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Re: Haiku

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stan423321 wrote:Poetry equivalent of line is "mora" in English, right?
Not really ;)
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Re: Haiku

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Meh, I've always done it with syllables... It's much easier. :P

Xenon is too good at this, it scares me...
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Re: Haiku

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Yeah, not really. :oops2:
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Re: Haiku

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Nope, that is still wrong
Each of those lines are too long
Shouldn't be a song

I think I'm the only one who is taking this topic seriously. :P
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Re: Haiku

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I agree Xenon
Only you can do this right
Or so it does seem

Well, I can do it at least. :mryellow:
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Re: Haiku

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I do remember
These were made for each member
Last year's September

Think it was Hoodcum
To be honest, that guy, umm
Should lay off the rum

(just kidding Hoodcum :P )

I may try some time
I mean, I could start with Lime
Problem is, the rhyme
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Re: Haiku

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Your skill is sublime
In fact it's almost a crime
does it take much time?
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Re: Haiku

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I think I feel bad
I though this day's gonna be rad
Yet I'm so damn sad
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Re: Haiku

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The second line is too long, but you got it mainly right. :P

Softdrinks are bubbly.
And they often taste quite nice.
Except diet ones.
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Re: Haiku

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Too long? Wait... 1... 2... 3, 4, 5... 6, 7... 8! Dam

I have a brother
Hm, he likes milk but rather
He would... um, bother
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Re: Haiku

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The um and hm are cheating a little. :P

I am really cool.
Is there anyone more so?
I highly doubt it.
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Re: Haiku

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Unfortunately
I have Physics tomorrow
I wish myself luck

:mrgreen:
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Re: Haiku

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Good luck Matyuv*.
I hope you can manage it.
If not, that's a shame.

*Does your name have three syllables? I actually have no idea how to pronounce it...
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Re: Haiku

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Holy Crap wrote:*Does your name have three syllables? I actually have no idea how to pronounce it...
I don't know either
It's not meant to be pronounced
It looks beautiful
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Re: Haiku

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I'll try to make a Haiku about my favorite SSBB characters!

Luigi - he's cool,
Mr. Game & Watch - he rules,
Ness - because he's cute!

Actually I like Ness because of the way he yells ''Big Gay... STAAAARSTOOOOORM!!''.
Oh, and tell you the truth, I pronounce Matyuv ''Mat - you've''
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Re: Haiku

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Ness was cooler in Earthbound when he could use PK Rockin.
Fire, Thunder and Starstorm aren't even his attacks. :tssk:
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Re: Haiku

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Exactly. But the trophy explanation in SSBB for PK Starstorm is just...

''Perhaps Poo taught Ness the secret of the attack for use in Super Smash Bros. Brawl''
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Re: Haiku

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Record day today.
There'll be lots of posts in games.
Spam will help I'd say.
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