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Rayman 4: the unknown… (Old Rayman Zone rolesfamily find!)

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So since I've been digging through all my old files on really old discs, I came across a 'fanfic' I wrote back in the days of the old Rayman Zone! It was a Rayman 4 concept, which was quite popular fanfic wise back in the day. So here it is, and I haven't changed it one bit it still has the essence of 10 year old rolesfamily!

Here it is!:



Rayman 4: the unknown…

Prologue:

T his
H orrible
E lephant
U nder
N eath
K icking
O ur
W ool
N et
Why is it there and who let it in”?
Exclaimed the Teensie King.

Globox butted in and said:” I don’t have a clue why but if you put the first letters it spells THE UNKNOWN lol”

THE UNKNOWN
By rolesfamily

By now the Teensie King was getting in a huff and a puff all about this elephant under their new wool net. Globox was getting board just watching the Teensie kick and try and move the elephant. So Globox decided to find Rayman because he was gone all night, so Globox set of into the wild and deep forest. He saw many mini beasts and had them crawling along his leg. He stopped. He sat down on a little stump of dirt.
Then Globox realised that he could see Rayman. Rayman approached Globox at a slow pace.
“Rayman! There you are you have been away from home for 1 hole night”
Rayman replied:
"I have had thinking to do Globox"
"What about...... Rayman?"
Globox asked willing
"I have been trying to get to the bottem of something. I'll tell you if you want me to"?
Rayman replied
"Ok then I'm all ears if I had any"
Globox aswered
"Right then all over this world I have found surveillence cameras there are spying on every one. they have been put around the hole world we need to blow them all up and the main thing we need to do is find out about it. Oh I don't want to foreget but there have been strange black bikes I feel they have something to do with the surveillence cameras."
Rayman said
"Err Rayman are you sure that you haven't drempt this because I don't belive you...."
replied Globox
Then Rayman started to run he jummped off the hill and kept on running. Globox did not know why Rayman ran but then suddenly 1 black bike like Rayman was talking about. It came closer the man who was on it got off and said
"Oi you fat person get over here"
Globox sat in fear hatting to think what the man wanted from him.
The man got out his gun a shot Globox.
Globox fell to the ground like dropping a sack of spuds.
The man loaded Globox onto the bike and drove off back to there HQ.
When Globox was captured by the man 2 of his children saw.. they looked for Rayman. In the end after about an 111 minute walk they found Rayman.
"Booo Hooo BBooo HO ho HOOOOOO"
they both sobbed
"Globox has been taken WE WANT OUR DADDY"
They said
"Don't worrie kidies I'll be your Daddy"
Rayman said
"W..H..A...T?"
the Globoxes said
"Nah I just stole that line off my Rayman 2 script and then changed it
any way lets go and find Globox who look him?"
Rayman replied
"Sob he was taken by a black bike BO HOO BOO HOO"
They both sobed
"Oh know I knew those bikes were trubble"
*Rayman saw a surveillence camera on the tree he smashed it in to little pices*
In the end Rayman dicied to go to the fairy councill he look the baby Globoxs with him.
"Why the heck is Bart Simpson and Homer here oi your in the rong studio"
Exclamied Rayman
" I told you to go left to the blue studio but you said oh no we have to go right and to the red one"
Said Bart saying that to Homer
"Doh!"
Said Homer.
Any way the baby Globoxes and Rayman were near the councill the kept on going till they got there. In the end they did but it look 25 minues because one of the baby Globoxes needed to go to the loo. But they all made it there safly.

I'll send in level one soon

What do you think and rember that was just the first small bit yhe rest will be much biger


Level 1:

You enter the fairy counsill there are 12 surveillence cameras in the room they are hidden. Find them all the proceed to the next room (Baby Globoxes folow you)
In the next room you find a man on te black bike kill him:Hits to kill:4 Attacks:running you over, shooting you. To say about Raymans helf bar well he has 100% life he can lose life and gain life.After you have defeted the biker proceed to the next room. You find the Teensies King kicking the elephant Rayman says:
"Hey Teensie whats happened here"
"OOOO Rayman someone has let this elephant in and it is on our new wool net I cant get rid of it did Globox say to come and help?"
Asked the Teensies King.
"Err no Globox has been captured and have seen him?"
Rayman asked
"Oh yeh I saw Globox he was sleeping on the back of a black bike and a man driving it they went into that cave over the hill but don't go now cos the suns setting"
The Teensie replied

"I must go you keep the baby Globoxes safe while I fing Globox"
said Rayman
*you go out the counsill and enter the hill* you find 3 black bikes
Hits to kill (for 1):4 attaks:run you over:dose 15% of damage.Shooting:dose 20% damage to you helf.
Kill them then it all goes black and you suddenly find you self in the cave. You pic up a torch and you walk over to the ledge. jump over it and the outher side is 1 red lum it will give you 10% more life. Then you find murfy
"Hi Rayman I saw Globox being taken down here I bet you hrer to get him back I'm just going to remind you Rayman. Right you have 5 trys till a GameOver
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Re: Rayman 4: the unknown… (Old Rayman Zone rolefamily find!)

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Blimey, this makes me grateful that modern browsers have built in spell checking tools :P.
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Re: Rayman 4: the unknown… (Old Rayman Zone rolefamily find!)

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Master wrote:Blimey, this makes me grateful that modern browsers have built in spell checking tools :P.
Hahah I know right, you can see why I got a reputation for bad spelling now :P Basically all of my posts were like that ;P It's quite amusing really, since during school in later years English was one of my strongest subjects. Well that was 10 year old me! Postin' all over the RZ! haha

WHAT A FANFIC.

MAKE IT HAPPEN UBISOFT!!!!!!!!
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