Seasons 2-5 will also be remade, or, “improved” if I may. Meaning they’ll be extended, use the newer mug shots, have no plot holes, better dialogue, images, more Major Battles, and season two will have a different theme. So, now you’ll have to re-read those seasons, cause, after being improved, they will be like completely different reads, only they’ll have the same general plot. (yes, no porn this time.)
Now, about the season themes. They aren’t meant to be played while you’re reading the episodes, or every time you read an episode. They’re actually the songs I’ve chosen for the animated openings I’ve made for each season. Most of the frames have been made, but I lack the right tools to make them animated. Once I get the right soft ware, I’ll post them.
Also, about the Major Battle themes, I highly recommend you listen to them, because they increase the enjoyment of the read a lot. Not to mention the lyrics do fit with the character that the theme is of.
None of the songs are made by me. So, I’ll credit the artists of each song I use.
Tell me if you see any mistakes.
Anyway, here’s the first remade IAD episode. (I dedicate this to Rabox, flyingrabbids, and Serza for being such great fans.)
Ravior Dark was a boy who lost everything, but gained everything, then lost everything again. A boy who became the brightest light in the world, but became the darkest anger ever to walk the Lum. A boy who adventured with a squadron of kids that had the same power he had. A boy who had defeated one of the most powerful and evil beings ever to exist. A boy who would grow up and fight a powerful hero. A boy who would become a legend known to all. A boy who’s story will be told right………NOW!
IAD season 1 theme/IAD part 1 theme
Episode 1
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The Beginning
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IAD part 1, begin………
One day, Ravior Dark and his girlfriend, Iulec Mushroom, were laying at the top of Cerulean Mountain, gazing at the sky that Welfort had covering it.
Ravior was a happy kid. He was practically the most popular Rewop in the city of Welfort. He thought he could never be happier than already was, but he was very wrong with that thought.
Iulec looked at her watch…….
Iulec swiftly turned her neck to her right, and where Ravior was originally sitting, there was nothing.
She turned her head and saw Ravior running down the hill at a high velocity.
She sprung up and ran after the boy concerned with his attendance at School.
Iulec: HEY! WAIT, HONEY! YOU KNOW I’M NOT A FAST RUNNER!!
Ravior turned his head, and looked back at Iulec while running, he had to respond. I mean, he had to!
Iulec proceeded to smile after she heard him yell that. It was nice to know that he cared about his grades, but, uh oh!
Iulec yelled while running.
BONG!!
The poor boy wasn’t looking where he was going, so he ran into a big tree.
Iulec ran over to him to see if he was hurt.
The two Rewop children walked together to School while holding hands. How cute.
Four minutes later………
So, as usual, Ravior went over to sit with his best friend, Nurf.
Nurf said while putting his arm around Ravior_
After Nurf mentioned it, Ravior was actually concerned about the fortune they both received from that Fortune Teller. It never left his mind through out the rest of that school day.
After School was over, and they were outside the building……
He waited for Nurf to be far gone, so that he wouldn’t see where he was going to head off to. When the coast was clear, Ravior ran as fast as he could over to the Fortune Teller’s hut. He was so eager to figure out more about the fortune he and Nurf were given a while back.
When he finally reached the hut, he immediately stopped at the entrance of the hut. A sudden burst of reluctance busted into his heart. He stood there, looking at the opening. He wanted to go in, but at the same time, he wanted to turn around, and walk away. He couldn’t decide.
Sweat started to trickle down his head. He thought of how, if he went in there to figure more about the fortune, that his curiosity would be satisfied. But, there was a chance that he would figure out something that would be too much for him to handle. His heart was pumping faster, and faster by the point second, until…..
Well, it was a little easier for him to make a decision, now that he was being asked in some sort of way to go into the hut. He slowly walked into the hut, pushing the large piece of thick clothe out of the way. He walked over to the stool, and sat down.
Ravior raised his eye brows in surprise. But, then he remembered: She was a real fortune teller.
She sat in her chair, and let out a couple of exhales. The strange thing about this Fortune Teller was that she had sympathy for her clients, and now, she was going to have to disappoint one of ‘em. She took a deep breath, and kindly said:
A sad mood suddenly fell over him, but then:
She began to cough, and really hard too.
But it wasn’t. Her coughing got worse as the seconds went by, and then finally:
She started to scream out of no where. This, like any other eleven year-old kid, scared the crap out of him. Ravior fell out of his chair, and backed up against the wall of the hut as fast as he could, and he stared at the Fortune Teller, and as the seconds went by, weirder and weirder things happened. First was the high pitched screaming, her eyes began to shoot lights, then she began to float, along with spinning lightning. What was happening to her? Well, as it turns out, she was having a vision of Ravior.
Images began to appear to the Fortune Teller’s mind in a mixed, but chronologically correct manner.
spikes……Etilop……ship……war……family…….torture…….grave stones…….robe…….hat……spheres…….darkness……..wand……..fairy………limbless…….rule…….candy…….black limbless……..retreat……blue peak…………death………what is this all about?! Could this dark man I see be…….Ravior?…….it…must be……..)
When the vision had ended, she fell to the ground from mid-air. But, she landed on her back…….that’s not good. Ravior heard a snap after she fell. As scared as he was of her, based on the weird things that were occurring just a moment ago, he ran over to her, fearing for her life.
The Fortune Teller’s eyes opened, and she looked at Ravior. The pupils in her grey eyes began to grow large, and her skin was beginning to look very pale.
………she stopped breathing…….the Fortune Teller was dead. Those were her last breaths of air.
Ravior broke into tears. He fell to his face, and wet the floor. This was the first time he saw death in real life. (and it wouldn’t be his last.) He didn’t feel like standing, but he jumped up anyway, and ran out of the tent, and yelled for help.
Eventually, someone who heard him called for an ambulance. In a matter of seconds, the loud “wee-ooo” sound was heard around the block. They came and wrapped the Fortune Teller up whilst taking her away on a bed.
Ravior watched as they put her in the ambulance. He felt very guilty about the whole thing. It was because he went to get his fortune told that she died, but what he did not know was that the warning that she gave to him was very important. Hopefully, Ravior will listen to her when the time comes. Hopefully……..he will forgive and forget.
A few days later, everybody at school knew how it happened, and all of Ravior’s classmates tried to convince him it wasn’t his fault, but he ignored them, and was as quiet as ever. Also, strangely enough, Nurf and Iulec were both missing. They never showed up for school, their houses were empty of people, including their parents. Ravior was pretty bored without those two around, which wasn’t a great contribution to his already gloomy mood.
When he got home…….
She held out a large, brown box in her arms.
Ravior opened the box, one piece of tape at a time. When he tore the last piece of tape off, he unfolded all of the giant pegs of cardboard, and there he saw it:
Ravior searched around the hat and long robe, looking for a trade mark or tag of some sort, or where it was made, but he came up dry.
He searched around the box to see if she taped anything to the inside of it, but nothing.
He put the clothes back into the box and ran upstairs to his room.
Ravior thought as he took the clothes out of the box again.
He put on the long, smooth, bluish-purple robe. It went from the bottom up in a triangular shape, and made a small hole for your head to fit through, but it kept your mouth and nose hidden. There weren’t any holes for arms, but it’s fabric contained millions of fibers that trap heat, making it one of the most ideal things to wear in really cold weather.
Now, it was time to put on the hat. It was kind of like a cow-boy hat, and it was made of the same materials as the robe, so it kept your ears warm. There also were two little strings on the hat. One on the right, and one on the left. Wonder what those are for. Maybe you could tie something at the end of them? Anyway, the were at the ends of the long hat, so they could never get into your face.
He thought as he walked over to the mirror. Once he looked into it_
Ravior was certainly pleased with his new clothes. He could put clown make-up on his face, put the robe and hat on, and still look cool.
He went back to his room and took off the robe and hat cause it was starting to get really hot under them, and he was going to go outside. Wearing clothes like that in the summer wouldn’t be the best idea in the world.
He went back outside to go to the park. Ravior didn’t have anyone to go with, so he wasn’t planning on having much fun, but he needed some fresh air to clear his mind. He was still a little depressed, and a nice, peaceful walk in the park was just what he needed.
As he was walking through the park, he was thinking about the things the late fortune teller told him.
Out of his frustration, he kicked a rock that was in front of him really hard.
He continued to walk in a straight path.
Suddenly, out of nowhere:
Ravior jumped out of the way of a laser that was aimed at him randomly. He looked back up into the sky, gasping for air. His mouth was wide open. That was the first time he had ever seen laser fire in the flesh. He started to panic, as a horde of more laser fire began to rain down around the park. So, like any other sane person, he ran out of the park as fast as he could, while avoiding the oncoming laser fire.
But, as he was leaving the park, two mysterious beings stopped him.
Phoid whipped out a gun, and prepared to fire it at Ravior.
Phoid frowned, and quickly put his gun away.
They both quickly flew back into the sky, and toward the city.
Ravior ran back to his house as fast as he could. As he got closer to the city, he saw laser fire falling everywhere. Everyone was in panic, scrambling all over the place. Some Rewops got hit by the lasers, and collapsed in death. The buildings of most of the streets began to explode from the onslaught. It was all because of the machines in the sky.
Ravior ran over to his house, but as he was about to open the door, his house was blasted, throwing him off of the porch, and landing him on his back.
His mother ran out side of the enflamed house over to her son.
They both ran over to the shelter that was behind their house. When they got there, she noticed she forgot the key in. So, she tore the lock off, (she was pretty strong ‘^_^) and they ran down the stairs, whilst closing the door. It was a small shelter, so only three people could fit in there.
Ravior’s eyes began to water.
Ravior’s heart filled with anguish……his vision became blurry as his eyes filled with water…..he hugged his mother’s corpse tightly as he continued to cry harshly.
He stared at his mom for a few more seconds, until, he decided that he was going to die too if he stayed in that shelter. The laser would defiantly blow up the underground shelter for sure. So he got up, and weakly walked up the stairs, and opened the door. He saw it……in ruin. Every building was reduced to rubble. It was almost like a flat plain with a few hills. There were no people, either. Only dead bodies.
Then, he heard it. The sound of a saucer. It was here. The X laser.
A hole in the center of the X started to open slowly. Then, a voice was heard.
This was it……Ravior was finished……or was he?
All of a sudden, Ravior’s body began to glow. His entire shape began to change under the glaring silhouette ………and SWOOSH!
Ravior had become something powerful at the very last second. His conscious mind was barely present, and his body had unlocked itself form pure desperation. It saved his life……….
A few moments later……
He lifted himself up, and looked around, until his vision was fixed upon a giant mushroom cloud of smoke in the far distance. He had escaped the blast, all in one piece.
A voice from behind him called out to him. It was the sound of someone old.
He turned his head, and saw a tall man.
To be continued………
I don't how to make a mug shot of him, or anyone, crying. I need to learn the right effect.
It's much easier (and better)to read with their images there.
