Fanfic: A new dawn

well, i got my old sig back! and soon, the next chapter will be about. i'm currently working on my game scout {many thanks to doilpraat for giving me a boost on makng my game :wink: ]
 
heres the next chapter!

Dawn was dozily sleeping on his throne. scout was hurridly trying to wake him up. rayman socked him in the jaw, making dawn jump. he began chattering to himself isnanely.
"what, july the 4th already? sound the alarm, call the barons....order several large pepperoni pizzas!"he then noticed for the first time that a small crowd of...they looked like misfits....were standing over him. Dawn stood up to his full height, yawned, farted mightily, and sat down. rayman looked at scout with a look of pleading in his eyes. "please, please tell me that this wierdo is not dawn." scout shook his head, and sighed.
"he used to be..." dawn cut him off mid-sentence with another wind-pop.
"so, scout, who is this?" scout bowed. "your exellencey, this, is the one and only rayman, hero of our world. we need you to please let him save our world again!" dawn got down, revealing himself to be no bigger than rayman. " why are you asking me?" yawned dawn. scout rolled his eyes. "because we need the gate key to get to the magicians realm. please!" dawn picked up a cookie from the royal food table and bit into it. "maybe i will...maybe i won't." scout stood agahst. " for heavens sake he's a hero! why..." dawn lifter up his hippo hand. "i may be a lazy king,..but i'm not stupid. rayman, do you remember mr magic?" rayman shook his head. dawn handed him the gate key. "go...find mr magic in the cave of skops, and rescue my people." rayman took the key, and hurried out. they could hear dawn snoring still........

the ting lay at frost magicians feet. it was the first time he'd been out of the castle. the witchdoctor shook his head."he's . no doubt about it." he smiled at frost."probably tried to escape and got frozen in the snow." frost looked down. "escape is futile. he should have known that. shame the robots didn't..." he was lost in midsentence. he looked at the ting. then he imagined one of his tings...with gyros....or gears....or lasers... "y'know what, nabu? i think i've finally found a use for these creatures.....
 
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dawn was rudely awakened by his guards. unhappily, dawn reached out and grabbed the parchment they were carrying it. dawn gave it a read...and after raeading it his fingers began to tremble, and a cold sweat broke out. the guards looked at him. dawn made the grave message-"men...we're going to war."

"c'mon!" scout yelled, as the whole of rayman and scouts team trudged up the hill. globox was confused. "so...we're doing this..... why?" captain kraken began muttering under his breath. "i swear that if that grog-abusin' toad says one more world, i'll deliver him a quick blow from me scabbard.!" they kept walking. night and day, the heroes would trudge along with all thier belonings on a small camel-like creature. rayman was begginning to remember his journeys here, but he was pretty sure that it didn't take this long to get to the cave of skops. upon finally reaching the cave, he stopped, and set up camp. scout turned to see rayman about to run in. "not yet!" he pulled rayman back. they got ready for the sunset...
while reflux and ly wathed the sunset, scout roasted marshmellows and plums. he began to think about all the good times he'd had with his gang...gone. this was big--no-one but no-one had dared challanged frost. it was unheard of. as he looked back, he saw rayman running into the cave. he reached out-no. there was no point stopping him. scout walked over to a nearby rock where no-one was looking. and with a smile, he changed. gone was the sweet smile, as a sinister grin spred across his face. he still resembled scot...he'd just had a colour change. red eyes, purple instead of blue skin, and a wizards hat. he took out his crystal ball, revealing the real scout, tied up somewhere. krazzoff laughed-"it's only a matter of time, and then..." he laughed. and every animal for miles around ran away in fear.....

here is a pic of scout and krazzoff-i know it's not the best! :D
 
Matyuv said:
DIdNT PASuMAnAtatar USAe Ur ComPUTTtreer ALsOe?
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He did at the beginning, when his was broken. I believed he used his own near the end.
 
next chapters coming soon. and feel free to ask questions about scout on my other subject, scout encyclo.

edit:just to let you know, i've not given up on this topic. the next chapters coming shortly.
 
I will read it all, later, but you should put the full fanfic in one post, it would be easier to read!
 
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