Rayman: Revenge of the Dark

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Re: Rayman (1.5): Revenge of the Dark

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I think the beak is supposed to be a bit more crooked, but what the hey that's epic! Add a texture and Rhook will really come to life!
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It's a bit better! Here's the picture again:

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Notice the upper beak is crooked and curves inward at the end, the lower is relatively small, and he has very big eyes. One of the most important things about the mouth is the skewed ridge at the corner of the mouth that gives him that disgruntled expression.
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wow this sucks who was that guy who does textures i think its spandex but any way i do have the opacity sheet to make it.
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Re: Rayman (1.5): Revenge of the Dark

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taht3Dguy please take off the texture so I can see the model clearly.
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beebo44 wrote:taht3Dguy please take off the texture so I can see the model clearly.
It only looks low resolution because it's in 3ds Max viewport. If rendered or in CryEngine3 it should look much better.
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beebo44 wrote:taht3Dguy please take off the texture so I can see the model clearly.
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that3Dguy wrote:
beebo44 wrote:taht3Dguy please take off the texture so I can see the model clearly.
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Oh and awesome, the eyes are better. :) Can you do the crookedness of the beak and the smaller lower beak as well?
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No offence, but the model looks WAY better without the texture 3DGuy.
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beebo44 wrote:No offence, but the model looks WAY better without the texture 3DGuy.
RayFan9876 wrote:
beebo44 wrote:taht3Dguy please take off the texture so I can see the model clearly.
It only looks low resolution because it's in 3ds Max viewport. If rendered or in CryEngine3 it should look much better.
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Did you accidentally quote your last post? or was it meant to be like that? Anyways, I see. Can't wait to see it.
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beebo44 wrote:Did you accidentally quote your last post? or was it meant to be like that? Anyways, I see. Can't wait to see it.
It was meant to be like that. I'm trying to tell you something if you haven't noticed. :pfff:
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RayFan9876 wrote:
beebo44 wrote:Did you accidentally quote your last post? or was it meant to be like that? Anyways, I see. Can't wait to see it.
It was meant to be like that. I'm trying to tell you something if you haven't noticed. :pfff:
You honestly think I'm stupid enough to miss it? :pfff:
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Re: Rayman (1.5): Revenge of the Dark

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RayFan9876 wrote:
that3Dguy wrote:
beebo44 wrote:taht3Dguy please take off the texture so I can see the model clearly.
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Oh and awesome, the eyes are better. :) Can you do the crookedness of the beak and the smaller lower beak as well?
sure thing and will you be doing rhook or using this one :wink:
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Re: Rayman (1.5): Revenge of the Dark

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that3Dguy wrote:
RayFan9876 wrote:
that3Dguy wrote:
beebo44 wrote:taht3Dguy please take off the texture so I can see the model clearly.
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Oh and awesome, the eyes are better. :) Can you do the crookedness of the beak and the smaller lower beak as well?
sure thing and will you be doing rhook or using this one :wink:
Probably using this one, it's very good.
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Re: Rayman (1.5): Revenge of the Dark

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(will make the beak crooked)
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Re: Rayman (1.5): Revenge of the Dark

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Even better. :) Make the lower beak even shorter though. About yey long:

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Re: Rayman (1.5): Revenge of the Dark

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Here's a new 'song' I created for ROTD:

(This is not do be confused with the soundtrack piece "They Speak of a Hero," I'll change the soundtrack's name.)

Lyrics:

As the stories had told some time ago
As elders of us here had spoken
We would one day be set free
To be rid of this responsibility
Rayman, you have come all this way
And risked so much just to save us
Now you must hurry and stop him
You, Rayman, you are the only one!

Stalking down an empty hall
All Winter through Spring til Fall
Like a spider in the night
Its pray could not chose to fight
Shining tears role down their cheeks
Not able to comprehend
The pain that you could make come true
I could never care for you


I had the inspiration to do this when I thought of the ending of the game. I plan to have this song take place as Rayman frees the rest of his friends who sing about Rayman and Dark Rayman (in their respective lyrical paragraphs, transitioning in the middle) as Rayman heads down the corridor where he encounters Dark Rayman for the final fight.

Created with Logic Pro 8 and produced with Pro Tools 8.

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Re: Rayman (1.5): Revenge of the Dark

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I really like it :P
Man, Rayfan did I ever tell you I love your voice?
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Re: Rayman (1.5): Revenge of the Dark

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RayFan9876 wrote:Here's a new 'song' I created for ROTD:

(This is not do be confused with the soundtrack piece "They Speak of a Hero," I'll change the soundtrack's name.)
This is amazing! :dango:
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Re: Rayman (1.5): Revenge of the Dark

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SuperSunshine wrote:I really like it :P
Man, Rayfan did I ever tell you I love your voice?
Thank you very much! :mryellow: Which one of the voices was your favourite?
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