It shouldn't take you THAT long.Beebop wrote:I will read it at some point, but it will take like a day or a week
Rayman: Human Flaws (Volume 1)
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Could take a while for some people.
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It took me over a half-hour to read those two sections. I'll probably start on Chapter 3 tomorrow or so.
But like you said earlier - have you guys ever seen Zay's Path to Divinity or Rayfan's Piranha (Although she doesn't have it posted here. Obviously, since she isn't a member.)? Man, those are long. XD But all of them are an enjoyable read, including Human Flaws.
But like you said earlier - have you guys ever seen Zay's Path to Divinity or Rayfan's Piranha (Although she doesn't have it posted here. Obviously, since she isn't a member.)? Man, those are long. XD But all of them are an enjoyable read, including Human Flaws.
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Lotta thought are put into the fanfics Zay-el, Rayfan, and I all make. That way, they're perfectly enjoyable.
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It's a fantastic fanfic, and a joy to read. I've finished chapter one and will begin reading chapter 2 this evening 
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But the chapters are too long. I almost have trouble reading HC's 'Items of Power'.Luckster wrote:Lotta thought are put into the fanfics Zay-el, Rayfan, and I all make. That way, they're perfectly enjoyable.
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Too long?? I don't think so...
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But i do, which is bad for you, since it means one fan less.
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ouch, that's kinda mean. It's like telling a great novel writer you won't read their book because it doesn't have pictures in it.
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Great novell writer? Sounds like there's someone here who likes herself a little too much. 
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I'm just making a comparison. And I am working on a novel.
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She's just saying that one shouldn't be quite so picky on reading a lot of text. Personally, I don't like reading from a computer monitor too often, so I sometimes print off pages for reading (from various things, including fanfiction).
Anyway, I think this is a lot better than the comic series in some ways.
Anyway, I think this is a lot better than the comic series in some ways.
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There should be a sequel, where the Robo-Pirates manage to get into the real world, and Rayman has to stop them before they destroy it.
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In which case I feel bad for you, because those chapters are short. I think you're just being lazy.El Dango wrote:But the chapters are too long. I almost have trouble reading HC's 'Items of Power'.Luckster wrote:Lotta thought are put into the fanfics Zay-el, Rayfan, and I all make. That way, they're perfectly enjoyable.
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I know, i write those chapters in 10 minutes. I think it through before hand, of course.
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Re: Rayman: Human Flaws (Volume 1)
That depends of what you mean with 'short'. Seriously, my eyes just can handle staring at a computer screen for so long, without even looking away. Seriously, how can anyone do that?Limely wrote:In which case I feel bad for you, because those chapters are short. I think you're just being lazyEl Dango wrote:But the chapters are too long. I almost have trouble reading HC's 'Items of Power'.Luckster wrote:Lotta thought are put into the fanfics Zay-el, Rayfan, and I all make. That way, they're perfectly enjoyable.
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*points to my above post*

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Re: Rayman: Human Flaws (Volume 1)
Why didn't i read that before? 
Yeah, i was thinking about printing Lachimax's fanfic, but i don't have a printer at my room, and it's a lot of work. Maybe later some day.
Yeah, i was thinking about printing Lachimax's fanfic, but i don't have a printer at my room, and it's a lot of work. Maybe later some day.
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This fan fic is great, and i only read two chapters ! I enjoy reading these story's. I'll read the next chapters this evening or tomorrow, my eyes are bad and reading such long post's with little text just tires me.
And don't all be mad at El dango, some people like reading and some people don't
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And don't all be mad at El dango, some people like reading and some people don't
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Re: Rayman: Human Flaws (Volume 1)
I'm already working on Volume Two. The Series of Human Flaws is already fully written, as well as 4 other series after it.Henchman1028 wrote:There should be a sequel, where the Robo-Pirates manage to get into the real world, and Rayman has to stop them before they destroy it.
And I don't consider the human world the 'Real World' in my series, thanks much. 8P



