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FINALLY i got a programmer to do all of it thanks dad :)
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You lucky bastard. :P
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RayFan9876 wrote:You lucky bastard. :P
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ok so here's the space moth (the head bares a strange resembles to globox head :paranormal:)
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Nice, how do they tie into the story? :)

Also can you send that hands rig?
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RayFan9876 wrote:Nice, how do they tie into the story? :)

Also can you send that hands rig?
read the plot :wink:
PLOT
it's been nearly six mouths now since rayman defeated andry and his hoodlum gang and 4 years since he defeated razorbeared but as he was running through the dream forest to visit Ly the fairy for an urgent message rayman hear a extremely loud noise from the distance and looked up and saw Ly being carried away by a swarm of black lums only to be leading to a new and improved ship handsomely named the Herminia. a note gently flew down that stated 4 sliver lums by dusk at the dock rayman grasp the note and ran off.(silver lums being the power to run the ship)
while subsequently on the other side of the world a ship landed down with the intestines on sucking his world's resources dry.(the R2 prototype to be exact)
but you meet up with theme after rescuing Ly and falling from the hoodlum's nebula only to be rescued by a space moth that had his Race captured by the space pirates and force to power the ship until they were executed one by one.(this was the urgent message from ly)
and yes i can send theme to you but i cant get it into a 2010 max format only 2012
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That's quite a story, but that's good, because story is extremely important, and this appears to be the only bad thing about Mario games. :mefiant:
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^So true!^
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Oh nice story! But I do think it could use a bit more punctuation in the first paragraph. It's one big mash of a sentence. ;)
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I rewrote it. No problem :>



It's been nearly six months now since Rayman defeated André and his Hoodlum gang, and four years since he defeated Razorbeard, but as he was running through the Dream Forest to visit Ly the Fairy for an urgent message, Rayman heard an extremely loud noise from the distance and looked up. He saw Ly being carried away by a swarm of Black Lums only to be leading to a new and improved ship handsomely named the Herminia.

A note gently flew down. It stated ''4 silver lums by dusk at the Dock''. Rayman grasped the note and ran off (the Silver Lums were used to power the ship) while subsequently on the other side of the world a ship landed down with the intestines on sucking his world's resources dry, but you meet up with them after rescuing Ly and falling from the Hoodlums' Nebula only to be rescued by a Space Moth who had his race captured by the Space Pirates and force to power the ship until they were executed one by one.
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Rulez wrote: with the intestines on sucking his world's resources dry
I think what's supposed to be said here is 'intending to suck his world's resources dry'... if the ship has got intestines - and if they then continue to suck anything at all - well, let's just say this will be an interesting fangame.
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Space Moth... Rayman 2 Beta anyone?
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RayFan9876 wrote:Oh nice story! But I do think it could use a bit more punctuation in the first paragraph. It's one big mash of a sentence. ;)
sorry my spell checker sucks or i do hand do you still want the hand's?
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that3Dguy wrote:
RayFan9876 wrote:Oh nice story! But I do think it could use a bit more punctuation in the first paragraph. It's one big mash of a sentence. ;)
sorry my spell checker sucks or i do hand do you still want the hand's?
Yep, I sure do. ;)
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RayFan9876 wrote:
that3Dguy wrote:
RayFan9876 wrote:Oh nice story! But I do think it could use a bit more punctuation in the first paragraph. It's one big mash of a sentence. ;)
sorry my spell checker sucks or i do hand do you still want the hand's?
Yep, I sure do. ;)
ok :)
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RayTunes wrote:Space Moth... Rayman 2 Beta anyone?
yes that is what i was aiming for.
and here's henchman 200
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Bumparooni for the man on the Mooni!
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beebo44 wrote:Bumparooni for the man on the Mooni!
what :hinhin:
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Hey, may I ask another favour that3Dguy? I'd like to use that beta Rayman 2 enemy model for a base of my "graveslave" enemies. Can you send it to be as well?
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RayFan9876 wrote:Hey, may I ask another favour that3Dguy? I'd like to use that beta Rayman 2 enemy model for a base of my "graveslave" enemies. Can you send it to be as well?
sure :) but if by graveslave you mean that beta henchman i posted and it's in a 2012 max format is that ok?
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