Fanfic: The Rayman Identity

[Guest]

Hi! I hope you enjoy this story! Here's chapter 1!

Chapter 1 - Out of the sky

Rayman stood on the cliff at Sunrise Beach, watching the waves crash against the rocks. All was peaceful, until...
"Rayman! Look what I've found! A pretty birdie!"Globox smiled.
"Hey Globox. I'm just wondering....why did you take my hands again?"Rayman asked, annoyed.
"What? I didn't take your hands!"Globox looked shocked.
Suddenly a wave crashed against the cliff, and an amazing shiny object flew into Rayman's hands. It was a lum. But it was scared. And then many more came. Thousands. They covered the ground. Even Murphy was there.
"'pant'Rayman,'pant'the hands'pant'I told you'pant'I'd be back in 'pant'R4!"

Rayman didn't know what was happening. But then a UFO like object hit the ground. It was gowing red. Bright red. And then Rayman's hands came out of it. And then he heard a voice.
"Oh, I just wished that blasted Rayman hadn't taken that sceptre off of me,"He mumbled,"And I can still smell Globox's bad breath!"
Rayman knew who that was alright. He was an old friend.

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Oh, sorry, this was my story, I just hadn't logged in!

[Hunchman801]

I'm waiting for the next part, it's so nice

But I think we should make a topic about fanfics... or a subforum...

[Xenon]

Nice start blank.

[Hunchman801]

What about my idea with fanfics?

[Xenon]

Nice idea. A subforum would be cool, but a topic just wouldn't work I don't think.

[Matyuv]

lol, when i saw this topic was made by Guest i thought jona did it. not bad for a start blank, and yes, hunch, make a subforum.

[Hunchman801]

I may think about it.

Lol, Jona wouldn't post here

[Xenon]

lol, when i saw this topic was made by Guest i thought jona did it. not bad for a start blank, and yes, hunch, make a subforum.

Same here. But Jona never posts in anything else other than the RZ topic.

[Hunchman801]

Of course, it shows us how much he loves RZ ^^

[th3()ne]

Yet he says its a forum for little kids, whats up with that?

[Matyuv]

little kids need parents, jona is their father.

[th3()ne]

When I first joined RZ I thought Jona was female.

[Xenon]

Yes, Jonah is a girl's name in England. I know his name is pronounced Johnna, but I pronounce it Joaner for the sake of it.

[Matyuv]

i pronounce it like Johnna actually i rock

[Angel]

little kids need parents, jona is their father.

Lol, I can imagine it now, Jona the father

[Guest]

Chapter 2 - Losing patience, losing a friend

Andre looked suprised. And angry. And confused. All rolled into one. Rayman wondered what went on in that little brain of his. But when he saw what he had behind him, he realised that all that Andre was thinking of was revenge.
"Oh, Rayman, are you worried of my little time portal. Now, my master plan is to go back in time, destroy Polokus so he cannot protect you and destroy you as a baby! How clever am I!!!"Andre laughed, an evil, sinsiter laugh that Globox couldn't help laugh at...
"Ha ha ha! Ha ha ha!"Globox chuckled."You laugh funny!"
"Globox! Shut up or I will clib inside you again and smash your brains and crush your heart!"Andre went red.
"Ha ha ha ha ha ha ha!"Globox couldn't resist.
"Shut up you insignificant fool!"It looked as if Andre's vains were going to burst.
"Ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha ha!"Globox continued.
"YOU STUPID UGLY BIG FAT TOAD! I'LL DESTROY YOU!!!!"And then Andre knocked out Rayman, and zoomed towards Globox, and into his mouth...

Rayman woke up, to see Globox standing up, still, like a statue. His eyes were wide open. And then Rayman chased Andre. He chased after him in his shoe. Rushing past the trees, shooting at him, but then he escaped, fleeing into the portal. Rayman saw hoodlums coming, and he jumped and then shot them to bits form the air. And then he jumped into the portal, knowing nothing would ever be the same again...

[Xenon]

Forgot to log in again, blank?

[th3()ne]

And Benjamin the mother

[Angel]

Forgot to log in again, blank?

No, it's Jona
Ahem
Sounds like it
Pretty good story