Thank you for the feedback! I've been thinking of whether or not I should retcon Raybox's origins and thanks to this reply I've become more confident not to add him in the film. Like, Ales Mansay as the UbiArt villain was probably studying at the time and wasn't thinking of ruling the world yet (?), so there's no way Raybox would've born nor would I use the "coming from the future" trope for the same AU lore-breaking reasons.hoodlumsworld wrote: Mon Jun 22, 2026 11:00 pm Great work on the update!
Murfy is already feeling much more in character. The line about them being "DEAD asleep" is exactly the kind of snark I was hoping for. I also really liked the tension building up outside the tent.
Regarding your question about retconning Raybox's origin: if the Raybox prank fits in naturally later on without distracting from the main mystery, then go for it, but don't force it if it messes up your AU lore too much!
Keep it up!
Also here is the update I made last night.
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It's been uploaded on YouTube, too, but I'm not sure about giving the link to you all, you kinda know why...
