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No summer homework here in Ireland! *doesn't do summer homework because he doesn't have any*
The Dazzling Spider-Ray: Coming Early 2008
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He just edited it away there.
Admittedly I miss the guy, and all the other old members that were here when I joined.
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Well they're not fanfics but original creations I made. Some new, some old.
To be honest, I left because well... I got bored here. Yeah, ain't that ironic, I told you guys I would stay... THEN I LEAVE AGAIN.
So yeah, this comic is dead but I am releasing some drawings that I have made for it in the meantime.
To be honest, I left because well... I got bored here. Yeah, ain't that ironic, I told you guys I would stay... THEN I LEAVE AGAIN.
So yeah, this comic is dead but I am releasing some drawings that I have made for it in the meantime.
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I'm sorry but
How can "Spiderman + Rayman" be an original creation? It's been done before on DA anyway, long before I've even heard of RaymanPC. Reminds me of someone who made a hybrid of SpongeBob and Tails and called it their original creation.
Just giving my two cents.
How can "Spiderman + Rayman" be an original creation? It's been done before on DA anyway, long before I've even heard of RaymanPC. Reminds me of someone who made a hybrid of SpongeBob and Tails and called it their original creation.
Just giving my two cents.
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No I meant I left to pursue my original creations meaning I left this project.
I have some projects in the works:
The Mech
ClockWatchers
Gun-Arm
And Infrared
Those, Stacey, are my original creations. A lot of the Mech is on my DA (mainly the female character though cause I wasn't good at women before) and my latest drawing has some concept art for Gun-Arm and Infrared (who already appeared on my DA as Code: V, but I changed her name).
I already knew of a few Spider-Ray drawings before I made the idea, I was just such a Spidey geek, I wanted to make my own series of Spider-Man and I just tagged along Rayman for the fun of it.
I have some projects in the works:
The Mech
ClockWatchers
Gun-Arm
And Infrared
Those, Stacey, are my original creations. A lot of the Mech is on my DA (mainly the female character though cause I wasn't good at women before) and my latest drawing has some concept art for Gun-Arm and Infrared (who already appeared on my DA as Code: V, but I changed her name).
I already knew of a few Spider-Ray drawings before I made the idea, I was just such a Spidey geek, I wanted to make my own series of Spider-Man and I just tagged along Rayman for the fun of it.
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I think Acarrs talking about your Spider-ray pics.
It's a wonder i'm still posting here with exams coming up. I've got test papers to do over the holidays. x[Kelvin12 said:No prob.
I thought I would stay but school gets in the way.Serza5 said:Silly KelvinWhy didn't you just say you're leaving instead of saying i'm back again...oh wait i'm leaving? :B
Anyway it's good to see you alive.
I've only got 1 day study leave...
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Hey guys, even though this project is dead, I still have a few of the scripts/plots that I wrote during 7th grade (2007-200
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Here's a bit of Issue 1.
Spider-Ray #1 - The Beginning of a New Web
What does the word life mean to me? Well, ever since what happened to me, it can be summed up into one word now. Life means the ultimate ride. This is my story, the story that would make a big difference to me in the big city I live in, Aeropolis. The city which I live in is full of gangs, super-villains, and even superheroes. I am one of those superheroes, heck, I’m just a beginner and people already love me except some who I can think of…
Do you know who I am? Well, I can say it. I can say it loud and proud with all my voice.
I am Spider-Ray! I am the wall-crawler saving people from crime. I am also a high school student at Aeropolis High. The prime nerd everybody picks on. Well, being what I am now, I’m sure I can arrange some strings to fix that.
“BRING!” “BRING!” an alarm sounds. There is a local robbery! “Okay, who pulled that alarm?” said one of 3 robbers. “Benny, you sure you’re covering the place?” “Benny?” Seems to be that Benny is knocked out straight on the floor! A red flashing signal pops out of nowhere. This signal is from the dazzling Spider-Ray! “Oh no!” “He’s here!” Spider-Ray webs up Benny and goes after the other two trying to run into a car. One of which robbers tries to hold Benny up but Spider-Ray lunges at him and kicks him, ties the man with a web. The last robber gets into the car but realizes that he was stupid enough to leave part of the stolen money with Benny and gets out of the car quickly to get it. Strangely the other stolen money is not there and neither is Spider-Ray or his partners in crime. He finds the bag in the middle of the floor with light shining under it. He gets the bag and WHAM! Punched all the way to the wall, all of the robbers are unconscious and webbed… That is webbed upside-down to a pole together.
So how was I able to do all this? Well, this is where it goes to the old non-superpowered version of me as Rayman.
“Rayman, isn’t it almost time for your Science Expo or something?” asked Aunt Jade. Rayman looks at watch a little worried. “Oh jeez, it is!” “Gotta go Uncle Michel, see ya Aunt Jade!” Rayman rushes out after waving his hand good bye to his Aunt and Uncle.
Uncle Michel comes out of the house and asks Rayman, “Hey, how far is this expo of yours?” “It’s at Clearleaf University.” “That’s far Ray, come on, hop in the car, I’ll take you, let me say good bye to Aunt Jade okay?” “Yes Uncle.”
20 minutes later…
“Okay, this is it,” said Uncle Michel. Rayman opened the door of the car and said, “See ya Uncle Ben.” “Come home before 9, Ray.” “Okay.” Rayman closed the car door and went inside the University. Inside the University center he saw Dr. Levaghetto and Dr. Razorbeard were working on an experiment on radioactivity. “Today me and my colleague here, Beemer Razorbeard, are going to fuse two beams of radiation together which will result in .” “You ready?” asked Razorbeard. “Okay, so starting... 3… 2… One…” Razorbeard pressed the button
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And that's as far as I got on the story. I couldn't find a reason why would they fuse two beams of radiation together so... Yeah.
.Here's a bit of Issue 1.
Spider-Ray #1 - The Beginning of a New Web
What does the word life mean to me? Well, ever since what happened to me, it can be summed up into one word now. Life means the ultimate ride. This is my story, the story that would make a big difference to me in the big city I live in, Aeropolis. The city which I live in is full of gangs, super-villains, and even superheroes. I am one of those superheroes, heck, I’m just a beginner and people already love me except some who I can think of…
Do you know who I am? Well, I can say it. I can say it loud and proud with all my voice.
I am Spider-Ray! I am the wall-crawler saving people from crime. I am also a high school student at Aeropolis High. The prime nerd everybody picks on. Well, being what I am now, I’m sure I can arrange some strings to fix that.
“BRING!” “BRING!” an alarm sounds. There is a local robbery! “Okay, who pulled that alarm?” said one of 3 robbers. “Benny, you sure you’re covering the place?” “Benny?” Seems to be that Benny is knocked out straight on the floor! A red flashing signal pops out of nowhere. This signal is from the dazzling Spider-Ray! “Oh no!” “He’s here!” Spider-Ray webs up Benny and goes after the other two trying to run into a car. One of which robbers tries to hold Benny up but Spider-Ray lunges at him and kicks him, ties the man with a web. The last robber gets into the car but realizes that he was stupid enough to leave part of the stolen money with Benny and gets out of the car quickly to get it. Strangely the other stolen money is not there and neither is Spider-Ray or his partners in crime. He finds the bag in the middle of the floor with light shining under it. He gets the bag and WHAM! Punched all the way to the wall, all of the robbers are unconscious and webbed… That is webbed upside-down to a pole together.
So how was I able to do all this? Well, this is where it goes to the old non-superpowered version of me as Rayman.
“Rayman, isn’t it almost time for your Science Expo or something?” asked Aunt Jade. Rayman looks at watch a little worried. “Oh jeez, it is!” “Gotta go Uncle Michel, see ya Aunt Jade!” Rayman rushes out after waving his hand good bye to his Aunt and Uncle.
Uncle Michel comes out of the house and asks Rayman, “Hey, how far is this expo of yours?” “It’s at Clearleaf University.” “That’s far Ray, come on, hop in the car, I’ll take you, let me say good bye to Aunt Jade okay?” “Yes Uncle.”
20 minutes later…
“Okay, this is it,” said Uncle Michel. Rayman opened the door of the car and said, “See ya Uncle Ben.” “Come home before 9, Ray.” “Okay.” Rayman closed the car door and went inside the University. Inside the University center he saw Dr. Levaghetto and Dr. Razorbeard were working on an experiment on radioactivity. “Today me and my colleague here, Beemer Razorbeard, are going to fuse two beams of radiation together which will result in .” “You ready?” asked Razorbeard. “Okay, so starting... 3… 2… One…” Razorbeard pressed the button
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And that's as far as I got on the story. I couldn't find a reason why would they fuse two beams of radiation together so... Yeah.
