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soxfan2006
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my site

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http://www.thedannycsite.tk/
its not a rayman fansite but its my site. i put alot of games and vids up and update daily so its pretty fun if you wanna check it out.
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Re: my site

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A bit of constructive criticism:

The text is too big - if you were to make it smaller and put it into paragraphs, then it would be a lot easier to read. Also, it would be more appropriate if you was to have round only two flash embeds on the home page. Everything else should be linked to the homepage. Eg.:

Homepage
link
link
link
<embed
<embed

Do you have any knowledge of HTML? If you do, you'll be able to do absolutely anything with your website in notepad, but I expect that you do not understand HTML as you are using a host. Don't worry, not a lot of people I know understand HTML.

Other than that, it appears to be coming on okay. As a thirty seven year old, it doesn't appeal to me, but I'm sure that people around your age group should like it once it's been polished.
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Re: my site

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SamBeckett94 wrote:A bit of constructive criticism:

The text is too big - if you were to make it smaller and put it into paragraphs, then it would be a lot easier to read. Also, it would be more appropriate if you was to have round only two flash embeds on the home page. Everything else should be linked to the homepage. Eg.:

Homepage
link
link
link
<embed
<embed

Do you have any knowledge of HTML? If you do, you'll be able to do absolutely anything with your website in notepad, but I expect that you do not understand HTML as you are using a host. Don't worry, not a lot of people I know understand HTML.

Other than that, it appears to be coming on okay. As a thirty seven year old, it doesn't appeal to me, but I'm sure that people around your age group should like it once it's been polished.
Note pad sucks. Use Dreamweaver or Golive.
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Re: my site

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Dreamweaver does too much for you and sucks all the fun out of it. It is only handy for using the <font... tag, as that gets stressful. But as I say, each to their own. I prefer notepad - it's free and does exactly the same as Dreamweaver.
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Re: my site

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ok thanks this is my first website so i'm still working on it. and yeah the sites mainly going towards kids like 11-16.
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Re: my site

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SamBeckett94 wrote:A bit of constructive criticism:

The text is too big - if you were to make it smaller and put it into paragraphs, then it would be a lot easier to read. Also, it would be more appropriate if you was to have round only two flash embeds on the home page. Everything else should be linked to the homepage. Eg.:

Homepage
link
link
link
<embed
<embed

Do you have any knowledge of HTML? If you do, you'll be able to do absolutely anything with your website in notepad, but I expect that you do not understand HTML as you are using a host. Don't worry, not a lot of people I know understand HTML.

Other than that, it appears to be coming on okay. As a thirty seven year old, it doesn't appeal to me, but I'm sure that people around your age group should like it once it's been polished.
and could you explain to me what html is? if you'll do you'll be my bestest friend.
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Re: my site

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Why me do the explaining when this fantastic tutorial can?
http://www.htmlcodetutorial.com/

Everythig you need to know is there. It might take a while to learn, but trust me it's worth it, and it's really easy.
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Re: my site

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thanks. YOU DESERVE A CANDY BAR!!!!!! but if you don't like candy YOU GET A STICKER!!!

but thats confusing i'm just gonna stick to the way things are going till i'm 27 and able to understand anything in there. thanks anyway though. people like you make the world go around.
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Re: my site

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You're very welcome. Though, if you decide you want to use HTML, I'd start with the basic tags such as <HTML>, <BODY> and the likes. Once you get into it, it's pretty easy.
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Re: my site

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Jman wrote:
SamBeckett94 wrote:A bit of constructive criticism:

The text is too big - if you were to make it smaller and put it into paragraphs, then it would be a lot easier to read. Also, it would be more appropriate if you was to have round only two flash embeds on the home page. Everything else should be linked to the homepage. Eg.:

Homepage
link
link
link
<embed
<embed

Do you have any knowledge of HTML? If you do, you'll be able to do absolutely anything with your website in notepad, but I expect that you do not understand HTML as you are using a host. Don't worry, not a lot of people I know understand HTML.

Other than that, it appears to be coming on okay. As a thirty seven year old, it doesn't appeal to me, but I'm sure that people around your age group should like it once it's been polished.
Note pad sucks. Use Dreamweaver or Golive.
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Re: my site

Post by megajbb »

i have a site.
magic box by josh it's called.
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Re: my site

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Well giving us the link would be great :wink:
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Re: my site

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Jman wrote:
SamBeckett94 wrote:A bit of constructive criticism:

The text is too big - if you were to make it smaller and put it into paragraphs, then it would be a lot easier to read. Also, it would be more appropriate if you was to have round only two flash embeds on the home page. Everything else should be linked to the homepage. Eg.:

Homepage
link
link
link
<embed
<embed

Do you have any knowledge of HTML? If you do, you'll be able to do absolutely anything with your website in notepad, but I expect that you do not understand HTML as you are using a host. Don't worry, not a lot of people I know understand HTML.

Other than that, it appears to be coming on okay. As a thirty seven year old, it doesn't appeal to me, but I'm sure that people around your age group should like it once it's been polished.
Note pad sucks. Use Dreamweaver or Golive.
what type like a web type or a language.
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Re: my site

Post by Hunchman801 »

No offense, but it's ugly and illegible. You should change the whole layout and reorganize the content ;)
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Re: my site

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well yeah how bout private messaging me and we can talk bout some stuff i can do to make it better?
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Re: my site

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Why not use this topic, so everyone can contribute to the discussion?
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Re: my site

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cause i'm an idiot and you might have to say things like 5 times over and over for me to understand and i'm sure not many people don't want to read it.

and so people can actually talk about my wonderfuly doen site.
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Re: my site

Post by Lol Kuit »

Its a good site, you did your best. Try to change the background to a dark color so you can see the text. And a smaller font ;)
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Re: my site

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That's true. Do this first and then we'll see what we can do.
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Re: my site

Post by megajbb »

soxfan2006 wrote:Well giving us the link would be great :wink:
if you go in ranks i gave a link.
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