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By the way, don't interpret this badly but are my writings that bad? --[[User:Haruka|Haruka]] 17:34, 3 January 2011 (UTC)

:I think we need more pictures from Rayman 3. So far, each Rayman 3 level article only has one or two images (and some of the articles are very short too, but that's another issue).

:Your writing isn't bad. It's easy to understand what you're saying, it's just that sometimes your wording is a little strange. For example, you recently wrote a sentence beginning with ''‘Rayman's symbol in his chest starts to react’'' – there's nothing ''wrong'' about it, but it sounds slightly odd, so I changed it to ''‘The symbol on Rayman's chest starts to react’''. You shouldn't let this sort of thing discourage you from contributing to the wiki – I often edit other members' sentences to make them sound better too (yes iHeckler I am looking at you). It shouldn't matter if your sentence structure gets changed – the information itself survives, and that's what's important. —[[User:Spiraldoor|Spiraldoor]] 17:46, 3 January 2011 (UTC)

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 By the way, don't interpret this badly but are my writings that bad? --[[User:Haruka|Haruka]] 17:34, 3 January 2011 (UTC)
+:I think we need more pictures from Rayman 3. So far, each Rayman 3 level article only has one or two images (and some of the articles are very short too, but that's another issue).
+:Your writing isn't bad. It's easy to understand what you're saying, it's just that sometimes your wording is a little strange. For example, you recently wrote a sentence beginning with ''‘Rayman's symbol in his chest starts to react’'' – there's nothing ''wrong'' about it, but it sounds slightly odd, so I changed it to ''‘The symbol on Rayman's chest starts to react’''. You shouldn't let this sort of thing discourage you from contributing to the wiki – I often edit other members' sentences to make them sound better too (yes iHeckler I am looking at you). It shouldn't matter if your sentence structure gets changed – the information itself survives, and that's what's important. —[[User:Spiraldoor|Spiraldoor]] 17:46, 3 January 2011 (UTC)