Rayman PC: The Movie: Take Two!
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MLII

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Re: Rayman PC: The Movie: Take Two!
Yay someone bumped it, that means I can continue it sometime without getting yelled at. :p
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Re: Rayman PC: The Movie: Take Two!
I doubt that continuing a movie for which the topic was made constitutes a useless bump.
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Re: Rayman PC: The Movie: Take Two!
Where I'm concerned you's be surprised.
Joking.
Joking.
Re: Rayman PC: The Movie: Take Two!
MLII, please continue. I'm dusting the spiderwebs off this topic.
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Okay, I'll try. Just need to work out who';s in it and who isn't cus people keep dropping out and joining. 
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Re: Rayman PC: The Movie: Take Two!
When has that happened lately?
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BUMP
We're continuing under my and MLII's order.
But not now.
We're continuing under my and MLII's order.
But not now.
Re: Rayman PC: The Movie: Take Two!
Ok...?
I don't think i've looked in this topic for like a year.
I don't think i've looked in this topic for like a year.
Re: Rayman PC: The Movie: Take Two!
We're hoping to make a third part to the story, but as of yet I don't know whether we'll be continuing this one or starting anew.
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It depends; I'll need to see who wants to be in it or out of it. I know FAB wants to be in here, he told me on dA.
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I'd like to be in it, but I won't be writing anything, sorry.
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Re: Rayman PC: The Movie: Take Two!
No worries ;3
...Wait did my lack of character list put you off? D: Gee I'm sorry D:
...Wait did my lack of character list put you off? D: Gee I'm sorry D:
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If you're talking to me, please show me where that list is. 
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Re: Rayman PC: The Movie: Take Two!
K, I'll PM it to you
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Thanks! ^^
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We're starting anew and revamping the topic.
It had to be said, it was a particularly nice day. Birds were tweeting, bees were buzzing, and-
"PluMGK? C'mon, what do you think?"
MLII-possible the ditziest eleven year old alive-tugged at her friends arm impatiently.
"Yeah..sure."
To be honest. PluMGK wasn't really listening. He couldn't help it, but the topic MLII was discussing didn't particularly interest him.
"I've just told you half an hour's worth of Rayman-Plushy concept designs, and all you can say is Yeah Sure? Anyway, should I use string with the hands and feet, like, or would that be naff?"
"It might be considered un-PrO0o." Quickfist, PluMGK's other friend (his best friend) suggested.
MLII scoffed. "As if I care what PrO0oO0oO0o think."
PluMGK and Quickfist glanced at each other. They both knew that MLII had had a three month (or more) long battle with prO0o.
It was unclear what PrO0o actually did. As far as MLII knew, they were a bunch of teenagers that drifted around measuring people's “boonscores” and holding contests. PluMGK had a quite high boonscore, but Quickfist and MLII hadn't been tested yet. Spiraldoor, another PC resident, had the “highest boonscore yet”but MLII privately put it down to the fact that the PrO0o group didn't seem to like him very much.
"Anyway," asked Quickfist, "Where's Dango?"
Dango (or El Dango) was a friend of them, and was too random for his own good.
"Dango?" MLII faltered. "He...probably...just...took a ...walk....
"He coulda told us." PluMGK shook his head. “Something's wrong.”
Meanwhile, back at the PC house, Xenon was trying to beat his high-score on Rayman 3, (Xenon was yet another resident, and basically made sure no-one was being too 'boonish' [as Pro0O would probably say]) when MLII, PluMGK and Quickfist burst through the door.
“HE'S GONE!!!” they yelled simultaneously.
Xenon looked up.
“Who's gone?”
“EL DANGO!!!!!!!!!!”
Xenon blinked, as they explained in a rushed sort of way what had happened.
“Well maybe he just took a walk?”
PluMGK shook her head. “He would have told us.”
“He's definitely missing.” MLII sighed.
Xenon rubbed the back of his neck. “Okay.” he said eventually. “Go get the others.”
They obediently rushed upstairs.
Meanwhile, iHeckler and Hoodie were discussing plans for world domination in a bedroom that was definitely not theirs but might have been Spiraldoors', when MLII burst into the room.
“ElDangoisgoneandweneedyoutofindhimwithussocomeoooooooooooooonnn!” With that, MLII grabbed the boys wrists and dragged them out of the room.
On the way downstairs, she passed PluMGK, who had his arm linked with Spiraldoors' and appeared to be dragging him.
“You'll come whether you like it or not.”
“Look, I never said I didn't want to come, I'm just saying I don't like being drag...ouch!”
“PluMGK and Spiral, sitting in a tree...” muttered iHeckler, who was quite good at noticing things like arm linkage.
MLII slapped him.
“OW!!!”
“Well don't spout nonsense.”
“You sound like my grandmother. OW!”
MLII pulled a face and rushed downstairs. However, in her hurry to get there, she knocked over Xenon, tripped over Stacey (another resident) and very nearly killed Hunch as well.
Just another normal day for MLII.
'OMIGOD!' cried MLII as she helped Hunch to his feet. 'Hunch, are you OK?'
'Yeah, I think so...' moaned Hunch as he struggled up.
'
' said Matyuv as he walked through the door and spotted Stacey with a pain in her leg.
While iHeckler and Hoodie were being treated like slaves, Quickfist and Xenon waited by the door. PluMGK went too, but stopped on the way for a pretzel.
'Let us go! We have as much right as you have to push people around!' shouted Hoodie.
'O rly?' MLII pulled another face. 'How come?'
'You've only been on this forum a few weeks,' added Stacey.
As the party headed for the door in search of Dango, Spiraldoor had just woken up from a nap, because he was so bored of waiting.
'Wakey wakey, Sleeping Beauty,' iHeckler said sarcastically.
Spiraldoor jumped up and raced to the door before slamming it shut.
"Brilliant." MLII closed her eyes. "Did you have to come out with that Sleeping Beauty crack?"
iHeckler put on a wounded face. "But it's fun insulting Spiraldoor!"
Matyuv sighed, through lack of a fitting emoticon.
"Anyway." commented PluMGK, his mouth full of pretzel. "We've got an El Dango to find!"
Unfortunately, because of the pretzel, no-one could understand her.
"Nani?" questioned MLII, who was learning Japanese.
PluMGK swallowed his pretzel and repeated himself.
"Ohh. Arigato ^^"
Quickfist rolled her eyes. “I never knew it was possible to speak using emoticons.
“
” said Matyuv.
“Indeed.” PluMGK made for the door.
"So...any idea where he might be?" asked Xenon.
MLII poked Quickfist.
"No, but he was definately with us earlier." said PluMGK.
MLII poked Quickfist again.
PluMGK continued, "Then MLII started talking about Ray-Plushy."
Xenon raised an eyebrow. "Ray-Plushy?"
"Yeah, Ray-Plushy. Like Rayman, but he's a plushy."
MLII poked Quickfist a thrid time.
"I think I could've guessed that."
MLII poked Quickfist yet again.
"Stop that." muttered Quickfist.
"And then Quickfist interupted asking where Dango was."
MLII went to poke Quickfist, but she dodged and MLII ended up poking Matyuv.
"
" said Matyuv.
"Gomennasai." muttered MLII, and poked Quickfist a fifth time.
Quickfist sighed, not for the first time that day.
Matyuv was interrupted by another poke. With anger in his voice, he shouted '
'.
'We're still nowhere close to finding him. Maybe he did take a walk, but we were all so busy...' said Stacey.
They ended up coming to a fork in the road. Two rows of shops, either side.
Xenon went down the left path, but iHeckler dragged him back and shouted 'NO! That's Raymanzone Road!' He gulped, then strolled down the right path.
They looked in pretzel stores, video game shops and restaurants to find the missing Dango.
'I'm bored. Let's attempt world domination.' muttered iHeckler. Hoodie started listening to the conversation as his ears pricked up like a dog's.
'I'm listening...' Hoodie laughed with a smile on his face.
Matyuv, meanwhile, hadn't come out of the restaurant for ages. '
' he said, as he glugged down another glass of wine. Stacey stayed behind to pay the tab and help him to his feet again, once he'd stopped.
The road re-forked, joining into a dark, dusty alley with a big, foreboding cave.
'Should we try that?' Spiraldoor asked.
'No, I think I should stay behind and stick knives into my eyes instead.' said iHeckler, sarcastically. He got a high-five from Quickfist and PluMGK.
MLII didn't, however. 'Come on, guys. We should really go find Dango now.'
Everyone trekked (or, in Matyuv's case, staggered) towards the cave entrance.
The cave, as the PC gang soon found out, was extremely dark. Even the power of eight torches didn't alter the darkness much, which PluMGK privately put down to the fact iHeckler and Hoodie often read under the bedcovers after lights-out.
"Eeepp." eeped MLII, clinging to PluMGK.
iHeckler rolled his eyes. "Last time we looked, we were searching for El Dango, not making noises strangely similar to Rayman TV series characters." He was immediately high-fived by Hoodie.
"Oh stop it. I don't liek the dark."
"OMG!" yelled Quickfist. "Vocal typo!!!"
"OMG NO WAI!" yelled PluMGK.
Xenon sighed. "Stop with the vocal typos already. We've got an El DaNgO to find...wait, who vandalized my sentence?!"
"This place is making us go random!!!!" yelled PluMGK.
"Indeed." MLII rolled her eyes. "Now come o-"
Crash.
The PC slowly turned around to see...a pile of rubble. A rumbling sound could be heard.
"THE CAVE IS COLLAPSING!!!" shrieked MLII.
"NO SH*T SHERLOCK!!" shrieked iHeckler. "NOW RUN BEFORE I MAKE YOU!!"
Spiral was about to ask how it would be possible to make someone run, when he realised what they were talking about and ran anyway.
A long interval followed, with everyone running, MLII screaming, and iHeckler yelling at her to shut up. occasionally, they dodged into little...alleyways almost, to see if they could find EL Dango, but they didn't. Finally, they emerged out the cave coughing, just as it collapsed in to a pile of rubble.
"
" said Matyuv.
"Yeah." MLII took a small blue device out of her neon pink handbag and inhaled . She then grinned. "So. Where are we now?"
"Uhh...." The PC gang took a look around.
They seemed to be in a narrow, nondescript little alleyway. To MLII's delight, there were cats walking along the top of fences.
"Ooh, kitty!" yelled MLII.
The cat mewled and scampered off.
"Aww, no." whinged MLII. "The kitty ran away."
The PC gang shrugged and walked on.
"Everyone's staring at us..." commented MLII.
"Not surprising, considering you're wearing a neon orange t-shirt with neon pink spots." said Spiral. "And "I love Hello Kitty" written on it, with a picture of Hello Kitty."
"Are you offending Hello Kitty?" asked MLII quietly.
"Uh...no."
"You'd better not be." MLII continued in the same quiet tone. "Now declare your love for Hello Kitty."
"Uh...." Spiral didn't quite know what to say to that.
A fire animation flashed in MLII's eyes, and she gripped Spiraldoor by the shoulders. "DECLARE YOUR LOVE FOR HELLO KITTY!!!!!"
Spiral was about to choose between constant humiliation until the PC gang forgot about it (which could vary from 1 hour to 1 year) or being mauled to death by an eleven year old girl (mauling to death being slaps, pokes and yells) when Stacey gently pushed MLII away from Spiral. "There probably isn't any need for that."
"Sorry." MLII muttered. "Hello Kitty makes me act like that sometimes. That and I had a lot of sugar today."
Spiral promtly glomped Stacey.
"Enough of this," said iHeckler. "Let's go find El Dango."
When the creepy cave collapsed, the rocks fell out onto the road, causing a minor traffic disturbance.
'He could still be in there,' said Hunch, uneasily. 'We only went a short way. We have to go further in.'
Everyone stormed back into the cave. Once they went to the centre, another rockfall trapped the heroes in a room, filled with cobwebs.
'
' asked Matyuv, the only one facing the centre of the room, poking Quickfist and pulling on MLII's 'Hello Kitty' top.
They both spun around and started pulling other people's clothing.
People were either dumbstruck by the centre of the room, or tapping at the rock formation, trying to find a way out. Soon, everyone was looking at the room except Xenon.
'WHaT Is iT?' shouted Xenon, as he span around.
3 giant balls of string were stuck in the ceiling.
Something lowered itself down from the ceiling and broke open the balls. In one was Haruka, in another was Jona, both trapped with fear.
They were the next-door neighbours of the PC gang.
In the third was Joshua. His face was stuck in a shocked position.
A struggling El Dango was next to him, trying to break free of the web tomb.
The something was a giant spider.
It opened its mouth and shot out some garbage that sounded like '!!!!!!!!!!!!!GHYBJVBJNGVBGHBTHCGJJ!!!!!!!!!11111!1!' at Spiraldoor.
He fell to the ground, unconscious.
'i fInd It hArd To bEliEve SomEthIng Can Be oRsuM anD crEepY at The SamE tiMe...' said iHeckler.
The spider took the words right out of Matyuv's mouth.
'
' it said, licking its lips.
"SPIRAL!" yelled MLII, rushing over to his unconscious body. "Wake up!"
"We haven't got time for this." said iHeckler. "If we don't do something, we'll be toast!"
"
" said Matyuv.
"Exactly!"
Meanwhile, MLII had gently picked Spiraldoor up. She thought for a minute, then thrust him in to Xenon's arms.
"??!!" said Xenon.
"Just take him for a minute would you?" MLII closed her eyes. She drew a thin stick about the size of her arm out of her backpack.
"Strawberry Sugar Staff, ACTIVATE!" she yelled.
There was a flash of light, then MLII was gone.
*
MLII found herself in a surreal lilac world. She closed her eyes, then began to transform.
*
Ten seconds later, MLII reappeared in the middle of the cave. But this time, she was wearing a magenta crop top, and a matching miniskirt and boots.
"Oh God." said Hoodie. "She's a magical girl."
MLII grabbed her 'Strawberry Sugar Staff' and yelled, "Glitter Rope Attack!"
A beam of light shot out of her staff and stuck itself to the spider's legs.
MLII started dancing around the spider, tying its legs together.
"JKkdhsidjsjngoierjgkdsjhvkjdhf!" yelled the spider, falling over.
MLII produced castanets and threw them in the air, one after the other. She then jumped, and started spinning and floating upwards. She tucked her knees into her chest and shot a beam of light at the spider. It dissapeared in a puff of smoke.
MLII landed back on the ground and pressed a little button on her Hello Kitty locket. A flash, then MLII was back to normal.
By this point, Xenon had put Spiral down on the floor of the cave. Now, he was beginning to wake up.
Spiral raised himself on his elbows slowly. "What happened?"
PluMGK turned off his video camera and handed it to Spiral. "This."
'Great job slaying the spider!' said El Dango, still struggling in the web. 'A little help here?'
'That was...freaky.' gasped Stacey.
'It wasn't as impressive as I thought. I would have expected you to shove the stick into its vital areas.' laughed iHeckler.
'I might just poke you if you don't shut up.' said MLII through gritted teeth.
She thrust the stick into the wall. A hand shoved it out of the wall. She fell to the very edge of the pit. PluMGK held on to the stick, preventing her from falling down.
Hunch and Xenon looked through the hole in the wall and saw Droolie, another resident who HAD gone on a walk and told them. His jeans reached the floor and covered his shoes. He had a pair of headphones on his head.
Matyuv and Droolie widened the hole so Droolie could get through.
'
' breathed Matyuv.
Suddenly, iHeckler saw a teeny-weeny spider climb over his arm. He started screaming with his arms flailing. Matyuv was pushed to a possible death.
'ZoMG!' screeched...PluMGK.
iHeckler and Hoodie knocked PluMGK, sending him, MLII, Droolie and Quickfist over the edge. Droolie caught Xenon, who pulled the last two mods down with him.
Hoodie looked at iHeckler.
'I guess we're going to have to plummet to our deaths like everyone else.' Hoodie said.
'Hoodie, you crack me up.'
'Geronimo!' Hoodie shouted as he pushed iHeckler down the cliff. 'I hope I land on something soft.' Hoodie laughed, jumping into the chasm.
"Oh..Oh My God..."
Spiraldoor, it seemed, was the only person still alive.
"Oh God...Oh God..."
Tears were running down his face as he attempted to stop himself from hyperventilating. They were...they were...
...dead...
...he had no idea how to deal with this.
Suppressing a sob, Spiral dropped onto his hands and knees, staring over the edge of the chasm.
Into the grinning face of MLII.
"Hello Spiraldoor-kuuuun!!!"
"NYAA-A!" Spiral collapsed and ended up lying face down on his stomach, staring and staring at the demented grin on MLII's face.
"Uh, Milly?" said iHeckler, "I think you upset him..."
"You didn't..."
"There's no need to cry Spiral-kun!" yelled MLII. "We're fine!"
"I...I'm not..." Spiral rolled onto his back, staring at the ceiling of the cave. Closing his eyes for a brief moment, Spiraldoor felt a tug on his arm. "Spiral-kuuuunnn~"
Spiraldoor opened his eyes. "Whaattt?" he said with a touch of annoyance.
"Come on down, we've found a way out..."
Spiraldoor jumped to his feet, and stared over the edge of the chasm again. "Are you sure it won't hurt?"
"I'm fine, aren't I?" yelled iHeckler.
"Okay..." Spiral took a deep breath and jumped off the cliff.
As Spiral jumped down the chasm, his scarf caught hold of a branch.
The scarf tightly wrapped around it.
'I swear I saw this in a cartoon once...' he moaned. The twig was breaking.
It broke off with a SNAP! and Spiral was sent plummeting.
At the bottom, he announced to everyone he was fine, before being hit on the head by a falling chunk of rock.
'Woah...where am I?' Spiral moaned, clutching his aching head. He could see rainbows everywhere.
Just then, a wheezing hermit crab with a pair of drumsticks popped up out of nowhere.
'What the Hell is this crazy place?' Spiral shouted.
Suddenly a pirate popped out of the blue and started singing.
Just then a random guy with a blue shirt and piercing blue eyes saw Spiral out of the corner of his eye. Quickly Spiral started wringing the guy's neck. Just then, the face of the strange man's disappeared, instead replaced by iHeckler's bright blue one.
'Qui-ack! Get-him-off-blug-meeeee!' iHeckler struggled to shout. Hoodie had already started to pull iHeckler free and Stacey was trying to unwrap Spiral's arms.
Spiral immediately realised what was happening and let go of iHeckler.
'You know, next time you want to try to kill me just ask Xenon to take my Tings away. It's much safer!' said iHeckler, rubbing his aching neck.
"S-Sorry~" gasped Spiraldoor as the rainbows faded and normality was restored. "I...I don't know what came over me..."
"Don't worry." Stacey put her arm around him and helped him stand up. "It happens to most of us."
"Yeah, try being MLII for one." laughed Hoodie.
"
" said Matyuv.
"Indeed." MLII looked around the room.
The room was rather pretty. It was decorated like a cathedral, with big windows and colourful wallpaper. The PC gang looked around the room in delight at the colours and the beauty of it all.
"The Source!"
MLII looked down at her feet and saw a black and white stripy thing around 18 centimetres tall. "The Source!" it said again, and clung to MLII's leg.
Quickfist jumped back in horror as he saw the small creature. After a few minutes of going around MLII's leg, the thing went up Xenon's.
'Um...what's going on?' he finally said.
The thing looked up at Xenon with puppy dog eyes. Xenon reached his hand down to stroke it and it coiled around his arm.
'Cool. I always thought Xenon was an alien.' Dango laughed.
'What are you?' Xenon asked the creature.
'Oh, yeah. Like it'd speak English.' Hunch laughed.
'Greetings. My name is Worb.' the creature smiled at Xenon.
Hunch fell over backwards to be caught by Droolie.
'
' gaped Matyuv.
Spiral couldn't stop smiling. 'You...you speak perfect English! Like me!'
'Well, duh! It's a bit obvious. You wouldn't go to China speaking German now would you? The same way as I wouldn't come all the way from B to speak in the Earthlings' language.' Spiral clenched his hand into a fist.
'You know, you've got a lot of attitude for a worm.' iHeckler retorted in Spiral's defence.
'And you have a lot of clothes for a monkey. What's your point?' it snarled.
iHeckler lashed out violently and punched Xenon. He punched back and iHeckler was knocked to the ground.
'
'
'
' it said, pointing to Matyuv.
'
'
'So what exactly IS the source?' Droolie asked.
'The Source is an ultimate power great enough to destroy planets. I have heard rumours of the Source on my home planet, B. The rumours say that the Source is on this planet. It's power is way too great to be understood by a human like YOU.'
Enraged by this comment, Droolie ran forwards and tripped over the limp body of iHeckler. He fell flat on his face and something shiny dropped out of his pocket.
'Aw, geez, my mobile!' Droolie cursed and reached for his mobile. Worb instantly saw it and made a grab for it.
It had to be said, it was a particularly nice day. Birds were tweeting, bees were buzzing, and-
"PluMGK? C'mon, what do you think?"
MLII-possible the ditziest eleven year old alive-tugged at her friends arm impatiently.
"Yeah..sure."
To be honest. PluMGK wasn't really listening. He couldn't help it, but the topic MLII was discussing didn't particularly interest him.
"I've just told you half an hour's worth of Rayman-Plushy concept designs, and all you can say is Yeah Sure? Anyway, should I use string with the hands and feet, like, or would that be naff?"
"It might be considered un-PrO0o." Quickfist, PluMGK's other friend (his best friend) suggested.
MLII scoffed. "As if I care what PrO0oO0oO0o think."
PluMGK and Quickfist glanced at each other. They both knew that MLII had had a three month (or more) long battle with prO0o.
It was unclear what PrO0o actually did. As far as MLII knew, they were a bunch of teenagers that drifted around measuring people's “boonscores” and holding contests. PluMGK had a quite high boonscore, but Quickfist and MLII hadn't been tested yet. Spiraldoor, another PC resident, had the “highest boonscore yet”but MLII privately put it down to the fact that the PrO0o group didn't seem to like him very much.
"Anyway," asked Quickfist, "Where's Dango?"
Dango (or El Dango) was a friend of them, and was too random for his own good.
"Dango?" MLII faltered. "He...probably...just...took a ...walk....
"He coulda told us." PluMGK shook his head. “Something's wrong.”
Meanwhile, back at the PC house, Xenon was trying to beat his high-score on Rayman 3, (Xenon was yet another resident, and basically made sure no-one was being too 'boonish' [as Pro0O would probably say]) when MLII, PluMGK and Quickfist burst through the door.
“HE'S GONE!!!” they yelled simultaneously.
Xenon looked up.
“Who's gone?”
“EL DANGO!!!!!!!!!!”
Xenon blinked, as they explained in a rushed sort of way what had happened.
“Well maybe he just took a walk?”
PluMGK shook her head. “He would have told us.”
“He's definitely missing.” MLII sighed.
Xenon rubbed the back of his neck. “Okay.” he said eventually. “Go get the others.”
They obediently rushed upstairs.
Meanwhile, iHeckler and Hoodie were discussing plans for world domination in a bedroom that was definitely not theirs but might have been Spiraldoors', when MLII burst into the room.
“ElDangoisgoneandweneedyoutofindhimwithussocomeoooooooooooooonnn!” With that, MLII grabbed the boys wrists and dragged them out of the room.
On the way downstairs, she passed PluMGK, who had his arm linked with Spiraldoors' and appeared to be dragging him.
“You'll come whether you like it or not.”
“Look, I never said I didn't want to come, I'm just saying I don't like being drag...ouch!”
“PluMGK and Spiral, sitting in a tree...” muttered iHeckler, who was quite good at noticing things like arm linkage.
MLII slapped him.
“OW!!!”
“Well don't spout nonsense.”
“You sound like my grandmother. OW!”
MLII pulled a face and rushed downstairs. However, in her hurry to get there, she knocked over Xenon, tripped over Stacey (another resident) and very nearly killed Hunch as well.
Just another normal day for MLII.
'OMIGOD!' cried MLII as she helped Hunch to his feet. 'Hunch, are you OK?'
'Yeah, I think so...' moaned Hunch as he struggled up.
'
While iHeckler and Hoodie were being treated like slaves, Quickfist and Xenon waited by the door. PluMGK went too, but stopped on the way for a pretzel.
'Let us go! We have as much right as you have to push people around!' shouted Hoodie.
'O rly?' MLII pulled another face. 'How come?'
'You've only been on this forum a few weeks,' added Stacey.
As the party headed for the door in search of Dango, Spiraldoor had just woken up from a nap, because he was so bored of waiting.
'Wakey wakey, Sleeping Beauty,' iHeckler said sarcastically.
Spiraldoor jumped up and raced to the door before slamming it shut.
"Brilliant." MLII closed her eyes. "Did you have to come out with that Sleeping Beauty crack?"
iHeckler put on a wounded face. "But it's fun insulting Spiraldoor!"
Matyuv sighed, through lack of a fitting emoticon.
"Anyway." commented PluMGK, his mouth full of pretzel. "We've got an El Dango to find!"
Unfortunately, because of the pretzel, no-one could understand her.
"Nani?" questioned MLII, who was learning Japanese.
PluMGK swallowed his pretzel and repeated himself.
"Ohh. Arigato ^^"
Quickfist rolled her eyes. “I never knew it was possible to speak using emoticons.
“
“Indeed.” PluMGK made for the door.
"So...any idea where he might be?" asked Xenon.
MLII poked Quickfist.
"No, but he was definately with us earlier." said PluMGK.
MLII poked Quickfist again.
PluMGK continued, "Then MLII started talking about Ray-Plushy."
Xenon raised an eyebrow. "Ray-Plushy?"
"Yeah, Ray-Plushy. Like Rayman, but he's a plushy."
MLII poked Quickfist a thrid time.
"I think I could've guessed that."
MLII poked Quickfist yet again.
"Stop that." muttered Quickfist.
"And then Quickfist interupted asking where Dango was."
MLII went to poke Quickfist, but she dodged and MLII ended up poking Matyuv.
"
"Gomennasai." muttered MLII, and poked Quickfist a fifth time.
Quickfist sighed, not for the first time that day.
Matyuv was interrupted by another poke. With anger in his voice, he shouted '
'We're still nowhere close to finding him. Maybe he did take a walk, but we were all so busy...' said Stacey.
They ended up coming to a fork in the road. Two rows of shops, either side.
Xenon went down the left path, but iHeckler dragged him back and shouted 'NO! That's Raymanzone Road!' He gulped, then strolled down the right path.
They looked in pretzel stores, video game shops and restaurants to find the missing Dango.
'I'm bored. Let's attempt world domination.' muttered iHeckler. Hoodie started listening to the conversation as his ears pricked up like a dog's.
'I'm listening...' Hoodie laughed with a smile on his face.
Matyuv, meanwhile, hadn't come out of the restaurant for ages. '
The road re-forked, joining into a dark, dusty alley with a big, foreboding cave.
'Should we try that?' Spiraldoor asked.
'No, I think I should stay behind and stick knives into my eyes instead.' said iHeckler, sarcastically. He got a high-five from Quickfist and PluMGK.
MLII didn't, however. 'Come on, guys. We should really go find Dango now.'
Everyone trekked (or, in Matyuv's case, staggered) towards the cave entrance.
The cave, as the PC gang soon found out, was extremely dark. Even the power of eight torches didn't alter the darkness much, which PluMGK privately put down to the fact iHeckler and Hoodie often read under the bedcovers after lights-out.
"Eeepp." eeped MLII, clinging to PluMGK.
iHeckler rolled his eyes. "Last time we looked, we were searching for El Dango, not making noises strangely similar to Rayman TV series characters." He was immediately high-fived by Hoodie.
"Oh stop it. I don't liek the dark."
"OMG!" yelled Quickfist. "Vocal typo!!!"
"OMG NO WAI!" yelled PluMGK.
Xenon sighed. "Stop with the vocal typos already. We've got an El DaNgO to find...wait, who vandalized my sentence?!"
"This place is making us go random!!!!" yelled PluMGK.
"Indeed." MLII rolled her eyes. "Now come o-"
Crash.
The PC slowly turned around to see...a pile of rubble. A rumbling sound could be heard.
"THE CAVE IS COLLAPSING!!!" shrieked MLII.
"NO SH*T SHERLOCK!!" shrieked iHeckler. "NOW RUN BEFORE I MAKE YOU!!"
Spiral was about to ask how it would be possible to make someone run, when he realised what they were talking about and ran anyway.
A long interval followed, with everyone running, MLII screaming, and iHeckler yelling at her to shut up. occasionally, they dodged into little...alleyways almost, to see if they could find EL Dango, but they didn't. Finally, they emerged out the cave coughing, just as it collapsed in to a pile of rubble.
"
"Yeah." MLII took a small blue device out of her neon pink handbag and inhaled . She then grinned. "So. Where are we now?"
"Uhh...." The PC gang took a look around.
They seemed to be in a narrow, nondescript little alleyway. To MLII's delight, there were cats walking along the top of fences.
"Ooh, kitty!" yelled MLII.
The cat mewled and scampered off.
"Aww, no." whinged MLII. "The kitty ran away."
The PC gang shrugged and walked on.
"Everyone's staring at us..." commented MLII.
"Not surprising, considering you're wearing a neon orange t-shirt with neon pink spots." said Spiral. "And "I love Hello Kitty" written on it, with a picture of Hello Kitty."
"Are you offending Hello Kitty?" asked MLII quietly.
"Uh...no."
"You'd better not be." MLII continued in the same quiet tone. "Now declare your love for Hello Kitty."
"Uh...." Spiral didn't quite know what to say to that.
A fire animation flashed in MLII's eyes, and she gripped Spiraldoor by the shoulders. "DECLARE YOUR LOVE FOR HELLO KITTY!!!!!"
Spiral was about to choose between constant humiliation until the PC gang forgot about it (which could vary from 1 hour to 1 year) or being mauled to death by an eleven year old girl (mauling to death being slaps, pokes and yells) when Stacey gently pushed MLII away from Spiral. "There probably isn't any need for that."
"Sorry." MLII muttered. "Hello Kitty makes me act like that sometimes. That and I had a lot of sugar today."
Spiral promtly glomped Stacey.
"Enough of this," said iHeckler. "Let's go find El Dango."
When the creepy cave collapsed, the rocks fell out onto the road, causing a minor traffic disturbance.
'He could still be in there,' said Hunch, uneasily. 'We only went a short way. We have to go further in.'
Everyone stormed back into the cave. Once they went to the centre, another rockfall trapped the heroes in a room, filled with cobwebs.
'
They both spun around and started pulling other people's clothing.
People were either dumbstruck by the centre of the room, or tapping at the rock formation, trying to find a way out. Soon, everyone was looking at the room except Xenon.
'WHaT Is iT?' shouted Xenon, as he span around.
3 giant balls of string were stuck in the ceiling.
Something lowered itself down from the ceiling and broke open the balls. In one was Haruka, in another was Jona, both trapped with fear.
They were the next-door neighbours of the PC gang.
In the third was Joshua. His face was stuck in a shocked position.
A struggling El Dango was next to him, trying to break free of the web tomb.
The something was a giant spider.
It opened its mouth and shot out some garbage that sounded like '!!!!!!!!!!!!!GHYBJVBJNGVBGHBTHCGJJ!!!!!!!!!11111!1!' at Spiraldoor.
He fell to the ground, unconscious.
'i fInd It hArd To bEliEve SomEthIng Can Be oRsuM anD crEepY at The SamE tiMe...' said iHeckler.
The spider took the words right out of Matyuv's mouth.
'
"SPIRAL!" yelled MLII, rushing over to his unconscious body. "Wake up!"
"We haven't got time for this." said iHeckler. "If we don't do something, we'll be toast!"
"
"Exactly!"
Meanwhile, MLII had gently picked Spiraldoor up. She thought for a minute, then thrust him in to Xenon's arms.
"??!!" said Xenon.
"Just take him for a minute would you?" MLII closed her eyes. She drew a thin stick about the size of her arm out of her backpack.
"Strawberry Sugar Staff, ACTIVATE!" she yelled.
There was a flash of light, then MLII was gone.
*
MLII found herself in a surreal lilac world. She closed her eyes, then began to transform.
*
Ten seconds later, MLII reappeared in the middle of the cave. But this time, she was wearing a magenta crop top, and a matching miniskirt and boots.
"Oh God." said Hoodie. "She's a magical girl."
MLII grabbed her 'Strawberry Sugar Staff' and yelled, "Glitter Rope Attack!"
A beam of light shot out of her staff and stuck itself to the spider's legs.
MLII started dancing around the spider, tying its legs together.
"JKkdhsidjsjngoierjgkdsjhvkjdhf!" yelled the spider, falling over.
MLII produced castanets and threw them in the air, one after the other. She then jumped, and started spinning and floating upwards. She tucked her knees into her chest and shot a beam of light at the spider. It dissapeared in a puff of smoke.
MLII landed back on the ground and pressed a little button on her Hello Kitty locket. A flash, then MLII was back to normal.
By this point, Xenon had put Spiral down on the floor of the cave. Now, he was beginning to wake up.
Spiral raised himself on his elbows slowly. "What happened?"
PluMGK turned off his video camera and handed it to Spiral. "This."
'Great job slaying the spider!' said El Dango, still struggling in the web. 'A little help here?'
'That was...freaky.' gasped Stacey.
'It wasn't as impressive as I thought. I would have expected you to shove the stick into its vital areas.' laughed iHeckler.
'I might just poke you if you don't shut up.' said MLII through gritted teeth.
She thrust the stick into the wall. A hand shoved it out of the wall. She fell to the very edge of the pit. PluMGK held on to the stick, preventing her from falling down.
Hunch and Xenon looked through the hole in the wall and saw Droolie, another resident who HAD gone on a walk and told them. His jeans reached the floor and covered his shoes. He had a pair of headphones on his head.
Matyuv and Droolie widened the hole so Droolie could get through.
'
Suddenly, iHeckler saw a teeny-weeny spider climb over his arm. He started screaming with his arms flailing. Matyuv was pushed to a possible death.
'ZoMG!' screeched...PluMGK.
iHeckler and Hoodie knocked PluMGK, sending him, MLII, Droolie and Quickfist over the edge. Droolie caught Xenon, who pulled the last two mods down with him.
Hoodie looked at iHeckler.
'I guess we're going to have to plummet to our deaths like everyone else.' Hoodie said.
'Hoodie, you crack me up.'
'Geronimo!' Hoodie shouted as he pushed iHeckler down the cliff. 'I hope I land on something soft.' Hoodie laughed, jumping into the chasm.
"Oh..Oh My God..."
Spiraldoor, it seemed, was the only person still alive.
"Oh God...Oh God..."
Tears were running down his face as he attempted to stop himself from hyperventilating. They were...they were...
...dead...
...he had no idea how to deal with this.
Suppressing a sob, Spiral dropped onto his hands and knees, staring over the edge of the chasm.
Into the grinning face of MLII.
"Hello Spiraldoor-kuuuun!!!"
"NYAA-A!" Spiral collapsed and ended up lying face down on his stomach, staring and staring at the demented grin on MLII's face.
"Uh, Milly?" said iHeckler, "I think you upset him..."
"You didn't..."
"There's no need to cry Spiral-kun!" yelled MLII. "We're fine!"
"I...I'm not..." Spiral rolled onto his back, staring at the ceiling of the cave. Closing his eyes for a brief moment, Spiraldoor felt a tug on his arm. "Spiral-kuuuunnn~"
Spiraldoor opened his eyes. "Whaattt?" he said with a touch of annoyance.
"Come on down, we've found a way out..."
Spiraldoor jumped to his feet, and stared over the edge of the chasm again. "Are you sure it won't hurt?"
"I'm fine, aren't I?" yelled iHeckler.
"Okay..." Spiral took a deep breath and jumped off the cliff.
As Spiral jumped down the chasm, his scarf caught hold of a branch.
The scarf tightly wrapped around it.
'I swear I saw this in a cartoon once...' he moaned. The twig was breaking.
It broke off with a SNAP! and Spiral was sent plummeting.
At the bottom, he announced to everyone he was fine, before being hit on the head by a falling chunk of rock.
'Woah...where am I?' Spiral moaned, clutching his aching head. He could see rainbows everywhere.
Just then, a wheezing hermit crab with a pair of drumsticks popped up out of nowhere.
'What the Hell is this crazy place?' Spiral shouted.
Suddenly a pirate popped out of the blue and started singing.
Just then a random guy with a blue shirt and piercing blue eyes saw Spiral out of the corner of his eye. Quickly Spiral started wringing the guy's neck. Just then, the face of the strange man's disappeared, instead replaced by iHeckler's bright blue one.
'Qui-ack! Get-him-off-blug-meeeee!' iHeckler struggled to shout. Hoodie had already started to pull iHeckler free and Stacey was trying to unwrap Spiral's arms.
Spiral immediately realised what was happening and let go of iHeckler.
'You know, next time you want to try to kill me just ask Xenon to take my Tings away. It's much safer!' said iHeckler, rubbing his aching neck.
"S-Sorry~" gasped Spiraldoor as the rainbows faded and normality was restored. "I...I don't know what came over me..."
"Don't worry." Stacey put her arm around him and helped him stand up. "It happens to most of us."
"Yeah, try being MLII for one." laughed Hoodie.
"
"Indeed." MLII looked around the room.
The room was rather pretty. It was decorated like a cathedral, with big windows and colourful wallpaper. The PC gang looked around the room in delight at the colours and the beauty of it all.
"The Source!"
MLII looked down at her feet and saw a black and white stripy thing around 18 centimetres tall. "The Source!" it said again, and clung to MLII's leg.
Quickfist jumped back in horror as he saw the small creature. After a few minutes of going around MLII's leg, the thing went up Xenon's.
'Um...what's going on?' he finally said.
The thing looked up at Xenon with puppy dog eyes. Xenon reached his hand down to stroke it and it coiled around his arm.
'Cool. I always thought Xenon was an alien.' Dango laughed.
'What are you?' Xenon asked the creature.
'Oh, yeah. Like it'd speak English.' Hunch laughed.
'Greetings. My name is Worb.' the creature smiled at Xenon.
Hunch fell over backwards to be caught by Droolie.
'
Spiral couldn't stop smiling. 'You...you speak perfect English! Like me!'
'Well, duh! It's a bit obvious. You wouldn't go to China speaking German now would you? The same way as I wouldn't come all the way from B to speak in the Earthlings' language.' Spiral clenched his hand into a fist.
'You know, you've got a lot of attitude for a worm.' iHeckler retorted in Spiral's defence.
'And you have a lot of clothes for a monkey. What's your point?' it snarled.
iHeckler lashed out violently and punched Xenon. He punched back and iHeckler was knocked to the ground.
'
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'
'So what exactly IS the source?' Droolie asked.
'The Source is an ultimate power great enough to destroy planets. I have heard rumours of the Source on my home planet, B. The rumours say that the Source is on this planet. It's power is way too great to be understood by a human like YOU.'
Enraged by this comment, Droolie ran forwards and tripped over the limp body of iHeckler. He fell flat on his face and something shiny dropped out of his pocket.
'Aw, geez, my mobile!' Droolie cursed and reached for his mobile. Worb instantly saw it and made a grab for it.
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Re: Rayman PC: The Movie: Take Two!
1. Serza and Acarr aren't in this one
2. Worb isn't in til later ¬¬
2. Worb isn't in til later ¬¬
Re: Rayman PC: The Movie: Take Two!
3: I copied and pasted the first few paragraphs from the PMs we had so Serza and Acarr are in it. I'll change it later.MLII wrote:1. Serza and Acarr aren't in this one
2. Worb isn't in til later ¬¬
4: I thought he was called 6?
5: When are you gonna continue the script?
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MLII

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Re: Rayman PC: The Movie: Take Two!
6. Ah right okay.
7. yes his name IS Six, and I said Worb could be in later cus i liked the sound of him, that's what i SAID.
8. I. DID.
7. yes his name IS Six, and I said Worb could be in later cus i liked the sound of him, that's what i SAID.
8. I. DID.
Re: Rayman PC: The Movie: Take Two!
9. My lucky number!MLII wrote:6. Ah right okay.
7. yes his name IS Six, and I said Worb could be in later cus i liked the sound of him, that's what i SAID.
8. I. DID.
10. So I have to change his name now? OK.
11. I. DIDN'T. GET. YOUR. PM.


