Path To Divinity

[Holy Crap]

um...you don't know which one salian is...?

[Limely]

Then obviously you didn't read it very well. ^^;

[Holy Crap]

is it just me or is there something seriously wrong with oc at the moment?

[Zay-el]

i don't understand witch one salian is
but 84/100 good fanfic
in my opinion

Salian is not an actual Rayman character, if you mean that. He's my own little fan-character, whom I implemented into the story.

is it just me or is there something seriously wrong with oc at the moment?

April 1st.

[megajbb]

i know.
i read it all very well yesterday.
great story.

[Zay-el]

Thank you ^^ Although, I wouldn't mind if you could be a little more descriptive about what you liked(or didn't, for that case), after all, I'm on the eternal road of improving, so a more advanced critique would probably help me a bit more. 83

[Termonaptir]

Well, I don't really know what to say now. Ya already know what I said on DA. ^^ The story... too great for words. There. Hey, I'm not lying...

[Holy Crap]

the only thing i have a problem with is the repetition of using "nod" when it should be "nodded". and that's nothing to do with the story content itself.

[Zay-el]

Well, I don't really know what to say now. Ya already know what I said on DA. ^^ The story... too great for words. There. Hey, I'm not lying...

He-he, thank you very much. ^///^

the only thing i have a problem with is the repetition of using "nod" when it should be "nodded". and that's nothing to do with the story content itself.

Hm...guess I just always forget about that ^^; Ah well, nothing can be perfect. I'll try to look out for that from now on. 83

Oh, and on a side note, I decided to skip the usual cooldown period I have, and get right into writing the next part. There's a key part that is soon to appear, and I want to reach it soon. 83

[Holy Crap]

now i'm really excited.

[FAB]

Mee to...

[Xenon]

It will take me years to read this

I got about half-way down the first page, and so far what you've written is excellent! One of the best fics I've read

[Holy Crap]

i'll agree there. you sure are popular zay!

[Zay-el]

It will take me years to read this

I got about half-way down the first page, and so far what you've written is excellent! One of the best fics I've read

Thank you very much. I'm really happy you like it. ^__^

i'll agree there. you sure are popular zay!

Thanks, the interesting thing is that I'm actually nervous about it sometimes. I'm not used to popularity at all. ^^;

[Luckster]

Time to say "I told you so", Zay zay!


I told you so! 8D


People LOVE your work!

[Holy Crap]

and it's not hard to see why. you know i haven't updated my fanfic in a while. i should probably do that soon.

[Zay-el]

Time to say "I told you so", Zay zay!


I told you so! 8D


People LOVE your work!

Yeah, I admit you were right there. I never expected to become even a tiny bit popular over time. ^///^ Don't forget though that you had a great part in it too! If it weren't for you, I'd probably abandoned it a long time ago. I'm forever thankful to have met you. *hug* ^__^

And I'm looking forward to your update HC! 8D I'm gonna start on Chapter 7 either today or tomorrow.

[Holy Crap]

yaaaaaaay! and not to rush you or anything but...HURRY UP!!!

[FAB]

True, this is the best fanfic i've seen on this site so far.

[Holy Crap]

hey!