My fanfic.

[soxfan2006]

RAYMAN LOST IN TIME
Prouloge
“As most of you know rayman that pesky limbless idiot is always getting in the way of our plans.” Explained mister dark who was standing in front of what seemed to be every villain that has been defeated by Rayman. Including Razorbeard, Andréa , and the rabbids And of course thousands of their henchmen. And a few more villains who are not going to be mentioned just yet. “But I have a plan that will get rid of him once and for all!” “How are you going to do that?” Shouted one of his own henchman. “Its very simple really.” explained mister dark. “We are going back in time to stop rayman from being born.” “How are you going to do that.” shouted the same henchman. “Will you let me finish you scum bag!” “Anyway we will collect the 5 gems of power and with them I will become the most powerful person in the world!” Shouted mister dark. “Oh and every time I said we I mean you and I will supervise.” “but aren’t the 5 gems only a myth?” Asked razor beard. “Oh no they are very real and once I collect them we will go back in time and keep Rayman from getting born.” “Now all we have to do is get them before Rayman finds out what we are doing. And with my daughter working as a double agent it will be a snap.” Then a dark figure stepped out from the shadows behind Mister Dark. “What is my mission father” The cloaked figure asked in a dark tone. “You will pretend to be Rayman’s friend until further instructions.” Said Dark. “as for the rest of you will find your jobs on the back of the instruction booklets I hand out at the beginning of the meeting. And be sure to pick up your goody bags on the way out.”


This is not really a happy story I will add some comedy parts but it will not be a happy story. PM me if you want to have your fancharacter in the story. I cannot continue the story untill I get a few participents. Just tell me about your character I need some villians friends and a girl who will fall in love with rayman. NOW GO AND PM ME I COMMAND YOU TO.
\And some feedback could be nice since this is my first fan fic.

[soxfan2006]

Chapter 1
The beginning of the End
While all the madness that was in the Prouloge was happening our limbless hero was in a very bad situation. I mean a very very horrible situation. He was being held captive by the rabbids. Rayman who was currently sitting in the corner of his cell in the rabbids dungeon.

“How could I let this happen” He asked himself “What kind of hero am I getting captured by a bunch of idiotic bunnies. I’m not a real hero I’m nothing but a little pebble on this world. I never knew my parents my life sucks. Maybe it would be good to go down right now.”


“But Ray who else is going to save us every other day?” Asked Globox. “Why don’t you save yourself for once you bloated imbecile!” Rayman snapped back.
“Because you always save us.”
“good point.”

“Hey guys I think I got a plan to escape” said Ly who was in the cell next to Rayman’s and Globox’s.
“Look who decided to join us.” said rayman sarcastically.
“Ray I have a spell that can shrink you so you can get through that mouse hole.”
“what if I don’t want to go through the mouse hole.”
“I think you will agree with me” Ly said showing a slight smile.

5 Incrdibly boring minutes later.
As Rayman walked through the small damp hole he thought to himself. How does she talk me into these things? Rayman looked around only seeing mice and cobwebs. “Well this is boring” he thought but then he saw the end of the hole. He looked through the other side only to see all of his old enemies sitting at a table in a large room talking about some kind of gems.

Whatever those gems are they can’t be good. Thought rayman I got to go and tell Ly and see if she knows what these things are. But first… I need the keys to the cells.

He looked around to see if they were in the room and saw that they were on mister darks belt.

I’ll need a distraction to get those keys. Thinking quickly he whistled making all rats in the hole stampede toward the exit this will work he said to himself as he moved out of the way letting the rats out. This will work perfectly
5 boring minutes earlier
“now that my that we are pretending to have my daughter captured in the cell next to Rayman the plan should go into action right now.” Explained mister Dark. “Now lets head out for the 5 gems. Expect for you crazy Rabbid you stay here and hold down the fort.

“WWWWWWWWWWWWWHHHHHHHYYYYYYYYY do I have to stay.” Complained Crazy Rabbid”
“Because I told you too.” Snapped mister dark. “now lets get on the ship” Mister dark said but suddenly…

A stampede of rats covered the floor aaaaaarrrrrhhhhh Mist dark screamed as he tripped and the keys flew off his back and rayman caught them.

“All to Easy” thought ray.

5 Boring Minutes Later
Back at the cell: “Whoever holds the 5 gems will be the most powerful person alive so that probably why mister Dark wants his hands on them.”
“But lets get out of here so we can stop him.” Rayman said as he opened the door. “We have to get to the gems before him and he’s a little tied up right now."Rayman said with a snicker.

More to the chapter coming soon:
Feedback would be great please and I still need some characters for my fiction or the story will not continue. Oh and Crazy Rabbid is catmiesters character.

[Lachimax]

This is a good idea for a story. Feel free to use my character, Lachimax.

[Blok2004]

Yes it sounds very promising!

[soxfan2006]

I will feel free to use your character lachimax thank you for allowing me to use him.

[Blok2004]

You can make up a character and say I made him up!

I give you full permision

[soxfan2006]

I'm as creative as a rock i'm not making one up.

[soxfan2006]

I've been busey lately and stuff. But here is the rest of chapter one more of a comedy thing right here.

Chapter 1 continued Wow this story is lame.

Rayman, Ly, Globox walked down the hall making sure not to make any noise so the sleeping guards don’t wake up. While walking Rayman noticed that his twin brother Nashea was captured to so he unlocked the cage bla bla bla. And then some weird confusing stuff happened yetta yetta yetta And some fights happened bla bla bla. Then our heroes found themselves in the emperor rabbids room.
“how the hell did we end up here.” Rayman asked angrily
“I think the Author is so lazy he didn’t bother writing how we got here.” Nashae explained.
“How lame” Globox complained.

“I’m glad you could make it” A strange voice that came out of nowhere said.
“Hey I know that voice!” Nashae shouted “Its Crazy rabbid!” “run!” He screamed as crazy rabbid jumped on him and started hugging him. “Man down!” He shouted
The rest of our heroes were already heading towards the first gem. It was the gem of fire. They followed Razor beards ship towards the summit beyond the clouds. Dun dun duun.