Fanfic: The Dark Team

I know but Ren said it was crap.

Gigaman said:

I know but Ren said it was crap.

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Ingore Ren, your story is great

Good Idea i ignore Ren. Thanx i post next chapter after next post in this topic.

When comes your next Chapter?

Chapter 3 The Missed woman

Rayman: For what?
Globox: Uglette is missed
Rayman: Too
Globox: Yes
Murfy: Oh now
Rayman: Murfy
Globox: What happend
Rayman: SHIT!!!
????: We are here
????2: Freesh
????3: hehe
????4: Kill them
Rayman: *Kick ???? in his stomach*
Globox: *Take plum juice and take bubbles in the head on ????3*
Rayman: *Punch ????4 in his head*
Globox: * Jump at ???4*
????4: Bye forever
Rayman: * Punch ????2 in the foot*
Globox: * Missed at a thing and jump in the stomach to Rayman*
????4: * Punch Globox in his eye
Rayman: No
Rayman: * Kick ????4 and punch and trows stone*
????4: Bye too
????3: Help
????: Right
Rayman: Globox
Globox: Yghg
Rayman: What?
Globox: Uyahsjd
Rayman: What
Globox: Uyahsjd
Rayman: Oh
Globox: Ktru tru mundefand?
Rayman: What
Globox: koa
Globox: Ktru tru mundefand? is Do you understand?
Rayman. no
Globox: Uyahsjd Is Uglette
Rayman. OK
Globox: I'm fine
????5: *Punch so it be a Avalanche*
Rayman: This is dangerious
Globox: Look

In Gearbaxer City

Policeman Fred: Ly isn't here
Policeman Harry: Not here
Policeman Justine: SHIT!!!
Policeman Fred: The News The News
Newsman Lenny: Yes
Policeman Fred: We have find Dark Rayman
Newsman Lenny: Oh shit
Policeman Robin: The Mecanics comes
Policeman Fred: Why?
Policeman Robin: They know how to catch him
Dark Rayman: No
Policeman Robin: Help
Dark Rayman: *Thunder down Justine and Harry*
Policeman Fred and Robin: *Runs*

Polokus: The history has begin. Lequa Remofe has come to the world. Is this the destiny. He is the Dark Leader with the helper's Reflux, Andrè, Razorbeard and Dark Rayman. Lequa Remofe is now in the town for find Mr. Dark. Where he is must he be find before Lequa Remofe find him. Lequa Remofe is a dangerious man. Lequa Remofe is a died man but he living. Have a dark face and a dark clothes some are over his body. Lequa Remofe is the died's master and is inmortal all think Lequa Remofe is inmortal i don't think Lequa Remofe is inmortal i think Rayman will Rescue the team and The Dark Team lose. I know Lequa Remofe and the Dark team can strike back. That can soon happens.

Darkman Daron: Hehe we win
Lequa Remofe: Yes
Darkman Manston: Hahahaha
Lequa Remofe: Not that that is the end for Rayman

to be continue...

It's a bit short.

Do you think so?

Yes, you should make it longer.

Next will be very long if noone is online because a get a lot of e-mail's

Gigaman said:

Next will be very long if noone is online because a get a lot of e-mail's

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So you get alot of PM's too.

No e-mail for reply's

Gigaman said:

No e-mail for reply's

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I still don't know why you put that on

I put that OFF

Gigaman said:

I put that OFF

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So you don't get E-Mails.

I get but it is OFF i don't know why

Renny Spanky said:

Absolutely horrendous. No, I won't say anything else. Give up on writing. At once.

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SHUT UP!!! dont be out of order to gigaman! he does great fanfics! please carry on writing gigaman.

Have you read the chaper's?

yes I read the chapters they are very good.

Do you look forward to the next chapter?

yes I look forward