Fanfic - Rayman 3 Expanded

[SilentSanctuary]

Hi, I have started writing a fanfic called 'Havoc Expanded'. The idea is basically that it retells the story of Rayman 3 in a more detailed and expanded way, with a few additions and minor edits to the storyline. The story will explore the backgrounds of several characters (for example Reflux) and originally cut content (for example the whole Zaq storyline, the Xowar battle in the Clearleaf Forest, Murkins etc.) will be featured. I will also use some of my own ideas in the story.

Here's the link: http://fanfiction.net/s/9561903/1/Havoc-Expanded

Right now I have written only one chapter - the opening cutscene, basically -but I will add new chapters when I have time.
Please tell me your opinion, whether or not should I continue, suggestions (?) or other things like that.

[todpole]

Story's missing

[SilentSanctuary]

Sorry, I had a problem with the story lately and it got accidentally deleted. I'll try to reupload the story when I have time.