Rayman PC: The Movie: Take Two!

I suppose anyone can be in. This topic needs more attention. I am bad at writing, but I would like to read script of others :P
 
oh holy fuck this old thing :P god my 11yo self kills me

aight aight uh idk if anyone wants me or will to continue this? we could try and redo it again i guess? i mean if he's ok with that nwn

my writing has improved btw
 
as my 11yo self would say, w00tles. \o/

okay so i vote we should keep the same plot etc but just rewrite the beginning? nwn
 
We don't even have an ending. There was the whole "Hunch's head exploding" part and it never got finished :/
 
we can write the ending!

and if the point is dango going missing maybe we shouldn't have found him by chapter 4
 
Suddenly, with an almighty BUMP, a large cloud gathered appeared inside the cathedral, and a resounding "ZoMG!" could be heard. As it lifted, a large majority of the gang seemed to have simply vanished into thin air. The only beings left inside after the cloud dissipated were Droolie, Hunch, Stacey, iHeckler, MLII and Worb (psychotically cradling a candy bar).
"NO!" iHeckler cried, falling to his knees. "Why did it have to be Matyuv? I always loved...the way he only spoke in emoticons."
"What happened to everyone?" asked Stacey, confused but relieved that Xenon wouldn't brag to her about his Rayman 3 score any more.
"I'll tell you what happened," Worb said proudly, "it seems the power of the Source here is stronger than I initially thought!"
"I don't think that's it," said Hunch, looking around the room. (Maybe the story hadn't been updated in a year and perhaps half the characters left the forum, idk)
"Well whatever it is, a sizeable chunk of our party has now conveniently disappeared. Who knows where or when they're coming back. What do we do now, MLII?" iHeckler asked, turning to her.

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TO BE CONTINUED!!?!?!FOURTEEN??
 
Bump.

I can’t wait to see Rayman PC :The Movie 2 along with the Half Life 3 and Rayman 9 bundle.
 
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