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Haiku

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......Haikus are awesome
Except when they don't make sense
..........Refrigerator
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Re: Haiku

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This sounds
like a very good dame topic
...
pr0oO€eE$sS
confusion
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The cow meat was saved today
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Re: Haiku

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You have no idea what a Haiku is do you. :P
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Re: Haiku

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Stan failed to create a haiku.
Now let's hope this haiku is "autumn"...

Meh, I prefer to rhyme.
I can do that on a better time.
And the fun is much bigger, though not really immense...
... even if they don't make sense!
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Re: Haiku

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You are wrong, you swine
Haiku only have three lines
That often do rhyme

Five syllables, then
Seven syllables (not ten)
And five once again

I don't think I'll close
'Cause I know no threads, so
We'll see how it goes
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Re: Haiku

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Holy Crap wrote:You have no idea what a Haiku is do you. :P
Why am I not surprised?
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Re: Haiku

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'Kay, Xenon, you win.
So I will now re-begin...
You forgive my "sin"?
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Re: Haiku

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Oh for pity sake
I do pardon your mistake
These are hard to make

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Re: Haiku

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For reason of truth being true,
I have seen longer haikus, have you?
But I'd accept three-line long review.
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Re: Haiku

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I am win
There is no spoon
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Re: Haiku

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What the hell
happened to my rank?
I fell like someone stole money from my bank.
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Re: Haiku

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Door locked
Door can only be opened by the power of gems
Now just pay me so i can finally go home!!!

I love those lines from moneybags!! :lol:
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Re: Haiku

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I think Stan and R4321 Should read Xenon's post. As well as being Awesome, it explains how to make proper Haiku.

Haiku often has
Seasonal References
For no real reason
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Re: Haiku

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I have a haiku book. Yes, a BOOK! I have seen a three page long haikus there, but....

...your problem anyway.
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Re: Haiku

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My internet sucks
Really, really, really hard
It makes me angry
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Re: Haiku

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Holy Crap wrote:I think Stan and R4321 Should read Xenon's post. As well as being Awesome, it explains how to make proper Haiku.

Haiku often has
Seasonal References
For no real reason
I know but i forgot most of Moneybags lines.... so it doesnt rhyme.... and for the stupid guys here Haiku is the language in Spooky Swamp in the game ''Spyro 3 year of the dragon''
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Re: Haiku

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Haikus don't have to rhyme, but they do ahve to have 3 lines with 5 syllables, then seven syllables, the 5 syllables again.

This thread is failing.
PC Just doesn't Haiku.
It was worth a shot.
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Re: Haiku

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What's important is the number of moras, not the number of syllables :P
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Re: Haiku

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Poetry equivalent of line is "mora" in English, right?
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Re: Haiku

Post by Xenon »

Truth can I muster
Linked with consonant clusters
A mora's just a

Type of sound phoneme
That follows the sound regime
To one uttered theme

'Breeze', I may well say
Is one syllable astray
Yet is two morae

Matter does this;
The problem indeed exists
But let's just fuck this

And moving into
You, yes you Holy Crap you
Exceeded my view

This topic is good
But remember guys we should
Keep it withstood
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