User talk:Spiraldoor: Difference between revisions

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:I think we need more pictures from Rayman 3. So far, each Rayman 3 level article only has one or two images (and some of the articles are very short too, but that's another issue).

:Your writing isn't bad. It's easy to understand what you're saying, it's just that sometimes your wording is a little strange. For example, you recently wrote a sentence beginning with ''‘Rayman's symbol in his chest starts to react’'' – there's nothing ''wrong'' about it, but it sounds slightly odd, so I changed it to ''‘The symbol on Rayman's chest starts to react’''. You shouldn't let this sort of thing discourage you from contributing to the wiki – I often edit other members' sentences to make them sound better too (yes iHeckler I am looking at you). It shouldn't matter if your sentence structure gets changed – the information itself survives, and that's what's important. —[[User:Spiraldoor|Spiraldoor]] 17:46, 3 January 2011 (UTC)

::Thanks for clearing up my doubts. I actually quite thank English-native RayWiki contributors to do a linguistic revision to my texts and correcting them if necessary (Because I'm aware that my English is not perfect). I think it is not only Rayman 3's levels that are lacking pictures, Rayman M's levels aswell. You perhaps must remember the day I made an effort to write texts and uploading pictures in the Zenith Harbour's page. The level page was very incomplete. I will slowly take care of the remaining ones. --[[User:Haruka|Haruka]] 17:51, 3 January 2011 (UTC)

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 :I think we need more pictures from Rayman 3. So far, each Rayman 3 level article only has one or two images (and some of the articles are very short too, but that's another issue).
 :Your writing isn't bad. It's easy to understand what you're saying, it's just that sometimes your wording is a little strange. For example, you recently wrote a sentence beginning with ''‘Rayman's symbol in his chest starts to react’'' – there's nothing ''wrong'' about it, but it sounds slightly odd, so I changed it to ''‘The symbol on Rayman's chest starts to react’''. You shouldn't let this sort of thing discourage you from contributing to the wiki – I often edit other members' sentences to make them sound better too (yes iHeckler I am looking at you). It shouldn't matter if your sentence structure gets changed – the information itself survives, and that's what's important. —[[User:Spiraldoor|Spiraldoor]] 17:46, 3 January 2011 (UTC)
+::Thanks for clearing up my doubts. I actually quite thank English-native RayWiki contributors to do a linguistic revision to my texts and correcting them if necessary (Because I'm aware that my English is not perfect). I think it is not only Rayman 3's levels that are lacking pictures, Rayman M's levels aswell. You perhaps must remember the day I made an effort to write texts and uploading pictures in the Zenith Harbour's page. The level page was very incomplete. I will slowly take care of the remaining ones. --[[User:Haruka|Haruka]] 17:51, 3 January 2011 (UTC)