Path To Divinity

[Zay-el]

XD You're resourceful, I like that! Well, I hope you'll have fun reading it, not to mention enjoy your stay there. ^__^

[Holy Crap]

yay!!! more updating!!! and its still awesome.

[Zay-el]

Thanks ^__^ The next part should come around tomorrow or the day after, then another hiatus, as I wanna do another oneshot. X3 Oh yeah, and at the end of the next part, this 'Cave' arc is officially closed. They're out in the open again

I sometimes feel the second Betilla/Shya scene is a little weak or out of place...other times I like that one most. Ah well, curse of every writer I guess. ^^;;

[Holy Crap]

another oneshot? damn. they're good, but i like this better. oh well, it's your choice.

[Zay-el]

XD Don't worry, all of my oneshots are made in one days time. After that, I'll get back to this story, anyway. ^^

[Holy Crap]

a whole day?! noooooooooooo!

[Zay-el]

If you check, I usually post a half chapter in a month. Well, only two weeks of this is writing. The rest is a cooldown period I always need so my head wouldn't explode XD

[Holy Crap]

head exploding? no, doesn't sound like a good idea.

[Zay-el]

Yeah, you're right there. Ah, I really want to go forward with PTD already...what you've seen yet is NOTHING, compared to what I have planned out. I can assure, you're all gonna go through some major jaw-drops in the future...with one starting right at the end of the next part.

[Holy Crap]

ooh! i can't wait. actually, i'm annoyed you've told me that now, because i have to wait.

[Zay-el]

What can I say? I'm evil. X3 Don't worry, if all goes well, I should be finished with it by the afternoon, or tomorrow, tops.

[Holy Crap]

you know, that really doesn't help me as we live in different time zones.

[Zay-el]

Expect an update in the next 48 hours. Better? X3

[Holy Crap]

much.

[Limely]

I've read it. It's a while since, though, but now I'm finally online and able to comment it.
Anyways, it's really really great. Love (and hate) the cliffhanger in the part with Rayman, and the stuff about when Shya showed Betilla Salian was so adorable. Well written and told as always. :3 Also, I like the way you portray Betilla.
But I don't quite understand what Ly was up to when she tried breaking her leg of or whatever she did..?

[Termonaptir]

Okay, I've read it... It's certainly as wonderful as ever. And I also like the way you portray Betilla... Can't wait for the continuation.

[Zay-el]

Okay, I've read it... It's certainly as wonderful as ever. And I also like the way you portray Betilla... Can't wait for the continuation.

Thank you very much 83 I'm nearly done with the last bit of this chapter, so I'll most likely update in the next 36 hours. I thought I was messing up Betilla's possible personality, I'm flattered that both you and Limely seem to like it. ^_^

I've read it. It's a while since, though, but now I'm finally online and able to comment it.
Anyways, it's really really great. Love (and hate) the cliffhanger in the part with Rayman, and the stuff about when Shya showed Betilla Salian was so adorable. Well written and told as always. :3 Also, I like the way you portray Betilla.
But I don't quite understand what Ly was up to when she tried breaking her leg of or whatever she did..?

She felt she was just slowing down the others, like a rock. She tried to exercise her leg a bit, in hopes of being able to walk, even if a bit slow. 83 Thanks, I was afraid the Shya/Betilla segment was out of place, I'm happy to know you actually liked it. ^__^

[Limely]

Ah, I suppose that was quite obvious... I suppose I just misunderstood. ^^;

And of course we liked it. D:

[Holy Crap]

that's true zay, you shouldn't have to be told to know its good.

[Zay-el]

Thanks, both of you ^__^ Despite what you might initially think of me, I usually work with a all-time-low self-esteem. I'm just careful not to let others notice it most of the time.