OUT OF ORDER!!

[El Dango]

I hope people here will give this story a chance.

Prologue:


In more than a million years, it has been hiding under us. In more than a million years people has felt save. In more than a million years, only a few people has known about 'the legend'. About 'the creature'. The creature that isn't a creature. That never was. A demonic power of evil, beyond the wildest limits. Continents has been destoyed. Lifes has been lost. Souls has been splitted. Everything because of... THE TEWONO...!

The word 'Tewono' originally came from the old southteensienian words: Thehz Wunohz , wich means 'deadly pain'. The only word that's even close to describe the horror of this demonic, powerful and soulless monster.

The describtion of this demon comes from The Dessert of the Knaaren. The old knaaren people, decribed it as a monster with thousands of skeleton arms, each with only 3 fingers. No legs. The ability to fly. Tree snail-like eyes. And four organs on the outside.
The knaaren people also described this creature as the only thing, even The Mighty Leptys is affraid of.
It was said, that Tewono could create a giant black hole in the sky, that would suck up everything. It was called Thehz Vortex (the deadly storm). Lightenings would come out of the hole, and hurt, if not kill, everyone they hit. If you where sucked inside the hole and hit by a lightening inside it, the blast of power would split your soul. Two minutes of horrible pain, then nothing.

The legend itself, comes from the people who once lived in The Cave of Skops. That was back when it was called Cavo Wa Zuefo (The peaceful cave). They knew alot about 'The Three Powers'. Polukus, Leptys and Tewono. The upcoming story will take place in The Marshes of Awakening, Cavo Wa Zuefo, The Tower of Leptys, The Cave of Bad Dreams and a place called Stormy Island.

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First i want to say that i made everything up. No real facts, only 100% imagination. So, what do you think?

EDIT: Sorry, but after the big fanfic inpection, this was proved to be too dark to be finished by the (incredible lazy) writer. We apologise and we hope that won't happen again. This has been shut down, and won't be continued. Luckily (thanks to it's unpopularity) no big damage has happened.
Message last edited by: Jim Leon, lead inspector.

[FAB]

Yay! Your finally making a story about your Tewono guy. This fanfic is impressive too.

[El Dango]

Really? Thanks! Just a shame i don't feel like finishing it. Too dark and no Rayman. Next time, i'll think before starting a fanfic.

[FAB]

That's what everyone does before writing a fanfic isn't it?

[El Dango]

Except me XD. GAh...!! I wanna delete this.... it pisses me off. Now i know how Dr Frankenstein felt!