about that, I might be weakened, but I still have my abilities”.
And the fight continues. The battle is about even, nobody has an advantage. While the battle progress, Leva try to gain some strength to able to move.

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The guardian of Holy is still searching for the “evil” that she has sensing before, but she sense now something different. Something like energy explosion. She quickly flies the direction were the energy came from.
The guardian of Holy: “Oh… no… Leva might be in trouble, I must help her. Hopefully I’m not too late.”

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The battle is still going on. Still Phoenix has some troubles with gaps in his powers. Some of them he can’t use and he doesn’t know why, but he must keep fighting.
The trekkers: “You getting more predictable, it’s your downfall. Mwhahahaha…”
Phoenix: “Grrrr… I will never give up”Suddenly the front door of the school was blown away. ( yes… the battle was in the school ). The trekkers got distracted by it and Phoenix saw the opportunity to kill him. And he did it, by blasting him in million pieces with a dragonbeam. The guardian of Holy enters the school.
The guardian of Holy: “No fear, I’m here. Whatte… is here going on?”
* she looks up *
The guardian of Holy: “It can’t be… Phoenix? Your back?”
Phoenix: “Yes, Alexa I’m back and alive. Nice decoy move by destroying the door.”
Leva: “hmmm……….”
Alexa: “Poor you, let me fix you up”
* Alexa cast cure on Leva *
Alexa: “There, that is better.”
Leva: “Thanks Alexa, still we must go on with the search of the other Guardians and Phoenix my love you better had back to the Guardian’s realm to protect it. I don’t know how long Tirone ( guardian of earth ) can hang on there all alone.”
Phoenix: “I don’t know if I’m able to fly through space. Some of my abilities are failing. And what about my family here?”
Alexa: “Well the best is that they don’t know it. And for you are the best thing to remove those memories and your abilities will be back well you back in the realm, the reason is that the powers are stocked in the realm when a guardian dies. The mystery for me is that how can you get your main guardian powers without get you back in the realm.”
Phoenix: “Hmmm… maybe it is the best that my parents don’t know it, but I don’t want to lose my memories. By the way we are wasting our time here. I’m going to the realm and you to keep searching the other once. Well good luck you two, and take care of yourself my love.”
And they separate there roads.


Back in the Guardian’s realm…

Tirone: “I hope Leva and Alexa find the guardians... the shield here is weakening every second…”

To be continued.

[The Knocker]

Neat! *claps*