Rayman: Human Flaws (Volume 1)

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Re: Rayman: Human Flaws (Volume 1)

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Beebop wrote:I will read it at some point, but it will take like a day or a week :lol:
It shouldn't take you THAT long. ;)
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Re: Rayman: Human Flaws (Volume 1)

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Could take a while for some people.
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Re: Rayman: Human Flaws (Volume 1)

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It took me over a half-hour to read those two sections. I'll probably start on Chapter 3 tomorrow or so.
But like you said earlier - have you guys ever seen Zay's Path to Divinity or Rayfan's Piranha (Although she doesn't have it posted here. Obviously, since she isn't a member.)? Man, those are long. XD But all of them are an enjoyable read, including Human Flaws.
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Re: Rayman: Human Flaws (Volume 1)

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Lotta thought are put into the fanfics Zay-el, Rayfan, and I all make. That way, they're perfectly enjoyable.
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It's a fantastic fanfic, and a joy to read. I've finished chapter one and will begin reading chapter 2 this evening :)
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Re: Rayman: Human Flaws (Volume 1)

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Luckster wrote:Lotta thought are put into the fanfics Zay-el, Rayfan, and I all make. That way, they're perfectly enjoyable.
But the chapters are too long. I almost have trouble reading HC's 'Items of Power'. :?
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Re: Rayman: Human Flaws (Volume 1)

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Too long?? I don't think so...
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Re: Rayman: Human Flaws (Volume 1)

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But i do, which is bad for you, since it means one fan less.
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Re: Rayman: Human Flaws (Volume 1)

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ouch, that's kinda mean. It's like telling a great novel writer you won't read their book because it doesn't have pictures in it.
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Re: Rayman: Human Flaws (Volume 1)

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Great novell writer? Sounds like there's someone here who likes herself a little too much. :wink:
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Re: Rayman: Human Flaws (Volume 1)

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I'm just making a comparison. And I am working on a novel.
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Re: Rayman: Human Flaws (Volume 1)

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She's just saying that one shouldn't be quite so picky on reading a lot of text. Personally, I don't like reading from a computer monitor too often, so I sometimes print off pages for reading (from various things, including fanfiction).

Anyway, I think this is a lot better than the comic series in some ways.
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Re: Rayman: Human Flaws (Volume 1)

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There should be a sequel, where the Robo-Pirates manage to get into the real world, and Rayman has to stop them before they destroy it.
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Re: Rayman: Human Flaws (Volume 1)

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El Dango wrote:
Luckster wrote:Lotta thought are put into the fanfics Zay-el, Rayfan, and I all make. That way, they're perfectly enjoyable.
But the chapters are too long. I almost have trouble reading HC's 'Items of Power'. :?
In which case I feel bad for you, because those chapters are short. I think you're just being lazy.
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Re: Rayman: Human Flaws (Volume 1)

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I know, i write those chapters in 10 minutes. I think it through before hand, of course.
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Re: Rayman: Human Flaws (Volume 1)

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Limely wrote:
El Dango wrote:
Luckster wrote:Lotta thought are put into the fanfics Zay-el, Rayfan, and I all make. That way, they're perfectly enjoyable.
But the chapters are too long. I almost have trouble reading HC's 'Items of Power'. :?
In which case I feel bad for you, because those chapters are short. I think you're just being lazy
That depends of what you mean with 'short'. Seriously, my eyes just can handle staring at a computer screen for so long, without even looking away. Seriously, how can anyone do that?
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Re: Rayman: Human Flaws (Volume 1)

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*points to my above post*
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Re: Rayman: Human Flaws (Volume 1)

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Why didn't i read that before? :oops2:
Yeah, i was thinking about printing Lachimax's fanfic, but i don't have a printer at my room, and it's a lot of work. Maybe later some day.
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Re: Rayman: Human Flaws (Volume 1)

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This fan fic is great, and i only read two chapters ! I enjoy reading these story's. I'll read the next chapters this evening or tomorrow, my eyes are bad and reading such long post's with little text just tires me.

And don't all be mad at El dango, some people like reading and some people don't :wink:.
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Re: Rayman: Human Flaws (Volume 1)

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Henchman1028 wrote:There should be a sequel, where the Robo-Pirates manage to get into the real world, and Rayman has to stop them before they destroy it.
I'm already working on Volume Two. The Series of Human Flaws is already fully written, as well as 4 other series after it.

And I don't consider the human world the 'Real World' in my series, thanks much. 8P
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