Hey, I need everyone's opinion on this if possible:
http://www.mediafire.com/listen/5z59eh6tgrhi5fa/wip05.wav
It's my remake of First Steps from the Dream Forest, and for the purpose it serves, I need to hear from others whether it manages to capture the same spirit and atmosphere of the original. If there are any quarrels or criticisms you have with it
whatsoever (essentially, things you thought the original did better, or that you liked better from the original), even if they're extremely small and nitpicky, and even if you have trouble describing exactly what they might be, do share, as for the purpose it serves, it needs to be perfect.