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Beebops Poems of beauty and splendor

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Poems I made up ^_^

Poem 1; The world

The world is yours to command.
Make your effort for the people.
There may be too much to understand.
Do your best and climb the highest steeple.
Then it will all go as planned.

Poem 2; Music

Listen to the music.
Let it guide you.
It's just Simplistic.
Give yourself a clue.
There's no need to be sadistic.
The music's goodness will indulge you.

Poem 3; Life

Life isn't always hard.
Things do go wrong.
Just be on your guard.
Be yourself and be strong.
Cause your enemies to be scarred.
Because it really isn't that long.

More To Come
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Great job, how long did it take you to make those?
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Re: Beebops Poems of beauty and splendor

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about 10 minutes. :lol:
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They're good. They could be used for a song. (except the third one, that's just weird)
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I know the third ones weird. I think I was drunk when I did the third one.
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It sounds kind of gothic.
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It does a bit, yes.
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Beebop wrote:I know the third ones weird. I think I was drunk when I did the third one.
Thar wants to watch thee ale.
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SamBeckett94 wrote:
Beebop wrote:I know the third ones weird. I think I was drunk when I did the third one.
Thar wants to watch thee ale.
You mean cider! :P
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I most like the third one
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*Bump*
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Quite. These poems are...alright I guess, I don't really like poems so much.
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I'd like to see some more from Beebop, considering he bumped this for no reason :P
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Yeah, you owe us beebop.
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Well, there are 2 reasons why I bumped this.

Reason 1: People may not have noticed it, and I thought it would be good to get it back to the top and people could maybe show us their poems as well.

Reason 2: I might make more.
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You see everyone, we have to get into his head. Think why WE would bump a thread if we were to.

Or take the quicker approach and ask. But that's more or less what you did.
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Anyone got any poems that they could add?
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I once wrote a limerick about a boy whit a brand new red hat... Then a seagull shit on it or something. Unfortunately I wrote it two years ago and in Norwegian. ):
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Couldn't you translate it?
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Yeah I wonder too.
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