Path To Divinity

[Zay-el]

See, I kept my promise! I'll just have to break it apart a bit better next time. XP
Thank you very much, I'm really trying my best here. I already have most of the story planned out, not to mention two sequels buzzing in my head. I hope you'll like the other part too! 83

[Limely]

Okay, now I've read the second part too, and it is just as enjoyable and exciting as the rest. Loving it. : D

[Holy Crap]

this is starting to get really, really, reeeeeaaaaally good.

[Zay-el]

Thankies. ^^ I'm probably gonna start the next one today. 83

[Limely]

*spazzes*

8D Yes, plz do.

[Holy Crap]

yes indeed. but are you planning on getting them out of this cave anytime soon?

[Zay-el]

They'll leave it in the end of Chapter 6...it was good, but I'm bored of it by now XD

[Luckster]

no kidding...at this point they practically LIVE in the cave! XD

[Holy Crap]

exactly what i was thinking. its a shame though...this fanfic appears to be getting ignored except by some who are RZ members anyway. their loss i suppose...

[Limely]

Most who post here in this subforum are creative people who are interested in these sort of things themselves. We can't force others to post here and be interested if they do not want to. That is their choice, m'dear. x3

[Holy Crap]

yeah, but there are also many others who use this section. but as i said, it's their loss, this is nothing short of a masterpiece.

[Zay-el]

Please stop, I'm starting to go red here. ^///^

no kidding...at this point they practically LIVE in the cave! XD

Except the parts when they get attacked, yeah, even I would want to live in a place like that...NOT! XD No offense, but it'd be a little depressing to live in caves. X3

The way I see it before my mind's eye, their not going to be stuck in one place like this for a long time...well, at least for about 2-3 chapters.

And like I said, their escape is only half a chapter away...though it will come with a VERY high price. *restrains himself from spoiling everything* ;D

[Limely]

*spazzes in excitement*

This! This is nothing short of torture, making us bleeeeed in anticipation for the next chapter! D:<

[Holy Crap]

yeah, but 2-3 of YOUR chapters is a VERY long time. no offense, you just write long chapters.

[Zay-el]

I know, it's funny how I always fear that it'll be short, and the next moment it's 20 pages. 83 I like being descriptive. ^^

[Limely]

Descriptive is gewd. : D

[Zay-el]

Yeah, I think so too, but I sometimes get the impression I'm overdoing it...I mean, Ray drank for about 6-8 lines one time. XD

[Limely]

Okay, that might be a bit over the top...
I wrote a full page about someone eating cereal once, just to see if I could do it. ._.

[Holy Crap]

I MUST SEE THIS NOW! just for laughs

[Limely]

Sadly, I wrote it in Norwegian, as I usually do with my texts. Which is why I never post them anywhere. I am considering starting to translate them, though, I feel that my English is slowly getting good enough for that...