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Rayman Fanfictions ive written!

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Hello! Im new to share my fics on here... and i have a huge backlog if yall like these enough! :mryellow:

You are the star of my eye

Desc: Betilla info dumps about stars

Tags: Betilla X Reader, Autistic Betilla

A/N: Critism is allowed as long as it isnt rude!



The night was young, the stars shining bright. Perfect for Betilla's hyperfixation, Astronomy.

For as long as she could remember, she loved studying the night sky... it understood her more than most. Even if it couldn't talk, its silence comforted her.

Tonight, she was watching the stars through her special telescope in the comfort of her little cabin. The spyglass was pointing the atmosphere, out her window. She sat comfortably in front of it, on home made pillows. The note notebook sat on her lap, while Astronomy books were next to her. Meanwhile, you're cooking dinner in a pot beside her.

"Hmmm... Today should be the best day to watch Orion.." He fiddled with the glass, trying to get a closer look.

"Ah-ha!" She had found the group of stars that formed Orion, and she flew up in the air excitedly while flapping her hands around.

You smiled, if she was happy, you were happy. Dinner was ready too!

"Heh, I'm glad you're happy.. and i know what's gonna make you even happier!"

She stopped in her tracks.

"What?"

It was star shaped rice balls, with a side dish of telescope cookies.

Her eyes widened.

"Thanks Y/N!" She gave you a big old kiss on the cheek, before sitting back at her telescope.

As you watched her be so excited, it made you warm inside. The way her hair would move in the air when she stimmed, the way she seemed to get really thrilled at silly stuff. Even if others thought it was stupid... you just got happiness in her unfiltered joy.

You sat behind her, the pillows beneath you having a fluffy texture. She sprang up for a moment, before calming down.

"Heh..." Then she got distracted.

"Oh! Did you know that Orion's appearance means that winter is coming? Plus it contains 2 of the brightest stars in the sky-"

You lay your head on her shoulder, and she stopped for a moment, her face red as roses.

"Hmm... keep going... this is really interesting actually.." You gave her a kiss on the cheek.

"Well... the hunter depicted is fighting a bull!-"

She went on for hours and hours, but you listened intensely to every word that came out of her beautiful mouth.

She'll remember this.
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Awww, that’s sweet :oops2: great work on this and on future projects! :wink:
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Ok! I finished the Murfy X reader fic so l'll share it!

Murfy!

Desc: Murfy is feeling very affectionate today.

A/N: This is short... as i had a lot of trouble writing for the little green pest.

The sun shined bright through the beautiful blue sky, the light hit the grass at just the right angle for it to shimmer. The trees leaves fell off, starting their journey through the wind.[/size]

You laid on the grass, your hair flowing in the cold Autumn breeze. It had been a slow, relaxing day.

Then.. Murfy flew over, but stopped when he saw you.

"Hey hottie!" He yelled as his tiny body flew into your lap.

You pet his head, and he purred rather loudly.

"Mmhhh.." He nuzzled into your chest, his cheeks becoming a deeper shade of green.

He calmly caressed your sides, putting some pressure on your hip. The feeling of his tiny hands on your waist increases your heartbeat. He notices, and a huge smirk appears on his face.

"Ohh.. look whos all flustered!" He teased, arising up to your face.

He starts to pamper your face with kisses. Making you laugh loudly, scaring a couple Lums away.

"Oops.."

"Its just a couple Lums..."

"But-"

"Shhhh.." He goes back to kissing you.. and that's all you did that night.
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This is very wholesome, albeit a bit scary :P. Great work once again! :mrgreen:
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Ok! im gonna start posting my Rayman X Reader fics...

Massages


Desc: after a long day, Rayman gives you a back massage!

Tags: Rayman X reader, Mario + Rabbids, hurt/comfort, massages


It had been a really stressful day for you, as you had to run errands for the Rabbids. They needed materials for their production of Six.

As you enter the prop making room, you see Rabbid Mario, Peach, Luigi and Yoshi, but also see your boyfriend, Rayman. They are all hanging around while trying to re-write the script.

"Peach is the best person to play Anne! She'd do amazing at 'Don't lose your head'!" Rabbid Mario proudly stated.

"Yeah.. I am pretty amazing.." Rabbid Peach ran her hand through her blonde hair.

Rayman was quietly playing with the ring on his finger, sighing deeply. He looked around the room, his eye lids half way down his eyes. He then spotted you, his eyes widening.

"Hey babe~!" He says in a flirtatious tone, making you blush.

Rabbid Peach gives him a side eye. "Dork."

He doesn't hear her, instead getting up and starting to start walking over to you.

You attempt step in..

CRACK!

Suddenly, you black out, your eyesight being completely black. You can only hear and feel. You are mortified, heart beat becoming extremely quick.

"Y/N? Honey?" You felt Rayman's hand on your back, your heartbeat slowing down. When he sees that you aren't okay, he picks you up.

"Rabbid Mario, prepare a safe spot for Y/N to lay on. Rabbid Lugi, get juice and a little snack. Rabbid Peach and Yoshi, get the med kit!" There was a sense of urgency in his voice, he was trying not to panic.

When you're all set up on a bed, Rayman takes off his gloves. He lifted up the back of your shirt, and started to gently dig his fingers into your skin.

"I cant see anything.." You get cut off.

"Shh shh.. relax.. It's ok... you're safe.." He whispers before kissing your neck, going back to pressing slow, soft circles to your back.

You can't help but let out a soft sigh, closing your eyes and falling asleep.

You awake a few hours later, realizing you were in your bed with Rayman next to you.

"Hey sweetheart.." He cups your cheek, then presses his lips against your forehead.

"Mmm.. slight fever.. l'll make you soup.." He gives you a kiss on the lips before getting up.

You feel... warm. Rayman being there and taking care of you makes you feel safe. You lay back down, closing your eyes to day dream about your boyfriend.
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Ok, im wondering if its against the rules to post my next fanfic? I know that if you wanna post multiple art works then thats fine but... is that the same for fanfics?
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It should be fine! The rules are, don’t double post if you don’t have anything important to add, and since this is a thread for your arts it should be alright as long as you don’t exploit it for tings :mrgreen:
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Ok!

Magic!

Desc: Alas teaches you magic!

Tags: Ales Mansay X Reader, Magic


"Now... This should be easy!"

He held your arms, attempting to lead you to doing your first spell.

You two are in the middle of a very close moment, trying to cast your first spell. Your body sat on his lap in the middle of candy world.

Ales had laid a mat under the both of you so your bottom wouldn't be covered in cream by the end of the day. The place smelled of sweetness, and the sky was hot pink.

You had asked him to teach you magic, as you aren't very good at fighting physically. So you wanted to fight alongside your love.

Focus, you think to yourself, he did say this would be easy.

Your eyes close shut, and you concentract.

"You know your onions! Come on darlin'!" He encourages you, and kisses your cheek.

Then... a ball of light started to glow in your hand..

"You.. You did it love! You bloody did it!"

You open your eyes to your achievement, you have done magic! Sure, it was small, and its light was weak. However, it was still very impressive.

Ales let you go, and ran around you. His heart beat was so loud that you could hear it. You smile, glowing in your success.
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I really love this formula of making it feel like an ASMR video reading these posts :up:
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Ok! Im writing a fic rn, but im opening requests on here too!
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Do one about Helena handbasket!
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Imma do that one later, as i have 1 more request to fulfill..

SLOW CARESSES

Desc: You and Raymans first dance at your wedding.

Tags: Rayman/reader, first dance, wedding




Ah.. your wedding day. The day to celebrate you and Rayman's marriage, a day to show how much you love each other. The venue was outside at night, lums acting like fairy lights.

You two had already had your first kiss as a married couple, and Rayman could barely keep his hands off of you. His floating hands caressed your waist, arms and hands.

During the dinner, Rayman held you close, very close. Even during his toast, he kept his arms around you.

Then, when the first dance came, he held you close once more, his hands on your hips. The gentle sounds of a band playing music as Globox sings.

Rayman lifted you up, holding you tight as you two danced. His feet gently moved to the rhythm, your hearts beating in harmony. Emotions are all over the place, positive of course, but you were still nervous.

Rayman dips you, and his head floats closer to your ear. "Hey.. i've got you.. love.." He kisses your ear, making you giggle.

"There is my love... my gorgeous love.. so happy." His lips caressed your cheek.

Everyone at the wedding could feel the love coming off the two of you. The lums colors changing to pink.

"Look at that.." Rayman lifts you back up, allowing you to see the beautiful lights above.

"Woah..." You open your mouth, Rayman quickly stealing another kiss.

You look back at him, and you cup his rapidly reddening cheeks. You lean in, and kiss him back. It is slow and passionate, while you two dance.

As the dance ends, Rayman carries you off the dance floor, setting you down on a chair.

"You did so well.." He kisses you again.
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Ok i need a Beta Reader... im writing a Trouble with an oc and i feel like its getting repetitive.
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What do you mean beta reader?
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Like someone to send my fic to and to give tips and criticisms
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Am I not professional enough to do that?
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Idk, im just asking around cuz i wanna improve
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I could give you some tips if you want me to
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Ohh okay! PM me if interested.
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Alright, I will do in a bit
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