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Re: Fanfic: Gems of Chaos Chapter 3

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Joshua822 wrote:You could download it, it's legal because you already own the game :wink:
By "GC" I meant "GameCube", so there are several problems with downloading it:

1: Where to find GameCube ISOs
2: Buying a really powerful computer so I can run Dolphin, the GameCube emulator
3: ...well, that's all actually.
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Re: Fanfic: Gems of Chaos Chapter 3

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Okay, thanks, better change it to 'orbiting twin isolated suns'
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Re: Fanfic: Gems of Chaos Chapter 3

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Really good to read a fantastic fanfic again. Nice work Lachimax, you'd certainly make a decent writer.
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Re: Fanfic: Gems of Chaos Chapter 3

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Hm...I just got an idea...an illegal and very profitable idea...
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Re: Fanfic: Gems of Chaos Chapter 3

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Which is...?
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Re: Fanfic: Gems of Chaos Chapter 3

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If it's got anything to do with selling fanfics, I doubt many people would be interested in buying Rayman stories.
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Re: Fanfic: Gems of Chaos Chapter 3

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Maybe in Scandinavia...
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Re: Fanfic: Gems of Chaos Chapter 4

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New Chapter!

Chapter 4: Speed of Sound

The Cave of Bad Dreams

The gem glowed in Jano’s claws, undimmed by the shadows that surrounded it. Jano gazed at it with his single eye in amazement, wondering how such an object had come to be in his domain, a place that some might interpret as Hell. And if his Cave was Hell, that made Jano the Devil.
He shook himself. No, he was not a Devil. Would the Devil be entrusted with the protection of Polokus’ darkest thoughts?
But as the Guardian of the Cave of Bad Dreams stared into the Emeralds’ crystalline depths, a dark greed grew in his heart. This gem was his now. He would keep it with him at all times, and treasure it above all his other treasures.
Jano took off his purple top hat, identical to the one worn by the Spirit of the World himself, and placed the Chaos Emerald inside.

The Canopy, Vastfall Woods

Mr. Dark was amazed when Raylina exited the Emerald Chamber unharmed and grinning. He had been certain that whatever had been within would overcome her. But now they possessed two Chaos Emeralds of seven.
But, as they left the Sanctuary, they were greeted by an unpleasant surprise.
There was Dark Rayman, standing before them, the light of anger in his eyes. “I think it’s about time you handed over those Emeralds,”
Mr. Dark reached for the claw at his side, but Dark Rayman raised a hand and it flew to him. “Not this time,”
A sword of flames ignited in Mr. Dark’s hand. “Then prepare to fight,”
Dark Rayman smiled. “Well, master, you never did give me a sense of honour or fair play. A mistake on your part. I have... friends,”
Dark Rayman raised both fists into the air, and a dark energy radiated from them. He plunged them into the tree’s branches, and Raylina felt a shudder run through the massive trunk.
The entire forest began to stir. Out of every hollow, every crack, dark creatures poured. Giant, black spiders crawled down trunks. Zombie Chickens rose from the forest floor, stirred from their slumber. Black, furry, snakelike beings bounced across the leafy canopy. Small, flying, hairy orbs which made a buzzing sound flew through the air. One of the colossal trees nearby shattered, showering the forest with splinters and revealing a truly massive parasitic Thorn Root plant, one which had evidently infected the entire tree.
Creatures of Darkness.
(By the way, every one of those creatures were enemies in Rayman 2)
The fell beasts swarmed towards Mr. Dark and Raylina. Mr. Dark swore, raising his hands to cast fire at them. The two of them backed away, fighting for their lives. Raylina was terrified.
They stood back-to-back, fighting off the creatures. Dark Rayman stood and watched, chuckling.
But then, something else appeared.
A low drone echoed through the woods, coming from above. Dark Rayman looked up, and cursed.
Above, descending between the trees, was a huge, red, yellow and black warship, hundreds of metres long. Mr. Dark’s immediate reaction was to think Pirates, but he soon realised that these were not Robo-Pirates.
From the belly of the ship flew hundreds of robots, hovering down with jetpacks. They were vaguely humanoid, being round and orange, and had machine guns attached to their arms. They opened fire on the creatures, and the creatures turned their attention from Raylina and Dark to the robots. A full-scale battle soon broke out. Raylina and Mr. Dark moved through the chaos, desperately trying to escape.
BOOM!
A loud crack that sounded like thunder echoed across the trees. The dark creatures and robots continued to battle, unperturbed, but Mr. Dark recognised it for what it was.
“A sonic boom,” he exclaimed.
Then, suddenly, there was a new combatant in the midst of the battle. It was nothing but a blue blur, moving between enemies at the speed of sound. It moved through the battle, towards Raylina and Dark.
A spider dropped to the leaves before Raylina. It scuttled onto her, attempting to bite her. She barely held it back with her hands, its fangs dripping venom. Mr. Dark tried to help her, but was grabbed from behind by a Thorn Root.
With a surge of strength, Raylina flipped the spider off her and leapt to her feet. But it reacted quickly, turning back over and knocking her backwards with its legs.
She was less than a metre from the edge of the leaves.
Raylina stumbled backwards, and fell.
“NO!” shouted Dark, struggling with his captor.
Raylina fell through the air, screaming. She shut her eyes tight, and waited for the end to come.
But the blue blur detached itself from the battle and flew off the edge of the canopy after her. It shot through the air towards her, and caught her in midair.
Raylina opened her eyes, closed her mouth. She looked into the face of her saviour, who held her in his arms.
It was a Hedgehog.
Unfortunately, they were still falling.
The Hedgehog kicked off the side of the tree, flying towards another. He hit it feet first, and began to run up the trunk. Raylina buried her face in her hands, not wanting to watch.
The Hedgehog bounced from tree to tree, until they were back on the canopy. He paced her on the ground, and she finally got a proper look at him.
He looked like Shadow, but his fur was blue, with a bare patch on his stomach. He wore red shoes and white gloves.
“Shadow?” she asked.
The Hedgehog grinned. “Imagine mistaking me for that depressing loner,” he said jokingly. “I’m Sonic. Sonic the Hedgehog,”

Dark continued to pull against the roots, casting spells against them, but every root he destroyed was replaced by two more.
But then, piercing through the sounds of machine gun fire and creatures dying came the roar of a motorcycle engine. The motorbike sped through the brawl, running over anything stupid enough to get in the way.
In the seat was Shadow the Hedgehog.
On his shoulder was a rocket launcher.
The bike hit a pile of bodies, riding up it like a jump, and flew through the air. In midair, Shadow fired a rocket at the Thorn Root plant. It screeched, and released Dark. Another rocket left the tube as the bike landed, hitting the plant again. It fell away, burning.
Shadow’s bike sped forwards, and Mr. Dark landed smoothly in the seat behind Shadow. The two of them sped away, riding out of the battle.
But Dark Rayman stood in their way, unwilling to let them pass.
Shadow discarded his rocket launcher and drew a machine gun, pointing it straight forward. He sprayed Dark Rayman with bullets, pouring them into his chest and head. Instead of bleeding, Dark Rayman sprayed some black substance all over the place, and sank into a puddle of the stuff.
Shadow rode through the puddle, and drew the yellow Chaos Emerald from a compartment in his bike. He raised it high and muttered “Chaos Control,”
They disappeared in a flash of blue.
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Re: Fanfic: Gems of Chaos Chapter 4: Speed of Sound

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Yay! More chapter! I'm intrigued as to what Dark Rayman is planning.
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Re: Fanfic: Gems of Chaos Chapter 4: Speed of Sound

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A new chapter! Awesome! I think my favorite part had to be Shadow riding a motorcycle while shooting a rocket launcher. XD
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Re: Fanfic: Gems of Chaos Chapter 4: Speed of Sound

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Will there be any xenomorphs in this fic? *thinks of hedgemorphs*
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Re: Fanfic: Gems of Chaos Chapter 4: Speed of Sound

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Nah, probably not.

Anyway, not that anyone cares, but I've actually thought of musical themes for each of the characters in the fic. Each one has a link to the YouTube video where it can be listened to.

Sonic - His World by Matty Lewis http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=96dd6aeAT-s

The Main Theme of Sonic the Hedgehog 2006, and also Sonic's theme in that game.

Shadow - I Am (All of Me) by Crush 40 http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8VpYfMxIoR4

The main theme of the game Shadow the Hedgehog.

Eggman - E.G.G.M.A.N. by Paul Shortino http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LWiSEyU76M4

Eggman's theme in Sonic Adventure 2. Kind of a no-brainer.

Rayman - Madder by Groove Armada http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gVerniseFXI

This song was used as the title theme for Rayman 3.

Raylina - Dreams of an Absolution (LB vs. JS mix) by Lee Brotherton and Jun Senoue
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MH2xjD9_exo

The original version of this song was Silver's Theme in Sonic 06. This is a remix featuring Jun Senoue.

Mr. Dark - Breaking the Habit by Linkin Park http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TqxwIwTYPeg

By Linkin Park. Yay!

Razorbeard - What I'm Made of by Crush 40 http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MuVAaU63K7k

This would have been Razorbeard's theme in Alien vs. Rayman. It is actually Metal Sonic's theme in Sonic Heroes.

Lachimax - What I've Done by Linkin Park http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yPEpSdLSLTA

I'm not sure what Lachimax did, but I think it suits his fighting ability and stuff like that. Plus, it's my favourite song.

Globox - We Can by Ted Poley and Tony Harnell http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_gk56RNBqxw

This was Team Sonic's theme in Sonic Heroes. I thought it kinda suited Globox.

Clark - Unknown from M.E. by Marlon Saunders and Hunnid-P http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tGejHJSyrZ0

Knuckles' Theme in Sonic Adventure 2. I thought it suited Clark.

Ly - Into the Night by Santana http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HMQsWWnDc-M

Santana Rocks!

Dark Rayman - Monsters by Matchbook Romance http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=r7ctV_6i5xw

Yeah. Suits him.


I may add more themes as more characters appear...

And rest assured, a new chapter is on the way.
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Re: Fanfic: Gems of Chaos Chapter 4: Speed of Sound

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Aw, I was hoping it'd be a new chapter.
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Re: Fanfic: Gems of Chaos Chapter 5: Tales of Mobius

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It is now.

Chapter 5: Tales of Mobius

Sonic carried Raylina as he sprinted through the woods, leaping from tree to tree. As they moved further from the centre of the woods, the trees grew smaller and smaller, until there were none at all. The terrain grew wetter and more boggy, until finally they stopped in what Raylina recognised as the Marshes of Awakening. The water was a funny brown-green colour, and giant lily pads grew in it. The ruins of twenty year old Robo-Pirate structures protruded from the marshes, close to collapsing.
Sonic set her down on one of these lily pads. She noticed that he was quite small, shorter than her.
Sonic gazed around. “Another Emerald is near. I can feel it,”

Unknown Position, Near Vastfall Woods

Shadow and Mr. Dark did not appear where Shadow expected.
They materialised just beyond the borders of the Vastfall Woods, on a wide, grassy plain. They could easily make out the enormous trees in the distance.
Surrounding them were hundreds of the egg-shaped robots.
The instant they appeared, a burst of laserfire knocked him and Mr. Dark from the bike. Both Dark’s and Shadow’s Chaos Emeralds went flying. The red one flew through the air in a graceful ark, landing...
In Doctor Eggman’s gloved hand.
“How nice of you to join us, Shadow,”
The Doctor hovered above them in his round flying machine, with two laser cannons attached to the sides. Both were aimed at Shadow.
The Hedgehog snarled and leapt at the Eggmobile, but Eggman dodged to the side and fired the cannons into Shadow’s chest. Shadow was thrown to the ground, groaning.
Mr. Dark stood, a flaming sword in his hands. “Who are you?” he asked angrily. “Give that Emerald back!”
Eggman turned to him. “Ah, so this is the infamous Mr. Dark. I have heard of your exploits,”
A blue energy beam lanced down from the Eggmobile, immobilising Dark. He struggled against it, pushing with his mind, but to no avail.
“I know that you and I are alike. Both villainised by so-called ‘heroes’. Both living on the fringes of society, our hunger for power never satisfied,”
Eggman tossed the Chaos Emerald in his hand. “Join me, Mr. Dark, and not only will we be saving this world from these freaks that call themselves heroes, but you will gain the power that you so long for!”
Shadow shook his head and looked over at Mr. Dark, knowing that Mr. Dark was not foolish enough to be swayed by those words. But when he saw the glint of greed in the dark Ray’s eye, Shadow knew that Mr. Dark was lost. “No, Dark! You don’t know Eggman! He doesn’t seek to save this world!”
“Silence, hedgehog!” Eggman fired his cannons at Shadow again, but Shadow rolled away and ran at Dark, trying to pull him from the force field Eggman held him in. But he was reflected by the semi-translucent barrier and knocked to the ground yet again. The robots trained their weapons onto him.
Dark bowed his head. “If you explain to me what is going on, then I might join you,”
Eggman smiled.
Shadow was on his feet again.
“You’re a fool, Dark,” he said, raising his Chaos Emerald. “And you’ll pay,”
Eggman pointed at the black hedgehog. “Stop him!”
The Eggbots fired at Shadow, their machine guns chattering away. But it was too late.
Shadow glowed with red energy, his arms to his chest.
“CHAOS... BLAST!”
A wave of red energy radiated outwards from Shadow. It swept through the squad of robots, destroying them where they stood.
Eggman crouched inside his Eggmobile, sheltered by the strong metal that it consisted of. When he looked up, his robots were wasted, blasted apart. Dark was unconscious, still inside the force field.
And Shadow was gone.

The Marshes of Awakening, near the entrance to The Cave of Bad Dreams

Sonic and Raylina were exploring further into the Marshes, following Sonic’s vague sense of the Emerald’s presence.
“So...um...” said Raylina with all the awkwardness of a teenage girl talking to a teenage boy. “Why are you and Shadow here?”
Sonic grinned. “Ah, now there’s a story,”

FLASHBACK: Guardian Units of Nations (GUN) Headquarters, Mobius

Shadow the Hedgehog stepped into the central vault of the GUN headquarters, Rouge the Bat alongside him. His face betrayed nothing of his surprise as he noticed Sonic, his old rival, was also in the room, standing next to the GUN commander. Tails ‘Miles’ Prower, Sonic’s loyal double-tailed fox sidekick, was also alongside him. The GUN commander nodded to Shadow, and he nodded back. “You called, Commander?”
The Commander nodded again. “Did you bring the Emerald?”
Shadow tossed it in the air once, catching it with ease. “Of course,”
“Now that we’re all here, why don’t you tell us what’s going on, Mr. Commander?” Sonic asked with a grin.
Shadow shook his head. Sonic never seemed to grasp the seriousness of any situation.
The GUN Commander seemed to agree with Shadow, frowning.
“Recently, each of the three Chaos Emeralds in our possession have been disappearing. They were all held in high-security vaults, guarded by hundreds of our bots. And nobody seems to have broken into these vaults. No-one was caught on camera, and there are several trained on the Emeralds themselves. There is absolutely no evidence of fingerprints, points of entry, or tampering with the cameras. We did, however, find minute samples of an alien substance within the vault. Our scientists are having trouble identifying it, but it does give off a unique radiation. We have rigged a device which allows this radiation to be tracked,”
“Then why haven’t you already caught the culprit?”
“Because...ah...it keeps disappearing and reappearing across the globe. It would appear that he or she has the benefit of Chaos Control. Which is where you and Sonic come in. We need you to hunt the culprit down and take the Emeralds back,”

Unknown Location, Mobius

Alright, Shadow, I’m in position now,” Sonic’s voice came from Shadow’s communicator.
“Good. Stay there until I give the signal,”
Shadow lay crouched in the bushes, at the edge of a clearing. In the centre of the clearing was their Chaos Emerald.
After days of following the culprit’s trail, they had arrived here. They knew that he must be nearby, so they had decided to set a trap using the Chaos Emerald as bait.
Shadow rested his chin on a sniper rifle, looking at the Emerald through its sight. The GUN Commander had given them permission to use deadly force if necessary, but that he would rather they took the culprit alive. Which was why the sniper was loaded with knock-out darts.
A flicker of movement caught Shadow’s eye, and a dark being emerged into the clearing, the likes of which neither Shadow or Sonic had ever seen. It’s hands, feet, and head floated separate from its’ body.
”What the hell is that?”
“Just be ready to take that thing down,”
Shadow took aim at the creature’s chest as it approached the Emerald, and pulled the trigger. The dart flew through the air, thudding into the creature’s body...
And passing straight through it.
Shadow’s eyes widened.
The creature turned to the source of this attack, raising his fist. But they had been prepared for the dart to fail.
Sonic leapt into the clearing, running at the speed of sound headlong into the dark creature. The thing fell onto its back, but flipped quickly over and stood in a battle-ready stance.
“Now, Tails!” said Shadow into his communicator.
With that, a large net flew from the trees, wrapping itself around the creature. It fell to the ground, struggling. Tails emerged from the forest in his transformed Tornado plane, which had just cast the net at Dark Rayman.
Shadow approached them, only to see Dark Rayman break through the net and strike at Sonic. Sonic flew backwards, not expecting this attack. Tails fired at the Ray with the Tornado’s cannon, only to be blasted away by a wave of dark energy.
Dark Rayman threw away the remains of the net and picked up the Chaos Emerald. Shadow could only watch helplessly as it, as well as the other six, formed a ring around the creature’s body.
“Who are you?” it asked Shadow in an almost resentful voice.
“Shadow. Shadow the Hedgehog,”
Shadow charged at Dark Rayman, but the Ray cried “Chaos Control!” and disappeared in a bright flash of light.
Along with Shadow and Sonic.

The Marshes of Awakening, near the entrance to The Cave of Bad Dreams

“Dark Rayman accidentally brought us along with him when he warped to this place. The Emeralds were scattered, and me and Shadow have been trying to hunt them down. We found two, and Shadow gave one to you to take to your dad. We heard about him and thought it would be safe to give the Emeralds to him. Obviously, we were wrong. Dark Rayman has also been hunting the Emeralds, and as far as we know he has none,” Sonic finished.
It was that moment that Shadow chose to appear, materialising in front of them. Raylina jumped in fright, then blushed as Sonic grinned at her.
“Bad news. Eggman is here,”
Sonic nodded. “So that’s where those robots came from,”
“Yes. And it gets worse. Mr. Dark has been captured by the Doctor, and Eggman has turned him to his side. He also took the Emerald I gave to you, Raylina,”
“What!?”
“Yes. Now Eggman has one Emerald, and we have two,”
“Well,” said Sonic. “We have one piece of good news. Another Emerald is dead ahead,”
And they walked up a big tree root, walking into a fold in the tree. As they turned the corner, Raylina saw three more of the bouncing eyes, staring at her, Shadow, and Sonic.
And behind them was a one-eyed being wearing a top hat.

The Heart of the World, the Fairy Council

Polokus, Betilla and the Grand Minimus stood in discussion in the chamber of the World’s Heart. The large room had been repaired after the destruction Rayman in the Grolgoth and the Queen Xenomorph had wreaked upon it. There still remained in the room a small sample of the Alien’s cocooning material, hanging from the roof as a reminder of what had once been.
I have felt a dark disturbance in the world recently, said Betilla, lowering her eyelids. Something is loose here that is not meant to be,
Polokus nodded, speaking in his gravelly voice. “I have felt it also. The Dark Spirit, Veurtoya, has been unleashed from his prison in the Land of the Livid Dead. He is held there for now by the barriers the Griskin Teensies placed there, but will be freed by his servant soon enough,”
“Can’t you do something?” came the Grand Minimus’ squeaky voice, his crown slipping off his head.
Polokus shook his head. “I am powerless against this being. This is what the Ancients created the Heroes for. It is down to Rayman and his counterparts to stop this hazard. And the worst part is, by the rules set down by the Ancients themselves, none of us can interfere,”

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Re: Fanfic: Gems of Chaos Chapter 5: Tales of Mobius

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Ah, yay. :mrgreen:
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This is great! Really. Love it.
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Re: Fanfic: Gems of Chaos Chapter 5: Tales of Mobius

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that story rocks im a graphics animation studioist and my freinds are too so i was thinking would you want to turn this greate story into a movie /animation
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Re: Fanfic: Gems of Chaos Chapter 5: Tales of Mobius

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If you guys can do it, that would be fantastic! Although I would prefer if you did my first fanfic, Return of the Robo-Pirates.
Rest assured, a new chapter is well on the way. In the meantime:

Jano - Bohemian Rhapsody by Queen http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=irp8CNj9qBI

If you do not know this band, then you can leave right now. No. Just leave. Queen was one of the greatest rock band of all time, and this is one of their best songs. This song sort of gives you a glimpse of Jano's past, and how he came to be Guardian.
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Re: Fanfic: Gems of Chaos Chapter 5: Tales of Mobius

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It is an incredibly odd but truly great song. :P
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Re: Fanfic: Gems of Chaos Chapter 6:Nightmare Cavern

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Chapter 6: Nightmare Cavern

Space Colony ARK, in orbit around the Crossroads of Dreams

When Doctor Eggman entered Rayman’s prison, Rayman didn’t stir, keeping his eyes firmly locked on the metal ceiling.
“Ah, so we remain uncooperative, do we?” Eggman said, turning to an electronic map of the planet below. Shown on the map were seven gem-shaped markers. One was hovering beside the planet, to show that the Emerald it represented was beyond the Crossroads’ atmosphere. Two of the markers were overlapping, and another was very close. “Hmmm,” Eggman hmmed, stroking his massive moustache. “So Sonic and Shadow have joined forces with your lovely daughter, are in possession of two Emeralds, and are very close to finding a third,”
Rayman smiled slightly. “That’s my girl,” he muttered.
Eggman saw this. “Proud of her, are you? Well, fear not. You shall be reunited with her shortly,”
He pressed a button, and the table Rayman was bound to rose so that he was in a vertical position, facing the wall.
“I will return you to the Crossroads on one condition, my extension-challenged friend. You will collect the Emerald, and return them to me. I have one already, so that leaves you six to find,”
Rayman, his head lowered, not making eye contact with the Doctor, spat “And what makes you think I’ll do as you say?”
Eggman chuckled. “Ah, you and Sonic are very much alike. Very well,”
He pressed another button, and a panel in the wall Rayman was facing slid away to reveal a window that showed another room.
Rayman’s eyes widened. “No!”
Eggman smiled. “I thought that would motivate you. Now, you must do as I say, or she dies,”
In the other room, strapped to a steel table in a similar manner to Rayman, was Ly the Fairy.

Entrance to the Cave of Bad Dreams, Marshes of Awakening

“You must know the name of this place to enter,”
Jano shook his skull-headed staff at the two Hedgehogs and Raylina.
Raylina was taken aback. “Excuse me?”
“If you do not know the name of this place, then you must leave,” growled the cycloptic Guardian.
“We don’t have time for this,” Shadow said. He leapt into the air, curling into a ball as he did, and shot straight at Jano’s eye in a Homing Attack. The ancient monster was quick, however. He blocked Shadow with a flick of his staff, and Shadow landed on his feet, ever graceful, sliding to a halt.
But the sudden movement had unbalanced Jano’s hat. The great, purple top hat fell as if in slow-motion, landing on the damp, mossy ground.
And all seven eyes fell upon the purple Chaos Emerald that rolled out of it.
Jano was the first to break the silence.
“I see all!” He proclaimed, pointing an accusing finger at the trio. “Do you think I do not see the looks of greed in your eyes? You want to take it! My gem! You shall not have it! It is mine! It belongs to me!”
Jano picked up the Chaos Emerald, cradling it in his bony fingers. Its purple light was reflected in his single, large eye, as well as a look of intense jealousy. Mad jealousy.
“My...precious,”
Sonic and Shadow were both in unspoken agreement; this creature, if not already so, had been driven insane by the Emerald’s power. Both fell into a combat-ready stance. But as they began to strike, reality unfolded around them.
The world dissolved into a swirling vortex of yellow light, transporting them to a place where Gods fear to tread.

The Yellow Portal is one of the most efficient means of transport throughout the Crossroads of Dreams. Used almost exclusively by the Teensies, who are amongst the only ones who can open them, a Portal can be used to transport one directly to their destination, or to the Hall of Doors, the great hub of Portals that leads to anywhere and everywhere, and can only be unlocked by the Council of the Teensies.
Amongst the others who had power over the portals was Jano, Guardian of the Cave of Bad Dreams.

The Cave of Bad Dreams

Raylina stared around in shock. She was in what appeared to be a cave or large tunnel. The walls were of a sheer, grey stone, which appeared to have bones embedded in it. She was standing on what looked like the spine and ribcage of some colossal dead creature, likely a snake, protruding from the wall for fifty metres. The floor below consisted of a convoluted mass of inanimate Thorn Roots, underneath a thin layer of putrid water. Images of white, ghostly spirits floated up through the floor, their mouths twisted in expressions of eternal agony. It all reminded her of something... Something she’d heard when she was young.
This place brought back old nightmares, memories of childhood fears. It got inside her head,made her shrink away from the thought of doing anything remotely heroic, anything dangerous.
And Sonic and Shadow were nowhere to be seen.

Shadow looked around, unimpressed by the grandiose attempts at horror within this cave. He had long ago come to terms with his inner demons, and so the psychological effects of the Cave did not bother him.
He cursed, realising his Chaos Emerald had been taken from him. That freak show monster must have it, he thought. I can still warp away from this place, at least.
Shadow reached for the power of Chaos Control within himself, feeling for the energy, only to find that it wasn’t there.
“Damn,” he cursed aloud. This Cave must prevent me from using Chaos Control, he realised.
So he began to move deeper into the Cave, in search of the three Emeralds that were now in Jano’s possession.

Sonic ran through the Cave, leaping from rock platform to rock platform, sometimes running along the walls. Fear boiled within him, but he kept it firmly under wraps. Fear for Raylina. Fear for his friends, Tails, Knuckles, Amy, left alone and unprotected on Mobius. Fear for this world, under the new threat of Eggman, which he suspected had followed Sonic to the Crossroads. Fears which hadn’t really bothered him before, until he entered this Cave. So he did the only thing he could think to do: He ran. As he had once told Elise, the Princess of Soleanna: “If you have time to worry, then run!”

Raylina jumped back in revulsion as she realised what the round, white platforms floating in the Thorn Roots were: huge skulls, large enough for several people to stand on. She would have to act fast: the skulls were sinking slowly through the water, and were the only way forward for her. She screwed up her courage, and leapt high in the air, curving her body into a somersault as she did, and landing perfectly on the first skull. She continued, jumping from skull to skull, until she reached a wall. The wall was covered in bones in what appeared to be a ladder. She shook her head in disgust, and began to climb.

Shadow was moving along a narrow, stone tunnel, skating on his hover skates, when a massive, bony fist reached out from a near invisible hole in the wall, and stopped him in his tracks. It wrapped its four fingers around him and lifted him into the air, dragging him back towards its hole. Shadow, winded by the sudden stop, was momentarily stunned. But only momentarily. He activated both of his skates, twisting around so that the jet outlets on the soles of his shoes were both facing the wrist of the skinny, brown arm. Flames leapt from them, burning straight through the arm. The hand flopped off, still with Shadow in it, and the stump that was once an arm retreated soundlessly into its hole. But the hand was still alive. It had dropped Shadow, but was scuttling around on the floor like a spider. Shadow hit it with a homing attack once twice, three times, until it lay still, fingertips twitching.
“This is one messed up place,” he said to himself.

Sonic leapt onto an outcropping, protruding from a cliff, to find two creatures that looked like miniature versions of Jano staring at him with their single eyes. They were bouncing up and down on the spot, arms held in vaguely horizontal positions. Their mouths were closed. For now.
Sonic barely had time to react as both monsters opened their mouths wide and spewed a stream of fireballs at the blue Hedgehog. He rolled underneath the flames, and bounced off the floor, still curled into a ball. He homed in on the first creature’s eye, hitting hard. The monster bounced backward, spinning in circles. Sonic turned to the second creature, which was already opening its mouth for another fireball. Sonic began to spin in a ball on the spot, aiming directly at the mini-Jano. He released the brake, so to speak, and shot forwards at a tremendous speed, canon-balling precisely into the monster. The monster was thrown backwards, dropping into the mass of Thorn Roots below. It sank quickly, one arm raised above the surface until the end.
Sonic homing attacked the other one twice more, until it fell apart before him, arms coming clean off, and turned to dust.

Raylina found herself on the edge of a great chasm. She looked down, and there was nothing below but darkness. There was an outcropping on the other side, well below her level, but it was way too far to jump.
She shivered. This is all very well for Sonic and Shadow, she thought. But I’m not used to this adventure stuff,
While she was busy thinking, Jano’s gruff voice came from behind her. “Die, thief!”
And without warning, she was pushed over the edge of the chasm.
She fell for several metres, sheer terror running through her, but then her instincts suddenly kicked in. Power ran through her body and manifested itself in her scalp, flowing into her long hair. Her hair suddenly stiffened, pointing out from her head in a circle, and began to spin like a helicopter’s rotor. She gasped as she began to hover, as her father often did, slowly floating downwards. She shifted her weight forward, and so she began to move forward as she slowly fell, heading straight for the outcropping below. She turned her head carefully to look at Jano, and saw him looking at her with a calculating gaze, skull staff in hand.
She raised her hands to her mouth, stuck her tongue out, and waggled it at him.

Shadow was in a dark tunnel, having dropped into it from a hole in the ceiling. Before him was a stick with a skull on the end, poking out of the ground, and a slope, with what looked like a very slippery surface. He walked towards it, gazing down it. In the way were many gaps and pillars, but they could easily be avoided by jumping while sliding.
Behind him, the skull-stick began to move. It rose out of the ground, followed by two arms, pulling an enormous, round body and a purple, star-and-moon patterned top-hat behind it.
Jano.
A roar shook the tunnel, and Shadow span around to see Jano, jaws wide open, clutching the purple Chaos Emerald in his fist.
“This is where your journey ends, Hedgehog!”
Shadow, with nowhere left to go, leapt onto the slide.

Sonic stepped to the very edge of the tunnel he was in, to see Shadow fly past at lightning speed, with Jano in very close pursuit, roaring. Sonic leapt after them immediately, jumping onto the slide. He aimed a homing attack at the monster as he slid, bouncing off his thick skin and returning to the slide. Jano roared and slid around, mid-slide, and struck at the blue hedgehog. Sonic jumped over his arms and bounced off the wall with his legs, spinning towards Jano’s hat. He grabbed onto the top, and clung on for dear life. Jano shook himself, attempting to dislodge the spiked blue creature. While he was distracted, Shadow struck several times at his arms in quick succession, landing on the same side of him. Jano roared in anger.
They were speeding towards a very wide gap. Before Jano realised it was there, they were right on top of it. Shadow jumped from the slide, and, drawing a knife from Polokus-knew-where, drove it into the wall. He continued to slide downwards as Jano fell into the gap, his momentum carrying him to slam into the opposite side. Sonic just managed to leap off the hat, and continued sliding on the other side.
Jano fell past Shadow, and Shadow let go of the knife, jumping from wall to wall to slow his fall.
Sonic ran down the slope, finding a tunnel that branched off. He leapt into it, and ran down it as fast as he could, hoping it led to Shadow.

Raylina emerged into a wide, open space. She had fought several of the mini-Janos, and had found her way to this room. At the end of the room was an opening, and from the opening came a faint, yellow glow.
She stepped towards it, only to have Jano fall with an enormous thud right in front of her. She jumped back in surprise and horror. He had grown enormous, far bigger than he was when they met outside the Cave.
He looked momentarily stunned, but then noticed the Ray standing before him. He swiped at her, picking her up and raising her above him in one hand. He laughed. “You think to steal from me? The Guardian of the Cave of Bad Dreams? Ha ha ha ha ha!”
“Put her down, Guardian,”
Shadow dropped to the ground in front of them, crouched on his hands. Jano eyed him. “Certainly,”
And with a flick of his wrist, he tossed the daughter of Rayman against a wall.
“No!” yelled Sonic (who had just appeared from a side tunnel) and Shadow in unison. Shadow leapt at Jano, eyes burning with rage, but Jano disappeared into the ground, cackling.
Sonic ran to Raylina’s side. She was fine, just a little stunned.
“Wow,” grinned Sonic. “You’re almost as resilient as we are!”
Raylina smiled in answer.
The three, reunited, made their way towards the opening on the other side. When they reached it, they entered without hesitation.
Inside were mounds upon mounds of gold coins and diamonds.
“Incredible,” said Shadow, flicking a coin in his hand. “It’s all gold!” said Sonic.
Raylina only stared. They walked into the centre of the treasure, gazing around in awe.
With a clink, a coin rolled down between them, falling down in front of them. They spun around, to see Jano atop a mound of treasure.
“Did you know,” he said, eye closed. “That your father once faced the same test in here, Raylina?”
He opened his eye. It was completely bloodshot, and the pupil had turned deepest red. “Do you want to know what he decided?”
The three Chaos Emeralds, yellow, purple, and green, appeared hovering around his body.
“You shall not live to find out,”
Jano’s entire body burst into flames, flames which did not harm him. He grew, grew to a massive size, and roared with all his might.
Battle was joined.

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