[Comic Book] Rayman BD project

[Rayman_projetBD]

Hi english friends !

We are proud to show you our Rayman comic book project ! here to read ---> http://raymanbdprojet.wordpress.com/the-comic-book/

We traduce our comik book for you, but it's not perfect, however we did our best, that's why we are sorry, and may be you could told us what's wrong.

We also sorry cause, the english version come after french version, cause ... we are late to traduce. I'm also sorry for my bad english in this message

We hope you will love the comic.

The project started 1 year ago, but we start drawing in May 2011, 2 month ago cause of lot of trouble. But now all is so fast, so visit regulary the site

the page 4 come tonight in french version, later for you. Our objectif is 2-3 pages per month

[Wiiola]

Hi there!
So far the comics seems to be really nice!
The only complain from me is the translations of the pages but since I can understand what's going on so far, this isn't that bad...

Now you made me want to read what happens next!

[Matyuv]

Hey, welcome to PC!
Keep up the good work guys, looking forward to reading new pages. I like the drawing style.

[Rayman_projetBD]

thanks for answer

[Cairnie]

Moving to Rayman Artworks as it's a fanwork.

[Rayman_projetBD]

Ok thanks

[Rayman_projetBD]

Hi my friends, finally we end to traduce all the page in english, u can right now read 4 new pages in english at http://raymanbdprojet.wordpress.com/

Hope you will still love it.

[ikke471]

i like it!
it's really good!

[Adsolution]

Wow, the art is beautiful!

I can help you with the translation if you want, so you can have proper English translation.

[Rayman_projetBD]

Wow, the art is beautiful!

I can help you with the translation if you want, so you can have proper English translation.

Thanks, and sure you can, it could be great if you help us in translation cause french are so bad in english

[Adsolution]

Alright, substitute the current English text with these (I don't know if they're in the right order, but you'll understand):


-PANEL 1-

One beautiful day in the Dream Forest, Rayman and a group of friends had organized a small picnic that was currently taking place...

"Oh come on, it's delicious!"

"No thanks, I don't want any plum juice"

"It has some nasty side effects."

"Side effects are just a myth!"

"Ooh?"


-PANEL 2-

"Of course Globox just happened to swell up enough to fly and spit out purple bouncy bubbles only after one glass... but it's just a myth after all."

"Yeah, but-"

"SOMETHING TERRIBLE HAS HAPPENED!"

"B-Betilla?!"

"What's happening?"

"OOH?"

"A village nearby... it's been completely destroyed by some sort of monster!"


-PANEL 3-

This catastrophe began not long ago in a far off, isolated place.

This beast has been sleeping, waiting for a long time

For a long time, until now

He has been awakened by the imbalance Mister Dark had caused

But one thing was obvious...


-PANEL 4-

The shy peacefulness of the woods would last no longer...

And thus...

This abominable creature of hellspawn destroyed everything in its path, forests, villages, and even Joe's home!


-PANEL 5-

Until it arrived at the mountain of Candy Chateau...

"Show him who's boss you guys, dammit!"

"We're trying our best!"

"He's... too strong.' "

"Go call Mister Dark, this thing is freaking invincible!"

"...uhh... okay."

"Hey... not me! I'm already hurt!"


-PANEL 6-

"MASTER!!"

"What is it, minion?"

"We have an intruder, he's destroying everything!"

"Well then stop him and leave me alone."

"No... boss!"

"Please help us! We can't beat him, we're in real trouble, he's killing everyone!"

"Is it Rayman?"

"Uhh... no..."

"Then it does not concern me!"

"PLEASE master!"

"You're the only one powerful enough, Only you with your skilled magic abilities a chance at this giant!"

"In that case..."

[Rayman_projetBD]

Thanks rayfan but, it could be easier if you give me an Email adress or better Msn adress. We work with it

[MetalGearChick]

This is quite good so far. I like the artstyle too.

[Adsolution]

Thanks rayfan but, it could be easier if you give me an Email adress or better Msn adress. We work with it

[email protected]. I don't use MSN, how about Skype? (My name is the name).

[loilove]

i will love it, too, Rayman